For high school students, argumentative writing is often a difficult problem. Compared with junior high school, senior high school writing has higher requirements in both breadth and depth. Many students find it difficult to get high marks when writing narratives in high school, but they can't write argumentative essays well. Finally, the Chinese often suppress the total score! In fact, it's not that high school narratives can't get high marks, but that high school narrative topics are often "difficult". For example, in recent three years, the college entrance examination questions "* * * and the country where I took pictures for you", "Green mountains and green hills" and "Colors in 20 19" seem simple, but in fact, it is not only the writing ability and life reading ability that examine students, but also a deep understanding of the feelings of home and country to get high marks. So how can we write an argumentative essay well? The Chinese Teaching and Research Group of Yukun Education has sorted out the problems of high school students and parents, including the following points:

(1) depth problem:

How to draw up a title?

How to make a decision?

Why do I write shallow articles and dig deep, and always feel that my articles are "thin"?

② breadth problem:

What if there is no material?

How to organize the material?

How to demonstrate more systematically?

My material feels very consistent with the topic, but why did the teacher say it was off topic?

③ literary talent problem:

I don't know how to write.

Get off topic as soon as you write?

There is material but I don't know how to write it.

I've thought a lot and I feel good. I don't know how to write.

④ Limitations:

Since my sophomore year, I have to write an argumentative essay every week. Can I exceed 45 points?

What if our teacher doesn't talk about argumentative writing in Grade One?

Is it too late to study argumentative writing in senior three?

"Kun Education" illustrates the problem of writing ideas with examples:

(2065438+August 2) During World War II, in order to strengthen the protection of fighter planes, the British and American military investigated the distribution of bullet marks on the surviving aircraft after the war and decided to reinforce them in places with more bullet marks. However, statistician Ward believes that more attention should be paid to the parts with fewer bullet marks, because these parts are difficult to return and this part of the data is ignored. It turns out that Ward was right.

Requirements: Synthesize the content and meaning of the material, choose a good angle, define the concept, clarify the style, and draw up a good title: no plagiarism, no plagiarism: no less than 800 words.

model essay

If the floating dust is not brushed, the real pearls will not be exposed.

Fighter protection stops at the emergence of public services; Squeeze through the crowd and gain true knowledge through perspective. Ward used the pen of penetrating essence, the positive solution chapter of this book. Therefore, if you don't brush the floating dust, the real pearl will be hard to appear. People who see the essence through phenomena can often turn joy into straightness and stand out from the crowd. (make an argument)

Shakespeare said, "All that glitters is not gold, and all that sounds good is not good." On the surface, it is a stupid stone, but in its heart, it is a pearl with hidden brilliance; On the surface, it is a beautiful poppy, but inside it is harmful. Everything has two sides, the appearance is just paralyzing people's hearts, but the essence is the core of things. Only by grasping the essence can we face any problems calmly and calmly, which is the shortcut to truly "achieve something". (expand and deepen the argument)

He who sees the essence has a bright future and a calm predicament. (Subargument 1)

Swiss chemist Xiong Ban accidentally knocked over a bottle of chemical reagents while doing experiments in his kitchen. He grabbed an apron, dried it and baked it on the stove. Suddenly, the apron caught fire. On the surface of a small accident, Xiongban smelled its essence: so he carefully searched for the root cause and high explosives were born. (Event Summary) If Xiong Ban is immersed in the pain of the surface disaster and can't dig out the essence from behind the disaster, it will be a blow to him personally, let alone a high explosion. (Hypothetical analysis)

He who sees the essence is a surprise winner and a hero in trouble. (Sub-argument 2)

When you suddenly appear, you will be called a hero on the boxing stage. In the face of repeated defeats, Yilong, a boxer from China, was not intimidated by the heroic aura and arrogance on the other side's surface, unwilling to sink, carefully explored the nature of failure, and saw the essential weakness of blind fighting under the powerful power of the other side, so he developed the fighting skills. In the final, he exposed his body unsuspecting, allowing his opponent to break his ring finger after hitting 13 punches in a row, and the game ended successfully with three punches. From then on, he became famous and launched an impact on the world champion. (Event Summary) If monk Yi Long can't analyze the problem in essence and find the reason, it will be difficult for him to fight back, and there will be no "first monk in China" alive. (Hypothetical analysis)

In ancient times, the old river soldiers in Stone Beasts in the River were observant, dug deep into the roots and found stone beasts. Sai Weng's view of fortune and misfortune is superficial, and insight into the essence makes life more smooth. Nowadays, as balta Sasso said, "Only a few people can see the essence through the phenomenon, and the vast majority of people still stay on the surface." The floating dryness of people's hearts has clouded many pairs of exploring eyes and made many footsteps wander in a daze: blindly following the trend; Jump to conclusions without in-depth analysis; Fight before the situation is clear; Give up life without careful consideration ... (unfold again, positive and negative contrast) How heavy it is to have a heart that sees the essence through phenomena! (anaphora argument)

If you don't brush the floating dust, the real pearl won't come out. Dare and be good at picking the essence, and you can fill your nose with the fragrance of life. (Click on the question again, echoing the beginning)