The first paragraph of the composition is best to use a comparative paragraph, and it is best to write about high morale or the feeling of being at home, because this will give the teacher who read your composition a hint that you are a good student and then have a good impression on you. Also, don't explain what the center wants to write at the beginning, but be sure to write the center at the end of the sentence.

At the end of the paragraph, you must ask questions. Keep this in mind, questions account for two parts of the composition.

Here are some selected beginnings and endings.

"When the song of wine, life geometry. Such as morning dew, it is more bitter to go to Japan ... "Prime Minister Cao Hengyun wrote a poem lamenting that life is short. Lieyukou walks against the wind, detached and free; Zhuang Zhou is not afraid of worldly fatigue; Li Bai gained both fame and fortune, leaving an eternal story. On the other hand, people like Zhou Xing and Lai Junchen are greedy for money and lead a restless life. Wei Qing had made great contributions to Huo Qubing's resistance to Xiongnu, but he killed Li Guang for fame, and he himself died of depression. Be kind to people in life, but those who pursue fame and fortune by hook or by crook will have a bleak life. ?

Standing on the coast of history, I wandered back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu meditated on Zehe and died without regret; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming is carefree in Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... They choose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles.

Love is the wind. "It is good for the poor to hear the wind." Love is rain, "Love peony contains spring tears". Love is soil, you can dig it out by bending down. Which soil has no blood and sweat of ancestors and no green dream of future people? Love is a cloud. When you look up, you can see one. Which cloud has not seen the yearning of children and the memory of old people? ?

Because of love, we are grateful, because of love, we are full of grief and indignation; Because of love, we are willing to be indifferent to quiet days; Because of our love, we dare to wear boots to meet them. A life of humiliation, life is love; Deserve the righteousness above family, death is love; Clear and refreshing, live seriously, living is not love!

A secluded path, twists and turns will always arouse the yearning for relaxation; Huge waves can make a thrilling sound when the tide rises and falls; A story, but there is sadness in sadness; A kind of life, ups and downs, China shows a shocking grandeur.

After the storm, it will be the color of Tianshui where seagulls swim;

Out of the thorns, the road ahead is covered with flowers;

When you climb to the top of the mountain, there is a misty sky under your feet.

In this world,

A falling star cannot dim the starry sky.

A flower withers, and the whole spring can't be wasted.

Try your best to get through every level of life, and don't give up easily no matter what difficulties you encounter.

Finally, these are just my personal suggestions, because my composition is only 46 points. If it is good, I hope to adopt it. If not, I hope I can give you some help. Thank you~