This is all my advice to you. I haven't written an article for six or seven years. I hope I can help you.
2. How to write a well-defined composition How to do it: Clear thinking and clear hierarchy are the requirements of logical thinking and the need to express the content of the article more clearly.
Idea is the author's writing idea, and level is the order of the content of the article, which complement each other and form the basic skeleton of the article. Let's talk about the different arrangements of different types of articles at different levels with examples.
The hierarchical arrangement of narrative mainly includes: 1. Time is the command. The article describes the natural process of the development of objective things in the order of time: for example, writing a day, from morning to noon to evening; Write about a person, from childhood, adolescence, youth to old age; Write a thing, from its occurrence to its end.
In this way, the story has a beginning and an end, and the article is clear and orderly. When writing in chronological order, we should pay attention to the following three points: first, choose materials according to the needs of the theme of the article, so as to make the focus clear and prominent.
Second, we should learn to string beads with colored threads, and string all materials together with a red thread, so that the threads are connected and the clues are clear. Third, we should skillfully set suspense, insert flexibly, or adopt the method of suppressing first and then promoting, and alternating density with Zhang Chi, so as to make the article ups and downs and fascinating, so as not to fall into the routine of running accounts.
In recent years, the "diary-style" composition appeared in the college entrance examination also belongs to the chronological writing style, which gives the author greater freedom in selecting materials and is convenient for expressing his true feelings. For example, "Footprints" written by Jiangsu candidates in the 2005 college entrance examination: Footprints are full, and the 365-day journey left a clear and continuous footprint behind me ... On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, the weather in Fengtou Town was fine. Today, I saw my seniors and sisters are busy evaluating scores and filling in volunteer figures. Suddenly, I feel a heavy burden on my shoulders. It will be my turn this time next year.
In the composition class, the teacher said that writing should pay attention to comb, pig's belly and leopard's tail, and I couldn't help but think of my mental journey to realize my dream. If I don't take the key step and have a beautiful crested head, it will be rare to have a pig's belly, let alone a leopard's tail.
When I first entered high school, I looked at my pathetic scores in the last exam and the eye-catching dates on the calendar. I know the journey to realize my dream. The full moon is gone. I only have 365 days left. I told myself it was time to start, so I carefully arranged my textbooks and notes and prepared to start ... If I want to remind my dream of flying, I must work hard from the first step. ...... B. Pork Belly On Sunday, March 20th, 2005, the second model of rain came to fruition. When I saw my name on the report card, I was filled with joy. At the same time, I obviously felt the excitement that my classmates began to hold back in their studies. It seems that everyone is expecting the countdown to the college entrance examination on the blackboard to turn faster.
In fact, I also hope to go to the examination room as soon as possible and practice the college entrance examination with my own efforts, but time is still advancing at a constant pace ... Just as I was standing on the edge of impetuous complacency, the teacher warned me: "Be indifferent to your ambitions and stay away quietly." So I opened my diary and sedated myself again: "Steady! I will make every effort to go further, and I will be the winner who laughs last! " Counting the days, 278 days have passed since the 365-day journey.
In the rest of the time, I will continue to be down-to-earth and stick to it! Because I want to give myself a plump pork belly in the process of dreaming, so as to get the most charming leopard tail. "The road is long, Xiu Yuan, and I will go up and down."
On Thursday, June 9, 2005, it was sunny, and in a blink of an eye, the two-day intense and substantial college entrance examination soon ended. I walk steadily.
I was full of encouragement and relaxation when I walked out of the examination room yesterday afternoon. I seem to hear the sound of flowers blooming. I went to school this morning to evaluate my score, and the result was similar to my original goal.
Looking at the envious eyes of my classmates, I have unspeakable happiness. Looking back at the tears of excitement when dreaming, and the stubbornness of getting up again after falling ... no pains, no gains, I succeeded. After the beautiful crested and full belly, I finally got an attractive leopard tail, and the full moon disappeared, leaving my clear footprints on the 365-day journey ... "After the storm, I saw a beautiful rainbow in the sky."
