I hope this letter will find you and everything will be fine. I am writing this letter in the hope that you can help me revise and guide my thesis.

In the process of writing my thesis, I met some difficulties and questions. I believe your professional knowledge and experience can give me very valuable advice. I especially hope that you can help me improve the structure of my thesis, deepen my arguments and improve the accuracy and fluency of language expression.

I have attached the first draft of the paper to the attachment of this letter. If you have time, I would appreciate it if you could help me review and revise. I know your time is very precious, so I would appreciate it if you could take time out of your busy schedule to help me review my paper.

I look forward to your reply and hope to have the opportunity to further improve the quality of my thesis under your guidance. If you have any questions or need further information, I am always ready to provide them.

Thank you very much for your willingness to help me.

Good luck with everything,

[Your name]