In daily study, work or life, there are still many places that need to be commented. The content of the review includes work performance, work performance, advantages and disadvantages, and the direction that needs to be worked hard. How much do you know about reviews? The following are the comments of the graduation thesis defense team that I compiled for you, for reference only. Let's have a look.

1, the comments of the graduation thesis defense group, gave the teachers excellent guidance.

According to the opinions of the defense team, the student can skillfully and concisely state the main contents of the paper within the specified time, and respond quickly, clearly and accurately when answering questions. After full discussion, the defense team agreed to evaluate the papers as excellent according to the quality of the students' papers and their performance in defense.

The defense team believes that the student has a correct attitude, rigorous argumentation, standardized writing, high writing level, strong ability to analyze and solve problems with theory, calm response and smooth and accurate answers in the process of graduation thesis writing. Therefore, this student's graduation thesis meets the requirements of professional training objectives, and it is suggested that an undergraduate degree be awarded.

The tutor has a good opinion.

The defense team suggested that the student should be able to explain the main contents of the paper fluently and clearly within the specified time, and answer the questions related to the paper appropriately. After full discussion, the defense team agreed to evaluate the paper score as "good" according to the quality of the students' papers and their performance in defense.

The tutor's opinion is moderate.

The defense team believes that the student can describe the main content of the paper within the specified time, and in principle can correctly answer the questions raised. After full discussion, according to the quality of students' papers and their performance in defense, the defense team agreed to evaluate the papers as medium.

After reviewing the thesis, the defense team thinks that the topic of the thesis has research value, and the author has certain ability to read reference materials, basically completed the contents stipulated in the graduation thesis task book, and was fluent in writing and able to answer the questions correctly. There are still some defects in this paper, such as unreasonable structure, too many introductions and discussions. After discussion by the defense team, the defense score is determined as.

The tutor passed the opinion.

The defense team thinks that the student can state the main contents of the paper within the specified time, but the organization is not clear enough and the answers to some main questions are not appropriate enough, but he can make supplementary explanations after being prompted. After full discussion, the defense team agreed to evaluate the paper score as passing according to the quality of the students' papers and their performance in defense.

Tutor's comments: This topic has a novel angle, clear context, fluent writing and clear basic views. The main problems still exist in the article: students have not thoroughly digested the information they are looking for and the arguments are not strong enough.

Teacher's comments: First of all, the ingenious conception of the topic is worthy of recognition. It is also a subject with a relatively large research space. In the limited space, the paper can basically be described clearly. This topic belongs to the industry, with a lot of research level, first-hand information and literature accumulation. Pay attention to fully absorb the existing research results to support your own analysis and research. Clear explanation, clear argument, substantial argument, reasonable structure and fluent writing. The deficiency lies in the lack of new ideas, mostly summing up the achievements of modern research, but it is also valuable as an undergraduate.

Comments of the defense team: Good idea and great research value. However, this topic is huge in structure and content, and it also needs strong and mature independent research ability. So it is not difficult for undergraduates. If the author can learn more from the previous research results and strengthen the reading and analysis of the literature, it will help him straighten out the logic and think smoothly in the argument of the topic. It is necessary to be bold and confident in the presentation of the paper, and improve the refining ability of the on-the-spot language and the adaptability to the problem.

Comment 2 1 of graduation thesis defense group. At the beginning of this paper, the central argument "gratitude, we should not ignore it" is put forward, and then the central argument is strongly demonstrated with several sub-arguments. Can comprehensively use a variety of argumentation methods to demonstrate opinions, with clear arguments and strong arguments.

2. The article conforms to the meaning of the topic, which can be seen from the topic "How can I see the rainbow without experiencing wind and rain"; Finally, ask questions and the center will be clear. As an argumentative essay, the language of the article is fluent, less dull and boring than the orthodox argumentative essay, more vivid spiritual aura and more resistant to personal reading. The author has a deep understanding of the relationship between "growth and frustration" and can use the method of citing examples to make a thorough analysis, which has achieved a thought-provoking expression effect; The use of metaphor makes the whole article colorful.