Candidates "select" four diaries from their college entrance examination life and arrange them into an article in chronological order. They summarized their experience in preparing for the college entrance examination into three stages: crested, pork belly and leopard tail. In the time chain, the marking teacher can feel the strong will of the candidates and the efforts behind their success. Material selection not only pays attention to time sequence, but also reflects selectivity. In order of time, we can foster strengths and avoid weaknesses. 2. Space is order.
In this paper, the characters in different places and occasions are described in the order of space transfer, and the characters are shaped from multiple angles, or a theme is expressed through the description of events in different places and directions. There are two ways to write a composition according to spatial order: one is to write in the order of the author's whereabouts.
For example, Ye Shengtao's "Swimming in the Three Lakes", the famous works in the middle school class "Three Gorges of the Yangtze River" and "Climbing Mount Tai in the Rain" and so on. The second is to write according to the spatial orientation of the scene.
This kind of writing is common in writing buildings and scenic spots. For example, the Palace Museum and Pu Songling's former residence.
No matter which way you write, you should explain your position clearly so that readers can clearly perceive the foothold (observation point) of writing. In recent years, in the college entrance examination, the "lens combination" composition written by some candidates should also belong to the composition arranged by spatial order.
This writing method has the advantages of wide material selection space, free material selection, clear hierarchy and strong operability. 3. The sequence of events.
In order to show the spiritual world of the characters and a certain theme, this paper describes the ins and outs of the events in detail in the order of their occurrence, development and ending. When writing in the order of events, we should pay attention to the following two points: first, the author should make clear the meaning of the events themselves and accurately express this meaning.
Second, we should be good at using suspense, cadence, rendering and other artistic means to tell the story ups and downs, colorful and full of twists and turns.
3. What tips can make the composition clear? In order to make the composition clear, we must write it in a certain order, arrange the structure of the composition, write the key points in detail, and write the non-key points briefly.
1, learn to outline and sort out the whole composition. It's easy to write an outline.
2. Pay attention to the model essay to lead the way, train formation skills and master the operation rules.
3, there is a head and a tail, both head and tail; The stylistic elements are complete and meet the requirements of stylistic format. Clear definition and clear organization.
4. The narrative in the narrative mainly depends on whether the beginning, development, * * and ending of the event are clear, and the screenwriter mainly depends on whether the characters are vivid; Argumentative writing mainly depends on whether the argument is correct, whether the argument is typical and sufficient, and whether the argumentation process is clear.
4. How to write the article clearly? 1. Good at using details, with clear details. Highlighting an action, psychology or scene in the process of narration or description can make the article more substantial, properly structured and focused.
2. Clever segmentation, according to the beginning \ development \ end of the plot or the content of the described fragment, the article is segmented and subtitled, which can make the article structure brilliant and the context clear.
3. colored beads. Colored beading is one of the commonly used techniques in prose, also known as beading. It is to connect a number of scattered and trivial materials in series with specific people, events, events and feelings to form a whole, so that the content of the article is rich without confusion, and the form is scattered but the spirit is not scattered.
4. Echo from beginning to end. The layout of the article is very important, and the reader will be interested only if it is wonderful and attractive at the beginning; The ending should be strong, which can not only sublimate the theme, but also make readers feel more fragrant.
That's all I thought of. I hope it will help you.
5. How to conceive the structure of the article and make it clear (1) List a small outline of writing, and let the words become thoughts.
Good creativity will make the composition brilliant and refreshing. Let primary school students learn to conceive, start with writing an outline, grasp the key points of written materials in a certain writing order, and arrange details appropriately.
Students learn to conceive and have methods to write compositions, so that the exercises written will be vivid and clear. Outline is the product of composition conception.
The first problem of composition is to make an outline. Writing an article according to the composition outline will not only lose the original content, but also save the drafting process and time. More importantly, it can express and highlight the center of the article in an orderly and focused way.
Therefore, before writing a composition, students had better make an outline. There are so many advantages in writing an outline, so how to outline at the front of the composition? Generally speaking, it can be divided into the following processes: 1, examining the meaning of the question and determining the center.
2. Choose materials around the center. 3. Define the center and arrange the order.
4, highlight the center, detailed properly. The general format of composition outline: including title, center, paragraph arrangement, instruction details, etc.
Students can list the outline of the composition according to the above process, and write according to the outline when writing, so that it is easy to be clear-headed, focused and easy to write a good article. Demonstration Center: Describe my after-school life and highlight that I like reading books in my after-school life.
