No matter how the senior high school entrance examination is changed, narrative is still the mainstream. Writing a good narrative pays special attention to three aspects: content, language and text structure. In the scoring rules of the senior high school entrance examination, the requirements for these three points are very clear.

Requirements for the first-level thesis: (1) It must be relevant, focused, specific and substantial, with healthy thoughts and sincere feelings. (2) The writing is fluent, the language is vivid and accurate, and the expression is good. (3) The structure is rigorous, the level is clear, and the concept is novel and ingenious.

A good narrative must be a complex narrative, mainly in several aspects:

(1) remember people's narrative is no longer a single item, but more than two.

(2) To "make waves" In the narrative "Draft", the so-called article seems to look at the mountains rather than like the flat, and the ups and downs are the most durable.

(3) The theme changes from simple narration to pluralism, and the issues involved should be philosophical, cultural, profound and original.

④ Expression is no longer a single narrative, but a comprehensive application of various ways, which complement each other.

⑤ The narrative content should be vivid and concrete, because the purpose of narrative writing is to give the author some emotions and benefit the readers by describing specific events. If the content is empty, this goal cannot be achieved.

⑥ Write the beginning and the end, and pay attention to transition and care.

The true feelings of the article are the most touching. Sincere feelings can turn ordinary into magic, and make readers have a strong sound. But don't moan, work hard, feel, feel in the times, feel in life.

Let's quote a few short articles to experience excellent narrative:

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Want to taste the taste of spring, is to brew a cup of spring tea, spring tea is the most refreshing, rather than old-fashioned, imagine that spring, when a delicate tea-picking girl picked the first touch of green in that spring, she always felt a wonderful beauty.

In fact, I don't know much about tea ceremony, and I don't know the secret recipe in tea, but I still like drinking tea, especially when I put some rock sugar and dried roses.

I had nothing to do that day, so I made another cup of tea. I used to be so busy that I didn't care how tea was made. But this time is different. Anyway, I have enough time. I chose tea and roses, and the water boiled quickly. I pour the water into the cup.

At first, both flowers and tea floated on the water, but gradually, the tea unfolded its wrinkled and curled body and slowly sank to the bottom of the cup. At the same time, the rose also spread its purple petals and bloomed on the water like a hibiscus flower. Brown is getting thicker and thicker. The fragrance also began to pervade the room. My cabin is full of the fresh breath of spring.

This process is so short, but so natural and harmonious.

I am speechless.

I don't know whether I was intoxicated by the aroma or moved by this little detail.

Yes, in the face of this lovely rose tea, many people will admire the fragrance and beauty of the flowers, but rarely pay attention to the tea at the bottom of the cup. In the face of this lovely rose tea, many people will praise the purple in the cup, but ignore the clarity contained in the brown color. But those tea leaves are so regretless! It would rather give off all the fragrance to set off the delicate fragrance of roses. I would rather sink to the bottom of the cup than hold up the beauty and fragrance of roses.

Hey! The fragrance is far and clear, and the gentleman's wind of lotus is obvious to all. Tea is not only satisfied with this, but also has an open mind. It is not frivolous, not vain, it never cares about itself, it just, it just silently dedicates itself to its living space. ...

Because it knows that it is perfecting itself while perfecting others.

Spring has arrived, and flowers are blooming and competing to open. And in this beautiful spring, I hide in my hut, paranoid about the leaves in tea and the flowers in water, because I know.

Tea in a cup

Hold up a spring that belongs to it silently.

Brief comments:

The outstanding features of this essay are as follows: ① The penetrating power of philosophy makes the article overlap with profound meanings. The object of description is symbolic, and the author symbolizes tea as a spirit of silent dedication. (3) The germination of lyric arguments permeates between the lines of the article and blends with narrative description.

I live in the light of the new moon.

"... the new moon, the first day of the lunar month. The moon phase of Shuori is invisible to people, and it is called Shuoyue, also called Shuoyue. There is no light on the moon. "I said softly ...

At that moment, I suddenly found that there has always been an invisible light hanging over me.

Like the light of the new moon.

"Why are you so uncertain?"

An angry expression appeared in front of her eyes, and she suddenly realized that she was really angry. "Remember the last time you argued with me, I said the new moon was boring, but you said there was. Although the moon phase of the new moon is invisible and our argument is nonsense, I still like your character of sticking to your point of view and never giving up ... but this time, why are you so unsure! ……"

Yes, why? ..... I lowered my head and thought quietly ... If my plan fails once, do I have to face everyone in shame forever? ..... I looked at my resignation letter and finally made up my mind. "I want to resign." I stare at the void. "I want to ... have a good rest."

