The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and sipping fragrant teas, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important.
It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right.
Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily. That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still not at ease, determined to shake a few words, explain the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one, and pierce the meaning that could have been realized.
Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme.
3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.
From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions. 1, natural ending style No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it is a natural ending full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending style".
It completely avoids the end fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness, which is concise, lively and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law".
As long as you have passion, write freely and fully express your feelings, it is a good article. But paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary thinking development. There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.
2. The beginning and the end should echo the beginning, and the sentences written should echo the beginning, not simply repeating. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail.
For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool." Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once."
Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3. This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "the finishing touch". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are."
At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous aphorisms end with famous aphorisms, famous cautionary sentences and poems, which are intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of a certain life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings".
At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere." 5. Lyric argument: Ending an article with lyrical argument can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers, and arouse the hearts of readers, which has a strong artistic appeal.
This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency.
For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid." Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings.
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow.
The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the examinee's usual solid training, in the examinee's improvisation and in the examinee's "extra-poetic merit". There are five ways to start the song at the beginning and end of composition, all of which are effective.
Cut to the chase and you'll know the time and place. Render the atmosphere description style and set the style at the beginning of the scene.
The lyrical opening method is good, which inspires readers' high feelings. First describe the suspense of the ending, hold on to it and find the root.
Asking questions as the beginning is fascinating and adds atmosphere. There are also good ways to end, and each way is wonderful.
The ending is natural, simple and neat, and there is little nonsense. Summarize the end of the topic and make the finishing point.
Lyrical discussion is the end, highlighting the center to make people understand. The rhetorical question is used at the end, which is thought-provoking and enlightening.
A good manuscript that echoes from beginning to end and has a complete structure. As the saying goes, "Knitting clothes and trousers is at the beginning, and knitting baskets is at the end."
A good article should have both a fascinating beginning and a fascinating ending. So, how to write the end of the article? First, the natural ending method uses the result of things as the end of the article. When the story is finished, the article ends.
For example, at the end of Moonlight Song, "Brother and sister were intoxicated by the beautiful scenery. When they woke up, Beethoven had left the hut.
He flew back to the inn and spent the whole night recording the music he had just played-Moonlight Song. Another example: "Flying over the Luding Bridge": "The main force of the Red Army crossed the natural barrier Dadu River, and it was mighty.
2. How to write the beginning and end of a composition? Tip 1: Use rhetoric skillfully. Clever use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor, parallelism, personification and questioning can make the beginning of the article vivid, full of momentum, mixed with scenes and picturesque. Quoting classics, literary talents, famous sayings, lyrics, proverbs, two-part allegorical sayings or profound and incisive expositions in the past can be skillfully quoted, which can save a lot of pen and ink and make literary talents fly with half the effort. Tip 3: Set up suspense skillfully and lead the topic. Everyone is curious, especially those who love reading literary works. When you set a lot of suspense at the beginning of the article that can arouse people's curiosity, your article has undoubtedly succeeded more than half. That is, the doubts that aroused the reader's curiosity from the beginning. Ending skills-natural ending style No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it is natural to end the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending style". Tip 2: the beginning and the end echo the beginning, and write a sentence that echoes the beginning and is not simple to repeat. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles. Zhang Xianzhi's ending method is to express the theme clearly in concise language at the end of the article according to the content of the full text, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this ending method is also called "the finishing touch". The four famous epigrams of skills end with famous epigrams, famous cautionary sentences and poems, which are intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of a certain life. Tip 5: Lyric argument: Ending an article with lyrical argument can express the author's feelings, arouse the reader's emotional waves and arouse the reader's * * * voice, which has a strong artistic appeal. The most important thing to look at pictures is to use your imagination, not stick to the picture.
3. How to write a maternal love at the end of the composition, like an idyllic poem, long and pure, elegant and light; Motherly love is a landscape painting. Wash away the lead carving and leave it fresh and natural. Motherly love is like a affectionate song, melodious and melodious, singing softly; Motherly love is a warm wind, which blows away the snow and brings infinite spring.
