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Chew on words and rewrite the composition by 800 words.
1. Chewing an 800-word composition sounds harsh. This must be an uncomfortable thing. Famous writers such as * * * and Mo Yan are "bitten" by readers for their mistakes in language, literature and history, but they are willing to express their gratitude-gratitude for a harsh voice, which makes us feel refreshed!

Yes, no one is perfect, no matter whether he is famous or not, he will have shortcomings, and he will inevitably make mistakes, become a writer, and then become famous at home and abroad. Is this related to accepting the mistakes pointed out by others with an open mind and then appreciating this harsh voice?

I'm sorry, * * *, Mo Yan, everyone, it's too far away from me, but I also see the same generosity and self-restraint from Chai Jing who I admire. "I am afraid of infinite truth, and I am glad to enter an inch." This is what Chai Jing said to the students when he gave a speech in Tsinghua. How does Chai Jing, who looks sweet and seemingly weak, gain a firm foothold on CCTV's draft platform and bloom beautifully? Chai Jing, who just entered Taiwan, was criticized for writing articles without feelings, "embroidering pillows", and was accused by the audience as a "performance-oriented" host because she leaned over to wipe tears for the little boy during the interview. However, she restrained her grievances and stubbornness, her personality and pride, and seriously reflected and profoundly reviewed. It can be said that Chai Jing's career was accompanied by various harsh voices, opinions and criticisms. She did not refuse, but internalized it as a warning strategy to make herself aware.

Yes, I admire Chai Jing very much. I learned from her: thanks to the harsh voice, you can get a clear vision, harvest flowers and applause.

2. With regard to the 800-word composition of Bite, I am kind to mistakes, and the realm of life suddenly faces a "bite" fault. Famous writers responded positively with gratitude and understanding, which was touching.

I always believe that only by actively facing the criticism and criticism of others can the realm of life be continuously sublimated and life become immortal and great. The necessity of finding fault comes from the narrowness and one-sidedness of the subjective world.

We often indulge in our brilliance beyond ordinary people, but we forget to remain humble in the face of shortcomings while being proud. Therefore, the mistake of being kind to others is to shape a more rational soul, make people awake and comfortable.

Wise men, such as Cao Yu, also understand this philosophy. When the American playwright Monte visited the playwright in China, the communication was in full swing. Cao Yu took out 1 Huang Yongyu's critical letter to him: "I don't like any of your later plays. You lost the psychic Baoyu, and you were wrong by the situation! " So pungent, it hit the nail on the head and pointed out Cao Yu's mistake of "emphasizing politics and neglecting creation". Cao Yu insisted on translating it word by word to Monte, which shows that Cao Yu's greatness lies not only in his unremitting pursuit of art, but also in his rational face and calm acceptance of nitpicking.

However, if you are arrogant and turn a deaf ear to other people's mistakes, the road of life will only get narrower and narrower, and even inevitably accept the pain of failure. After the reform and opening up, Jianlibao Company was established in Li Jingwei, creating a business legend comparable to Pepsi.

However, in the face of unprecedented success, Li Jingwei completely refused to find fault with others. In the face of criticism and obstruction from the company's top management to employees, he set up a huge sum of money to build Jianlibao Building in Guangzhou, which finally exceeded the company's capacity. In the face of the mistakes made by friends in the industry, he refused to absorb them sincerely, which eventually eclipsed Jianlibao in the long river of history and put him in prison.

So, how to be kind to criticism and pursue your perfect self? First of all, in the face of other people's sharp mistakes, we should maintain a calm and peaceful attitude, without anxiety or concealment; As Ji Xianlin said: "What others say is encouragement, criticism and spur, which is good for me." Secondly, we should learn to distinguish between "valuable" finding fault and "finding fault for the sake of finding fault", that is, when we find fault with others, we should not give in, but keep a minimum of trust.

For example, Yu Shizhi, an actor, has been criticized and criticized by the audience all his life, but he has to go through the process of "examination-digestion-absorption" and finally play a vivid role in people's hearts. Everyone will make mistakes, get lost or even be alienated, and often he is kind to others and can lead you to enjoy more charming scenery.

3. Regarding the 800-word composition of "Chewing on Words", I am kind to mistakes, and the realm of life suddenly faces the fault of "Chewing on Words". Famous writers responded positively with gratitude and understanding, which was touching.

I always believe that only by actively facing the criticism and criticism of others can the realm of life be continuously sublimated and life become immortal and great. The necessity of finding fault comes from the narrowness and one-sidedness of the subjective world.

