Books are not only the driving force of human development, but also provide us with endless fantasies about the future in a new way. Perhaps in my heart-to-heart contact with it, I spread a pair of wings of wisdom and flew in the sea of selfless books ... The form of life is not only satisfied with spending empty and lonely time silently on the plain road.
It is to sublimate the body in a subtle way, and more importantly, to enhance the noble sentiment of the soul. I think, therefore I am. People can only think in reading, read in thinking, and wander in the lake without knowing the height, thus realizing the birth of another life form.
In this way, the soul is detached from the chaotic world. The lotus in "Ailian Shuo" is "muddy but not dirty, clear but not demon"
No pollution in turbidity, based on clean character. Also known as "gentleman". In the endless sea of books, there are countless fragrant lotus flowers, written by literati.
More noble and calm. It is also in the overflowing literary atmosphere that all the complicated things in this world have been purified and infiltrated with the ethereal realm of fragrance.
In the book, people are more like flying, free and free, and can smell the refreshing spirit in the endless nature. In a corner of the book, the sound of spring sounded, soft and smooth, fresh and pleasant, just like a girl in a pink skirt coming out of the bathroom, dancing lightly among willow leaves. No wonder there is a poem that says, "Jasper is dressed as a tree, and thousands of strands of green silk hang down."
I don't know who planted these thin leaves, but the spring breeze is like scissors the next day. ""The book has its own golden house, and the book has its own Yan Ruyu. "
The world in the book is fascinating and obsessed with poetry and painting. Maple leaves are entrusted with people's feelings of missing their old friends. Autumn wind rustling, maple leaves flying, falling at the fingertips. Do you think that "the frost leaves are redder than the February flowers when you stop and sit in the maple forest late?"
Read "Flying down three thousands of feet, it is suspected that the Milky Way has fallen for nine days." Will it be intimidated by the majesty of the waterfall? You know, if the waterfall does not fly over the rock wall, but recedes on the rock wall, how can there be today's wonders? I am not a dry reed, but a green seedling growing up in the rain and dew of books.
Fly in constant imagination, sublimate in constant flight. Only by touching the heart of the book can we feel that life is so colorful.
Smoke, forget the past, and be selfless at heart. I'm afraid this kind of realm can only be truly realized by wandering in the sea of books, and because of this, life can fly over.
2. "There is a dragon in the ancient East, and its name is China." The familiar melody echoes in my ears.
In the eastern land of China, there is a bright pearl, that is, China, which everyone is proud of! Now, what will be held in this sacred land of China is the Olympic Games that everyone yearns for! No one knows how much China has paid for this Olympic dream. From the Olympic Games to the Great Wall winding in Wan Li, from the birthplace of the Olympic Games to sacred Beijing, everything is like a dream, which is incredible! After winning the men's 1 10 hurdles at the 2004 Olympic Games, Liu Xiang once said, "My victory shows that yellow-skinned athletes can run as fast as those black and white people."
Yes, we run fast in China, and we are strong in China! Beijing is ready for the 2008 Olympic Games. We are citizens of China and flowers of our motherland.
We China people's Olympic Games are coming. What should we do as the successors of our motherland? I have a dream that I can take part in the Beijing Olympic Games. Although this dream is a bit far away, I will still fight for it.
However, the most urgent task now is to prepare for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. Although we can't do anything important, we can do some small things within our power and make a little contribution to 2008.
Perhaps, it is insignificant, but even the smallest thing contains our hearts. First of all, we should start from ourselves: we would rather walk a few more steps than cross the road; No littering; Do not damage public property; No spitting; Don't pick flowers, don't trample on the grass ... We should show foreigners what an excellent China citizen looks like and let everyone know that China is not the "sick man of East Asia". China is an ancient civilization with a history of 5,000 years and a country to be proud of! For the dream of 2008, no matter how much you pay, you must work hard! We can also contribute to environmental protection in 2008.
Some students like to write only one side of a piece of paper, which is not conducive to environmental protection and saving. We should write on both sides and save paper.
You can also leave the used water and do some other things. We can collect waste batteries, mineral water bottles and other things and reuse them.
We want to show foreigners a new look of China citizens. We can't embarrass China. We hope foreigners can't find any reason to stop our dreams! Nowadays, the Olympic flame, which conveys dreams, is being passed in full swing. This burning flame is like a spirit, just like China's announcement to the world that China will unite and never give up! No one can stop the dream of 2008! Inspired by this faster, higher and stronger Olympic spirit, I got rid of many bad habits and faced all kinds of difficulties in my life more bravely.
