Sample demonstration
Recently, the news that four girls in a dormitory of a university successfully took the postgraduate entrance examination triggered a heated discussion among netizens. Facing the female student dormitory, someone commented. Girl lost her life in graduate school? 、? Why not get married instead of studying hard? . What do you think of this?
exist problem
1. The point of view is unclear, the attitude of breaking the topic is vague, and the expression of the point of view is vague, which cannot reflect one's own value judgment.
2. Simple expression, simply saying that I feel good and I support the language expression routine.
3. The statement is not comprehensive enough. There may be multiple sub-topics in the topic, but some students only caught one sub-topic when presenting.
How to personalize the problem
1. Revealing the truth: Examiners, in fact, I have seen similar news on the Internet. It's not easy to take the postgraduate entrance examination, and all the dormitories have succeeded in taking the postgraduate entrance examination. Can you call? Xueba dormitory? Yes; While giving these girls thumbs up, I can't help feeling that a United, enterprising, studious and enterprising dormitory environment is really important. But these comments on the Internet are really uncomfortable. These judgments that discriminate against women still exist today, which is very contrary to the value system of the new era.
2. Make a clear stand: At any time, women should become independent individuals and should not rely on others to survive, so I am sincerely happy for these four girls, and I hope more people can change their ideas, love learning and respect women.
3. Combined with experience: When I saw this news, I was actually happy and sad. I am glad that they can pursue their own life value through reading. Sadly, I once had the same opportunity, but under the same argument, I chose to give up more possibilities of life, so I sincerely hope that I can change my prejudice against women and let more women realize their dreams.