The tutor's opinions and suggestions on the paper
1. The paper has clear ideas, basically fluent sentences, clear levels and accurate expression of opinions. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management with the practical problems of inner-party supervision, and puts forward some better solutions to the practical problems of inner-party supervision. The literature consulted is closely combined with the theme, but the arguments in some places are not very clear and convincing, which generally meets the requirements of graduation thesis, some contents are not well combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
2. This paper meets the professional requirements and reflects the social hot issues. Therefore, the research on this subject is conducive to the further development of China. The full text first-the problem, and then analyze the reasons. On this basis, the related. The full text has proper structure, clear thinking and basically correct views.
3. This paper focuses on this theme. The topic selection is in line with the training objectives and professional characteristics of administrative management specialty, and has strong pertinence and practical significance. The structure of the article is reasonable, the level is clear, and the relevant documents and materials cited in the writing are closely related to the theme, and the reference materials are relatively new. In the process of writing, the author can better use the basic knowledge of administrative management to analyze administration-,and in the process of argumentation, he mainly uses theoretical argumentation and factual argumentation. However, the shortcomings of the article are unclear expression of some sentences, insufficient argumentation and insufficient innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
4. Research-oriented, fully reflecting the characteristics of the times. It can provide reference value for solving administrative problems in China. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and obvious in viewpoint. What can be taught well in the process of argumentation is to combine argumentation with case argumentation. The disadvantage is that some arguments are not convincing.
5. The topic is contemporary and realistic. The structure of the full text is reasonable. The expression of views is basically accurate. The full text closely follows the requirements of the administrative management specialty and fully embodies the characteristics of the administrative management specialty. Check out more related information. But the main deficiency is that there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
6.XXX students can obey orders, unite colleagues and apply the knowledge and skills I learned in school to practical work during my internship in our unit. I am active, practical and willing to work. I have a good relationship with my teachers and colleagues. I study patiently and strive to improve my skills. It has been well received by everyone and I hope to carry forward my achievements in the future.
7. Over the past year, XXX students have been active and hard-working, and their relationship with teachers and colleagues has been handled very well. They studied patiently and worked hard to improve their skills, which was well received by everyone. I hope to develop their achievements in the future.
8. The theme of this paper is-,and the topic is very realistic and applicable, which meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty. The structure of this paper is basically reasonable, and the full text is divided into * * *-most parts. The first part, on this basis, focuses on the discussion. In the process of demonstration, students' reference materials are closely combined with the viewpoints and contents to be demonstrated, and the research methods adopted are mainly theoretical research and case study. Words are basically accurate. However, the main problem is that the arguments are not sufficient and convincing, and individual quotations do not indicate the source.
9. During the internship, the student worked hard, diligently and seriously, and was able to consult modestly and be good at thinking. Love students, pay special attention to children with poor grades and behavioral deviations in the class, patiently make up lessons for them, give affirmation and encouragement, and win the love of students. Good teaching quality, clear teaching objectives, neat writing on the blackboard, clear language, timely adjustment of teaching methods, and certain organizational ability. Pay attention to the compilation and reflection of teaching plans and carefully correct homework. I believe that in the future work, we will pay more attention to the pertinence of preparing lessons (preparing textbooks and preparing students' classrooms, organic regulation and effective breakthrough of difficulties, so that we can grow faster.
10. This paper studies the distortion of accounting information, which has strong practical value and provides a new basis for controlling the distortion of accounting information. The author has clear thinking, rigorous discussion process, reasonable analysis and practical results. The writing of the thesis is standardized and the sentences are fluent, which meets the requirements of academic proofreading of dissertations.
1 1. This paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the basic principle of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the problems existing in the official accountability system in China are deeply analyzed, and finally, effective suggestions are put forward for the previous problems. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
12. The title of the paper is basically consistent with the content of the paper, with complete structure and fluent language. Even the first draft, except that the paragraphs are too thin, there are not many serious grammar or spelling mistakes. The author tried to learn from Lev? Looking for the connection between Tolstoy and a character in Cao Yu's novels. From the content, the author has a further understanding of the original work and collected relevant materials. How to draw my own conclusion through the analysis of the data is the purpose of this paper, and it is at this point that the author has made great efforts.
13.xxx students work actively and enthusiastically, study hard and respect teachers. Over the past year, their technical theoretical level and operational skills have been greatly improved. I hope to continue to work hard to become a useful talent in the country in the future.
14. The research content is realistic and operable. The topic is a hot social issue with a rigorous logical structure. The views are clearly expressed and the discussion is comprehensive. This language is concise and easy to understand. In the process of argumentation, the principle of professional knowledge can also be well combined with practical problems. But arguments are not enough. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
15. The title of this paper is-,novel and practical. The full text has scientific and reasonable structure, strong logic and clear thinking, and the references consulted meet the requirements of the paper. The demonstration method is reasonable. The content of the argument is more convincing. The analysis of the problem is more thorough. In the process of demonstration, students can also combine the principles of administrative professional knowledge with social reality. Whether it is from the topic selection or viewpoint demonstration, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty. But innovation is not enough.