3. The topic is contemporary and realistic, the structure of the full text is reasonable, the viewpoint expression is basically accurate, and the thinking is basically clear. The content of the full text is basically written according to the training requirements of the administrative management major, and I have consulted a lot of relevant materials, but it does not fully reflect the characteristics of the administrative management major, and there are not many things that belong to my own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.

4. This paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the basic principle of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the problems existing in the official accountability system in China are deeply analyzed, and finally, effective suggestions are put forward for the previous problems. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.

5. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of the training goal of administrative management specialty, and can comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the practical problems of enterprise administration. The writing attitude of the paper is serious and responsible, the content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials meet the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main points are clearly expressed, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. However, the depth of argument is not enough and innovation is insufficient.

6. The topic of this paper is reasonable and meets the requirements of administrative management. The full text takes … as the theme to analyze and demonstrate, which has reference significance for perfecting …. The content demonstration is more scientific and reasonable, the format is more standardized, and the reference materials are closely related to the theme of the article, but the innovation and arguments are insufficient, especially the last part of the article is too weak and unconvincing. Generally speaking, it basically meets the requirements of graduation thesis.

7. This paper mainly discusses that the structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is rigorous. Generally speaking, it is basically qualified.

8. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. The parts are closely related, the opinions are basically accurate, and the argumentation content is more convincing. In the process of argumentation, the basic knowledge principle of administrative specialty is basically used to analyze the main problems in the article, but the reference materials are insufficient, the article lacks its own original content, and a few viewpoints are not profound and comprehensive.

9. This paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, the practical significance of the official accountability system is analyzed first, and then the official accountability system in China is analyzed.

10, makes an in-depth analysis of the dilemma, and finally puts forward effective suggestions to solve the dilemma. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty, and the references meet the needs of the paper's viewpoints and themes, and the practical demonstration is not enough. But there is not much real innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.

1 1. The paper has clear ideas, basically fluent sentences, clear levels and accurate expression of opinions. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management with the practical problems of inner-party supervision, and puts forward some better solutions to the practical problems of inner-party supervision. The literature consulted is closely combined with the theme, but the arguments in some places are not very clear and convincing, which generally meets the requirements of graduation thesis, some contents are not well combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.

12, the full text is titled xxx, which is novel and practical. The full text has scientific and reasonable structure, strong logic and clear thinking, and the references consulted meet the requirements of the paper. The demonstration method is reasonable. The content of the argument is more convincing. The analysis of the problem is more thorough. In the process of demonstration, students can also combine the principles of administrative professional knowledge with social reality. Whether it is from the topic selection or viewpoint demonstration, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty. But innovation is not enough.

13, the language expression is general, and the format fully meets the specification requirements; Referring to some documents, its timeliness is general; No obvious plagiarism was found.

14. The research in this paper provides a new basis for XXXX to have strong practical value in controlling accounting information distortion. The author has clear thinking, rigorous discussion process, reasonable analysis and practical results. The writing of the thesis is standardized and the sentences are fluent, which meets the requirements of academic proofreading of dissertations.

15. This paper is correct in topic selection, reasonable in structure, rich in content, sufficient in data and materials, advanced in analysis method, reasonable in writing progress, and the conclusions and suggestions have regional practical significance. The recommendation is an excellent graduation thesis at the university level.

16. The topic selected in this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the knowledge learned is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The data obtained are reasonable, the conclusion is correct and there are new opinions. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent.

17, the structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to the writing standard of XXXXX paper. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also sharp, the paper is clear and reasonable, and the viewpoint is unique, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.

18. During my master's thesis, I actively participated in various teaching and scientific research activities. In the process of teaching practice, he carefully read textbooks and consulted academic materials, which greatly improved his teaching level. At the same time, she also has strong practical ability, participated in many topics of her tutor, and greatly improved her theoretical and practical level. I have participated in academic exchanges of papers at or above the provincial level for many times, and my eloquence and speaking ability have been comprehensively improved.

19. The graduate student successfully passed CET-4 and achieved excellent results in GRE. Have high English listening, speaking, reading and writing skills, and perform well in foreign academic exchanges of the Institute of Development and Educational Psychology.

