People live in the world and spend it in countless feelings. Some people say that a person's life begins with a smile and ends with a cry. This smile and cry, full of deep human feelings, saturated with emotional life, gives life a pillar, a goal, a hope, makes life truly full and complete, and makes people have a dazzling brilliance.
People attach importance to feelings. Humans may never understand the ruthless animal nature of a hungry lion. Its children are no different from its prey. Clouds woven by deep and shallow feelings often become a kind of cover, which makes people's original intelligent eyes unable to see the blue sky.
Sima Qian said that human feelings have to miss their parents and care for their wives. Many times, people will naturally shift the balance of justice to those who care more about themselves because of the heavy emotional pressure, just as the saying goes, "How can your elbow turn outward?" Therefore, in ancient times, there was a fable that a wise man doubted his neighbor, and now people are still taking this old road, even going very far. A young female employee was put into prison for embezzling public funds, but she should have a happy family and a bright future. When people asked her why she did such a stupid thing, her answer was only three words: "for love." A mother, because her young son was terminally ill and incurable, actually took her son on the road to death. However, an honest farmer also knows how to talk about partner loyalty. He hid the money stolen from his childhood classmates under the bedding, and somehow he became a criminal ... People's mistakes ranged from helping cheating in exams to killing and setting fires, and some of them just couldn't help it for a while, but the good feelings really became what Taoism called "love robbery".
Many people are aware of this, so the situation seems to be hateful again. The phenomenon of "killing cooked food" has appeared in many different places and fields. The same customers, strangers can get comprehensive and thoughtful service, while acquaintances are left out in the cold; If the defective products can't be sold, contact a well-known unit for employee welfare. Anyway, it is normal to be close, or it is natural for acquaintances to be considerate. Familiar people are embarrassed by their face, so let them swallow their bitterness. Emotion once again affects people's attitudes and even becomes a tool to be used.
We admire Bao Gong not only because he is not afraid of power, but also because he is loyal to his family and married his nephew.
In fact, everyone can get rid of emotional entanglements as long as they can calm down for a while when their feelings prevail. Whether it is favoring close people or deliberately "killing people", it will no longer be the judgment of right or wrong in people's minds.
People are emotional, but more rational. When we look at feelings, we should also remember: don't cover your eyes with emotional clouds.
Comments: Focusing on the theme of "we must control emotional entanglements when we know things", the article first writes about the objective existence and importance of feelings, and then gives a large number of examples in the third paragraph that are consistent with the material theme of Naoko's suspicion of neighbors. At this point, the author's thinking is not satisfied with the simple explanation of the theme of the topic material, but goes deep into it and points out the phenomenon of "killing ripe" that is common in modern society.
This is because the interests drive, so that feelings have become a tool to be used. "Because the multi-angle hit the theme and explained the topic, it is natural to wrap the full text. Not on the topic; Without a clear grasp, extensive attention to society and life, and cognitive ability to think from multiple angles, it is impossible to write an article with such profound thoughts and such a distinctive theme.
Emotion is not a safety rope.
China is a country with great personal feelings. In addition to the original clan relationship, new feelings have been developed, such as being like brothers and sisters. When dealing with all kinds of affairs, I like to make friends and find acquaintances. It seems that doing so can be foolproof, just like being insured.
We can't deny the benefits of doing this, but is it one-sided to handle things and understand things with emotional intimacy? Don't you know that the consequences of doing so often outweigh the benefits, blinding our eyes and not seeing the true side of things!
There is such a fable in Everything is Wrong. There was a rich man in the Song Dynasty. One day, a heavy rain broke the wall of his house. His son said, "If you don't fix it, someone will steal it." An old man next door said the same thing. At night, rich people really lost a lot of things at home. The rich man thinks his son is clever, but he suspects that the old man next door has stolen something. His son and his neighbor said the same thing, but the Song people came to two completely different conclusions. The reason is emotion. Neighbors are treated as thieves out of kindness, but in fact they just lack a blood relationship. Song people's assertion will not only hurt the neighborhood, but also let the real thief get away with it, and it is impossible to get back what is lost. One-sided emphasis on the close relationship between feelings and things will, after all, lead us into some misunderstandings and cause unnecessary losses.