I left without looking back. Leaving the door slammed, I sat in the classroom. My resignation letter was soaked with sweat, and my thoughts flew back to a few hours ago. ...

Today is the day when the grade blackboard is selected, and my heart is pounding with excitement. I remember this time yesterday, I was still fidgeting, because time was tight but I didn't have any new ideas! However, I happened to pass by Class B, but I saw the main pattern just finished on the blackboard in Class B? The handsome elf prince Legolas! It's just that ... the color collocation is very uncoordinated and the brushwork is rough, so the whole picture is extremely bleak. ... I suddenly had an idea? Why not "move" it to the blackboard newspaper in our class?

So I ignored the heavy dissuasion of the monitor's adult and put in great efforts, and the extravagance of the spiritual prince jumped onto the table. The golden phantom has clear long hair and bright eyes under deep eyebrows. However-

"There is serious plagiarism in Class G, and you will lose your qualification!" ? This is the end of my failure!

For a time, the air froze and the sky fell ... I knew that what was waiting for me might last forever, so I didn't dare to look into my classmates' eyes, curled up in my seat and silently resigned.

..... Tears suddenly dropped on the envelope in my hand. Damn, when did it become so fragile ?.. I raised my hand and tried to hold up my sour chin. Suddenly I found a familiar figure standing at the door of the classroom with a stack of books in my hand.

"Well," she came over and put the book stand on the table easily. "... the comprehensive layout of blackboard newspaper and craft? New blackboard newspaper art design and excellent design collection ... make amends before the end of today! "

I couldn't help laughing at the look full of expectation but pretending to be indifferent. "What are you laughing at! Go and draw! " "Don't use these books!" I confidently replied, "I already have a wonderful idea!" " "

Grateful, I drew my idea with my true feelings: a beggar girl in rags, quietly kneeling on the ground and looking up at the night sky, the faint moon shadow in the air, silvery white light hanging over her, as if to set off the girl's clear and bright eyes. The title is: the light of the new moon.

"The light of the new moon?" Meditate.

"Why? Not good? " I look back.

"Good for you!" I cried happily.

The next day, I came to school early. As soon as I entered the classroom, I saw people around the blackboard newspaper. When my classmates saw me, they clapped their hands in unison. I saw the crowd, and she was looking at me mischievously and made an "OK" gesture.

"Not bad!" -is the voice of the dean! After a while, I found that the monitor had called all the teachers. "You can put profound meaning into the painting, and I am willing to applaud you!" The class teacher smiled.

I was flattered for a moment, but soon calmed down. I finally found that there has always been an invisible light hanging over me. It comes from the depths of my heart, constantly strengthening my will and carving my soul. ...

Like the light of the new moon.

Brief comments:

After reading this article, people feel that "the girl is very cute and the article is wonderful." (1) This paper is a semi-propositional composition, and it is very important to fill in the blanks. The little author walked in front of the times and implicitly set up the word "moonlight" which is closely connected with the center. It is really a bright spot to supplement the real with the virtual, elegant and chic. She wrote extraordinary plots and themes from ordinary content. It has completely changed the writing style of straightforward narration, and its thinking seems ordinary but original. Friendship, the change of soul and the brilliance of human nature are all reflected in the text, which is a complex narrative. (3) Effective use of narrative techniques such as "narration" and "inscription" makes the writing patchwork and fascinating. 4 can write conflicts and endings. ⑤ Comprehensive use of various expressive techniques and skills. In particular, her psychological description truly and accurately wrote her own unique inner feelings.

Inspirational story

The fate of two trees

The farmer planted two seeds in the field, and soon they became two saplings of the same size. The first tree was determined to grow into a towering tree from the beginning, so it desperately absorbed nutrients from the ground, stored them, moistened every trunk, and tried to grow up and improve itself. Because of this, there was no result in the first few years, which made farmers very angry. On the contrary, another tree, desperately absorbing nutrients from the ground, intends to blossom and bear fruit early, and it has done this. This makes farmers appreciate it and often irrigates it.

Time flies, the trees that have not bloomed for a long time have finally produced big and sweet fruits because of their strong body and rich nutrition. The trees that have bloomed prematurely have undertaken the task of flowering and bearing fruit because they are not yet mature, and the fruits are bitter and unpalatable, but they are bent over. The old farmer sighed in surprise and finally cut it down with an axe and burned it.

(Summary of the story) The result of rushing for success will only lead to ultimate failure, so we might as well take a long-term view and pay attention to the accumulation of our own knowledge, which will naturally follow.