It turned out that anxiety and sadness "have been on my mind." I am quiet, happy and refreshed in the lavender brilliance and lavender fragrance of the blooming vines. I realized that "flowers and people will encounter all kinds of misfortunes, but the long river of life is endless." We can't let yesterday's misfortune overwhelm people. Everyone should, like wisteria, devote themselves to the long river of life with full vitality and sail on the shining river of flowers.

Wisteria Waterfall is a portrayal of a dead tree at the beginning of a new era, and the author's heart song is the voice of people at that time.

Second, the problem research

1. Why did the author's feelings change like that when wisteria fell, and how did he feel about life?

When studying this problem, we should pay attention to the writing time-1982. A large wisteria plant "more than ten years ago" is also mentioned. Later, the wisteria frame was torn down and fruit trees were planted on the grounds that "flowers are inevitably related to life", which sounds ridiculous today. This is a very "left" argument.

According to this clue and historical background, we can understand the thoughts and feelings of this article. From 1966 to 1976, ten years of catastrophe. The smashing of the Gang of Four, bringing order out of chaos, ushered in a new era of socialist modernization and made China prosperous again. With this historical background, we will understand that the fate of wisteria, from the scarcity of flowers to the destruction, is a portrayal and symbol of the fate of the whole country in this decade. Looking back on the fate of flowers and people, the author realized that "flowers and people will encounter all kinds of misfortunes, but the long river of life is endless", that is to say, when they encounter misfortunes, they should not be overwhelmed by bad luck, but should maintain a firm belief in long-term life. After bad luck, you can't always let sadness weigh on your heart. You should face a new life, cheer up and devote yourself to a great cause with high fighting spirit. The author understood it thoroughly, so "in the brilliance and fragrance of lavender, I unconsciously accelerated my pace." From the footsteps, we can feel the author's new mental state.

When studying this problem, we should also pay attention to the words "mystery of life and death, brotherhood" Brothers, brothers. What I'm talking about here is the author's younger brother, who is three years younger than her. He is terminally ill and dying, and he is anxious and sad to be a sister. Now, facing wisteria, I am "immersed in the brilliance of this dense flower, and there is nothing else for the time being, only spiritual peace and joy of life". It can be understood as "all kinds of misfortunes" including death. So, why do you say "the long river of life is endless"? Individual life is endless, and human life is endless. In other words, we should not be trapped in personal misfortune, but share the same fate with the people of the motherland.

2. "In addition to the brilliance, there is a faint fragrance here. The fragrance seems to be lavender, and it covers me gently like a dream." How to describe smells as colors and dreams?

Aroma, appeal to the sense of smell; Color, resorting to vision; Dreams are hallucinations produced by the brain. People's feelings can be communicated. Rhetorically, it is called synaesthesia.

3. How can there be the fallacy of "what is the inevitable relationship between flowers and life corruption"?

It sounds incredible now, but this is an era when ultra-left thoughts are rampant. Their understanding of the thoughts and feelings of the working people is very narrow. They think that flower viewing is not a hobby of workers, but a petty-bourgeois sentiment and bourgeois sentiment. They even think that loving flowers will corrupt.

4. After the sentence "The long river of life is endless", I said, "I touched the little purple flower hut, which is full of wine of life. It is full of sails, sailing on the river full of flowers. It is one of the flowers, and it is a flower that forms a beautiful flowing waterfall. " There seems to be symbolism and philosophy here. If so, what does it symbolize? What philosophy does it contain?

This is indeed symbolic. At the beginning of a new historical period, the people of China are full of vitality. At that time, there was a popular saying, "Let's do it with your arms open". The enthusiasm for doing this is like a volcano, and like Qian Fan, it plunges into the torrent of socialist modernization. These two sentences are another philosophy. Everyone is a part of socialist modernization. Only when everyone works hard can the great cause of the four modernizations be brilliant. After understanding this philosophy, it is not difficult to understand why the author "quickened his pace".