It is true that people close to you are trustworthy and can help you, but strangers who are alienated or completely alienated from you will definitely make you fall into injustice and want to hurt you and become the object of suspicion and hatred? There is an old saying: "There are always many good people in the world." Now you're stuck in a difficult quagmire. When you're besieged and unable to break through, when you're lost and unable to move forward, maybe some people close to you will just wait and see, and many kind strangers will give you a life-saving straw. How many people were squeezed when you were an official, and how many people were left when you stepped down? The phrase "people take tea to cool off the heat" doesn't exist for no reason. People who "hit people when they are down" are often people you don't expect. So don't take feelings as your only bargaining chip, trust others, and treat everyone you don't know or alienate with a friendly eye, so you will get unexpected surprises; It turns out that it is not acquaintances who can do things so well, but brothers and sisters who can care for you like relatives, friends and relatives who deserve your trust.
Don't always look at strangers critically, and don't bet all your chips on emotional relationships. After all, feelings are not the insurance rope for us to know and deal with things.
Comments: Emotion is not the only bargaining chip in argumentative writing. Do you have to know the minimum requirements? "Clearly" tell the truth and know higher requirements? Tell the truth "thoroughly" (carefully, thoroughly, to the point, impeccable), but also understand the highest endless pursuit? The truth should be thorough, imposing and literary. Momentum, that is, the article has a awe-inspiring and irrefutable heroic spirit to conquer people's hearts? This is the spiritual theme of young people in their prime; Literary talent is the beauty of words and expressions, either gorgeous or simple.
The author's heroism and literary talent are mainly reflected in the analysis and elaboration in the fourth paragraph. By enumerating the phenomena and comparing the positive and negative aspects, the author draws the conclusion of bottoming out? "Don't take feelings as your only chip!" Make clear your point: "Emotion is not a safety rope." The use of idioms such as simple beauty, sincere beauty, "There are always many good people in the world", "People go to tea to cool off" and "When they are down and out", as well as the use of idioms such as "besieged on all sides", "the door is empty" and "the door is empty" all reflect the author's familiarity and sophistication in using language, showing his just right talent for simplicity and reasoning.
reading comprehension
Books are the spiritual food of human beings-inscriptions.
A book is a ray of sunshine, which can melt the cold in your heart. Books are spring breeze, which can eliminate your inner dryness. A book is a candle, which can light up a dark heart. A book is a kind of nutrition, which can make your spirit strong. A book is a pot of tea, which makes me memorable. ...
I haven't been to Lushan Mountain, but I feel the magnificence of Lushan Waterfall from Li Bai's "The eaves go straight down to thousands of feet, and the Milky Way falls for nine days". I have never been to Mount Tai, but I feel the majestic height of Mount Tai from Du Fu's "Climbing to the top of the mountain and seeing the true face of Mount Lu". I have never been to Yunnan, but I feel the charm of Huixi Town from Shen Congwen's Border Town.
Reading makes me wander around China.
"When the sun rises, the river is greener than fire. When spring comes, the river is as blue as green." Who does not admire the mountains and rivers of the motherland? "There is a bright line at the foot of the bed, is there frost?" "Reading this excellent poem, which wandering wanderer does not breed endless homesickness," Sleeping in an arc-shaped village without self-pity, thinking of standing for the country ",reciting this sonorous poem, who does not make contributions to the country.
Reading makes me feel the thoughts and feelings of the ancients.
Although life is like running water, it is fleeting, but we can travel through time and space through reading, sigh the vicissitudes of life and feel the glory of enriching the country and enriching the people. The ancients put their feelings in the pen and left us magnificent scenery with pen and ink. We just need to restore them or present them to us with our heart.
Reading is not only to appreciate the beauty of the scenery, but also to ask the hearts of the ancients. Qu Yuan's loyalty to the country, Sima Qian's humiliation, Tang Taizong's broad-minded mind, the absurdity of Ming Zhengde, and Yue Fei's iron loyalty. ...
Reading, let me know the rise and fall of ancient China, let me feel the great sadness and beauty of western love. Literature shows the world a vision and pursuit, which no one can refuse.
Enjoy reading, control your mind, travel through time and space, feel nature, and wander between China and the West.
Comments: The theme of this article is clear and the topic is the center. The whole article focuses on "reading", focusing on feelings, "roaming in China", "feeling the feelings of the ancients", "understanding the rise and fall of ancient China" and "feeling the great sorrow of western love", which is written in detail in front and followed by a pen, with clear priorities; The extensive use of parallelism and the introduction of poetry make the article dazzling.
It's a masterpiece of high school students.