20. During the internship, the student is studious, practical and willing to work, and can humbly ask the experienced predecessors for advice when he meets something he doesn't understand in his work. Be able to listen to other people's work suggestions with an open mind. Be able to flexibly apply what you have learned in school to specific work, and complete the work assigned by the leaders with good quality and quantity. At the same time, the student can strictly abide by the rules and regulations of the center, live in harmony with colleagues, and show good teamwork spirit and professionalism.

Comment 3 1 of graduation thesis defense group. The topic is novel, closely combined with clinical practice, and the design is reasonable. Belonging to the research hotspot of this discipline, the research work has certain theoretical significance and practical value. The content of the paper is basically consistent with the topic, with complete structure, standardized format, clear hierarchy, clear organization, fluent language and rich content. The collected literature is rich and detailed, basically covering the main literature related to this discipline, which has a certain inductive effect on the development trend of this discipline. Sufficient data, rigorous discussion process, clear thinking, comprehensive application of learned knowledge to solve problems, proper selection of analysis methods, and credible results. The paper is carefully written, the reasoning is logical, and the conclusions and suggestions are of practical significance. It is a master's thesis with high academic value.

2. From the defense, it can be seen that this student has a solid professional foundation, is well prepared, is very familiar with the content of the paper, can concisely and clearly state the design ideas and processes, systematically display smoothly, answer questions well-founded, have clear basic concepts, and have some innovations in the paper. I hope to continue to improve some words and symbols in the paper and strive for standardized use.

3. An empirical study on the influence of online shopping website experience on consumers' online purchase intention, the master thesis of 3.xxx, on the basis of relevant literature research and dynamic analysis of current events, studies the elements of website experience and the influence of website experience on consumers' online purchase intention, and its topic selection has certain theoretical value and practical significance.

4. The documents cited in this paper are representative and scientific, and the relevant Chinese and foreign documents are comprehensively analyzed and summarized, and the research background, research status and development prospect of xxxx are mastered, and the literature review is rich and standardized.

In the ten-minute presentation, the student introduced the main points, content and structure of the paper, as well as the writing process of the paper. The organization is clear, the language is correct, and the teacher's questions are basically answered correctly, which reflects a certain professional quality. However, there are some minor problems in the design process and the flow chart is not perfect. I hope to correct it in time.

6.xxx's dissertation "Analysis and Research on Data Model of Undergraduate Specialty Setting Prediction System Based on Data Mining" is selected from the undergraduate specialty setting prediction system project entrusted by the Ministry of Education of Sun Yat-sen University. The research results of this paper have certain guiding significance for the construction of undergraduate specialty setting prediction system in colleges and universities.

7. In the five-minute presentation, the student introduced the main content and structure of the paper, as well as the research conducted for this purpose, which showed that he had a certain understanding of the research issues. The video design is beautiful, but it doesn't meet the professional requirements. It will be better to design the implementation process from the perspective of computer science.

8. The research results of this paper show that the research on xxxx has strong practical value and maneuverability, which fully reflects the author's comprehensive understanding of xxxx and his experience, analysis, thinking and suggestions on xxxx practice.

9. This student has good professional quality, fluent answers, high correct rate, good understanding of the problems encountered in the implementation process and proper timing. It will be better if it can be implemented in a relatively new operating environment.

10, the paper is clearly stated, come straight to the point, and get to the point directly. I can answer the teacher's questions fluently and think clearly, but I can't correctly explain some codes in the paper and there are a few language errors. I hope there will be more innovations in future research.

1 1. Combining with mathematical knowledge, using computer technology to deal with geological problems, the paper has a thorough grasp of methods and principles, and the paper is innovative. The results of fast Fourier transform and wavelet transform are analyzed in place, and the processing effect is good, and the computer basic literacy is good. The answers to the main questions in the defense are accurate and thorough. It would be better if there is a contrast between the converted indicators in this paper.

12. The student explained the main contents of the paper fluently and clearly within the specified time, and was able to answer the questions related to the paper properly, with a modest attitude and a solid computer foundation. It is suggested to use appropriate words to express the image opening function and standardize the paper format.

13. The topic of this paper is reasonable, which provides theoretical support for xxxx and has great research significance.