5. What does this text inspire our writing?

This kind of article is called "expressing one's will by supporting things" or "expressing feelings by borrowing scenery". We can get a lot of enlightenment from writing this kind of article.

First, writing scenery is the basis of expressing one's will. First of all, write the scenery well. Writing about scenery should be full of emotion, and when it comes to the bottom, you should express your feelings or comments directly. Love comes from the scene and discussion comes from the scene. It is a good article.

It would be better if there were two or three layers of emotion and reason. This essay, after talking about "spiritual peace and joy of life", has a new meaning and is rich.

Second, we should carefully observe the overall situation and various parts of the site. We can see the author writing a tree and a flower in one ear. We can imagine how thoughtful and meticulous she is when observing the whole and the part.

Third, you should have feelings for the scenery. If the scenery is like the person you like in your mind, it will be vivid and kind to write.

Personification, metaphor, etc. I don't think about what rhetorical means I use when writing, but the image and feeling of things in my heart. A wisteria flower, in the author's mind, is like a waterfall, like a person, it is flowing, it is smiling, it is flirting with the sun, and when writing, the wisteria flower is particularly beautiful and lovely. When writing, you must have imagination and association in order to shine.

Fourth, we should have feelings and extract incisive sentences. Make the finishing point, the full text will have spirituality.

When we go deep into the artistic realm of spring, we will be intoxicated by the beautiful spring scenery, infected by overflowing poetry and inspired by abundant vitality. Spring will emerge a beautiful picture full of poetry and painting in our hearts.

The scenery depicted in Spring is full of vigor and breath of life. "When I look at things, everything is my color." When people look at foreign things, emotions will be projected into them, making them look human. Mr Zhu Guangqian, an aesthete, called this phenomenon "the humanization of the universe". He said: "the phenomenon of empathy can be called' humanization of the universe', because with empathy, only physical things can have human feelings, while inanimate things can have life." You see, in Mr. Zhu Ziqing's pen, in spring, "everything seems to have just woken up", and the sun's face is red; "Wild flowers are everywhere: miscellaneous, named and unnamed, scattered in the grass, like eyes, like stars, still blinking"; Spring breeze "touches you like a mother's hand"; "Birds build nests in flowers and leaves. They are very happy. Call friends to show off her crisp voice and sing a melody that blends with the light wind and flowing water. " The author feels the scenery of spring with his heart, pours his feelings into it, and makes the scenery vivid and vivid through artistic techniques such as metaphor and personification. Mr. Zhu Ziqing once said: "Realism is equivalent to the theory of" vivid "or" vivid ",not only that, but also that." It can be said that Mr. Zhu Ziqing's prose has reached such an artistic realm.

"Spring" is exquisitely described and full of emotion. Looking forward to spring is the beginning of the article. The author wrote: "Looking forward to, looking forward to, the east wind is coming, and the pace of spring is coming soon." Putting the two "expectations" together shows how eager we are to look forward to the arrival of spring. The east wind is coming, reporting the news of spring. Listen, the pace of spring is near. In just a dozen words, the author's serious and joyful mood is fully expressed.

The author carefully observed the mountains, water and sun in early spring. "The mountains are moist", which means that the snow is melting, the spring is bright, and the tender grass is green, which is particularly refreshing and moist. The blush of the sun personifies the sun, which not only shows the warmth of spring, but also captures the characteristics of spring and shows the inner charm of spring. To write about the mountains, water and sun in early spring is to start from a big point and outline a general outline for the following detailed description. In the following, the author describes the scene of spring from the aspects of spring grass, spring flowers, spring breeze, spring rain and people in spring.

The grass crept out of the soil, tender and green ... the wind was quiet and the grass was soft. How vividly the word "drill" is used; How do "tender, green" and "soft grass" write the characteristics of early spring grass succinctly and richly.

