Grade composition 1 should be good at grasping the key points and be informal. In order to find a bean, the little monkey lost a handful of beans, which was really distressing. Think about it carefully, and think it is not worth it, at the expense of small profits. From this, we can deeply understand that we can't do things half-heartedly, only pay attention to immediate interests and ignore long-term interests, we must grasp the key points and learn to give up voluntarily when it is time to give up. Throughout the ages, people who have achieved something in history know that they will do whatever they can, give up the small and take the big, be able to grasp the key points and have foresight. During the Three Kingdoms period, Lu Su did not bow down for the five buckets of rice, and finally gained the appreciation of Sun Quan and contributed his own strength to the growth of Soochow. It has been a story since ancient times. In the anti-armed struggle, China's * * * production party voluntarily abandoned the road of encircling rural areas by cities and chose the road of encircling rural areas by cities. Their decision-making was made according to the situation at that time, and they were good at grasping the mainstream decision-making, and finally won the revolution. In modern society, with the rapid development of economy, talents are the necessary resources for a powerful country. The competition in the talent market is also fierce. Many enterprises choose candidates from a long-term perspective. In this way, candidates have skills first, and skills emphasize quality more. Do they have foresight, can they be good at grasping the key points and choosing the big ones? There is a boss who runs a vegetable industry and wants to find someone who is good at it to help him. Two people came to apply, and the boss gave them 100 yuan to buy food respectively. As a result, a person came back soon and bought all the things he needed. The boss asked him what the price was, but he forgot. After a long time, another man came back empty-handed. The boss asked why he didn't buy it. He took out a piece of paper from his pocket and recorded the different market prices of vegetables to be bought. The boss hired him immediately after reading it. Obviously, this is a person who has a vision for development, pays attention to long-term interests and is good at grasping key points. For us students, there are really too many things to learn in bits and pieces. Some students are easy to learn, while others grab their eyebrows and beards like nonsense, fail to grasp the key points and just study blindly. So is life. The more prosperous the current social economy is, the more complicated the social environment is, and there are more trivial things. Some people are trapped in these trivial things because they can't grasp the key points and let themselves be out of touch with the new society. Therefore, in some aspects, we should be far-sighted, be good at grasping the key points, do what we should do well, and always keep a pair of developmental eyes to look at problems, distinguish between primary and secondary, and know the small and understand the big. (This article was originally divided into 50 points, which is a kind of volume. ) This article is a typical three-stage argumentative essay: put forward opinions at the beginning, summarize at the end, and demonstrate with examples in the middle. The advantage of this writing is that the point of view is clear and the level is clear. If you can meet the meaning of the question, grasp the consistency of views and examples, and the language is basically fluent, such an article can reach the level of benchmark score. This article is just like this, it is a medium volume. The disadvantage of this writing method in this paper is also obvious, that is, the structure is relatively rigid and the materials are only tiled. All the materials in the full text are listed on the same plane. Whether it is general materials or specific examples, the repeated emphasis is only a meaning of "grasping the key points". There is no deeper dialysis, lack of angle changes, and limited ability to analyze and explain. Although the language of this article is basically fluent, it is general and lacks color and personality. The words in the example (the paragraph about buying vegetables) are too trivial, and it is an intellectual mistake to say that Lu Su "does not bend his back for five buckets of rice". You can score about 45 points. I looked pale when I was abandoned. Who lost this scenery? -Inscription Life will inevitably give up. However, many people settle for second best, but they don't know how to give up. The stage of life is always like this. Who am I? I can't find out. It seems that I have always existed, but I have long been abandoned. I wander in the world, quietly savoring the world. In the most conspicuous place of the overpass, those poor beggars took away the civilization and beauty of the overpass. Their faces are always so numb to passers-by and groan in pain. Their healthy bodies look pitiful. I shook my head and sighed lightly, trying to take out money to comfort their pale hearts. I know they may have families and parents, even richer than passers-by. However, I really feel pity. Even my self-esteem can be given up at will Isn't it pitiful to find only a small coin? Those people, it is time to think deeply: what is really important and what is really worth it. In the end, I found nothing but sighs and regrets, and even a thousand tears could not be collected. This is a luxuriously decorated restaurant with a constant stream of customers, but few people know the filth. I went to the kitchen of the restaurant, and a faint stench was yellow pork, which was raging in the kitchen. Covering my nose, I looked around. Those sweaty strong men fiddled with the dishes on their plates with greasy hands, fried the pan-black vegetables happily, and coughed comfortably in the pot from time to time. It was so natural, but it made people feel sick. I want to take out money to soothe their greedy hearts. I know they may have a lot of money, enough to buy the best materials and the best chefs. However, I really feel pity. Even my conscience can be thrown away at will. Aren't people who only worry about money worthy of pity? Those people … should understand: what is really precious and what should be cherished. After all, money is like dirt. Don't lose the most important thing, but you don't know it at all, and you're glad you found some dirt. I finally know who I am, that is, people's self-esteem and conscience have been abandoned ... I can only look pale and look at the illusory and dirty scenery of this world! (The original score of this article: 50 points, which is a kind of volume. ) The ideas and expressions in this paper are novel and expressive. Its manifestations are as follows: first, personification is generally used, and "I" refers to conscience and self-esteem; The second is to express the feeling of being abandoned from the perspective of "I", and to show the pity of losing conscience and self-esteem by being greedy for money through two concrete examples. The materials used and the central idea conform to the gain-loss relationship contained in the raw materials. The author has his own observation, experience and thinking about life, and can write some new ideas from the little things he sees, which is worth promoting. The full text basically only stays in a cold-eyed view of the world, but expresses the sigh and helplessness of "I" being abandoned, revealing excess rather than improvement. At the end, "I can only look at the illusory and dirty scenery of this world" also shows that it is difficult for thoughts and feelings to sublimate to a better and higher realm, and the tone calling for the return of conscience and self-esteem seems to be more positive. Can be rated 48~50 points. Open your eyes, the world is full of your father. Although he is an old hand, I can't always lose. I'm trying to figure out how to hit him, but I always start with brave words and finally run away. "Dad, why do you always get everything right when you play chess, and I am always left alone by you?" Dad's answer was Zen, so my life began. The wind will blow, blowing with sand, blowing into your eyes, so that you can only remember the bitterness in your eyes; Rain will fall, with hail, into your eyes, so that you only feel the pain in your eyes. Then the world was clear, as if all the good things had been lost and could never come back. What covers your eyes, you, him or our own hearts? When we say that the food is good, we will build farmland around the lake, thinking that a large area of golden millet is full of the joy of harvest, but we can't see the displacement of animals. Of course, this time, it is also a foreshadowing for punishment. When you find that the wood is good, you chop it indiscriminately, thinking that the furniture you make will make others proud, but you can't see that the ecological balance is out of balance. Of course, a weight will be added to the fair balance. When we think money is good, we want to get rich overnight by gambling.