Motherly love is a sachet that brings blessings to children; Motherly love is a fire, which fills the heart with warmth; Motherly love is a candle dedicated to beauty and selflessness ... whenever I feel the deepest maternal love, I can't help but think of my mother, that kind face, that vivid and tortuous childhood past.
Maternal love is deep, delicate, selfless and great. I feel it with my heart. Only in this way can I be qualified to accept this love, this priceless love. And this year's Mother's Day, I remembered what a philosopher said: Mother is a book that can't be read. Yes, I will never forget the love my mother gave me. ...
There is a kind of love, which is the most selfless love in the world; There is a kind of pay, which is the most sincere pay in the world; There is a kind of care, which is the most permanent care in the world. This is everything that mother gives us. Motherly love is silent; Maternal love is delicate; Mother's love is great; Motherly love is eternal.
When I was sleeping, the alarm clock rang mercilessly. I rubbed my sleepy eyes, pouted reluctantly and climbed out of bed. Today, my mother doesn't go to work. It is really comfortable. You can sleep until you wake up naturally without going to school. This is really a wonderful thing. I thought so in my heart, and I was a little jealous at the same time. Today is the final exam. My mother just threw me a "good exam" before going to bed last night, that's all. So I complained about my mother's indifference.
As soon as I opened the door, the living room was bright, and the sound of soymilk machine was faintly heard in the kitchen. I went to the kitchen in a daze. "Good morning! Go brush your teeth and wash your face, breakfast will be ready soon. " An oncoming exhortation. "Oh." Looking at the bread and boiled eggs on the dining table, I suddenly lost my mind. When did mom get up? Did I drag my tired body to prepare breakfast for me when I met Duke Zhou? Mother said that she was very tired and wanted to sleep in after work yesterday.
After washing, I accepted those gentleness as usual. "Today's exam, you have to eat more! Take a good exam, and you will have strength when you are full. . "My mother started nagging me again. And I, there is always a sentence without a sentence, and I use a "well" from time to time. I always do.
Riding a bike seems to be a childhood again.
At that time, every day, every time, as long as my mother was here, I just kept nagging and never listened carefully. Sometimes I feel that my mother is picking on me, which is unreasonable and doesn't make me feel a little uneasy. Sometimes, I even answer directly, "You are bored to death." Is this my response to maternal love? I gave a wry smile. Kindergarten and primary school are easy to go to school every time, because all the books and snacks are taken by my mother, and nothing needs to be taken care of. Sometimes, I feel uneasy occasionally, that is, I ask, "Do you want me to help you?" "No, just go by yourself." I was relieved to hear my mother's answer. Hehe, it's mine, but I asked if I could help you.
Looking back on this, I don't feel regret or guilt. When did the care that bored me become so dazzling? Those empty words and nitpicking proved my stupidity and unfilial. It turns out that those cares and gentleness are all worth cherishing and existing.
Meaning.
Facing her, I began to understand, I began to understand, I began to understand, I must grasp what I have, because it is meaningless to cherish it after losing it. Motherly love, give me a chance to cherish.
I remember when I was a child, my mother never made a move because I didn't do well in the exam. Although my mother tried to hide it, I was always afraid to catch my mother's lost eyes. So I tried to hide the paper several times when I didn't do well in the exam, and secretly made up my mind: "I won't do this next time!" " Whenever my mother asks me where the latest test paper is, I blush and say, "I haven't sent it yet."
Once my mother cleared the table and inadvertently opened the drawer. My secret was revealed. My mother picked it up and looked at it. She asked me in surprise, "When was this paper?" "This ... this ..." I stammered blushing. Without hesitation, my mother picked up a broom and hit me angrily. Every time I hit my mother, she scolds me. My mother said, "It's my mother's fault that I didn't teach you. When did I learn to lie to you? " When do you think I hit you because you didn't do well in the exam? But you not only stole the paper, but also lied to your mother! "The more I cried, the more my mother cried, but her hand didn't stop. Suddenly, the broom broke and I stopped crying, but my mother looked at the broom and looked at me, tears streaming down her face, and the pain was in my mother's heart. I think I really hurt my mother this time. When I slept that night, I felt some pain in my wound. When I opened my eyes, my mother was putting medicine on my wound. By the light, I also saw my mother's eyes with crystal tears. ...
