1, the topic of this article is-,which is discussed first. Therefore, this article is closely related to professional requirements, scientific and reasonable in structure, accurate in viewpoint expression, correct in words, fluent in sentences and clear in thinking. The relationship between the parts is very close, and the argumentation method adopts case argumentation and case argumentation. The information consulted is sufficient and reasonable. The countermeasures to solve the problem still lack maneuverability.
2. The topic of this paper is meaningful. On the basis of absorbing academic research results, it is reasonable to have your own experience and put forward your own views. The argument is correct, the material is substantial, the narrative is clear and logical. Clear pronunciation and mellow voice are extremely smooth. Writing conforms to academic norms. In the future, we should further sum up experience, compare music education modes and teach music better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
3. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. Each part is closely related, the viewpoint is expressed accurately, and the argumentation content is convincing, but the article lacks its own original content.
4. The paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Can well investigate the existing problems. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure. The viewpoint is expressed accurately. The research principles are appropriate. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
5. The full text is entitled-. Focus on exploring-the full-text structure meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is reasonable. The reference materials are closely combined with the theme.
6. The full text is entitled-. Focus on discussing and analyzing the existing problems and reasons, and then put forward some operable countermeasures. The full-text topic is novel and research-oriented. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the thinking is clear, the viewpoint is clear, and the arguments are convincing. The demonstration method is reasonable, and a large number of data are used to demonstrate, which increases the reliability of the demonstration. You can comprehensively use the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze-,but
7. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to the English writing standard. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also very sharp, and the paper is clear-headed, well-founded, with unique views, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.
8. The topic of this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the knowledge learned is used comprehensively to solve the problem. The data obtained are reasonable, the conclusion is correct and there are innovative opinions. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent. In the future, we should further sum up experience and compare moral education models, so that moral education can be carried out better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
9. The point of this article is. The topic selection is in line with the training objectives and professional characteristics of administrative management specialty, and has strong pertinence and practical significance. The structure of the article is reasonable, the level is clear, and the related documents and materials cited in the writing are closely related to the theme, and the cited materials are relatively new. In the process of writing, the author can better use the basic knowledge of administrative management to analyze administrative management, and in the process of argumentation, he mainly uses theoretical argumentation and factual argumentation. However, the shortcomings of the article are unclear expression of some sentences, insufficient argumentation and insufficient innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
10, the title of the full text is-scientific and reasonable structure, strong logic and clear thinking, and the references consulted meet the requirements of the paper. The demonstration method is reasonable. The content of the argument is more convincing. The analysis of the problem is more thorough. In the process of demonstration, students can also combine the principles of administrative professional knowledge with social reality. Whether it is from the topic selection or viewpoint demonstration, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty. But innovation is not enough.
1 1. The references in this paper are sufficient and meet the needs of the topic. Taking-as an example, this paper focuses on-. The topic of the paper meets the requirements of administrative management, with complete structure, clear thinking, accurate expression of views and standardized format, which can better use administrative professional knowledge to analyze practical administrative problems in reality. But the argument of personal views is not sufficient. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
12, the theme of this paper is-the full text is divided into four parts. Firstly,-is discussed, and then-is analyzed emphatically. The full text is basically discussed around the theme. In the process of discussion, students make good use of the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze and solve problems. The language is fluent, but the point of view is not refined enough. In the process of argumentation, we can properly use theoretical argumentation methods and practical argumentation methods. Accurate expression of views, clear thinking and strong integrity of the article. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty.
13, this paper takes-as the theme, and the topic selection has strong reality and application, which meets the requirements of the training goal of administrative management specialty. The structure of this paper is basically reasonable, and the full text is divided into * * *-most parts. The first part-on this basis. In the process of demonstration, students' reference materials are closely combined with the viewpoints and contents to be demonstrated, and the research methods adopted are mainly theoretical research and case study. Words are basically accurate. However, the main problem is that the arguments are not sufficient and convincing, and individual quotations do not indicate the source.