We often indulge in our brilliance beyond ordinary people, but we forget to remain humble in the face of shortcomings while being proud. Therefore, the mistake of being kind to others is to shape a more rational soul, make people awake and comfortable.

Wise men, such as Cao Yu, also understand this philosophy. When the American playwright Monte visited the playwright in China, the communication was in full swing. Cao Yu took out 1 Huang Yongyu's critical letter to him: "I don't like any of your later plays. You lost the psychic Baoyu, and you were wrong by the situation! " So pungent, it hit the nail on the head and pointed out Cao Yu's mistake of "emphasizing politics and neglecting creation". Cao Yu insisted on translating it word by word to Monte, which shows that Cao Yu's greatness lies not only in his unremitting pursuit of art, but also in his rational face and calm acceptance of nitpicking.

However, if you are arrogant and turn a deaf ear to other people's mistakes, the road of life will only get narrower and narrower, and even inevitably accept the pain of failure. After the reform and opening up, Jianlibao Company was established in Li Jingwei, creating a business legend comparable to Pepsi.

However, in the face of unprecedented success, Li Jingwei completely refused to find fault with others. In the face of criticism and obstruction from the company's top management to employees, he set up a huge sum of money to build Jianlibao Building in Guangzhou, which finally exceeded the company's capacity. In the face of the mistakes made by friends in the industry, he refused to absorb them sincerely, which eventually eclipsed Jianlibao in the long river of history and put him in prison.

So, how to be kind to criticism and pursue your perfect self? First of all, in the face of other people's sharp mistakes, we should maintain a calm and peaceful attitude, without anxiety or concealment; As Ji Xianlin said: "What others say is encouragement, criticism and spur, which is good for me." Secondly, we should learn to distinguish between "valuable" finding fault and "finding fault for the sake of finding fault", that is, when we find fault with others, we should not give in, but keep a minimum of trust.

For example, Yu Shizhi, an actor, has been criticized and criticized by the audience all his life, but he has to go through the process of "examination-digestion-absorption" and finally play a vivid role in people's hearts. Everyone will make mistakes, get lost or even be alienated, and often he is kind to others and can lead you to enjoy more charming scenery.

4. Do you need to chew words repeatedly in today's society? Do you need to write at least 300 words? Do you need to chew slowly when reading in today's society? The ancients said that learning is endless, especially in this era. And what we call truth is often only relative. Just like the law that works at the moment, it is not necessarily a law to change places at another time. Therefore, it is enough to study what is suitable for the present. In other words, there is a limit to learning. If reading is too rigid, we have to study hard, that is, we should always look up and look around, because the truth is the same, and often we are so entangled in one point that we become frogs squatting at the bottom of the well and can only catch a glimpse of the sky. People who really study should not only look for the truth from books, but also prove it in practice. This is the way of reading. Reading is not for memorizing any knowledge, but for increasing wisdom and becoming one's own ability. Stick to it and you will forget the original intention of reading. It's not that there is something wrong with your brain, but that you should try to observe from another angle when you don't understand. This is simple to say, but not easy to do, just like we sometimes look at our familiar Chinese characters. Suddenly, it doesn't look like that word. Actually, it's not that word, but that we are too stubborn. When you turn this corner, there is another village ... in front of you, there is a new world ... Friends have a high philosophy, but what I should pay more attention to is how to make some things easier to let go without stubbornness, and how to be careful without impatience. There is no need to delve into the clear truth, the proven truth, and the universally recognized truth ... in other words, if you are not engaged in scientific research, it is useless to study thoroughly. For example, if forklift drivers have to take an English test, it's a scam ... hehe ~ just kidding. Focus on the real things, on life, on specific things, and you can slowly calm down.

5. What do you think of the distinct view of "speaking like a book"? How to treat "speaking like a book" when writing a composition of not less than 800 words?

Bite when you should, and jump when you should.

-A little objection to Zhu Guangqian's and Ma Nancun's reading views.

Mr. Zhu Guangqian pointed out in the article "Chewing Words" that no matter reading or writing, you should chew words, even haggle over every ounce, and you should have a cautious attitude of "refusing to relax". Ma Nancun put forward the opposite view in the article "Not Seeking Very Understanding", arguing that reading should be "not confined to one point, and repeatedly scrutinized words", but "not seeking very understanding" like Tao Yuanming and "reading the outline" like Zhuge Liang, that is to say, "Don't be too late to know".

Which of the two masters' views is correct? In my opinion, they are all biased. Whether to "chew on words" or "read the outline" when reading is determined by different reading purposes.

