Comments of reviewers of dissertations: 1 1. Students' ability to consult documents is poor, and they can't collect information about the examination system comprehensively. In the process of writing, his ability to comprehensively apply the knowledge of examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems of examination system is poor.
2. The length of the article meets the requirements of the college, the content is not complete enough, the hierarchical structure is problematic, the main points are not prominent enough, the logic is poor, and there is no personal opinion.
3. The topic is biased, the argument is not prominent enough, and the discussion can't stick to the theme.
4. The language expression is poor and the format meets the specification requirements; Less possession data and poor timeliness; Some contents are similar to others' achievements.
5 can correctly understand the relevant principles and policies of the party and the state, there is no principled error in theory, and can basically master and apply the relevant knowledge learned in this major.
6. The topic of the thesis conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has high academic research (reference value (great practical guiding significance.
7. The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, can comprehensively collect information about the examination system, and has a strong ability to comprehensively apply knowledge. The length of the article fully conforms to the requirements of the college, with complete content, scientific hierarchical structure, prominent points, clear logical relationship and certain personal opinions. The topics are completely consistent, the arguments are prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Rich references and strong timeliness; There is no plagiarism.
8. The topic is in line with the training objectives of the administrative management major, and can better comprehensively apply social theory and professional knowledge. The writing attitude of the thesis is serious and responsible. The content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials are sufficient, and the hierarchical structure is reasonable. The main points are prominent, the logical points are clear, and the language expression is fluent. But the depth of the argument is not enough.
9. The full text is the title. This paper mainly discusses and analyzes the existing problems and their causes, and puts forward some operable countermeasures for the problems. The full-text topic is novel and research-oriented. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the thinking is clear, the viewpoint is clear, and the arguments are convincing. The demonstration method is reasonable, and a large number of data are used to demonstrate, which increases the reliability of the demonstration. Can comprehensively use administrative professional knowledge for analysis-,but the main deficiency is that the language is not very refined.
10. In this paper, the topic is discussed first, and then the reasons are analyzed emphatically, and the effective countermeasures to solve the problem are put forward. Therefore, this article is closely related to the professional requirements, with scientific and reasonable structure, accurate expression of views, correct words, fluent sentences and clear thinking. The relationship between the parts is very close, and the argumentation method adopts case argumentation and case argumentation. The information consulted is sufficient and reasonable. The countermeasures to solve the problem still lack maneuverability.
1 1. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to the English writing standard. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also sharp, the paper is clear and reasonable, and the viewpoint is unique, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.
12. The key points of this paper are. The topic selection is in line with the training objectives and professional characteristics of administrative management specialty, and has strong pertinence and practical significance. The structure of the article is reasonable, the level is clear, and the related documents and materials cited in the writing are closely related to the theme, and the cited materials are relatively new. In the process of writing, the author can better use the basic knowledge of administrative management to analyze administrative management, and in the process of argumentation, he mainly uses theoretical argumentation and factual argumentation. However, the shortcomings of the article are unclear expression of some sentences, insufficient argumentation and insufficient innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
13. The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is average. The topic selection has academic research (reference) value (practical guiding significance). The student's ability to consult documents is average, and he can collect information about the examination system. In the process of writing, he can basically use the knowledge of the examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems of the examination system, and his ability to comprehensively use knowledge is average. The length of the article fully meets the requirements of the college, the content is basically complete, the hierarchical structure is general, and the main points are focused on certain logic, but there is a lack of personal opinions. The topics are basically the same, and the arguments are more prominent. Discussion can better serve the argument. The language expression is general, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Referring to some documents, its timeliness is general; No obvious plagiarism was found.