After this incident, I understand that lying is wrong, and lying will pay a great price. If you ask me if I hated my mother at that time, I can answer you loudly: "No". Because I know that everything my mother did to me was for my own good. My mother's beating me is not abuse, but a kind of love for me, which can only be found in family ties. I believe that a mother's love for her children is endless.
4. How to write full marks at the beginning and end of the composition? Excellent opening demonstration of the composition 1, quoting famous sayings. 1 ask how the world is and teach people to live and die together.
Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he. His question can be said to have been asked for a long time
Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But every family's words are as different as everyone's face.
Shi said, "Love is a tool. "(What is Love in the World) In a medieval church, a saint began his speech:" I became a saint because I saw through money, and what I have belongs to everyone. "
Long years, a snap of your fingers. In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and everyone's is mine."
Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. "
Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success. ("Rotate this kaleidoscope") 2. Clever use of letter format 1 Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. Thousands of years later, I still dare to write to bother you, not only to pay tribute to you, but also to have some difficult problems waiting for your advice.
(A Letter to Confucius) The hateful standard answer: I am really outraged to see you. Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you.
The answers are colorful, but you have to wear a "standard" hat. You know, because of the word "mark", countless tragedies have happened.
The following are your three major crimes (A Letter to the Standard Answer) 3. Borrowing Zhang Hui's novel style 1 "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time." At the beginning, the era of Wei, Shu and Wu Dingli no longer existed. In The River of No Return, the waves washed away the heroes of the past.
And the former Shu heirs have also become "happy without thinking about Shu", and the world has become Sima's world. (Heroes of the Three Kingdoms) Liang Shanbo's Juyi Hall is now brightly lit and full of people.
One hundred people and eight people are gathered here, and everyone is quarreling. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to select heroes who fight tigers recently.
It's great to be awarded this honorary title. Whoever is awarded can sit in the second place in the Water Margin. That's why all the heroes gather here and argue endlessly.
Who is the hero who fights the tiger? 4. Clever use of rhetoric ① "Bang!" With the sound of a hammer, Mr. question mark cleared his throat and said, "The seminar on time and space is now officially started. Today, our theme is "What is beauty". Please let scholars from different times and countries speak actively. " (What is Beauty) 5. Clever use of fables ① The Gong Yu family has lived here for generations, and two mountains, the King of Wu and the Taihang Mountain at the entrance, blocked the way. Life is pathetic! It seems isolated here. What's new in this city has long been old news. This kind of life really needs to change.
The foolish old man thought, I have to find a way to move Taihang Mountain and Wu Wang. Magpie posted a large advertisement: "In order to meet the needs of the times, our school will carry out all-round quality education, learn everything and teach everything, so that your children can become all-round generalists and be invincible in the competition.
Tuition, 3000 yuan per semester; Training fee, 5,000 yuan; Sponsorship fee, 15000 yuan. "(Almighty School) (4) What comes quietly, leaving no trace, but arouses all kinds of light dances? What is it, leaving no trace, coming quietly, leaving a season of singing? What comes gently and goes quietly, leaving golden color in the harvest season? What is it, leaving quietly and coming gently, spinning a white dream for the silent earth? The philosopher smiled at the blue sky: "It's time. "
Children clap their hands with kites: "It's the wind." The tramp said, "This is just a dream."
("Happiness with Answers" 6. Clever use of the inscription that reveals the theme ① There is no stalwart of the tree, but there can be green grass; Without the beauty of peony, you can have the freedom of small wild chrysanthemum ... life is not necessarily brilliant, but it must be great! -Inscription Butterfly was once a beautiful and excellent dancer. Her long shawl and gentle dance brought her thunderous applause and countless flowers. She was hailed by others as China's future Duncan ... but it's all over, and fate will keep her in a wheelchair forever.
