Example 1: Life state

Zhou is confident that the modern society of 2 1 century is too noisy and boring. People keep attending parties and performing in Vanity Fair. Too much noise made people forget to reflect on themselves, so he said, "I once walked in the foothills of the Alps and watched the reflections of snow-capped mountains, white clouds and forests spread out in the blue mystery of the lake." I know the water in the lake is still flowing, and it is the depth of the lake that makes the lake as quiet as a mirror. "

As he said, in the face of today's modern society, the progress of science and technology and the renewal of ideas make us more and more attached to the external material world. Computers "comfort" our thinking, mobile phones "pull" our connection, cars are our legs and feet, and even our health is always controlled by pills ... Think about it carefully, what a boring life! We throw ourselves into a bunch of soulless machines, and let them control our existence in this world. From beginning to end, the dignity as an individual can't be revealed. Such a reciprocating cold living state will eventually imprison our bodies and corrode our souls.

Therefore, I chose to succumb to Zhou's calmness. He knows that a quiet life brings him the precipitation of human nature and can't take away the wonderful things that belong to him in life. Thinking made him abandon some inadvisability in modern life, and made him clearly distinguish his own life mode. He was really happy!

Computers make us lack thinking to a certain extent, thinking about our past, present and future, which leads to our shallow understanding of life and blind recognition of the so-called misfortune; Mobile phones facilitate our contact to a certain extent, but excessive dependence is more likely to make the maintained emotions fragile and easily broken. When we choose technical convenience, will we also become unprepared and frightened by the feelings that need our hands and eyes to comfort us? ...

I dare not deny that today's fast and high-tech survival tools make our life better than in the past, and at the same time provide more choices. But I just don't feel at ease. I am afraid that such a similar living condition will make us lose our independence and glory in personality. This too "urban" model may make us lose the nature, simplicity and calmness in human nature. I just secretly feel distressed, such a complex world has brought us a certain degree of inner loneliness, because we are drifting away from each other's good thinking and ideological independence.

I think, therefore I am! Faced with the speculative proposition of "state of being", I respect a quiet and thoughtful life. I believe that we thoughtful people are no longer uneasy and afraid when dealing with any sudden novelty or excitement, change or disillusionment in the world. Therefore, thinking in the soul will clarify our own way and where to go, so that temptation can't invade your firm heart, and your The Way to the heart of life will go smoothly.

I think, therefore I am! If I hold thinking in my hand, I will hold real knowledge in my other hand, so no matter what kind of living state I am in the real world, I can actively respond with my wisdom and my primary emotions, and then make my life better.

I think, therefore, I am here to share with you and seek a different but consistent happy life.

Example 2: Life state

I yearn for the tranquility of "a full-hearted love slowly returning", I yearn for sitting in an ancient rocking chair and counting flowers, looking at the leisurely clouds, and I yearn for a feeling of "returning to the garden" ...

However, it is really difficult!

I forgot when the pace of mankind began to advance by leaps and bounds. But on the contrary, when human beings are advancing at an unprecedented speed, they are slowly losing something. They gave their thinking to the computer, their contact to the mobile phone, their legs and feet to the car and their health to the pills. As a result, they became shallow and utilitarian, lost the most pristine touch and missed the most primitive beauty.

So, let's slow down, slow down again, and find back the beauty we have lost.

Let's spend an afternoon looking straight into our hearts; Let's spend an evening writing about our friends. Let's spend a weekend absorbing the essence of nature; Let's spend the holidays with our parents and be filial to them.

Human society is indeed making continuous progress. But modern people run numbly at high speed every day, like a spinning top. Their bodies are busy, but their hearts are deserted. Did mankind create modern civilization, or did modern civilization control mankind? The garden of thought, which should be fragrant, is polluted by automobile exhaust and industrial waste gas. If there is no thought, how can human society have a soul?

Therefore, as a modern person, I am very proud, but I find that how to live comfortably and calmly is far less than that of the ancients!

We don't have Li Bai's lofty sentiments of fame and freedom, and Tao Qian's feelings of seclusion in the mountains; We don't have Gong Fan's sense of hardship or Du Fu's compassion.

We are so busy that we only care about ourselves, and even refuse the warmth of human nature with a wall. Is this a social retrogression? Of course not. As long as we don't live for the sake of life, we don't just pursue material comforts, we don't just see the "ego", and we don't slaughter the unfortunate people mentally, can't we live a full life? This kind of life is not difficult!

In modern times, we should know that no matter how rich the material is, it can't fill the emptiness of the mind, and no matter how clever the technology is, it can't replace the human mind.

Let's slow down and think clearly about our dreams and pursuits.

Let's slow down and pay attention to the people around us.

Let's slow down and learn to listen to nature.

Let's slow down, learn from the ancients, think about our loved ones and our motherland. "Don't bend over for five buckets of rice."

The slower the better. At that time, we will see flowers blooming all the way, and the good scenery is always there.

Test analysis:

First, an overview of the composition topic

(A) the understanding of "state of existence"

Survival: to preserve life, as opposed to death.

State: the state of a person or thing.

Survival state: in what form to preserve life, the "state" is qualitative, such as hardness, tenacity, comfort and ease. And it is also dynamic and exists in concrete actions.

(B) the guidance of materials to thinking

1. The object of writing is clearly defined in the materials, and people here can have two understandings, one is a specific person and the other is a certain kind of person.

2. What kind of life are you or people you know very well?

You, the students themselves, can write your own life state.

People you are familiar with-you can write about relatives (single or one type, parents, grandparents, etc.). ); You can write about someone you know, what you know, what you see, who you have been with, and so on.

3. What kind of life state do you think is meaningful and valuable?

The theme must be positive, such as tenacity, tenacity, overcoming difficulties, perseverance and never despair. It means that students understand the truth that writing carries Tao.

4. What are your experiences and thoughts about life?

Experience: Write about specific events and feelings.

Thinking: Write your own opinions and opinions.

(3) Conception direction

As far as the topic is concerned, as long as you can write the "living state" of life, it is in line with the meaning of the topic. When writing a narrative, there should be a specific description of "what kind of existence state", which shows that such existence state is meaningful and valuable; When writing an argumentative essay, we should clarify our views and attitudes towards one or more living conditions, and the arguments should be sufficiently strong and logical.

Second, the possible problems and causes analysis

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