14. The student fluently stated the purpose, theoretical and practical significance of writing this paper. The design process of antique websites is standardized, but there is little connection between entities and concepts. The whole design should meet the requirements of the computer as much as possible.

15. This paper reflects the author's solid theoretical foundation, systematic professional knowledge and good scientific research ability in this subject. It meets the requirements of master's degree thesis, and it is suggested to arrange a defense.

16. The student expressed clearly and answered questions fluently. Although the paper has a good idea and certain research value, the framework and content are huge, which requires strong independent research ability, and the title of the paper and the client login server module need to be slightly modified. The students are well prepared, the link sentences are complete, the thesis is clearly conceived, which embodies a good professional foundation and a good grasp of time. That is, there is demand in the paper but there is a lack of demand analysis, and the answers to some defense questions are not clear, and the graphic representation is not standardized.

17. The writing of the thesis conforms to the standard of postgraduate thesis, and the academic level is good, which reflects the results of two years' study and can enter the defense procedure.

18, fully prepared for defense, able to answer the teacher's questions in detail, able to repeatedly discuss and study the difficulties encountered in the design process to find a better solution, and good professional skills. It would be better if the static web page can be made dynamic by combining professional improvement, but the deficiency is that the description of the table in the database is not quite right, and I hope it can be improved.

19. During the defense, students can skillfully and concisely state the main contents of the paper within the specified time, with clear organization and obvious innovation, quick response, accurate expression, skilled system demonstration and high professional quality. After deliberation by the defense Committee, it was unanimously agreed that his grades were excellent.

Comment 4 1 of graduation thesis defense group. This argumentative paper begins with explaining what life is, which naturally leads to the following contents. In the discussion part, we pay attention to reasoning, make good use of metaphors to reason, and discuss the different manifestations and results of the same situation very clearly through comparative argumentation. The author's discussion combined with his own experience is convincing.

2. The students are serious and responsible, and the class teacher has a solid work. He often goes deep into students to understand their thoughts and learning situation, talks with students, helps them to establish a correct outlook on life and values, communicates with students to discuss good learning methods, and organizes various beneficial cultural and sports activities, which is deeply loved by students. This student has the basic qualities of an excellent young teacher.

3. Pay attention to the combination of psychological counseling theory and psychological counseling practice, and undertake the counseling work of the school students' psychological counseling center well, with rich experience in psychological clinical work.

He is excellent in research, study and work at the postgraduate stage, and has won many honorary certificates. I believe that these experiences and accumulation will become valuable wealth on his life path. I hope he will continue to maintain and carry forward the rigorous style of study, work hard and strive for greater achievements in his future work and study.

5. During the internship, the student listened carefully and prepared lessons carefully, and was able to take the initiative to consult the materials and enrich the teaching content. Try to be diligent in teaching, generous in teaching, fluent in expression, natural in teaching attitude, skilled in using existing teaching equipment and adopting various teaching methods to urge students to think. Classroom democracy without losing discipline is deeply loved by students. This student has the basic qualities of a qualified young teacher.

6. During my master's thesis, I actively participated in various teaching and scientific research activities. In the process of teaching practice, he carefully read textbooks and consulted academic materials, which greatly improved his teaching level. At the same time, she also has strong practical ability, participated in many topics of her tutor, and greatly improved her theoretical and practical level.

7. During the internship, a student can seriously abide by the internship code, be serious and responsible for his work, and achieve good results in the work of the main class and the deputy class. Be able to make an activity plan carefully, take the initiative to consult the instructor, carefully make various teaching tools and put them into regional activities, make full preparations before class, and carefully organize students' activities for one day, basically achieving the teaching objectives. During the internship in the deputy class, I can cooperate with the teacher in the main class to prepare for class and guide the course activities, do a good job in students' day activities, have strong cooperation ability and establish a harmonious teacher-student relationship with my classmates. I hope I can make persistent efforts and continue to make progress in the future!

8. In the study of specialized courses, according to the requirements of research direction, he carefully studied the relevant core courses and laid a solid scientific research foundation; During his study, he also studied many other courses, broadened his horizons and got a deeper understanding of the structure of the whole research field. In English learning, I have strong English listening, speaking, reading and writing skills.

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