Tutor's comments and suggestions on the paper
1. During the internship, some students can seriously abide by the intern code, be serious and responsible for their work, and have achieved good results in the work of the main and deputy classes. Be able to make an activity plan carefully, take the initiative to consult the instructor, carefully make various teaching tools and put them into regional activities, make full preparations before class, and carefully organize students' activities for one day, basically achieving the teaching objectives. During the internship in the deputy class, I can cooperate with the teacher in the main class to prepare for class and guide the course activities, do a good job in students' day activities, have strong cooperation ability, and establish a harmonious teacher-student relationship with my classmates. I hope I can make persistent efforts and continue to make progress in the future!
2. Interns are serious and responsible during their internship, able to handle teaching materials independently and prepare lessons completely. The classroom teaching is clear and adaptable, and can adjust the contents on the blackboard according to students' responses and teachers' guidance. The teaching attitude is natural, the homework is carefully and correctly corrected, the stability is excellent, and students' mistakes can be noticed. During the evening self-study, you can have after-work counseling, which is a quality that a teacher should have. Experience. By being an assistant class teacher, we realized the importance and hardship of the class teacher, and also learned and accumulated some methods and experiences of the class teacher's work. Through the contact with students, I have a further understanding and experience of the ideas of middle school students today, which is of great help to teachers in the future.
3. During his master's thesis, he actively participated in various teaching and scientific research activities. In the process of teaching practice, he carefully read textbooks and consulted academic materials, which greatly improved his teaching level. At the same time, he also has strong hands-on ability, participated in many topics of his tutor, and greatly improved his theoretical and practical level.
His research, study and work in the postgraduate stage are excellent, and I believe these experiences and accumulation will become valuable wealth on his life path. I hope he will continue to maintain and carry forward the rigorous style of study, work hard and strive for greater achievements in his future work and study.
At the stage of postgraduate study, this student is required to make progress in thought, study hard and study hard in professional knowledge. On the occasion of graduation, he reviewed his study, work and life in the past three years and made the following summary:
6.xx in the postgraduate study stage, pay attention to the study of political theory, care about state affairs, support the party's line, principles and policies, always bear in mind social responsibilities, and take a firm political stand. In the study of specialized courses, I have carefully studied the core courses of software engineering, and all the selected courses have met the national requirements. In scientific research practice, I have read a lot of doctoral and master's theses and a lot of foreign language documents, and have strong practical ability, and participated in many research projects of my tutor. After studying, students pay attention to the improvement of personal comprehensive quality. He once participated in Wuhan University football competition on behalf of the college and won the first place. He often participates in extracurricular activities with his classmates. These activities not only exercised his body and mind, but also deepened the friendship between his classmates. I believe that these experiences and accumulation will become valuable wealth in Hu Guang's life. In the future work and study, I hope this student will continue to maintain and carry forward the rigorous style of study, be conscientious and strive for greater achievements.
7. During the postgraduate study, the student studied hard, achieved excellent results, mastered the basic theory and professional knowledge in the field of instrument science and technology, possessed a relatively perfect knowledge structure and theoretical level, actively participated in the research work of related topics in theoretical research and engineering practice, and was able to propose effective solutions to the problems and key technologies in the project, with strong ability to analyze and solve problems, high professional quality and scientific research ability, and the ability to engage in scientific research in the field of electronic science.
8. The idea of this article is novel. Taking-as a clue and combining with local standards, this paper comprehensively analyzes the existing problems and reasons of-. And put forward the countermeasures to solve the existing problems. Content argumentation also teaches scientific rationality. The full text fully embodies the characteristics of administrative management specialty and the format is standardized. But innovation is not enough.
9. This paper meets the professional requirements and reflects the hot issues in society. Therefore, the research on this subject is beneficial to the further development of China. The full text starts with the problem of-,and then analyzes the reasons. On this basis, the related. The full text has proper structure, clear thinking and basically correct views.
10. The paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Can well investigate the existing problems. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure. The viewpoint is expressed accurately. The research principles are appropriate. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
1 1. The full text is entitled-. Focus on exploring-the full-text structure meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is reasonable. The reference materials are closely combined with the theme.
12. The full text is entitled-. Focus on discussing and analyzing the existing problems and reasons, and then put forward some operable countermeasures. The full-text topic is novel and research-oriented. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the thinking is clear, the viewpoint is clear, and the arguments are convincing. The demonstration method is reasonable, and a large number of data are used to demonstrate, which increases the reliability of the demonstration. You can comprehensively use the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze-,but
13. The references in this paper are sufficient and meet the needs of the topic. Taking-as an example, this paper focuses on-. The topic of the paper meets the requirements of administrative management, with complete structure, clear thinking, accurate expression of views and standardized format, which can better use administrative professional knowledge to analyze practical administrative problems in reality. But the argument of personal views is not sufficient. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
14. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of administrative management specialty and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and correct in viewpoint, which can organically combine the professional knowledge of administrative management with the problems to be analyzed and demonstrated. The materials consulted in the writing process of this paper are not only sufficient but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized and the case demonstration is not enough.
