What did the ancients often say at the end? Leopard tail? As a standard, it means that the brushwork at the end should be concise, bright and clean, just like a leopard sweeping the tail, loud and powerful, giving readers room to chew and remember. Please look at the full-text ending skills of the recent senior high school entrance examination.
Tip 1: echo from beginning to end, highlighting the main idea (1) It is said that the ship of life can not be separated from the ideal sail, and that the ideal of life is for the ideal life, and the happiest time in the ideal life is the dream flower season. At the end of the flower season, I hope I can always remember the good words of the sages: the ship of life cannot be separated from the ideal sail. The ideal of life is for the ideal life. (Selected from the full text of the senior high school entrance examination in Huzhou and Jingzhou) Tips: Echo from beginning to end is one of the most practical methods in the examination room composition. Generally, the author first puts forward the center of the article at the beginning, and then emphasizes it again at the end, taking care of the beginning and making the center of the article stand out clearly. You see, in the above example, the little author used the way of echoing from beginning to end, and highlighted the theme of the article with beautiful poetic language-the happiest time in an ideal life is the flower season of dreams. (1) has a kind of brilliance that hangs over the spiritual home of the Chinese nation; There is a flame that dances on the Olympic Mountain of the national soul; There is a kind of flame that warms the distant feelings of civilization, and that is friendliness! (End) We can't lose confidence in fighting ugliness because of repeated injuries, because we need to protect our spiritual fire-friendliness! (Selected from the full text of "The Fire of the Guardian Spirit" in Henan senior high school entrance examination) Tips: This is the beginning and end of an argumentative paper in the examination room. Compared with the above example, this example is concise and lively. At the beginning, the argument is put forward, the question is quickly entered, and the end is repeated, which echoes the beginning and strengthens the strength of the argument.
Secret 2: Speak from the heart, call on all of us to take action, bring love to others, to children who are out of school, to lonely old people, and to everyone around us. When you give your love to others, you also get great happiness. I believe that as long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a beautiful world. 2 1 century, we are the spring of the motherland, we are not parents, enthusiasm is our character. We don't need to abide by those rules and regulations, break the old rules and regulations, let the passion in our hearts burn more fiercely, string our laughter and love together, and let the whole world be shrouded in love. Laugh as much as you want, cry hysterically if you want, don't restrain yourself, don't let old ideas bind you, don't change yourself casually, please remember my famous saying: I am me. Give me some sunshine, it will be so bright. ? (Selected from the full text of "Give a Little Sunshine So Brilliant" in the senior high school entrance examination in Fujian Province) Skills: The composition in the examination room pays attention to sincere feelings, and it is necessary to write your own call for truth, goodness and beauty, and lash out at the false, evil and ugly. This kind of emotion is not limited to oneself, but also can be a sincere call at the end of the article, calling on everyone to pursue truth, goodness and beauty together and lash out at the false, evil and ugly together. The above little author sincerely calls, and every word is heartfelt, which shows his yearning for a better future. In the second paragraph, the little author spoke enthusiastically, with full personality and undisguised expression. He issued a sincere call to all his peers, effectively highlighting the theme and giving readers a strong spiritual shock.
Tip 3: Ask clever questions and introduce natural colors, natural smells, natural tastes and natural beauty, all of which come from nature. Nature is great. It's amazing. It is so close to life, so tight. Tasting nature is not the same as tasting life. Tips: A good article, carefully chosen, has endless implications, should be philosophical and enlightening. Just like enjoying a beautiful piece of music, although the music is over, the lingering sound leaves endless charm. You see, in the above paragraph, the author skillfully asks questions at the end, which makes readers think and deepens the meaning of the article. It embodies the profundity and uniqueness of the author's thinking. Different words have different influences, different angles have different horizons, different ha ha mirrors have different images, different moods have different actions, different flowers have different scents and shapes, and different evaluations make children have different fates. Why do you want to let your narrow perspective unfairly evaluate and hurt a person, why do you want to put out the candlelight in the wind, and why do you want all children to become a model without personality carved in a mold? (Selected from the full text of "Me in the Haha Mirror" in the senior high school entrance examination in Hubei Province) Tips: At the end of this paragraph, I expressed my views on the teacher's comments. First of all, I explained in the form of parallelism that every student has his own personality, and the teacher doesn't have to erase the students' personality. Finally, it ends with a question, which inspires people's thinking and deepens the connotation of the article.
