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Introduction to Teaching Preparation of Unit 6 in Junior High School

Introduction and examples of the theme composition of "upgrading thinking software"

Read the following text and write as required.

If people are compared to computers, then each of us has similar "hardware". We often say that he has a head and I have a head; He has a mouth, and I have a mouth; He has a pair of hands, so do I, but why are people's achievements so different? Undoubtedly, the difference lies in the software! So what is human software? Undoubtedly, it should be our attitude, beliefs, values and ways of thinking!

Please write a composition on the topic of "software for upgrading the mind", draw up your own topic, give your own ideas, choose your own style (except poetry), and write an article of no less than 800 words.

Thinking guidance

"Software to upgrade the mind" is a familiar and unfamiliar topic, and it is also an intuitive and vague topic. "Software" and "upgrade" are familiar intuitive concepts when computers are widely used today, but "software for the brain" is a strange and vague brand-new term. The key to writing this kind of topic is to see through familiarity, explore novelty and gain insight into vague topics.

First, grasp the center and define the restrictions.

The form of this topic is phrasal, and this topic often has a hidden or explicit head word.

The first step in the examination is to find the correct head word. It is not difficult to determine that the central word of this topic is "promotion", that is, promotion to a higher level or realm, which is the progress of ideological realm towards truer, more beautiful and better, and the sublimation of outlook on life, values and world outlook.

The second step of the examination is to clarify the limitation of the title to the title language-"upgrade". What is the upgrade? -This is software. What software to upgrade? -is the software of the mind, that is to say, the topic must revolve around the restrictive word "mind".

Find out the central word of the topic, make clear the scope of the topic, and the meaning of the topic will be clear.

Second, expand our thinking and choose some breakthroughs.

After reviewing the questions, we should expand our thinking, carefully conceive and transform the will of the proposition into our own views, feelings or emotional attitudes.

When conceiving, we should broaden our thinking and be good at thinking from multiple angles.

This topic can be considered from the following aspects:

(1) whose brain software to upgrade. It can be "me", a group or a nation. ...

(2) Whose mental software needs to be upgraded. It can be aimed at those hedonists who lead a drunken life, at negative and decadent inaction, at those who complain, and at those who are rich and heartless. ...

③ What is the software to upgrade the mind: attitude towards life? Faith? Values? Way of thinking? ……

④ How to upgrade my thinking software? Reading is closed? See xian Si Qi? Volunteer? ……

Be broad-minded when you conceive, but be small-minded when you conceive. Try to explore secluded places, if you don't send it, you will have it, if you don't explore it, you will express your opinions independently and not follow suit. As the saying goes, "it is better to dig a hole at the point than at the surface", choose a little bit to cut deep and avoid covering everything and floating on the surface.

Comments on outstanding works

Faith promotes thought.

Looking at all sentient beings, we can't find much difference from people's appearance, because the greatness of great men is not written on their faces, but determined by their hearts. And make their hearts bigger.

Tao Yuanming has faith. His belief is to find his true self and return to his nature, so he doesn't want to bow down for five dou meters, so he resigned angrily and retired. He stepped out of officialdom, crossed fame and fortune, and returned to his nature. Since then, in the barren countryside, the music of "cock crowing and mulberry jumping" has been played; From then on, the thatched cottage of Fangzhai was full of the comfort of "returning to nature". It is the belief of a leap that makes Tao Yuanming find his true self in the turbid world and realize the true meaning of life, so the realm of life is open and far away.

The mistake of falling into the dust net did not erase Tao Yuanming's faith, but it was his faith that made him stand firm in Ao Shuang and bloom in the historical time and space.

Li Bai has faith. His belief is that since God has given talents, let them be used! . Li Bai didn't compromise to enjoy the comfort of being intoxicated by money. He walked lightly, holding a hip flask, singing "But let me raise a white deer on my green slope", and walked freely on the road to find his true self-worth. He left behind the burden of official titles, traveled all over the famous mountains, indulged in beautiful freedom, carved immortal poems on the Shu Road, and sang wonderful sentences on Tianmu Mountain.

The setback in official career did not destroy Li Bai's faith, but it was his faith that made Li Bai climb the literary peak admired by millions of people in Spinning a Thousand Ingots of Silver. .

