This is a material composition, but it should be examined according to the propositional composition. The material is very simple, with only two sentences: "Everything will pass" and "Nothing will pass". Two seemingly contradictory sentences leave a great angle for students to examine the questions. Then there is the question of "theme". In fact, what is the theme of this composition depends first on what you write. "Everything" has explained the breadth of the scope. Although the two sentences are inscriptions engraved on the ring, this does not mean that it is a restriction on "everything", but it is a concrete manifestation of the openness of the topic. Of course, if we want to limit the scope of "everything", we must analyze the topic clearly. Let's look at the verb "past". In today's context, it is not difficult to understand two inscriptions: "the past" means extinction; "Never pass" means to continue to exist.

From a philosophical point of view, the emergence of new things and the demise of old things are natural laws, so what "will not pass"? In fact, it is good to understand this problem from the perspective of the unity of opposites between subjective and objective worlds. I just said that these two sentences seem contradictory, but they are actually unified, but this is not a problem of philosophical dialectics. As a composition topic, you can borrow philosophical methods. The theme of "everything will pass" should be objective things, from the development of history to the collapse of dynasties, to the birth and death of people, to the demise of things. The main body of "nothing will pass" can be subjective spirit, moral belief, mainstream values of truth, goodness and beauty, family love, everlasting friendship and so on; It can also be objective laws, natural laws and systems. In short, the materials give all the students something to say, and the rest is to pay attention to "turning it into small" and "Wukong problem" when reviewing ideas.

As for the background of proposition expectation, there is a vast hinterland. With the rapid development of the times and the rapid development of science and technology, we obviously feel that the speed of the "past" is accelerating. On the rolling wheel of history, how can we see the face of the times clearly, how can we recognize our own value and really participate in it, instead of just watching the demise of ancient heroic undertakings, the passing of sages and sages, and endless humanistic spirit? In fact, the stories around us are all pitching: Yao Ming is injured, Liu Xiang can't return to the peak, O' Neill retires, telling us that heroes will pass, but their competitive sports spirit will never pass; Students who carefully observe life can look at environmental protection and think about the possible consequences of human behavior from the disappearance of species, the destruction of grasslands and forests, the pollution of rivers and the radiation of the ocean; Look at the life around us, the decline of Shanghainese dialect, the change of traditional lifestyle, the fast pace of life, and the increasingly distant landscape trees, and reflect on how to make your life better after the World Expo; Let's take a look at the impetuous mentality of modern people, the lack of faith and the frequent breaking of the moral bottom line, calling us to regain the mainstream values of truth, goodness and beauty.

Stylistically, students don't have to write argumentative essays, so this material is very suitable for writing narratives and essays, because the theme is easy to determine, and the events and feelings in life are found, and the next thing is simple. Narrative can witness the changes of life from its own growth experience, and can also appreciate the sincerity of feelings and family ties, which pass by with the passage of time and will never die. As for prose, there have been many articles on similar subjects in recent years. In 2009, Tie Ning's "You get carried away in the fog" emphasized modern people's reflection on the truth of life and the state of the ID. Tianmushan, 20 10 autumn exam, expressed the author's concern and doubt about modern people's forgetting revolutionary ideals. We can see what precious things the development of the times has taken away from us, what happiness remains in our memory, and whether we can find clues about whether growth and development are for ourselves or for mankind.

Happy or sad.

In short, this year's Shanghai composition is not difficult, and the perfect score composition is worth looking forward to, but the depth of writing is not easy. Students can make the following attempts in their future composition writing.

1. Dig the depth of the topic and strengthen the ideological and cultural color of the article.

2. Different styles, don't just gamble on argumentative essays, you can try to write complex narratives and create essays.

3. The deep participation of the main body, don't make irrelevant appeals as an outsider. And try to put forward a solution to the problem.

4. The choice of materials should keep pace with the times. "Articles should be combined with the times, and poetry should be combined with things."