Flowers are more beautiful in spring. How enthusiastic the flowers are: "Peach trees, apricot trees and pear trees are full of flowers to chase, and you won't let me or I won't let you"; How beautiful the color of the flowers is: "red as fire, pink as chardonnay, white as snow"; How pleasant the taste of that flower is: "There is sweetness in the flower; When I closed my eyes, the tree seemed to be covered with peaches, Xinger and pears. Hundreds of bees are buzzing under the flowers, and butterflies of different sizes are flying around. " There are wild flowers, "scattered in the grass, like eyes, like stars, still flashing."

"The shadow of the ancient wood is short, and the stick helps me cross the bridge east. The clothes are wet with apricot flowers and rain, and the face is not cold. " When spring shines on the earth, the willows spit out new green, and the breeze gently blows on people's faces, which is warm and soft, making people feel no chill. The author describes the spring breeze with "blowing the face without cold breeze", and then captures a vivid and intimate metaphor "touching you like a mother's hand" to describe the charm of the spring breeze. Then, the author wrote the taste of spring breeze with extremely delicate brushstrokes: "The wind brings some newly turned earthy smells, mixed with the smell of grass, and the fragrance of various flowers, all brewing in the slightly moist air." Finally, write down the music of the spring breeze-the dancing songs of birds and the piccolo of a shepherd boy riding on the back of a cow. "The scenery that is difficult to write is like now", and the author wrote the spring breeze that is difficult to write through with vivid pen and ink.

When the author was writing about the spring rain, he first wrote about the characteristics of the spring rain: "Like ox hair, like a needle, like a filament, it is densely woven diagonally, and there is a thin layer of smoke on the roof." Then write the scenery in the rain, and paint a quiet and beautiful picture of ink and spring rain.

Spring is like this. What are people like in spring? Spring has come, "every family in the city and countryside, old and young, has come out one by one." Relax your muscles and bones, be full of energy, and do your job. Write down those who have been "dormant" for a winter and welcome the happiness brought by warm weather. People are full of hope because "a year's plan lies in spring", and they have just started, so they have plenty of time and hope.

At the end of spring, the author always uses three metaphors to describe spring. Spring is new, and it has strong vitality: "Spring is like a newborn doll, new from head to toe, and it is growing." Spring is beautiful and lively: "Spring is like a little girl, dressed beautifully and walking with a smile." Spring is strong: "Spring is like a strong young man with iron arms and legs, leading us forward." From the newborn doll to the little girl and then to the youth, the order described in this paper is also intriguing, and different scenes at different times are written.

The structure of Spring is rigorous and exquisite. The author always writes spring first, then describes it in detail in several aspects, and finally writes it in order to wrap up the full text and make the finishing point. The article begins with "the footsteps are near" and ends with "leading us forward", beginning with personification and ending with personification. Its conceptual layout and rhetorical embellishment are quite ingenious. As for the fresh, simple and meaningful language of Beauty and Elegance, people can feel the feeling of "extremely positive and mellow taste".

The winter in Jinan is very beautiful, and the winter in Jinan written by Lao She is even more beautiful. Mountains, water, sunshine and snow all give people a beautiful enjoyment. In particular, the rich feelings soaked in the picturesque scenery make the works have a unique charm and a long aftertaste. There are many things worth pondering in this article. Here are the following points:

The layout of this article is very organized. In the first paragraph, write about the winter weather in Jinan. Based on the author's own personal experience, and by comparing with Peiping, London and tropical areas, the author wrote the "miracle" and "strange thing" that Jinan is windless, foggy and nontoxic in winter, highlighting its "warmth" and praising it as a "treasure land". This is the main thread that runs through the whole paper, and the unique beauty of Jinan in winter is related to this. At the beginning of the second paragraph, "it's not surprising if there is only sunshine" is an important turning point, and it turns to describe the winter scenery. Before writing landscapes, we should give people a general feeling of Jinan, and set off an "ideal realm" of "warmth and comfort" with anthropomorphic brushwork. The author closely follows this point, describing mountain scenery, watercolor and emotion in the scenery, which not only shows the beauty of Jinan's winter landscape, but also expresses his sincere love for the motherland's rivers and mountains. The article uses three paragraphs to write the mountain scenery in winter, first the mountain under the bright sunshine, then the mountain covered by Bo Xue, and then the distant mountain outside the city, thus sketching an elegant ink painting. The fifth paragraph describes the water color in winter. The author writes about the green color of algae to set off the clarity and transparency of water. It also expands imagination, blends skylight and water color, and depicts the bright and beautiful colors of Quancheng. Finally, end with a concise, powerful and meaningful sentence. The full text is orderly, clear in context, closely linked, and promotes nature.

