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"Dear child, if you still don't understand, please ask your parents!" It's very kind to listen to such teachings.

My parents have gone a longer way than us. They are the precipitation of experience, but we are still inexperienced children and reckless everywhere. What we lack is experience, which makes us grow.

"Parents, what don't you understand? Ask your child!" How do parents feel after hearing such words?

Born in different times, my parents and we have different childhood. My parents use glass balls to pop up ideas, and we use computers to play our own thinking. My father also needs to ask us questions in some way. One day, when the driver's father talked about his car's problems, I interjected, "I wish it didn't explode for a day." Long live the environment! " Unconsciously, my father showed majesty. I quickly said, "The engine of the car is the scene of the explosion. Is it wrong for me to use the power of gasoline explosion to push the car forward? " My father patted me on the head and said, "You are smart!" " I laughed too.

There is a proverb: "you have an apple, I have an apple, you and I exchange an apple." You have an idea, I have an idea, and you and I have two ideas for one person. "

We have been taken care of by our parents since birth and have been filial to our parents for many years. However, such a close relationship has not enriched our knowledge to the greatest extent. We have a blue "passion" apple and a red "experience" apple. After communicating with our parents, we have both enthusiasm and experience, and we have also got what we got from our parents. These are two apples that can complement each other.

Children, don't stand on the side of the generation gap, look at your parents' red apples with green apples.

Parents, don't be embarrassed because of seniority, but you are eager to get green apples, but it's hard to say.

Parents! As a junior, I have long held my own green apple and crossed the generation gap; When will you take out the red apples, too? Let's exchange these two complementary apples.

It should be said that this composition is a post-reading feeling, but it is not a post-reading feeling in a strict sense, because it abandons the traditional three-stage argumentative essay that reads first and then analyzes the materials read, and pays attention to excavating students' understanding without limiting the style. I believe there will be many articles in the face of such an open test. Although this article is not out of the category of argumentative essays after reading, it is also very exciting. That's because the author has made careful arrangements in the argumentation structure and chapter layout of the article. First, the author uses metaphors to demonstrate the full text, comparing the enthusiasm of children to "green apples" and the experience of parents to "red apples", which makes the discussion of the article lively and interesting, replaces boring reasoning with interesting explanations, and also increases the readability of the article. Secondly, the author also focuses on the methods of comparative argument. The biggest advantage of this method is that you don't need to ask who is right or wrong directly. In the process of comparison, readers can naturally understand the truth, which is of course much better than directly criticizing parents. The young author's clear-cut, agile and philosophical language adds a lot of bright colors to the article. (summer) according to

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