The spirit of Olympic athletes' unremitting pursuit of goals has set a good example for each of us. This is a transcendence, a transcendence of dreams and strength. I will continue to accumulate the power of dreams from less to more and create my own miracle in the future.
Helping others is helping yourself. I want to tell you a story about a blind man holding a lamp. Maybe everyone will find it funny, blind people carry lanterns? Isn't it unnecessary? I used to think like everyone else, but a recent incident changed my mind.
You can also contribute. It was a dark night, with no moon and no stars. I was in a hurry to go to my colleague's house in the suburbs, so I took a shortcut to hurry.
2. General characteristics of topic composition (three points) 1. What is a topic?
The so-called topic is the center, content and beginning of the conversation.
2. What is a topic composition?
Topic composition is an article written around a given topic, that is, around the center, content and beginning of a given dialogue.
For example, 3
A, trees, trees accompanied by human beings, all kinds of trees; A tangible tree, an intangible tree. Some people plant trees, others destroy them. People praise and sigh for trees. Trees hold the ardent hopes of mankind; Trees are rich in human feelings. When it comes to trees, there will be endless topics and fantasies about flying freely. ...
Please write an article about 600 words on the topic of "tree", which can be described, described, discussed and lyrical; Style is not limited, except poetry. In the above example, the "tree" is the center of the conversation, the content of the conversation and the beginning of the conversation. As long as the composition written by the candidates is related to the "tree", it is relevant.
Please look at the following example:
B, there is a fable, writers, scientists, entrepreneurs and philosophers get together, and someone proposes to describe and praise the world in one sentence.
The writer praised: the world is really beautiful!
The scientist said seriously: The most precious thing in this world is exploration.
The entrepreneur said excitedly: The world is full of business opportunities.
The philosopher didn't speak, thought for a moment and drew a "?" On the paper. "!" .
Please write an article on the above fable or one of them.
C. Write an article on the topic of "Olympic bid". The above two examples are also topic compositions.
Characteristics of topic composition
1, related. The topic composition must be related to the topic. Generally speaking, the requirements of topic composition only stipulate the scope of the topic, but do not limit the theme of the composition.
2. Freedom. This is the biggest feature of topic composition. Candidates have great freedom and autonomy in selecting topics, selecting materials, style and imagination.
The specific performance is as follows:
(1) Free topic. A given topic can be left as a topic, and candidates can do it themselves. However, it is best to ask questions that reflect the characteristics of style.
(2) freedom of material selection. As long as you choose to write about the topic, it is effective.
(3) freedom of style. Most topic compositions require candidates to freely choose narrative, expository, argumentative or dramatic styles other than poetry.
(4) Freedom of imagination. Topic composition gives candidates a wide range of freedom in topic, material selection and style, and also gives candidates a broader imagination. But pay attention to the depth of imagination. In short, the topic composition narrows the restrictions on candidates and provides more choices and imagination. Candidates can give full play to their strengths, write their own personality and reflect their creativity in their compositions.
Third, the difference between topic composition and proposition composition:
The topic composition provides the writing scope, and the provided topic only plays the role of prompting the content to point. Propositional composition generally provides the center of writing content (except, of course, the proposition itself is a topic)
(2) The content required by the topic is related to it, while the propositional composition generally requires close attention to the topic.
Generally speaking, the writing scope of topic composition is far larger than that of some propositional compositions.
(4) Topic writers can write their own topics, and proposition writers cannot choose another topic.
3. The three criteria at the beginning of a good composition are tea and wine, which need to be tasted slowly to feel its unique fragrance; Good scenery like mountains and water needs to be close to it to be comfortable, and some people and things need to be recalled to feel themselves.
Some things are discovered later, which will really bring you a lot.
Finally, it is "daytime". With the end of the last exam and the beginning of * * *, "daytime" really came. Because time was tight, our family and cousin set off before the next day.
At the foot of the mountain, I really discovered the majesty of the mountain for the first time, as well as its majestic momentum. Walking into the mountains, I feel the breath of nature is so pure and comfortable. When climbing the mountain, I only touched the unique stones on the mountain. Hard and cold, I almost blend in with the mountain. I suddenly felt as if I had been struck by lightning. Although my exam results were not bad, they were different from my expectations. I am naturally uncomfortable in my heart, but I still want to be happy in the face of such scenery, because I can't be sorry for this mountain and let it down.
