Ya is a girl in our class. She is not good-looking, even her usual manners are not elegant, and she doesn't like talking to others. Most people don't want to associate with her and hate her. Every time they see her, they will even scramble to hide and have something to talk about behind her back. Only a fool would want to be with her. We all think so. Restrain first, then promote.

Not too long in front, not too personal,

But there is such a "fool", and that is Grace. Xuan is not only elegant, but also very close to elegance. My deskmate hates elegance. She not only hates it, but also hates it to the extreme. When she saw elegance, she ran away screaming. He often said to me, "You really don't understand, you are always so close to Ya …" Hearing this, I pretended to be silent and said nothing. But to be honest, I hate you, too. Her behavior is really unacceptable. However, why is Grace so close to her? So, I want to find out why. One day, Wei Xuanwei came to me: "Ya seems to ignore me." Hearing this, I couldn't help but be surprised and puzzled: how could a friend like Ya break up with her casually? So, I comforted you a few words. In the afternoon, Xuan came to me in high spirits: "Ya said that she was ridiculed by Yu in the morning, and she was very unhappy and didn't want to talk, not to ignore me." Seeing the opportunity, I asked bluntly, "What's good about elegance? Why are you so close to her every day? " Dear looked at me in surprise, but she didn't answer my question directly, but asked, "What's wrong with elegance?" I said, "She is so ugly, but still …" "Although she is ugly, her heart is not ugly. She is sincere and helpful. How can you discriminate against her because she is not beautiful? " "This ..." I was speechless and couldn't answer. Then, she gave me many examples to illustrate Ya's helpfulness. For example, once she forgot to bring a rag, Ya lent her hers. Another time, when she didn't understand a question, she patiently explained it to her ... Finally, she said, "Everyone is equal, and you can't judge a book by its cover!" " "I can hear God.

Let's talk about a specific thing later. ...

Later, I gradually approached Ya and found that she was really a helpful, trustworthy and trustworthy friend. Through this incident, I learned that beauty not only refers to the beauty of appearance, but also refers to the beauty of mind and soul. Point at the end, sublimate the theme.

The feeling of reading the whole article in one breath seems to have been brewing for a long time. Moreover, from the quality point of view, this article is written with great care, with almost no typos and ill sentences, and continues to carry forward this fine tradition. This article mainly tells the transformation process of an ugly woman from disgust to admiration under the influence of Xuan, and also tells us a truth: beauty is inherent in a person's appearance. But the point of this article should be that you changed your view of elegance through one thing. It is good to suppress before promoting, but there are so many things happening to Xuan in front of the article that people don't know which role you want to create. The biggest problem is that the main events and main characters are not prominent. The teacher suggested using the method of restraining first and then promoting, but the front should not be too long, and directly transition to events that can promote your transformation and express elegant inner beauty. Try to modify it. This is a big project. Forty minutes.

This change is almost the same. Ah, haha, LZ, come on. Actually, my composition level is very poor. ....