Paragraph arrangement: 1. Opening point: I like reading books in my spare time. 2. Introduce my hobby through concrete examples.
(1) I forgot the time when I was reading, and I was completely attracted by the plot of the book. In order to read, I gave up the opportunity to play.
Summary: This is my after-school life. Center: Introduce yourself and describe that I love reading, painting and have a sweet mouth.
Paragraph arrangement: 1. Opening point: through the description of appearance, point out that this is me. 2. Introduce my hobbies through specific examples and highlight my personality characteristics.
(1) I love reading; (2) I love painting; (3) My mouth is sweet. Conclusion: I am such a lovely little girl.
(2) The composition should have a certain order. What is the composition order? What to write first, then what to write, and finally what to write, we call this order writing order. There are many orders for writing a composition, such as development order, transposition order, observation order, sequence, orientation order and so on.
But no matter what the order, the key is that we can choose flexibly and arrange skillfully when writing. 1. Arranging hierarchies in chronological order will give people a sense of organization.
It can let readers know the ins and outs of things and grasp the main contents of things. For example, in the article Happy Life of the Sun, the author describes the state of the sun at different times of the day in chronological order, with distinct levels.
The Happy Life of the Sun In the early morning, the sun climbed up from the mountain pass. At noon, the sun looks after the children playing on our heads.
In the evening, the sun sets from the other side of the mountain and the stars see me off. 2. According to the arrangement level of spatial order, the article is conceived by spatial order, and the writing object is often some buildings.
According to spatial order's writing, people can have a comprehensive understanding of the layout, orientation and size. Generally speaking, the change of rank is reflected by the words expressing position.
For example, in the article Toy Cars, the author clearly introduces the shape and structure of toy cars according to spatial order. My toy car is a silver-gray convertible with luxurious hardcover seats.
3. Arrange levels according to the order of the development process of things, conceive articles according to the development process of things, and often arrange levels according to the development stages of things. This makes it easier for people to sort out the development of the whole event, and at the same time, the priorities of things will also be displayed.
For example, in the article An Unforgettable Event, the young author arranges the materials according to the sequence of events. I want to help the police uncle catch thieves.
I followed blindly and fell down myself. The police uncle told me that we should pay attention to methods to catch thieves.
We calculated, cut corners and caught the thief. (3) The content of the composition should be detailed. The title of the article determines the focus of writing, and the focus is exactly where it should be written in detail.
For example, the fun of after-school life, the focus is on after-school life, so things in class can not be written in too much detail, otherwise it will deviate from the requirements of the topic. The setting of the article center also requires careful and appropriate composition.
We choose the materials around the center of the article, and we should also distinguish the primary and secondary materials around the center of the article. The material that can best express the central meaning of the article is the main material, which should be written in detail; Materials that have a general relationship with the central meaning of the article are secondary materials and should be omitted.
For example, in the article "My Brother", you can write about my brother's cuteness, his naughty, his bravery and his seriousness ... But if you determine the center of his naughty, you should choose naughty things in your life as the focus to write in detail, and write briefly to show his cuteness and bravery. Demonstration (in detail) My brother likes riding a wooden horse.
Once, he sat on a high stool with a basin on his head, wood blade in his hand, a sword in his right hand pointing forward, his feet clamped on the stool and shouted, "Go!" My brother held one end of the charger wire, and when the whip was thrown, he shouted "yeah" and threw it back. I put out my fist to scare him, but he held my leg and said, "Brother is the most handsome!" " "Well, it's really irritating and funny! My brother's personality also has a lively and cheerful side. His little mouth is always talking to people. It looks cute.
Another example is the article "Remember a Sports Meeting". If you want to write about the sports meeting, although there are many events in the sports meeting, each one is wonderful, but it is not detailed. Therefore, it is necessary to arrange the details of the article. If there are any projects and key projects that your class participates in, you should write them in detail, and write a little about others.
Only in this way can we write a detailed composition. Everyone took an active part in the competition, including those who participated in long-distance running, skipping rope and long jump ... We all sat in the stands and cheered for them.
The main force of our class participated in the sprint 100 meters. As soon as the starting gun rang, Zhang Leijian rushed out and gradually accelerated from the fourth place.