At night, I go out alone and lean against a big tree. I'm in a daze and don't know what I'm thinking. What I know is that my heart is very painful, a sadness that can't be expressed in words. My cousin came out and sat under a tree without saying anything. On a quiet night, the wind makes me feel cold. Suddenly, a little light flashed before my eyes, so bright, and then the whole earth was illuminated by the waves. Look carefully, it turned out to be a firefly. Look carefully, he is very small, but he radiates dazzling light, which makes people feel very warm. He surrounded me with all his strength and illuminated himself. Cover your hands, close your eyes, and expect what will happen if you open your hands. Slowly open your eyes and gently open your palms. They come to me and light me up. My heart suddenly froze, but I'll be right back. It became less painful, but a little happy.
Fireflies can't keep shining for a long time, but even if they can't shine again in the end, they are still trying. Fireflies gave me encouragement. No matter what will happen in the future, as long as we work hard, we won't regret it. At least in this process, we have illuminated ourselves.
Whenever I get upset, I think of the firefly that was so bright that night. Every time I recall something different, I feel a lot. Recalling more memories will bring me closer to myself.
4. General characteristics of topic composition (three points) 1. What is a topic? The so-called topic is the center of the conversation, the content of the conversation and the beginning of the conversation.
2. What is a topic composition? An article written around a given topic, that is, around a given conversation center, conversation content and conversation beginning, is a topic composition. 3, such as a, trees, trees accompanied by humans, all kinds of trees; A tangible tree, an intangible tree.
Some people plant trees, others destroy them. People praise and sigh for trees.
Trees hold the ardent hopes of mankind; Trees are rich in human feelings. When it comes to trees, there will be endless topics and fantasies of flying freely ... Please write an article of about 600 words on the topic of "trees", which can be described, described, discussed and lyrical; Style is not limited, except poetry.
In the above example, the "tree" is the center of the conversation, the content of the conversation and the beginning of the conversation. As long as the composition written by the candidates is related to the "tree", it is relevant. Look at the following example again: B. There is a fable. When writers, scientists, entrepreneurs and philosophers get together, it is proposed to describe and praise the world in one sentence.
The writer praised: the world is really beautiful! The scientist said seriously: The most precious thing in this world is exploration. The entrepreneur said excitedly: The world is full of business opportunities.
The philosopher didn't speak, thought for a moment and drew a "?" On the paper. "!" . Please write an article on the above fable or one of them.
C. Write an article on the topic of "Olympic bid". The above two examples are also the characteristics of topic composition 1 and relevance.
The topic composition must be related to the topic. Generally speaking, the requirements of topic composition only stipulate the scope of the topic, but do not limit the theme of the composition. 2. Freedom.
This is the biggest feature of topic composition. Candidates have great freedom and autonomy in selecting topics, selecting materials, style and imagination.
The specific performance is as follows: (1) freedom of topic. A given topic can be left as a topic, and candidates can do it themselves.
However, it is best to ask questions that reflect the characteristics of style. (2) freedom of material selection.
As long as you choose to write about the topic, it is effective. (3) freedom of style.
Most topic compositions require candidates to freely choose narrative, expository, argumentative or dramatic styles other than poetry. (4) Freedom of imagination.
Topic composition gives candidates a wide range of freedom in topic, material selection and style, and also gives candidates a broader imagination. But pay attention to the depth of imagination.
In short, the topic composition narrows the restrictions on candidates and provides more choices and imagination. Candidates can give full play to their strengths, write their own personality and reflect their creativity in their compositions.
Third, the difference between topic composition and proposition composition: ① Topic composition provides a writing scope, and the topics provided only play the role of prompting the content to point. Propositional composition generally provides the center of writing content (except the topic itself, of course). 2 The content required to be written in the topic is related to it, while the propositional composition is generally required to be closely related to the topic.
Generally speaking, the writing scope of topic composition is far larger than that of some propositional compositions. (4) The author of the topic can draw up his own topic, and the author of the proposition cannot choose another topic.
5. How to write a composition about scenery? It focuses on the description of scenery, such as clouds and lightning, snow, rain, wind and frost, sun, moon and stars, mountains and rivers, lakes and seas, flowers and trees, etc.