Life is bleak and silent, and the "white swan" has become an ugly duckling that nobody cares about. How many times, she dreamed that she put on glass shoes and continued her pursuit, but when she woke up, she only heard the cold autumn wind.
(Starry Night) If you lose money, you only lose a small part; If you lose your health, you only lose a small part; If you lose your integrity, you are almost bankrupt. -What is "sincerity" when signing? It is also honest and trustworthy.
Throughout history, the word "sincerity" has soaked many people's blood and tears. Who is praising the emperor's new clothes? A friend once asked me this question: Which of the following beautiful scenery do you like best? A piece of white feather falls leisurely in the golden sun.
B. A petal falls red and floats in the quiet and deep pool water. A meteor, in the deep blue sky, is fleeting.
D. A drop of crystal dew slipped quietly on the tip of the green grass. After reading this question, I suddenly froze. The ever-changing nature, the rising sun, the ebb and flow of the tide, how many beautiful scenery is exciting and fascinating.
..... (Infinite Possibility, Infinite Beauty) 8. Clever use of celebrities for question and answer ① Someone asked: What is happiness? The answer is rich.
5. How does the composition end? First, the most taboo at the beginning is to give people the feeling of digressing with a pen. It directly tells the marking teacher that the author will not judge the meaning of the question and the composition score will be greatly reduced.
Example 4 "Communication begins with language": "Language is a bridge, connecting this shore and the other shore; Language is a waterfall, connecting streams and deep pools; Language is a rainbow, connecting the sky and the earth. Only when the language is expressed accurately can communication be successful.
If the language is wrong, it may have unpredictable consequences. So how can we express the language accurately and promote the success of communication? Therefore, whether the opening is well written or not, the core issue is still in the exam; When judging the meaning of a question, seek accuracy first, and then seek image.
Many methods are introduced at the beginning. 1, quote the famous saying (1) ask how the world is and teach people to commit themselves to life and death.
Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he. His question can be said to have been asked for a long time
Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But every family's words are as different as everyone's face.
Shi said, "Love is a tool. "(What is Love in the World) In a medieval church, a saint began his speech:" I became a saint because I saw through money, and what I have belongs to everyone. "
Long years, a snap of your fingers. In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and everyone's is mine."
Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. "
Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success. ("Rotate this kaleidoscope") 2. Clever use of letter format 1 Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. Thousands of years later, I still dare to write to bother you, not only to pay tribute to you, but also to have some difficult problems waiting for your advice.
(A Letter to Confucius) The hateful standard answer: I am really outraged to see you. Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you.
The answers are colorful, but you have to wear a "standard" hat. You know, because of the word "mark", countless tragedies have happened.
The following are your three major crimes: ... ("A Letter to the Standard Answer") 3. Borrowing Zhang Hui's novel style (1) "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time." At the beginning, the era of Wei, Shu and Wu Dingli no longer existed. In The River of No Return, the waves washed away the heroes of the past.
And the former Shu heirs have also become "happy without thinking about Shu", and the world has become Sima's world. (Heroes of the Three Kingdoms) Liang Shanbo's Juyi Hall is now brightly lit and full of people.
One hundred people and eight people are gathered here, and everyone is quarreling. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to select heroes who fight tigers recently.
It's great to be awarded this honorary title. Whoever is awarded can sit in the second place in the Water Margin. That's why all the heroes gather here and argue endlessly.
Who is the hero who killed the tiger? 4. Clever use of rhetoric can easily express the author's feelings and arouse readers' interest in reading. For example, in 2002, the beginning of "Choice of Heart" wrote: "If you choose wings, you will embrace the whole blue sky; If you choose fins, you will kiss the vast blue sea; If you choose a quadruped, you will appreciate the vast green forest.
And my choices are one by one. "The sentence pattern at the beginning of the parallelism sentence is neat, and the language is sonorous, which forms a contrast before and after, which not only points out the topic but also sets suspense to promote people to enjoy reading.
