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Comments from the thesis instructor
Academic papers are one of the important manifestations of scientific research achievements, and performance evaluation based on academic papers is a widely used method in most colleges and universities at present. How does a teacher evaluate a paper? Welcome to read this article to find the answer.

Thesis supervisor's comments 1 Excellent:

The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has high academic research (reference) value (great practical guiding significance).

The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, and can comprehensively collect information about the examination system. In the process of writing, I can comprehensively apply the knowledge of the examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems existing in the examination system, and I have a strong ability to comprehensively apply knowledge.

The length of the article fully conforms to the requirements of the college, with complete content, scientific hierarchical structure, prominent points, clear logical relationship and certain personal opinions.

The topics are completely consistent, the arguments are prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Rich references and strong timeliness; There is no plagiarism.

Good:

The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has academic research (reference) value (practical guiding significance).

The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, and can comprehensively collect information about the examination system. He can comprehensively apply the knowledge of the examination system, comprehensively analyze the problems existing in the examination system, and has a strong ability to comprehensively apply knowledge.

The length of the article fully meets the requirements of the college, the content is relatively complete, the hierarchical structure is scientific, the main points are prominent, and the logical relationship is clear, but it lacks personal opinions.

The topic is consistent, the argument is prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Rich references and strong timeliness; No plagiarism was found.

Medium:

The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is average. The topic selection has academic research (reference) value (practical guiding significance).

The student's ability to consult documents is average, and he can collect information about the examination system. In the process of writing, he can basically use the knowledge of the examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems of the examination system, and his ability to comprehensively use knowledge is average.

The length of the article fully meets the requirements of the college, the content is basically complete, the hierarchical structure is general, and the main points are focused on certain logic, but there is a lack of personal opinions.

The topics are basically the same, and the arguments are more prominent. Discussion can better serve the argument.

The language expression is general, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Referring to some documents, its timeliness is general; No obvious plagiarism was found.

By:

The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal, and can basically achieve the comprehensive training goal, with less difficulty and less workload. The theme of the paper is general. Students' ability to consult documents is poor, and they can't collect information about the examination system comprehensively. In the process of writing, his ability to comprehensively apply the knowledge of examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems of examination system is poor.

The length of the article meets the requirements of the college, the content is not complete enough, the hierarchical structure is problematic, the main points are not prominent enough, the logic is poor, and there is no personal opinion.

The title of the article is biased, the argument is not prominent enough, and the discussion can't stick to the theme.

The language expression is poor and the format meets the requirements of the specification; Less possession data and poor timeliness; Some contents are similar to others' achievements.

other

This topic is novel in angle, clear in context, fluent in writing and clear in basic viewpoints. The main problems still exist in the article: students have not thoroughly digested the information they are looking for and the arguments are not strong enough.

First of all, it is worthy of recognition that the title of this article is well conceived. It is also a subject with a relatively large research space. In the limited space, the paper can basically be described clearly. This topic belongs to the field of research level and first-hand data accumulation in the industry. Pay attention to fully absorb the existing research results to support your own analysis and research.

In the whole graduation thesis design, students can successfully complete the thesis writing under the strict requirements of teachers. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to the writing standard of the paper. The author compares ADS-B and RNP with traditional navigation methods, and we can clearly see the advantages of ADS-B and RNP. In order to write this paper well, the author obviously consulted a lot of information, which was fully discussed and clearly organized. Of course, there are also some shortcomings and areas that need improvement. For example, the knowledge is not wide enough to actively communicate with teachers about the work process. I hope this student will pay attention to these problems in his future work or study and strive for greater improvement and progress.

The tutor's comment on the paper is 2 1. The structure of the full text is basically reasonable and scientific, the logical thinking is clear, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, the argumentation method is reasonable, the references meet the theme requirements, the theme and content meet the professional requirements, and the links between parts are relatively close, but individual quotations are not marked, and there are not many truly innovative contents, and individual concepts are vague, which generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.

2. The research content is realistic and operable. The topic is a hot social issue with a rigorous logical structure. The views are clearly expressed and the discussion is comprehensive. This language is concise and easy to understand. In the process of argumentation, the principle of professional knowledge can also be well combined with practical problems. But arguments are not enough. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.

3. The topic is contemporary and realistic. The structure of the full text is reasonable. The expression of views is basically accurate. The full text closely follows the requirements of the administrative management specialty and fully embodies the characteristics of the administrative management specialty. Check out more related information. But the main deficiency is that there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.

4, research-such as the title, fully reflect the characteristics of the times. It can provide reference value for solving administrative problems in China. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and obvious in viewpoint. What can be taught well in the process of argumentation is to combine argumentation with case argumentation. The disadvantage is that some arguments are not convincing.

5. Research on .... It can provide reference for solving the problem. In the structure of the full text, we should first adjust the basic concepts to ask questions, then make an in-depth analysis of the problems, and finally make an analysis of-. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.

6. The topic is in line with the training objectives of the administrative management major, and can better comprehensively apply social theory and professional knowledge. The writing attitude of the thesis is serious and responsible. The content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials are sufficient, and the hierarchical structure is reasonable. The main points are prominent, the logical points are clear, and the language expression is fluent. But the depth of the argument is not enough.

7. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of administrative management specialty and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and correct in viewpoint, which can organically combine the professional knowledge of administrative management with the problems to be analyzed and demonstrated. The materials consulted in the writing process of this paper are not only sufficient, but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized and the case demonstration is not enough.

8. The idea of this article is novel. Taking-as a clue and combining with local standards, this paper comprehensively analyzes the existing problems and reasons of-. And put forward the countermeasures to solve the existing problems. Content argumentation also teaches scientific rationality. The full text fully embodies the characteristics of administrative management specialty and the format is standardized. But innovation is not enough.

9. This paper meets the professional requirements and reflects the hot issues in society. Therefore, the research of this topic is conducive to promoting the further development of our country. The full text first raises questions, and then analyzes the reasons. On this basis, the related-. The full text has proper structure, clear thinking and basically correct views.

10, the paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Can be a good investigation-existing problems. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure. The viewpoint is expressed accurately. The research principles are appropriate. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.

1 1. This paper is correct in topic selection, reasonable in structure, rich in content, sufficient in data, advanced in analysis method and reasonable in writing progress, and the conclusions and suggestions have regional practical significance. The recommendation is an excellent graduation thesis at the university level.

12, the title of the paper is basically consistent with the content of the paper, the structure is complete, and the language is fluent. Even the first draft, except that the paragraphs are too thin, there are not many serious grammar or spelling mistakes. The author tries to find a connection between characters in the novels of lev tolstoy and Cao Yu. From the content, the author has a further understanding of the original work and collected relevant materials. How to draw your own conclusion through the analysis of the data is the purpose of this paper, and it is at this point that the author has made great efforts.

13, the structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to the writing standard of XXXXX paper. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also very sharp, and the paper is clear-headed, well-founded, with unique views, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.