1, the paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Can well investigate the problems existing in xxx. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure. The viewpoint is expressed accurately. The research principles are appropriate. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.

2. By using the method of literature, this paper first analyzes the function of college campus football culture, and then studies the influence of football on college campus sports spiritual culture, football culture and college students' sports goals, which provides a certain theoretical basis for the development of college students' football.

3. By using the methods of literature, interview and mathematical statistics, this paper investigates the present situation of primary school football in Decheng District, analyzes the factors affecting its development, and puts forward reasonable conclusions and suggestions, which has certain guiding role for the development of primary school football and the promotion of primary school physical education in Decheng District.

4. The topic of the thesis is meaningful. On the basis of absorbing academic research results, it is reasonable to have your own experience and put forward your own views. The argument is correct, the material is substantial, the narrative is clear and logical. The words are fluent. Writing conforms to academic norms. In the future, we should further sum up experience, compare music education modes and teach music better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.

5. The text of the paper is accurate, the content is more accurate and the format is more standardized. In the process of writing the thesis, the student actively contacted the tutor, conducted serious investigation and research, read a lot of literature, and was able to master the basic theoretical knowledge of this major skillfully, with certain scientific research ability. However, the title of this paper is a bit too big and the content is a bit empty.

6. The topic of this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the knowledge learned is used comprehensively to solve the problem. The obtained data is reasonable, the conclusion is correct and innovative. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent. In the future, we should further sum up experience and compare moral education models, so that moral education can be carried out better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.