The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has high academic research (reference value (great practical guiding significance. The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, and can comprehensively collect information about the examination system. In the process of writing, he can use the knowledge of the examination system, comprehensively analyze the problems existing in the examination system, and has a strong ability to comprehensively use knowledge. The length of the article fully conforms to the requirements of the college, with complete content, scientific hierarchical structure, prominent points, clear logical relationship and certain personal opinions. The topics are completely consistent, the arguments are prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme.

The writing idea of the paper is clear, the language is fluent and concise, the level is clear, the logic is strong, the words are accurate, all kinds of data and charts are complete and standardized, the literature citation is correct and scientific. This shows that this student has a certain theoretical foundation and scientific research ability.

In the structure of the full text, firstly, the practical significance of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the dilemma of the official accountability system in China is deeply analyzed, and finally effective suggestions are put forward to solve the dilemma. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty, and the references meet the needs of the paper's viewpoints and themes, and the practical demonstration is not enough. But there is not much real innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.

The topic of this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the learned knowledge is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The data obtained are reasonable, the conclusion is correct and there are innovative opinions. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent. In the future, we should further sum up experience and compare moral education models, so that moral education can be carried out better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.