In addition, the article "Honesty-Forever Green Card" written in 200 1 College Entrance Examination begins: "Honesty is like the first sunshine in spring, which is desirable; Such as a sweet watermelon in summer, contained in the mouth, sweet in the heart; For example, the autumn wind sent a fiery maple leaf from a distance, which attracted infinite attention; Such as snowflakes flying in winter, cover the wheat fields with thick quilts. " At first, metaphor and parallelism were used to describe the value and significance of honesty and express the desire for honesty.
5. Lyric method. That is to say, pour out your true feelings directly at the beginning of the article to point out the main idea of the article.
There are three common lyric ways: hypothetical lyric, comparative lyric and comparative lyric. For example, the 200 1 college entrance examination masterpiece "Carrying a Backpack of Honesty" wrote at the beginning: "If life is a Mercedes-Benz train, then honesty is an indispensable wheel; If life is a long-distance ship, then honesty is an indispensable backpack, which will accompany you all your life. "
The author uses metaphor and contrast to illustrate the importance of honesty from comparison. Another example is the beginning of the excellent composition "The Footsteps of Choice" in the 2002 college entrance examination: "What suddenly crossed my mind and left an instant glory? What is it, quietly watering the heart and cultivating sweet memories? What gently taps the soul and brings eternal beauty? What makes your heart, my heart and his heart play that magnificent movement together? One by one is a shocking choice, a difficult and beautiful choice again and again, a song of one's own choice ... "The four parallel questions at the beginning cause people to think deeply, expressing the value and significance of choice to life, thus expressing the author's feelings.
Step 6 cut to the chase. Because this kind of beginning is straightforward, it can go straight to the subject, enter the scene described by the writer at once, or grasp the essence of the discussion at once, so it is suitable for many styles.
For example, the excellent composition "Choosing the Chinese Soul" in the 2002 college entrance examination begins with "Looking through the past history and looking for the choice of the soul without regrets", and the subtitle is: 1, the choice of heroes. 2. The king's choice.
3. Choice of scientists. In this way, a few words are directly introduced below.
Another example is the excellent composition "Wisdom and Thought-My Choice" in the 2002 college entrance examination.
6. How to write the beginning and end of a composition Students who seldom practice writing always feel that they can't write it at first. Every composition has its central meaning, which is often the theme. At the beginning of the composition, the writing method of "straight to the point" is often used, which goes straight to the subject and does not beat around the bush, such as "The Character of Grass". At first, it can be like this:
Every spring, when the branches begin to sprout, the weeds on the roadside also begin to show a touch of light green, which is often overlooked by people.
This is the way to write directly to the topic. A few words will get to the point relatively simply. As long as you often do composition exercises or keep a diary every day, it is often not difficult to write.
The ending paragraph is generally a summary of the central meaning of the article. Try to be concise and respond to the theme, which is what we often say, "echo from beginning to end", leaving a deep impression on readers and stimulating imagination.
Attached "The Character of Grass"
Characteristics of grass
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Every spring, after several strong winds, the south wind blows slowly. Inadvertently, I found that the branches gradually had new buds and the grass gradually added new green. The weeds by the roadside suddenly caught my attention. How does the grass tenaciously drill out solid land? Where there is soil, there are weeds.
Incredibly, the grass is growing tenaciously all summer, no matter how stormy it is or how hot it is. What difficulties and hardships, in front of them, have become indifferent, they are fearless. Just like the growth of a tree, as long as spring comes, it will take root and sprout. This makes me suddenly feel that the grass is so lovely, so lovable and so tenacious.
Looking at them carefully, it turns out that at first it was just one or two spikes, then a ball, and in a few days, even a piece. It's them, decorating the green of spring. Soon after the grassland turned green, all kinds of wild flowers bloomed. I suddenly realized: without grass, flowers look boring, without flowers, grass looks monotonous. It is the most beautiful only when grass and flowers are everywhere. They set each other off and become interesting, which is really a masterpiece of nature.
Unconsciously, I formed a habit. Every spring, I like to watch the germination of branches and the green of weeds. It is the grass on the ground that tells me this truth: life and the earth are both natural, and life shows its greatness in its struggle with nature. Perseverance through storms is the original meaning of life.