Scenery description uses vivid language to describe the state and characteristics of natural scenery and social environment from the aspects of shape, color, sound, light and shadow, and reappears in front of readers, giving people an immersive feeling. To write this kind of article well, I think we should pay attention to the following aspects: First, go deep into the field, observe carefully and accumulate materials.
As the saying goes, "A clever woman can't cook without rice." To write a good article about scenery description, we must learn to observe at ordinary times and accumulate materials.
In specific exercises, if you plan to write about a certain scenery, don't rely on imagination, but go deep into the field, observe carefully and accumulate writing materials. When guiding students to observe, we should infiltrate some common observation orders into students: (1) Choose a good angle and observe at a fixed point.
Fixed-point observation means observing things from a fixed position. (2) Action for change.
When observing, the observation points are different and the observation angles are different, so the situation you see is different and the feelings you get are very different. (3) Grasp the characteristics of the described object for observation.
Although every scene is inseparable from mountains, water, flowers, trees, insects, fish, birds and animals ... but every scene has its own different characteristics, that is, the same scene, because the seasons are different, the characteristics are different. Second, realize "love in the scenery".
The so-called "feelings in the landscape" is to pin your feelings on the description of the landscape. A landscape without a sense of color is just a pale "shell" and lifeless.
Third, it is necessary to combine dynamic and static to form a perfect whole. Static description, drawing the shape, connotation, color and charm of the scene; Dynamic description, we should describe the movements, sounds and expressions of things in detail to achieve vivid, vivid and vivid effects.
When writing scenery, we should organically combine static description with dynamic description, so that the scenery has both static beauty and dynamic beauty, which can deeply infect readers. Fourth, expand association in combination with reality.
Expanding imagination is a magical "freshness agent". Most of the scenery is still, and if it is only depicted, it will appear dry and empty.
Fifth, the narrative is orderly and clear. When writing a composition, you should pay attention to writing in a certain order, according to your needs, or in chronological order, or according to spatial order.
In this way, the context of the article will be clear, the theme will be prominent, and it will not be chaotic. At the same time, to write a good landscape, we must have a rich vocabulary. Without rich vocabulary, no matter how beautiful the scenery is, we cannot describe it! So we should pay attention to guiding students to accumulate good words and sentences.
In short, as long as you are good at observing things around you, combining things to develop a reasonable imagination and produce real feelings, you can write a good composition. Moreover, with the passage of time, students' methods and abilities to observe and understand things will continue to improve, innovative thinking will be cultivated, and the level of composition will also be improved.
6. How to review the composition questions at three o'clock?
This is the first thing to do in writing a composition. Otherwise, it will directly lead to "irrelevant" and "a thousand words in writing, digressing Wan Li". How can I do well in the exam? According to the usual forms of composition topics, they can generally be divided into two categories: propositional composition and material composition. The examination of proposition composition is to examine the specific requirements of a given article to determine the topic, the intention of the topic, the requirements beyond the topic, and the "eye of the topic". Through the examination of the questions, the content range, time range, quantity range, character range and place range of the composition are defined. Can't exceed the given range. The examination of material composition should be grasped from two aspects: one is inseparable from the ideological content of materials, and the other is closely related to the requirements of composition form.
1. Proposition composition
Let's focus on the examination of propositional composition and the places that need attention.
Determine the content scope
Some topics define the content of writing. Therefore, when reviewing the topic, we should determine the content scope of the topic: remember who people should remember; Narration, what to say; What scenery people should write about; Things, things to like, and so on.
Second, the idea
Intention is to determine the theme of the article and clarify the central idea to be embodied in the article. The idea of the article is to have a foundation for refining life and try to reflect some fundamental things in life. In order to achieve this goal, we must strive to be correct, centralized, novel and profound.
1. Correct
Correct conception is the basic requirement of composition. We often hear that so-and-so articles are thoughtful, which mainly depends on the depth of the author's creative thinking. Generally speaking, the intention of our composition should be positive and healthy, strive to reflect the essential content of life, and have certain social universality. In other words, the theme of the article should be recognized or actively advocated by everyone.
Third, the proposed topic
Drafting the title of an article is the first thing to be determined before writing a composition, just as we have to "make up our minds" before starting to do something. The title of the article can reflect the starting point and motivation of writing. Through the title of the article, readers can basically understand the theme and main content of the article. The proposed topic of the article should be highly concise, accurate and vivid, so as to attract people's attention and interest.