According to different purposes, reading can be divided into three categories: studying knowledge, increasing knowledge and relieving boredom.

If the purpose of your reading is to delve into knowledge, you must choose words carefully in the reading process, not only to understand the surface meaning of the literal, but also to understand the deep meaning of the literal; We should not only understand the meaning of the sentence, but also understand the meaning of the sentence. Only in this way can you write an appreciation article and learn on the basis of profound understanding. From this point of view, you should chew when it is time to chew. Otherwise, it's like pig eight quit eating ginseng fruit. Even if it's delicious and nutritious, you can't chew its delicacy and absorb its nutrition.

If you read it with the purpose of increasing your knowledge, then you don't need to scrutinize it word for word. You can read it all at once, or even just read the title. Only in this way can you learn from others, broaden your horizons and increase your knowledge reserve. From this perspective, we have to look at the outline when we read it. Otherwise, how long will it take you to read a book and ponder a word or sentence for half a day? After a year like this, you must have read very few books and absorbed very limited knowledge.

If you study to relax, then as long as you can relax from reading, you have achieved your goal. You can continue reading without thinking, or you can enjoy tea while reading. If you are not interested in some content, you can skip it for a long time. Only in this way can you experience leisure and fun from reading. From this perspective, we have to look at the outline when we read it. Otherwise, as long as you pick up a book, you will enter the realm of "eloquent". Will you still regard reading as a kind of leisure? Can you enjoy reading from reading?

In fact, if reading and writing are considered together, then we think they have their own emphasis on "speaking like a book" and "cursory reading". If your main purpose is reading, then your focus should be "reading the outline"; If your main purpose is writing, then your focus should be "speaking like a book".

In short, in reading or writing, it is not as simple as the two masters said, but different methods should be adopted according to different purposes.

6. Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. I like the river outside the door.

It flows peacefully and quietly through time, precipitating all impurities one by one, and it is still crystal clear between white clouds and dogs. Occasionally, after people reinforced the dam for it, it continued to moisten the farmland meekly.

The river is so open, aren't it the writers who are chewed up and pointed out their mistakes? Generosity is a great courage to face mistakes and a great mind to listen with an open mind. A generous person can lead to spiritual Rome, reach the other side of flowers and walk through mountain roads in the dark.

Look straight at your mistakes, be generous, and be angry with yourself! At Jinxi Hall, ministers were terrified and afraid of Tianwei. After reading Wang Bin's Prose of Begging for the Army, she smiled and praised this talent.

The courtiers looked at each other, but she blamed the Prime Minister for not finding this talent as soon as possible. How magnanimous it is! In the face of criticism and accusation, as the son of heaven, she not only didn't care, but accepted it gladly.

She dares to face up to her mistakes. As sonorous as a rose, she never sang a hymn for herself, but left a silent monument for herself. She knows that without words, she can live forever; Without words, you can say a thousand words! Generous, let a generation of queens hold up the sun and the moon! Rolling the Yangtze River eastward, success or failure turns empty.

But magnanimity, like orchids in the valley, has been fragrant for thousands of years and is still there today. In Jianjingzhai, he splashed ink, which was as long as the Great Wall and sonorous as vertical characters.

"The poem is clear and profound, and the literature is constant and the history is fine." Mr. Qi Gong is really a master.

He has profound and all-encompassing knowledge, as well as handsome and free and easy calligraphy. But even so, he often asks people humbly, and whenever others point out his shortcomings, he is as happy as a child who gets a gift.

This is magnanimity. Dare to look directly at the shortcomings of treatment and have a broad mind.

Generous, let a generation grow taller! Generous Jean * * and Mo Yan sincerely thank those who find fault with them and make their works go up a storey still higher. This is true for people and for the country.

More than 100 years ago, the artillery fire of the Opium War shattered my dream of "going to China", and my great motherland fell to her knees under treaty of nanking. But in the face of the mistake of closing the door to the outside world, we dare to look directly at it and face it.

As a result, a group of people stepped forward and paddled across the Wan Li River with their youth. From then on, the flag of the Revolution of 1911 fluttered in the north and south of the motherland, the azaleas in Jinggangshan were the colors of blood and fire, the fishing villages in the South China Sea were turned upside down, and the Beijing Olympic torch lit up China ... Well, let a nation stand tall in the East! And I, a contemporary youth, should look straight at my mistakes, correct them modestly, ignore the past, and move forward with high spirits, because-I am generous and proud of myself! Comments: The biggest feature of this article is the use of the saying that "something else is recited first, and then what is recited".