15. The full text is entitled-. Focus on exploring-the full-text structure meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is reasonable. The reference materials are closely combined with the theme.
The latest comments and suggestions of the tutor on the paper
1. The paper has clear ideas, basically fluent sentences, clear levels and accurate expression of opinions. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management with the practical problems of inner-party supervision, and puts forward some better solutions to the practical problems of inner-party supervision. The literature consulted is closely combined with the theme, but the arguments in some places are not very clear and convincing, which generally meets the requirements of graduation thesis, some contents are not well combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
2. The topic of the paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The selected topic has high academic research (reference value (great practical guiding significance).
3. The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, can comprehensively collect information about the examination system, can comprehensively use the knowledge of the examination system in the writing process, comprehensively analyze the problems existing in the examination system, and has a strong ability to comprehensively use knowledge.
4. The length of the article is completely in line with the regulations of the college, with complete content, scientific hierarchical structure, prominent points, clear logical relationship and certain personal opinions. The topics are completely consistent, the arguments are prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Rich references and strong timeliness; There is no plagiarism.
At first glance, the structure of this argumentative essay is not clear, but reading through the whole article, this arrangement has its own hills and valleys in the mind of the little author. The article is full of old sayings, and a lot of reasoning skills are also enriched. This article is profound in content and philosophical in language. The whole article vaguely contains the ancient Zen and unique values of the East. It fully shows the depth of the author's thoughts and the richness of knowledge.
6. Does this argumentative essay get to the point? Music has wonderful effects? Clear point of view, simple thinking, intriguing. This paper is clear in structure, natural in transition, profound in level, distinct in level and rich in meaning.
7. The central argument is put forward at the beginning of this article? Gratitude, shouldn't we ignore it? Then, the central argument is strongly demonstrated with several sub-arguments. Can comprehensively use a variety of argumentation methods to demonstrate opinions, with clear arguments and strong arguments.
8. The article is related to the topic, which is from the topic? How can you see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain? It can be seen; Finally, ask the question again and the center will be clear. As an argumentative essay, the language of the article is fluent, less dull and boring than the orthodox argumentative essay, more vivid spiritual aura, and more resistant to personal reading. Is the author right? Growth and frustration? The understanding of the relationship is profound, and it can be thoroughly analyzed by citing examples, achieving a thought-provoking expression effect; The use of metaphor makes the whole article colorful.
9. The topic is contemporary and realistic, the structure of the full text is reasonable, the viewpoints are basically accurate and the ideas are basically clear. The contents of the full text are basically written according to the training requirements of the administrative management major, and there are many related materials to consult, but they do not fully reflect the characteristics of the administrative management major, and there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
10. This paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the basic principle of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the problems existing in the official accountability system in China are deeply analyzed, and finally, effective suggestions are put forward for the previous problems. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
1 1. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of the training goal of administrative management specialty, and can comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the practical problems of enterprise administration. The writing attitude of the paper is serious and responsible, the content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials meet the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main points are clearly expressed, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. However, the depth of argument is not enough and innovation is insufficient.
12. The topic of this paper is reasonable and meets the requirements of administrative management specialty. The full text takes the theme as the analysis and demonstration, which has reference and reference significance for perfecting China's administrative management. The content demonstration is more scientific and reasonable, the format is more standardized, and the reference materials are closely related to the theme of the article, but the innovation and arguments are insufficient, especially the last part of the article is too weak and unconvincing. Generally speaking, it basically meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
13. This paper takes the theme as the main line and focuses on the discussion. The topic selection basically conforms to the category of administrative management and fully embodies the professional characteristics. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is reasonable, but the innovation is not enough, some viewpoints are not fully demonstrated, the format is not very standardized, and there are not many viewpoints that really belong to them. Generally speaking, it is basically qualified.
14. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. The parts are closely related, the opinions are basically accurate, and the argumentation content is more convincing. In the process of argumentation, the basic knowledge principle of administrative specialty is basically used to analyze the main problems in the article, but the reference materials are insufficient, the article lacks its own original content, and a few viewpoints are not profound and comprehensive.
15. this paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, the practical significance of the official accountability system is analyzed first, and then the official accountability system in China is analyzed.
The dilemma of 16. This paper makes an in-depth analysis and puts forward effective suggestions to solve the dilemma. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty, and the references meet the needs of the paper's viewpoints and themes, and the practical demonstration is not enough. But there is not much real innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
17. The selected topic in this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the learned knowledge is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The data obtained are reasonable, the conclusion is correct and there are new opinions. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent.
18. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to the XXXXX paper writing standard. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also sharp, the paper is clear and reasonable, and the viewpoint is unique, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.
19. During my master's thesis, I actively participated in various teaching and scientific research activities. In the process of teaching practice, he carefully read textbooks and consulted academic materials, which greatly improved his teaching level. At the same time, she also has strong practical ability, participated in many topics of her tutor, and greatly improved her theoretical and practical level. I have participated in academic exchanges of papers at or above the provincial level for many times, and my eloquence and speaking ability have been comprehensively improved.
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