The article uses metaphor and personification, which are not only similar in shape, but also similar in spirit and vivid and appropriate. A prominent example of metaphor, such as comparing Jinan to a "small cradle"; Compare the snow scene of the small village on the hillside to "small ink painting"; Comparing Jinan in the whole winter to a "blue crystal" is small and beautiful, and comparing the low mountains and winter in Jinan to a "blue crystal" is just right. There are many personified sentences, and the individualization is obvious. For example, the old city of Jinan is said to be "warm and comfortable to sleep, just waiting for the spring breeze to wake them up"; Write a circle of hills around Jinan with warmth. "They whispered,' Don't worry, it will be warm here.' "The mottled colors on the hillside are described as' putting a waterline on the mountain', which is beautiful and moving; Compare pink Bo Xue under the setting sun to a shy girl, she is charming; Anthropomorphize algae, water and weeping willows, saying, "Take out all the green stored all the year round", "With these green spirits, the water can't bear to freeze" and "The weeping willows have to take a picture in the water! "These all show the infinite vitality of Jinan in winter and the hazy spring scenery in winter.

Scenery fusion is another feature of this writing. When describing the winter scenery in Jinan, the article reveals the author's praise everywhere, which can be written from several aspects: First, express feelings directly. For example, at the beginning, I wrote "to a person who is used to life in Beiping" and "to a person who has just returned from London". By comparison, I came to the conclusion that "Jinan is really a treasure", which not only wrote my own unique feelings, but also appeared sincere. There is also "this circle of hills is particularly lovely in winter" and "those hills are so exquisite!" The last sentence contains the affection of "I love Jinan in winter, I love Jinan in winter". The second is to create artistic conception and show deep affection. For example, "Please close your eyes and think about it: an ancient city ... is this the ideal state?" "The best thing is that it snowed a little!" This is a small ink painting. Express the true feelings praised by the author in a beautiful artistic conception. The third is the combination of reality and reality, expanding imagination and expressing love. For example, "there is a bun of white flowers on the top of the tree, like a Japanese wet nurse", "the top of the mountain is all white, and the blue sky is inlaid with a silver edge", which not only writes the shape of the scenery, but also is full of love.

Mr. Lao She is a master of language, and he pays great attention to the choice of words. For example, "An ancient city, with mountains and water, is bathed in the sunshine of the whole world, sleeping warmly and comfortably, just waiting for the spring breeze to wake them up." "When the sun is about to set, the yellowish sunshine shines obliquely on the hillside, and that wave of snow seems to suddenly blush and slightly redden." ..... the choice of words and sentences is very subtle. And the use of related words is also very appropriate. For example, "The clearer the sky, the greener the algae. With these green spirits, the water can't bear to freeze, and those weeping willows with long branches should also be photographed in the water! " "In addition", further state the reasons, or supplement and add new reasons; "Return" means expanding the scope, obtaining or supplementing. Here, the conjunction "except ..." Huan "and adverbs play a related role together, and properly combine the meanings to be expressed.

The title of the article is "Winter in Jinan", which shows that the winter in Jinan is different from that in other places. The last "This is Jinan in winter" is the conclusion of the full text, which expresses the author's overall impression of Jinan in this special season of "winter". Meaning: This world of blue crystals, warm as spring and picturesque as Ming Che, is Jinan in winter! This ending not only echoes the beginning "Jinan is really a treasure", but also points out the topic, expresses the author's praise and gives people room for aftertaste.