From the magnanimity of this river in front of us, from things to people, the combination of ancient and modern times reminds people of Wu Zetian, Qi Gong, * *, Mo Yan and others, and then from individuals to countries, it describes the magnanimity, deep level, compact structure and natural transition of generations of China people who look straight at their mistakes and humbly correct them. People have to admire the author's superb language control ability. This is also a major reason for winning the favor of marking teachers.

Moreover, the title of this article, Generosity and Self-Blowing, is very distinctive, which makes the theme of the article clear and refreshing. It can be seen that the candidates' understanding and selection of topics are excellent. In addition, the language of this article is poetic, fluent, narrative and discussion, and the combination of long and short sentences makes it catchy and powerful to read, which also adds a lot of color to the composition.

Analysis of test questions: On the topic of the proposition, "eloquent" inherits two major themes: "extraordinary truth, goodness and beauty" and "historical philosophy speculation", and the philosophical contradiction between "exploring the charm of human nature inward" and "seeking help from foreign things outward" embodies the philosophical connotation. Judging from the examination, it is not difficult for candidates to present the main materials. The article follows the thinking process of "authoritative person"-"finding mistakes"-"sincerely accepting mistakes"-"influencing others", so that we can easily extract the corresponding information in the topic. In the whole thinking process, the writer is one dimension, and the error corrector is another dimension, that is, from the writer's point of view, it is emphasized.

7. How to treat the 800-word argumentative argument of "speaking like a book" is the material to support the argument and the reason and basis used by the author to prove the argument, which can be divided into factual argument and theoretical argument.

1. factual argument: the role of facts in argumentative writing is very obvious. Analyze the facts, see the truth clearly, and check whether it is consistent with the logic of the article. Representative examples, conclusive data, reliable historical facts, etc. Factual arguments include examples and data.

2. Theoretical argument: The theory as an argument is always familiar to readers or generally recognized by the society, and it is the result of abstracting and summarizing a large number of facts. Theoretical arguments include famous aphorisms, proverbs and aphorisms, and the author's reasoning analysis.

Requirements for using arguments: ① certainty. We must choose those hard and typical facts. When citing theoretical materials that have been tested by practice as arguments, we must pay attention to the exact meaning of the cited theory itself. ② Typical. The cited examples should be widely representative, representing the general characteristics and properties of such things. (3) the unity of arguments and arguments. The argument is to prove the argument, so the connection between the two should be closely consistent.

8. Someone has expressed the view that "reading ten lines at a time will affect the memory effect". It takes a lot of time to read a line of words, and many words can't enter the eyes, let alone be remembered by the brain. Others think that fast reading can only be used for rough reading, while intensive reading and memory must be read word for word. I want to introduce the advantages of fast reading from the principle and my own experience.

Speed reading is actually speed reading. To put it bluntly, it is to "see quickly." You can't talk about fast reading if you can't change the reading that speaks like a book. Some people don't believe in the effect of fast reading because they always follow the traditional method of reading word by word and paragraph by paragraph.

When we read an article, only by connecting the words together can we fully understand the author's thoughts and realize the effective expression of a paragraph. In reading, many modal particles and grammatical words are unimportant information and should be ignored in fast reading. What we need to focus on is the key words of the article, such as knowing the cause, process and result of the article when reading the narrative. At the same time, there is a lot of information between words and context, so we can draw a conclusion that there should not be too many words with important information in a few lines or a page, which is the most basic principle of fast reading.

You can't master fast reading just by understanding the principle, but you also need to learn skills carefully and keep training. For an adult, we should first correct our previous habit of reading word for word. Let me tell you something about my own experience. At first, faced with a large number of words, I asked myself to scan them quickly with my eyes, then closed my eyes and recalled the main meanings of these words. At first, I could only remember one word or half a paragraph, but after training with speed reading software for a period of time, I found that what I couldn't remember before became more and more clear. Then I made it harder for myself. Not long ago, I participated in the national unified examination of the comprehensive level of the same academic level, an outline of several hundred thousand words. It only took me 10 hours to finish it, and then I passed the exam easily. I'm really happy!

However, fast reading is an easy and difficult process from entry to proficiency. It's easy to say, because the principle of fast reading is actually very simple. It is not easy to say, that is, to master reading skills and apply them to reading and practice at ordinary times, and persevere. Isn't there an old saying in China, "Never leave your fist, never leave your mouth"? How can you master a kung fu without long practice?

Fast reading can give us more information. In this era of knowledge and technology explosion, the coverage of economic globalization and information globalization is getting wider and wider. All this requires us to master a lot of information knowledge, and speed reading is particularly important.