According to the needs of expressing content, the topics to be selected in the article can be roughly divided into the following categories. When writing, everyone can use it flexibly according to the actual situation.
Fourth, material selection
Material selection is material selection. No matter what article you write, it is very necessary to choose the materials you need. Just like building a house, we should fully consider what wood, stone, cement, brick and so on to use in advance. At the same time, we should carefully calculate the amount of various materials, without which we can't build a house; It's no use wasting too much. In addition, the selected materials should be appropriate, which is helpful to show the structural function and image effect of the house.
If you use materials at will, you will eventually build a black house like a train skin. Although strong, no one will like it. In the same way, the purpose of carefully selecting materials before writing is to explain the problem and make it vivid and attractive.
Therefore, before writing, in the face of many available materials, we should make appropriate choices, leave vivid and representative ones, and get rid of general ones; Through the effective combination of important and vivid materials, the purpose of the composition is realized, that is, the theme is deeply expressed by "economic" means.
Composition selection should pay attention to the following five aspects:
Choose familiar materials.
Familiar material is the material that the author knows clearly and feels deeply.
Only when the materials are familiar can you make full use of them, be familiar with them and make you handy. If the situation is unfamiliar and the substance is unclear, how can I tell others? This kind of material, even if used stiffly in your article, will not receive good results, and it will appear mechanical and incoherent later. This problem is easy to understand, and of course everyone doesn't want to do that.
7. How to write a composition about scenery? It focuses on the description of scenery, such as clouds and lightning, snow, rain, wind and frost, sun, moon and stars, mountains and rivers, lakes and seas, flowers and trees, etc. Scenery description uses vivid language to describe the state and characteristics of natural scenery and social environment from the aspects of shape, color, sound, light and shadow, and reappears in front of readers, giving people an immersive feeling. In writing this kind of article, I think we should pay attention to the following aspects:
First, go deep into the field, observe carefully and accumulate materials.
As the saying goes, "A clever woman can't cook without rice." To write a good article about scenery description, we must learn to observe at ordinary times and accumulate materials. In specific exercises, if you plan to write about a certain scenery, don't rely on imagination, but go deep into the field, observe carefully and accumulate writing materials. When guiding students to observe, we should infiltrate some common observation sequences into students:
(a), choose the right angle, fixed-point observation. Fixed-point observation means observing things from a fixed position.
(2) Action for change. When observing, the observation points are different and the observation angles are different, so the situation you see is different and the feelings you get are very different.
(3) Grasp the characteristics of the described object for observation. Although every scene is inseparable from mountains, water, flowers, trees, insects, fish, birds and animals ... but every scene has its own different characteristics, that is, the same scene, because the seasons are different, the characteristics are different.
Second, realize "love in the scenery".
The so-called "feelings in the landscape" is to pin your feelings on the description of the landscape. A landscape without a sense of color is just a pale "shell" and lifeless.
Third, it is necessary to combine dynamic and static to form a perfect whole.
Static description, drawing the shape, connotation, color and charm of the scene; Dynamic description, we should describe the movements, sounds and expressions of things in detail to achieve vivid, vivid and vivid effects. When writing scenery, we should organically combine static description with dynamic description, so that the scenery has both static beauty and dynamic beauty, which can deeply infect readers.
Fourth, expand association in combination with reality.
Expanding imagination is a magical "freshness agent". Most of the scenery is still, and if it is only depicted, it will appear dry and empty.
Fifth, the narrative is orderly and clear.
When writing a composition, you should pay attention to writing in a certain order, according to your needs, or in chronological order, or according to spatial order. In this way, the context of the article will be clear, the theme will be prominent, and it will not be chaotic. At the same time, to write a good landscape, we must have a rich vocabulary. Without rich vocabulary, no matter how beautiful the scenery is, we cannot describe it! So we should pay attention to guiding students to accumulate good words and sentences.
In short, as long as you are good at observing things around you, combining things to develop a reasonable imagination and produce real feelings, you can write a good composition. Moreover, with the passage of time, students' methods and abilities to observe and understand things will continue to improve, innovative thinking will be cultivated, and the level of composition will also be improved.
The second volume The area of teaching reflection Chapter 65438 +0
I had a review class on the circumference and area of a circle.