Tip 4: quote good sentences and be colorful? The wild fragrance is rich, the beautiful wood is beautiful, the wind and frost are noble and clean, and the truth comes out? 15 years, life taught me to give up! For my ideal, for more people to learn, I must give up! (selected from the full text of Guangzhou senior high school entrance examination "Thinking from the sky") Thinking of this, I am reminded of a famous saying: There are many books around you, so long as you look for them, you will certainly learn a lot? (selected from the full text of Shaanxi senior high school entrance examination "reading people around you") Tomorrow Song said:? Tomorrow after tomorrow, how many tomorrows, I live in tomorrow, everything is a waste? I hope everyone can seize today and create a better tomorrow. (From the full text of "Creating a Better Tomorrow" in Neijiang, Sichuan) Zola said: Life-only two and a half minutes, a smile, a sigh and a love? In my opinion, when I was intoxicated with admiring my mother's dress, that minute's smile was not forced. After that one-minute sigh, it is no longer a sigh, but a transmission of love. My mother's love for life, love for life, and love for relatives are integrated into every day, and I am forgetful (selected from the full text of the senior high school entrance examination in Jilin Province). Skill: There are many famous sayings and sentences at the end of the composition. Here are a few examples, quoting poems and famous sayings respectively, which not only increases literary talent, but also deepens the artistic conception of the article. The effect is very good, and students should learn from it. In addition, the range of quotations can be wider, such as proverbs, proverbs, popular lyrics and so on.
Tip 5: lyrical discussion, extraordinary momentum is actually as simple as that. A shallow smile, a thoughtful word, and an all-inclusive heart are enough to relax the tight face and let the smile bloom gently on people's faces. That smile is like a cloud wandering in the horizon, gently dotted with the blue sky, fresh and natural. Youth is beautiful, and beautiful youth lies in struggle and struggle. May everyone in the world let their youth bloom as fragrant as flowers! (Selected from the perfect composition "In the Mood for Love" of the senior high school entrance examination in Jilin Province) Tips: These two paragraphs are from the heart, out of emotion, using parallelism and figurative rhetoric to express their true feelings with beautiful words, and with appropriate comments, the end of the article is extraordinary and powerful.
Tip 6: Contrast the scenery and blend the scenes into one. The wind stopped, the rainstorm ended, the sun smiled again, and the glass of two generations was melted by the sunset. The sun fades away in the distance and disappears into a sunset glow. The two are integrated and there is no distance. (Selected from "Reading in the Rain", the perfect composition of Guangzhou senior high school entrance examination) Tips: The characteristics of this ending are very prominent, and the role of scenery contrast is also obvious. By describing the scenery after the rain, the author implies the disappearance of the emotional barrier between the two generations and the organic combination of emotion and scenery. Implicit and meaningful. The aftertaste is endless. At this moment, a ray of sunshine enters the ward from the outside, and I feel like a wounded little tree bathing it. Oh, on the road of growth, although things are unpredictable, the sunshine is good after all! I think. (Excerpted from the full text of "Growing up in the Sun" in the senior high school entrance examination in Xiantao City, Hubei Province) Tips: This ending highlights the role of sunshine, combines sunshine with growth, implies that the growth path is bumpy but full of sunshine, and expresses an optimistic mood. It not only takes care of the main idea, but also shows deep feelings.
Junior high school composition skills 2: three steps and five articles, composition is basically three steps.
1: Review the question (clarify the meaning of the question)
2. Material selection and center determination
3. List the outline and determine the details.
On the basis of the above, pay attention to the following five items, and a good composition will appear:
1: topic (except novels and propositional compositions)
2. The beginning and the end take care of each other. (lead the phoenix tail)
3. Proper words and correct rhetoric. (Strive for accurate and vivid language) 4: Clear and logical. (It makes people read smoothly and tends to do it in one go)
5. Clever layout and appropriate details. It would be better if you could be literary and emotional.
Text: refers to literary talent and writing style.
Emotion: refers to feelings.
Junior high school high score composition skill three: from? Heart? Arrive? New? , a unique idea
1. Make it clear-the direction of divergent thinking
1. 1 What should I write from the title?
1.2 What can I do from myself?
1.3 What do I want to write from the perspective of society?
2. Broaden your mind-broaden your mind.
2. 1 think horizontally and try to be comprehensive. On the same level, think as much as possible.
2.2 decomposition of thinking, from the perspective of junior high school to consider the same problem.
3. Want to live-cultivate the uniqueness of thinking
3. 1 Looking for the meaning contained in ordinary things
3.2 Express your unique feelings