1, there should be an overview under the title of the paper, and don't discuss it directly;

2. Note that the first line of the paragraph is indented by 2 characters, and the format should be consistent;

3.( 1) News and public opinion-the discussion is too long and should be concise, because this is not the focus of the discussion;

4.(2) The influence of news public opinion orientation on social attitudes-there are too many discussions, so pay attention to cut to the chase quickly and delete it drastically; Try to delete the investigation part and always pay attention to the theme when writing a paper;

5. It is necessary to define and elaborate the definition of "entertainment news";

6.( 1)

The development status of entertainment news in China and people's demand for entertainment-the following 1-5 is as simple as possible, and you are talking about public opinion orientation;

7. "Public opinion orientation" can be analyzed from both positive and negative aspects, which is the focus of the paper and can be made a big fuss; Collect more information on these two aspects and constantly supplement and revise them;

8. The Complete Works of Marx and Engels should indicate the author, publishing house, publication date and version;

Is this a paper? If you want to spend more time, writing papers and revising them are very important. You should read it again and again.

Try modifying it yourself first.