14. The title of the paper is very meaningful. On the basis of absorbing academic research results, it is reasonable to have your own experience and put forward your own views. The argument is correct, the material is substantial, the narrative is clear and logical. The words are fluent. Writing conforms to academic norms. In the future, we should further sum up experience, compare music education modes and teach music better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
15. The idea of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are clear, and the opinions are expressed accurately. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management with the practical problems of inner-party supervision, and puts forward some better solutions to the practical problems of inner-party supervision. The literature consulted is closely combined with the theme, but the arguments in some places are not very clear and convincing, which generally meets the requirements of graduation thesis, some contents are not well combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
Opinions of reviewers of dissertations 2 1. This paper takes-as the theme, which fully embodies the social value of the times and reality. The full text is divided into-most parts. This paper first discusses —— and then focuses on ——. The full text is basically discussed around the theme. In the process of discussion, students make good use of the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze and solve problems. The language is fluent, but the point of view is not refined enough. In the process of argumentation, we can properly use theoretical argumentation methods and practical argumentation methods. Accurate expression of views, clear thinking and strong integrity of the article. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty.
2. The topic is contemporary and realistic, the structure of the full text is reasonable, the viewpoint is basically accurate and the thinking is basically clear. The contents of the full text are basically written according to the training requirements of the administrative management major, and there are many related materials to consult, but they do not fully reflect the characteristics of the administrative management major, and there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
3. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. The parts are closely related, the opinions are basically accurate, and the argumentation content is more convincing. In the process of argumentation, the basic knowledge principle of administrative major is basically used to analyze the main problems in the article, but the reference materials are insufficient, the article lacks its own original content, and a few viewpoints are not profound and comprehensive.
4. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. Each part is closely related, the viewpoint is expressed accurately, and the argumentation content is convincing, but the article lacks its own original content.
5. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of administrative management specialty and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and correct in viewpoint, which can organically combine the professional knowledge of administrative management with the problems to be analyzed and demonstrated. The materials consulted in the writing process of this paper are not only sufficient but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized and the case demonstration is not enough.
6. The title of this article is —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— The relationship between the parts is very close, and The information consulted is sufficient and reasonable. The countermeasures to solve the problem still lack maneuverability.
7. Work hard. Creative and constructive thinking in independent work; Have a certain pioneering and innovative spirit, accept new things quickly, involve a wide range, constantly explore in the field of engineering computing, and have their own ideas and ideas. Be able to obey the command, be serious and dedicated, have a strong sense of responsibility, work efficiently and resolutely implement the company's instructions. In the case of tight time, working overtime with good quality and quantity has been well received by everyone.
8. This paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, the practical significance of the official accountability system is analyzed first, and then the official accountability system in China is analyzed.
9. The theme of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are basically clear, and the views are basically accurate. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management specialty with Deng Xiaoping's administrative reform thought. The format is basically standardized, and the topic selection meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty. However, there are too few documents available for reference, some argumentation contents are not closely combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
10. The student has good comprehensive quality, strong professional ability, good political performance, sufficient concept of law and discipline, obeys the arrangement and gets along well with colleagues. During the short internship, he can be conscientious and conscientious, and I believe he will achieve excellent results in his future work. I hope to continue to actively participate in various social activities, constantly sum up and improve, and lay a solid foundation for joining the motherland after graduation.
Comments of reviewers of dissertations 3 1. The topic of this paper is meaningful. On the basis of absorbing academic research results, it is reasonable to have my own experience and put forward my own views. The argument is correct, the material is substantial, the narrative is clear and logical. The words are fluent. Writing conforms to academic norms. In the future, we should further sum up experience, compare music education modes and teach music better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
2. The idea of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are clear, and the opinions are expressed accurately. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management with the practical problems of inner-party supervision, and puts forward some good suggestions for solving the practical problems of inner-party supervision. The literature consulted is closely combined with the theme, but the arguments in some places are not very clear and convincing, which generally meets the requirements of graduation thesis, some contents are not well combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
3. Meet the content requirements. However, the overall effect of this print advertisement is general, and the design consideration of the overall effect should be strengthened.
This work has a certain visual impact. Give the advertising audience a certain visual appeal. The overall effect is unified and natural. Pay attention to the layout of the overall structure. Leave room for imagination for everyone. However, the advertising language is not classic enough and ignores some color details.
This work is represented by contrast, and the gray and color are in sharp contrast. Represent students' thinking about the future of the earth and their concern for environmental protection. There are certain creative elements. The overall picture is harmonious and the title is thought-provoking.
