Fan Wenyi:
My paradise is not a basketball court, lawn, playground, but my balcony.
I like to go to my balcony to enjoy the flowers on the balcony after finishing my homework. Those flowers are on the balcony, next to the wall. They are blooming, showing their smiling faces. Some have not blossomed, but they are still trying to grow. Some are up and some are down, colorful and beautiful!
I like the flowers on my balcony because they are cultivated by me. I will water, fertilize and clean up dead leaves from time to time. I will also whisper with flowers. For example, I said to Xiaohua, "You must grow well, blossom early, smile early and show colorful petals early."
This is my paradise, which can bring me happiness.
Fan Wener:
My paradise is not a fish shed, a park, grandpa's backyard, but my bedroom.
I like to stay in my bedroom, because there are many interesting and lovely "partners" in my bedroom, so I like reading and playing chess in this room best. After finishing my homework every day, I will play chess with my lovely little brother. Whenever I learn a few unconventional tricks, I will sing loudly.
After singing, my parents said I sang well. I will give them a gentleman's bow and say with a smile, "Thank you for listening." When I am free, I sometimes look at the map and sleep in heaven. "
This is my paradise, which not only brings me a lot of happiness, but also a "gas station" for me to study. I like my paradise, and I hope it can always accompany me to grow up.
Fan Wensan:
My paradise is not a park, not a seaside, not a playground, but my study.
There are many books in the study, including A Dream of Red Mansions, The Water Margin, The Journey to the West and so on.
One of them is my favorite book, called The Adventures of Sherlock Holmes. There are four volumes in all. I have read the second volume, which tells some scary stories about Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson. The book also said that there were other policemen who solved the case, but the most helpful one was Sherlock Holmes. Sometimes Sherlock Holmes calls Watson for help when he needs help. Once you find a clue, you will sit alone in that horrible room. After solving the case, I went to live somewhere else.
This work was written by Doyle. It can be said that there would be no Adventures of Sherlock Holmes without Doyle.
This is my paradise, what an interesting paradise!
How to write a composition:
1, now, except poetry, the style of composition is almost unlimited, which gives students a lot of room to play, so that everyone can play their own advantages. Generally speaking, argumentative writing is a weak place for everyone, and it is difficult to grasp the arguments, while lyric narration is commonly used by everyone. Sentences that like to write lyric articles have a good foundation in rhetoric and the overall narrative structure is relatively compact, so when writing prose, you should first think about writing it yourself.
2. Then the first thing is to think about the topic. One of the criteria for teachers to grade is whether the topics are consistent, otherwise points will be deducted. Narrative is easy to grasp the theme because the title is easy to get up and the content page is easy to be compact with the title, so it is necessary to write the title after reading it. Don't start in a hurry
3. As long as you put some thought into the above two steps, the problem is not big. The next part is the article, which is also the key part of the marking teacher.
4, the first is the structure, unless you can easily grasp the progress and structure of the article, otherwise it is recommended that the article make a simple overview of the title of the article at the beginning, leading to the following, which is the beginning.
When writing the whole part in the middle, remember that if you don't name the topic of the article, the best way is to appropriately appear keywords about the topic or title of the article. Because of the reading speed of the marking teacher, this is an aspect that can be scored. Of course, you can't add it indiscriminately. You need to master your own degree, and the fluency of the article is still needed.
6. Remember to say the theme of the article at the end and make a final summary of the content in the middle. As long as the content of the article grasps the theme, the summary content is to summarize the full text.
7. The overall structure of the total score makes people understand at a glance, and the impression score goes up. According to this structure, the article will become smooth and comfortable to read.