Sean has faith, and his faith is patience. At the end of Qin Dynasty, Sean failed to assassinate Qin Shihuang and fled to Pi. One day, when he was crossing the bridge, an old man in rags stood in front of Lu Yu. The old man raised his feet and threw his shoes under the bridge. "Boy, go down and pick it up for me!" Sean was angered by this and refrained from sending it out. He ran to the bridge and picked up his shoes. The old man didn't give up and ordered Sean to put it on him again. Sean forbeared again, kneeling on the ground to put shoes on the old man. After putting it on, the old man smiled and said, "I can teach you if I have the heart!" " Finally, Sean was awarded a book and said to him, "Reading this book is the king's teacher." From then on, Sean read this book day and night, and eventually became a well-informed and resourceful Western Han star.

Humble birth did not destroy Sean's faith. When he was black and blue all over again, he kept a forbearance, which made ordinary Sean no longer ordinary.

Pascal said, "Man is a thinking reed". Indeed, material life is like a fragile reed. With thoughts and beliefs, people have the power to contain the universe. Mandela, who is in prison, has not lost his faith, so he can still come back in his octogenarian years and lead the South African people to prosperity. Sima Qian, who was in prison, did not lose his faith, so he created "The historian's farewell song, leaving Sao without rhyme"

Looking at the great men at all times and all over the world, all of them have indomitable beliefs and contributed to the upgrading of their souls. Starting today, let your faith upgrade in your mind, and your life will be different.

Comment and analysis

There are "three beauties" in faith, which upgrade the soul;

First, beauty lies in conception. The most outstanding highlight of this article is the ingenious conception. Candidates choose a breakthrough and start with "belief", one of the "software of thought". The opening is small and the excavation is deep, which embodies the ability of "digging holes on the point". The full text is closely related to "belief", not sloppy, thorough in analysis and profound in thinking.

Second, beauty lies in structural form. The article echoes from beginning to end, and its structure is rigorous, especially the cases of Tao Yuanming, Li Bai and Sean in the middle part, which are described and discussed. It begins with the sentence "There is faith, and his belief is …" and is independent, harmonious and unified with "It is faith, let …", with the beauty of prose-like architecture.

Third, beauty lies in language. The language of the article is poetic, the style of writing is like a mountain, it is unrestrained and free and easy, and it is quoted from classics, which embodies rich literary details.

Example display

Pursue the software to upgrade the mind.

Everyone is like a computer, and the difference between people lies in the difference of software, that is, everyone's spiritual world is different. Some people are vulgar and decadent, while others are noble and great. Pursuit is different, life direction is different, pursuit is different, and the soul of software is upgraded.

Pursuit is a kind of comfort and peace. Tao Yuanming was frustrated in the officialdom of Jin Dynasty, and several years of officialdom life also made him see the darkness. He doesn't want to go with the flow, but pursues a comfortable and quiet life. Since then, he has lived in seclusion in the mountains and lived an isolated pastoral life. His pursuit is a great abandonment and purification of the soul. The life of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely" has always been yearned for by people and has become a realm. Although his ideal of making contributions was shattered, he created a higher realm of life.

He upgraded the software of the mind, purified the mind and got a promotion.

Pursuit is a heroic and generous sacrifice for the country. Lu Xun is a great writer, thinker and revolutionary in the history of China. He ignited the hope of China's way forward and the passion of a generation of patriotic young people for saving the country and rejuvenating the country. He once studied medicine, but the decline of the country made him understand that the backwardness of the nation would be beaten. He realized that medicine can only save people physically, but not save mankind and the whole nation mentally, so he abandoned medicine and went to literature to save the country. He is the star of the nation and brings hope to the nation; It was he who used the pen as the handle to fight against the enemy and strive for national independence; It was he who ignited the passion of patriotism and saving the country and became a great man in history.

His thinking software has been upgraded, from saving people to saving the country, and making the nation strong with a patriotic heart.

Pursuit is selfless dedication to love. Cong Fei, a character who once touched China. He has cancer, but he has been helping orphans. He has become the father of dozens of children. He won the fund to help children with his singing. At the last moment of his life, he still did all this silently, amplifying love to the whole society and making the society feel the existence of great love. His contribution ignited the great love of society and he became a model of society.

His mind software has been upgraded, which explains the boundless love of society.

Pursuit, let the software of the mind upgrade.

Let's take action, strive to upgrade the software of the mind and have a perfect life.