14, the topic is contemporary and realistic, the structure of the full text is reasonable, the viewpoint is basically accurate, and the thinking is basically clear. The content of the full text is basically written according to the training requirements of the administrative management major, and I have consulted a lot of relevant materials, but it does not fully reflect the characteristics of the administrative management major, and there are not many things that belong to my own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
15, this paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the basic principle of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the problems existing in the official accountability system in China are deeply analyzed, and finally, effective suggestions are put forward for the previous problems. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
16, the topic of this paper meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty, and it can comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the practical problems of enterprise administration. The writing attitude of the paper is serious and responsible, the content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials meet the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main points are clearly expressed, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. However, the depth of argument is not enough and innovation is insufficient.
17, the topic of this paper is reasonable and meets the requirements of administrative management specialty. The full text is also more scientific and reasonable in content demonstration and more standardized in format. The reference materials are closely related to the theme of the article, but the innovation and arguments are insufficient, especially the last part of the article is too weak and unconvincing. Generally speaking, it basically meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
18, xx is modest and prudent, diligent and studious. Pay attention to the combination of theory and practice, effectively apply the classroom knowledge learned in college to practical work, listen carefully to the guidance of veteran comrades, and listen humbly to the work suggestions put forward by others. Show a strong thirst for knowledge, and can carefully observe personal experience, think independently and comprehensively analyze, and flexibly use what they have learned to solve practical difficulties in their work.
19, research-as a topic, fully embodies the characteristics of the times. It can provide reference value for solving administrative problems in China. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and obvious in viewpoint. What can be taught well in the process of argumentation is to combine argumentation with case argumentation. The disadvantage is that some arguments are not convincing.
20. Students can listen to work suggestions put forward by others with an open mind. In the case of limited time, work overtime to complete tasks. Be able to flexibly apply what you have learned in school to specific work and complete tasks with good quality and quantity.
2 1. This student is hard-working, creative and constructive, has a certain pioneering and innovative spirit, accepts new things quickly, covers a wide range, and has his own ideals and goals. I hope to make persistent efforts.
22.XXX can explore better working methods to improve efficiency and win the first place in the workshop material preparation competition. In the study of other workstations, Liu Wei also showed a positive attitude, became a qualified generalist through study, and won unanimous praise from leaders and colleagues in team life.
23. During the internship in Lenovo Group's Beijing factory, XXX students were able to strictly abide by and implement the company's rules and regulations, actively cooperate with colleagues in related neighboring stations, and coordinate the completion of various production tasks. In the later stage of packaging material preparation,
24. During the six months of internship, XX students have been active and hard-working, and handled the relationship with teachers and colleagues well. They studied patiently and worked hard to improve their skills, which was well received by everyone. I hope to develop their achievements in the future.
25. This student is modest and prudent, studious, pays attention to the combination of theory and practice, and can effectively apply the classroom knowledge learned in college to practical work and listen carefully to the guidance of old comrades. I hope this classmate will make persistent efforts and become an excellent talent.
The student strictly abides by the rules and regulations of our unit. During his internship, he was never absent without reason, late and left early. He can get along well with colleagues in the unit, communicate harmoniously, learn from each other's strengths, be open-minded and eager to learn, and pay attention to teamwork.
27. During the internship, the student was studious and practical. When he meets something he doesn't understand in his work, he can consult his experienced predecessors with an open mind, showing good team spirit and professionalism.
28. Research on ... It can provide reference for solving problems. In the structure of the full text, we should first adjust the basic concepts to ask questions, then make an in-depth analysis of the problems, and finally make an analysis of-. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
29. Over the past year, XXX students have been active and hard-working, and their relationship with teachers and colleagues has been handled very well. They studied patiently and worked hard to improve their skills, which was well received by everyone. I hope to develop their achievements in the future.
XXX worked as an intern in Beijing factory of Lenovo Group Co., Ltd. from September 2002 to July 2003. During the internship, the employee carefully studied various professional skills, strictly implemented various management regulations, and actively participated in relevant competitions, which can better meet the needs of various positions in assembly lines and unit lines. At the end of the month, I won the ranking for many times, and I have a strong sense of team. I can put forward reasonable suggestions for team progress. Overall performance is good.
3 1. This student can study hard, consult modestly, actively implement new educational concepts, explore new teaching methods, assist teachers to do a good job in class management, be close to students, and be deeply loved by students.
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