6. Title: From "① Mom, I want to tell you who is guarding me when I am sick, it is my mother; When I am in trouble, who is supporting me is also my mother; Who is there to comfort me when I am sad? It's all my mom
Every time, my mother is by my side and gives me endless love. I really want to say to my dear mother, "Thank you, my dear mother.
I was a naughty child when I was a child, which caused my mother a lot of trouble. My mother always silently supported all these troubles for me. Even that time, she didn't complain at all.
That day, I climbed up the newly-built shed and happened to be met by my mother who came back from shopping. See me climb so high (about two tables are stacked), and call me down at once. I waved to my mother to show that I was fine, but I had a trouble that my center of gravity was unstable and the whole person "flew".
Before I passed out, I saw my mother holding me in tears, and then I lost consciousness. In the dim light, I vaguely heard my mother's voice. She was calling me to wake up! So, I opened my eyes and found myself in the ward. "Oh, dear! It hurts! " I gave a cry subconsciously. Obviously, my forehead was stitched several times.
Huh? Mother fell asleep in the chair. I was about to bend over to look, but my mother opened her eyes.
Scared me, my mother's bright eyes were full of bloodshot, and her black and shiny hair was actually added with a lot of white, making the whole person look thinner. "all right! Finally woke up, hungry? " Until my mother's concern sounded in my ear, my nose was sour with shame and guilt, and tears kept falling like broken beads. Seeing me like this, my mother thought I had something to do and asked anxiously, "What's the matter? Is there anything wrong? " I shook my head, hugged my mother and cried, "Mom, I'm fine, I'm sorry, I'm sorry!" " "At that time, my mother didn't say anything, just smiled and seemed to contain some charm.
Mom! As a daughter, I can't do anything for you now. I can only say to you deeply: "thank you, my good mother." Mom, I have a lot to say to you, but every time I say this, I swallow it.
Take the opportunity to write a composition today, please listen to your daughter's voice! I remember one day, you bought a wooden box from the street and put some things in it. You can't put it down at this moment, and you still have a happy expression on your face, which makes me curious. Once, you forgot to lock the box, and I couldn't help wondering.
When I opened the box, I saw a bright red scarf and a thick picture book neatly placed inside. I looked carefully at the photos inside, all of which were happy photos of you playing with your friends when you were a child.
It turns out that what is hidden inside is your childhood! How innocent you are at this time! Suddenly, the same idea as you came to my mind: how nice it is to leave my childhood behind! After that, I sewed a duck-shaped crooked lotus bag. Although it is crooked, I have paid a lot of labor. I was very excited and happy when my hand was ground out with several bubbles.
But you walked into my room, threw it out in front of me for no reason, and said, "You are so old, you still play with this toy!" " "Do you know how sad I am at this moment? Another time, I drew some pictures from memory. I want to draw more pictures myself and make a picture book.
But you come in and say, "If only you spent your painting time studying, you would waste your time drawing some boring pictures." I was just about to explain to you that you threw it into the kang mercilessly, and my heart was completely cold at this time.
Mom, do you know what you threw and burned in those days? Today, I take the opportunity of writing a composition to tell you that what you threw and burned was my childhood! Learning is important, but it can't help but make children happy! Mom, you shouldn't! You shouldn't! I also want to say to mothers all over the world: "mom, give us some free space!" " Give our childhood some happiness! We will remember your kindness. "Mom, I, you know, I'm a little timid, so I dare not say it in front of my family. This time, I will use this composition to express what I want to say! Mom, do you remember? Once, I will take the stage to preside over the flag-raising ceremony of the whole school. I've never been on stage to host, so I'm nervous. I don't think about tea and rice every day, and I fidget every day.
It's you who have always encouraged me, it's you, mom, it's you who have been patiently listening to my recitation, listening to it again and again, and never getting bored. It is you who always care about me, take care of me and give me confidence when I need comfort most.
Finally, with your encouragement, I succeeded! Mom, do you remember? Once, our teacher punished our classmates for running 20 laps, or they would fight if they didn't run. So, I hold a grudge against that teacher and talk crazily with his classmates. No matter how much he scolds us, we just won't give in.