6. This work shows that the author has some knowledge of computer drawing. The theme is prominent and clear. Better creativity. The design concept is clear. The structure is basically reasonable. Color matching is more reasonable. It is more appropriate to optimize the processing of pictures. But the title of the advertisement is worthy of scrutiny.
7. The work is innovative and reflects the author's creative ability. Reasonable layout and reasonable color matching. The student is active in the design process, has a correct attitude, communicates with the teacher in time, and can listen to opinions reasonably. In creation, this work embodies a certain spirit of innovation. But the consideration of the overall structure is not enough.
8. The design idea of this work is clear, the central idea is prominent and the theme is clear. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation project. In the production process, the author took pains, actively conceived, tried to find a breakthrough, and basically realized the independent design. The overall layout of the work is proper and the effect is good.
9. This work embodies the combination of theory and practice learned by the author and is full of creative inspiration. Reflect the author's personality and fighting spirit. The overall drawing is standardized and the effect is good. The structural layout is reasonable. The overall design effect is good. However, the originality of the work is insufficient and needs to be improved.
10. This work has some imagination and creativity. In the production process, the author has made a breakthrough by putting the basic knowledge of advertising into the specific creative practice after careful consideration. The overall effect of the work is general, lacking originality.
1 1. The works are in line with the theme, with clear organization, coordinated composition and full use of advertising elements. In the production process, students seriously and humbly ask the instructor for advice and actively play their wisdom. The whole work meets the requirements of the design outline. But it still lacks originality and does not do enough in color matching.
12. The student was full of creative inspiration and actively used computer drawing technology and his own professional knowledge to complete the work. This work is reasonable in structure and layout, rich in content and good in overall effect. But it lacks creativity and the advertising words are not good enough.
13. The student has a good foundation in advertising, listens to others' opinions and suggestions with an open mind in design, and designs actively. The work has bright colors, clear lines, clear themes and good overall effect, which conforms to the basic elements of print advertising. This is a qualified work.
14. During the design process, students communicated with the instructor many times, listened carefully to the teacher's suggestions, and integrated into their own works. The whole process is done independently. The overall effect of the work is good, which reflects the requirements of the advertising theme.
15. This work can fully express the theme, and the overall composition is harmonious, beautiful and generous. The author pays attention to the collocation of colors and lines, and can organically combine the basic theoretical knowledge of advertising with professional practice, which is commendable. However, print advertisements lack attractive elements as a whole and cannot produce unforgettable effects.
16. The students' design concept is in line with the theme, with clear meaning and outstanding theme. In the design, students actively seek guidance and help, and absorb a lot of opinions and suggestions from others. The overall effect of the work is beautiful and generous, and it has certain advertising effect. But the advertising department is classic and thought-provoking.
17. This work embodies the theme of harmony between man and nature. This is a topic of concern to all mankind, and it is difficult to reflect it in a work. The author actively used his basic knowledge of advertising and combined with practice to create this work, which has a certain era. The overall effect of the work is good and the theme is outstanding. However, originality is still lacking.
18. The work fully embodies the solid basic theory and practical knowledge learned by the author, with delicate lines, rigorous structure, unique conception and good overall effect. However, the overall design still lacks innovative spirit, which basically meets the requirements of the graduation design outline.
19. This paper has a novel topic and a unique perspective, which embodies the solid foundation of human resource management theory. In particular, the article can demonstrate and analyze the topic in combination with relevant cases, which has certain practical value. Through the review of the paper, we can see that the author spent a lot of time in collecting data and cases, and also put forward some profound views, but there are still shortcomings in the depth of theory and the citation of some arguments. Generally speaking, this is a qualified paper.
20. The topic of the thesis conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has high academic research (reference value (great practical guiding significance. The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, and can comprehensively collect information about the examination system. In the process of writing, I can comprehensively apply the knowledge of the examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems existing in the examination system, and I have a strong ability to comprehensively apply knowledge. The length of the article fully conforms to the requirements of the college, with complete content, scientific hierarchical structure, prominent points, clear logical relationship and certain personal opinions. The topics are completely consistent, the arguments are prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme.