Teaching objectives:

1. Read the text silently, and you can understand this "loving mother" through the scenes and details described by the author.

2. Experience the expression effect of the words that appear repeatedly in the text.

3. Be able to connect with the reality of life and write your own experience of "a sore nose"

Teaching emphases and difficulties:

Read the text silently, and you can understand this "loving mother" through the scenes and details described by the author.

5. Experience the expression effect of the words that appear repeatedly in the text.

6. Be able to connect with the reality of life and write your own experience of "a sour nose"

Class hours: the second class hours

Teaching preparation:

Teacher: Ppt courseware

Student: Preview the text and read it well.

Teaching process:

First, import

Students, through the study of last class, we know that the text tells such a thing:

I've always wanted to buy a juvenile guard, thinking about () all day. So, I came to my mother's work, where the noise (? )。 I found my mother very thin. When I came to buy books, my mother used (? ) hand gave me money and immediately fell into (). I (? ), ran out with the money.

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1 Read, display and modify by comparison

Second, study the text deeply.

Son, what is a "sour nose"?

Preset: When the nose is sour, I am moved and I am about to cry.

Why did the author get a sour nose when he got the money? Before solving this problem, let's go deep into the text and look at those places in the text that make people's noses sour. Please read the text silently, imagine the scene, draw the relevant sentences that make your nose sour, circle the key words in the sentences, and briefly comment on your feelings and thoughts next to them.

Students read silently, circle and annotate.

During the visit, the teacher found that many students drew sentences describing the environment in the text. Who will come to see them and tell you how you feel?

Default 1: The space is very low, which makes people feel depressed. The walls of the factory building less than 200 square meters are damp and decadent. Seventy or eighty broken sewing machines are lined up, and seventy or eighty old women are busy in front of their sewing machines. Because of the dim light, every woman has a light bulb hanging on her head. I can't open the window in hot summer. The heat from 70 or 80 women and 70 or 80 light bulbs makes me feel like I'm in a steamer. (key)

The noise from seventy or eighty broken sewing machines is deafening. (key)

Health: From the words "low", "less than 200 square meters", "damp and rotten walls" and "the window can't be opened", I feel that my mother's working environment is very poor and terrible, and I feel that my mother is very hard.

The noise from seventy or eighty broken sewing machines is deafening.

Health: From Deafening, I feel that my mother's work place is very noisy.

Students, there is a word that appears repeatedly in this passage. Which word is it? (Health: 70-80) The combination and repeated appearance of "70-80" further illustrates the crowded and harsh working environment of mothers and highlights the difficulty for mothers to earn money.

Teacher: How would you feel if you worked or studied in such a humid and noisy environment every day?

Health: I feel particularly uncomfortable.

But the author's mother works in such a noisy and harsh environment day after day, year after year, just to support her children and let them live a good life. Isn't this "loving mother"? How can such a mother's deep affection not make people "nose sour"?

Health: Keep your back straight, my mother. Turn around, my mother. Above the brown mask, a pair of tired eyes looked at me in surprise. Those are my mother's eyes ...

Talk about feelings

Follow-up: What characteristics did you find in these three sentences?

Students can also say these three sentences: my mother's back is straight and turn around. Above the brown mask, a pair of tired eyes looked at me in surprise. ......

Please read against it. Which sentence do you think is better? Why?

Health theory

Students, I don't know if you have seen slow motion when watching movies. Here, it appears in slow motion. Because only when the camera slows down can we break down and refine every movement, and we can see it more clearly and feel it more truly.

"Turn around, my mother." What kind of face did you see at this time?

Health: wrinkled and old.

"Above the brown mask, a pair of tired eyes looked at me in surprise." What kind of eyes do you see?

Health: bloodshot, dark circles are heavier.

Teachers and students read together, and students read together.

The author puts the description of mother's movements and demeanor in front and the three "my mothers" at the back of the sentence. This slow-motion form not only shows the mother's difficulty in getting up and turning around, but also shows the author's complicated emotions such as surprise, sadness and guilt. Please lower your voice and speak slowly, and read these three sentences again.

Why does such a thin and tired mother have to work so hard? Just because of the four words, it is "the depth of loving mother", how can such affection not make people sad!

Students, if this is a slow-motion description, there is also a fast-motion description in the text. Can you find it?

Health: Mom immediately sat down again, bent her back again, leaned her head on the sewing machine board again, and immediately fell into a mechanical busy state with both hands and feet. ......

What do you feel from this sentence?

Default: I feel that my mother dare not delay for a moment, and race against time.

Xiu: Mom said that, she quickly sat down again, immediately bent her back, immediately leaned her head against the sewing machine board, and immediately fell into a mechanical busy state with both hands and feet. ......

Can this sentence be said like this? Why?

Student: Students can talk about their feelings and be reasonable.

In this sentence, the author uses four words "immediately" to describe that mother's actions are very fast, and there is no delay between each action, which highlights the way that mother is struggling to make money in order to maintain the family's life. This kind of race against time, this kind of desperation, is only because of four words, that is, "the depth of loving mother." How can such a mother, such deep affection, not make people's noses sour!

Other presets:

Presupposition 4: I walked past rows of sewing machines, walked to that corner, and saw an extremely thin back bent and his head leaning against the sewing machine board. Several light bulbs around me are baking my face.

Guide students to grasp the key words such as "emaciation", "hunchback", "being together" and "baking", tell their own experiences and feel their mother's hard work.

A word "together" vividly and intuitively describes my mother's hard work. The description of this action is a detailed description, not a close-up.

Hypothesis 5: Mother reached out and took out a crumpled wool ticket from her pocket and counted it with her cracked fingers.

Students can talk about feelings with key words.

This is a detailed description. "Tao" and "number" show that my mother cherishes this money, and also reflect my mother's support and love.

Presupposition 6: A woman next to her stopped stepping on the sewing machine and leaned over her mother and shouted, "Sister, don't give it! Not as a mother as you! Give them food, give them clothes, give them school, and show them casual books! " Then he yelled at me, "How do you think your mother makes money? Do you have the heart to ask your mother for money to buy books? "

Contact keywords to talk about feelings

The brief description reflects that it is not easy for mothers to earn money by borrowing other people's languages, and also shows their understanding and support for the author's desire to study. Isn't this the vivid embodiment of "loving mother"?

Presupposition 7: My mother has put the money into my hand and answered the woman loudly: "Who told us to be mothers?" ! I am glad that he likes reading. "

Talk about feelings.

Action description and language description, we can see that she is very supportive of "I" to buy books and read books. The word "plug" shows that my mother gave me money to buy books without hesitation, regardless of other people's opposition. This is also a detailed description.

Students, after learning so many sentences, now do you know why the author wants to fight for money with a sour nose? Ask the students to answer.

My family is so poor that I even sold my broken radio for food. Mother works in a small street factory to earn money to support her family. I went to ask my mother for money to buy books, but I was surprised to find that my mother was so busy and tired working in such a poor environment. However, my mother gave me the crumpled wool ticket regardless of other people's persuasion. "I" was moved by my mother's love for me, and at the same time I felt guilty about my mother, so I ran out with a sour nose. (reasonable)

The article describes two big scenes-"Looking for my mother in the factory" and "My mother gives money to buy books". Many details in these two scenes can make people feel "loving mother".

Third, practice writing.

Children because of the different times, your mother and father, they may not be like the author's mother, but their love for you must be deep. They must have tired their eyes and backs for your life and study. At the moment when they feel their love, your nose will be sour because of the inner touch. Maybe there are other moments that touch your heart, "the nose is sour." This moment may be because I was misunderstood by others and felt wronged; Probably because I was moved by the help of others; Maybe it's because we can't bear each other. Think back to the scene carefully, and then write down an event or experience that once made your nose sour in fluent language. Focus on writing out your feelings, which makes people feel touched.

Original text

Show and comment.

Children, parents' love and affection for children are not unique to human beings, but also have such touching affection and deep love in the animal kingdom.

Third, expand reading.

Please take out your homework paper and read about maternal love.

1. What behaviors of the old cow moved you? Draw it.

2. Two people at the same table talk about their feelings.

Class is over: maternal love is like the sea, and father loves it like a mountain. The feeling of calving is the love and warmth flowing in the blood. After class, you might as well read Liang's "Father" and "Mother" to further feel this deep love and affection. I also hope that students can care more about their parents, understand their parents and live up to their affection and love!

18 loving mother worksheet

1. What did the message say? Please fill in the correct words.

I've always wanted to buy a juvenile guard, thinking about () all day. So, I came to my mother's work, where the noise (? )。 I found my mother very thin. When I came to buy books, my mother used (? ) hand gave me money and immediately fell into (). I (? ), ran out with the money.

Second, write an event or experience in your life that makes your nose hurt. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________。

Third, read Motherly Love and complete the exercises.

Mom? love

This is a true story. The story takes place in Qinghai province in the west, a desert area that is extremely short of water. Here, the water consumption per person per day is strictly limited to less than three kilograms, and it has to be transported from far away by the garrison. Daily drinking, washing, washing vegetables and washing clothes, including feeding animals, all depend on this precious water.

People can't live without water, and livestock can't live without water. They are thirsty! One day, an old cow, who had always been regarded as simple and honest, was so thirsty that he broke free from the reins and forcibly broke into the only road that the water truck had to pass through in the desert. Finally, the military vehicle carrying water came, and the old cow quickly rushed to the road with incredible discrimination, and the military vehicle came to an abrupt end. The old cow stood in front of the car in silence, letting the driver scold and drive away, refusing to move half a step. Five minutes later, the two sides are still deadlocked. Soldiers carrying water have encountered cows blocking water before, but they are not as stubborn as this cow. People and cattle are wasting away like this, which finally causes traffic jams. The driver behind began to swear and even tried to light a fire to drive away, but the old cow was unmoved.

Later, the owner of the cow came, and the angry owner raised his whip and hit the thin cow on the back. The cow was beaten and cried, but it still refused to get out of the way. Blood gurgled out, dyed the whip red, and the shrill cry of the old cow blended with the cold wind in the desert, which was particularly tragic. The sailor on the side cried, and so did the swearing driver. Finally, the water truck said, "Let me break the rules once, and I am willing to accept a punishment." He took out half a basin of water from the waterwheel and put it in front of the cow.

? Surprisingly, the old cow didn't drink the water she struggled out of, but looked up at the sunset as if calling for something. A calf ran behind the sand not far away. The injured old cow lovingly watched the calf drink water greedily and stuck out his tongue to lick the calf's eyes. The calf also licked the eyes of the old cow. In silence, people saw tears in the eyes of mother and son. Without waiting for the host to shout, in the silence, they turned their heads and walked back silently.

One night at the end of the 20th century, when I saw this heart-wrenching scene on TV, I remembered the poverty and embarrassment at home when I was a child, and my hard-working mother. Like many viewers in front of the TV, I shed tears.

Deskmate communication:

What actions of the old cow moved you? Talk about your feelings.