I only came up with it to get back at you. How can I yield gently? When I have this immoral idea, it is you who spare no effort to spend your rest time and keep educating me so that I don't take detours and keep ahead on the runway of life! So, I gave up my revenge plan! Mom, do you remember? Once, my classmates and I were reciting each other's words. The teacher thought we were talking, so he left us to make up lessons. How my classmates and I explained it, the teacher just didn't believe it. At the critical moment, it was you, mom, who stood up first when I was wronged. No matter who hurts me, you will stand up for me, never be afraid! That's it! I want my dignity back! Mom, do you remember? On one occasion, 6. 1 Children's Day was admitted to the hospital, but he could not leave the hospital. I can only watch other children happily buy gifts with my parents.
Look at this situation, try to tell me stories and buy me cartoons. At that time, I had no idea. Actually, my mother is very busy, but you spend all your time with me, Ann.
7. How to make the logic of primary school students' compositions clear?
1, "multi-perspective" observation.
"Seen from the side of the mountain, there are different heights" is a famous philosophical saying of Su Shi. This famous saying brilliantly reveals that objective things have many internal characteristics. Therefore, we must observe things in a corresponding multi-angle way. Observing things must be comprehensive and meticulous. We must look at all the parts that make up a static thing and carefully look at all aspects of each part. Every specific thing, it always consists of several parts. If we miss a part when observing, then what we observe is incomplete. For example, when we observe a pot of jasmine, I should notice that it is composed of four parts: roots, stems, leaves and flowers, especially the visible stems, leaves and flowers. If you miss it, the observed jasmine is incomplete. If we don't pay attention to the quality, color and shape of its stem, it is difficult to understand its stem characteristics. If we don't carefully observe its color, shape and taste, it is difficult to understand its flower characteristics. On the contrary, if we carefully observe these aspects, our understanding of jasmine is not general, but concrete. Of course, not only for static things, but also for changes.
When writing a composition, we should understand and think from different angles and aspects. Writing notes is inseparable from the development and change process of things, such as their occurrence, development, * *, and results. Writing a composition is inseparable from specific things. So when writing this kind of composition, we should pay attention to the development and changes of things. Events change with the passage of practice and the change of place. What are the different situations at different times and places? If we give priority to these situations, the composition will be concrete. At the same time, the narrative of one thing is always inseparable from human activities. Therefore, when writing a composition, we must pay attention to describing the relevant people. By describing the expression, dynamics, language and psychology of the characters, the composition is enriched. For example, take "Remember a table tennis match" as an example. Think about it: From the perspective of both sides of the game, what comments and actions did they make during the game from the perspective of spectators?
When we think and analyze things in this way, we are ready to write specific articles. However, writing specific articles is not to do a "running account". When writing an article, empty talk is the most taboo Some students think that writing a specific composition means writing as many words as possible. Some ordinary students explained the time, place and people, and the cause, process and result of the incident were very clear, but they were plain. Because the content is not specific. How can we make the content concrete? I think the most important thing is to pay attention to the performance of the protagonist at the important stage of the development of things, and think more about what he said, did and thought about this matter. He can't be satisfied with the statement of the development process of things.
Second, the composition should be organized.
The organization of the article belongs to the whole article, which refers to the internal organizational structure of the article. It is like a human skeleton, which strongly supports the whole article. The external expression of article organization refers to the order of articles. For example, the key point in Beautiful Xiaoxing 'anling is to depict the beauty of the scenery in the order of "spring, summer, autumn and winter". As far as its organizational structure is concerned, the coherent internal expression of the article mainly refers to the ideas and clues of the author's writing. Xiaoxing 'anling has beautiful scenery and rich products, which is both a big garden and a treasure house. When writing this article about scenery, the author described the growth order of trees and other scenery in Xiaoxing 'anling all year round, which not only conforms to the growth characteristics of animals and plants, but also conforms to people's understanding of scenery, which is more conducive to expressing the center of the article. Before you start writing, go through the composition materials in your mind like a movie, and manage all the material processes well. Only in this way can you write a clear article. For example, a classmate wrote about the process of "scrambled eggs with tomatoes". He only wrote about the process of buying, washing, cutting and frying, but lost the process of beating eggs, which makes people wonder: when did the eggs come out of the pot?