Material 1: Bernard Shaw, a great British writer, said, "You and I are friends. We each take an apple and exchange it with each other. After the exchange, we are still one apple per person. " If you have an idea and I have an idea to communicate with each other, then each of us will have two ideas. "

Material 2: A former member of NASA's security advisory team warned that the International Space Station may have a serious accident due to the lack of communication between American engineers and Russian engineers.

Material 3: Hong Ying, a contemporary writer, said, "Everyone suffers from the lack of communication. The emergence of the online world is also based on such a state. "

What do you think after reading the above materials? Have you ever had a similar experience in your life? Please write an article of about 800 words on the topic of "Learn to communicate". The topic is self-made and the genre is not limited.

Eight, eighteen, twenty-eight

Jin Li Yong

At the age of eight, I was full of curiosity about the whole world, but I couldn't find anyone to talk to.

"Dad, look, look, what is that?" "Well, it's called a roller coaster." "What is this?" "It's called the Ferris wheel." "And here, what's this?" "sand painting!" "So ..." "Are you bored? Why are there so many questions here? If I had known, I wouldn't have brought you. " Dad was obviously angry, so I had to bow my head and say nothing.

"Dad, the teacher gave us homework and let us go home and tell stories to our parents. Do you want to hear it? " "Son, dad is very tired at work and wants to have a rest. How about another day? " Dad said and walked into the room. I saw him turn on the TV through the crack of the door. ...

At the age of eighteen, I became silent and used to burying my heart.

"Dad, money." On the first day of school holiday, I shouted at my father as soon as I entered the door. "Here, 100 yuan." Dad handed me the money with wrinkled hands. I took the money, went into my room and slammed the door.

"Son, let's eat!" Mom called me downstairs. I watched TV upstairs for a while, and then slowly walked downstairs. When eating, I only heard the collision between chopsticks and bowls. "Son ..." "Dad, Mom, I'm finished." Then I got up and went back to my room. I clearly saw that my father's eyes were full of tears, and I swallowed what I had just said to my mouth. ...

At the age of 28, I am completely independent, and it seems that I am no longer the person to talk to.

"Son ..." "Dad, hurry up, I'm busy." I looked at the computer screen and answered the phone. "Your mother and I really want you to go home for the New Year. We know that you are very busy, even if you come back for a meal and leave, we are satisfied. " "We'll see." I faltered.

"Come on, do it!" I had a New Year's Eve dinner with a group of friends in a hotel. After eating, I walked out of the box and called home: "Dad, I'm really busy today. I'm afraid I can't come back." Then a hiccup betrayed me. There was a long silence on the other end of the phone, and I seemed to see my father standing by the phone with a microphone for a long time. ...

A few years later, I took my daughter to the park. "Dad, what is this?" "This is a roller coaster." "What about this?" "This is the Ferris wheel." "and this?" "This is a sand painting." "And ..." "Are you bored ..." I answered a little angrily. Suddenly, the dusty door of memory suddenly opened and the years went back. Before my eyes stood an inexperienced child and a middle-aged man. ...

Miao Jinde's comments

This paper is ingenious in conception, concise in writing and prominent in center. The article describes the "communication" between father and son in three age groups: at the age of eight, "I" was curious, but my father's "annoyance" made me bow my head and say nothing; At the age of eighteen, my parents were very concerned about me, but I "buried my heart"; At the age of 28, my parents wanted me to go home for the New Year, but I made an excuse not to go back. The article does not have any discussion, but only describes several scenes, but it is deeply shocking and feels the necessity of "communication" between relatives.

Compact structure and clear organization is another feature of this paper. It is worth mentioning that the last natural paragraph, which seems to repeat the previous scene, is actually warning all adults, please don't forget that you came from childhood, and you also asked a series of childish questions, so don't let impatience kill children's curiosity at will. People should take care of and care for their loved ones and keep close communication with them.

What is used to sing spring?

Chen Xiaoyi

Butterflies fly freely among flowers and stop on fragrant flowers from time to time. Is it collecting pollen? No, communicate with flowers.

Willow branches sway gracefully in the breeze and depend on each other from time to time. Are they playing games? No, they are communicating.

The puppy blinked absently in the sleeping basket and licked the dog mother next to it from time to time. Is it coquetry? No, it's talking to mom.

Communication is everywhere, and there are many ways to communicate. You can use words or eyes, but I think the most advanced communication should be with your heart.

People usually communicate with each other through language. However, language is a very illusory thing, invisible and intangible. You can't know whether it's true or not when you hear sweet words.

When the feelings between people rise to a certain extent, they communicate with their eyes. When you are lost, an encouraging look brings you endless motivation; When you are happy, a friendly look brings you a comfortable mood; When you are complacent, a worried look makes you understand your own shortcomings. But sometimes, hypocrisy and affectation will draw curtains on the windows of the soul, making people unable to see what is inside. Leading some people to be deceived, causing pain and failure, and bringing many unpredictable consequences to individuals and even society. ...

When people communicate with their hearts, all hypocrisy and lies disappear, only the honesty of their hearts. Although the experience of each soul is different, it is the most primitive and essential way of communication between people. Perhaps before the formation of language, people communicated with their hearts, so there would be no deception and concealment between people at that time.

Helen? The spiritual exchange between Keller and Sullivan opened a window of light; The spiritual exchange between Marx and Engels opened the door to friendship; The spiritual exchange between Fu Lei and Fu Cong created a pure children's world. The spiritual communication between Boya and Hippo Chef sublimated the realm of bosom friends. ...

If communication is a beautiful tune, then the collision of hearts is an essential note; If communication is a sky, then the intersection of hearts is the brightest star; If communication is a maple, then the overlapping of hearts will be the most beautiful red leaves!

Let's sing spring with our hearts!

Miao Jinde's comments

This paper is an excellent exam composition with rigorous structure and beautiful language.

The first three paragraphs of the article use parallelism to lead to the topic, which is naturally appropriate. Then cut to the chase and analyze three levels of communication: one is language communication, the other is eye contact, and the third is spiritual communication. Spiritual communication is the highest realm of communication and the focus of the article. Therefore, the author did not hesitate to analyze and give examples to clarify the meaning of the topic "What to sing in spring".

In this paper, while paying attention to structure, the use of language is also very distinctive. For example, the flexible use of parallelism begins with rhetorical parallelism, with adverbial parallelism in the middle (such as "When you are depressed, an encouraging look brings you endless motivation …") and ends with causal parallelism (such as "Helen? The spiritual communication between Keller and Sullivan opened a window of light ... ") and hypothetical parallelism (such as" If communication is a beautiful tune, the jingle of the soul is an essential note ... "), the sentences are vivid and vivid, describing things as much as possible, giving people a sense of beauty and being in place.

Door, when will you stop crying?

Cheng Menglan

Following the crying, I came to the end and found that the voice was coming from the door-my door!

"Door, why are you crying?" I asked.

"I am sighing why I always play the wrong role in life." The door sobbed.

"No, you have-"

"I have been a mistake since ancient times." My words were immediately interrupted by the door. "When humans ate animals and drank blood, I was made of dead branches." How many times I heard the roar of wild animals outside the cave in the middle of the night, and people huddled by the fire in fear, but there was nothing I could do. It's just that I'm too fragile to feel safe enough. During the Song and Yuan Dynasties, there were several months of darkness. I was kicked away by some hooligans with broadswords, and my master's house was robbed and killed, but there was nothing I could do. After so many years of evolution, I still haven't become stronger and harder. "The door continued to be sad.

"But you are not very strong and hard now? With you, we all feel safe when we sleep at night. " I comforted it.

"Yes," the door was even sadder. "Now I am an iron gate, and I am good at preventing animals from stealing. But when robbers can't get in, people in the house can't get out. In the past, when people were in danger, they could at least huddle together. After being robbed, neighbors can at least help each other and ask for help. But now, everyone is hiding in this' iron box', and no one will come out for air because there is nothing important. The most communication activities actually point to the illusory online world. I hate it now. I hate that I shouldn't have evolved so fast, blocking your communication and making people lose their warmth. " The words of the door stopped, followed by sobs.

I was lost in thought. Suddenly, I felt it was dark where I was standing. Open the curtains, trying to let the sun in, only to find that the clouds covered the sun. Looking at the shuttling crowd downstairs, I thought, "What a weather! I really need to get some air." I took the door out.

Walking outside, although the sun is not bright enough, the air is fresh. A passing girl waved to me with a lollipop. Then, I saw a photo of Hu Jintao shaking hands with Lien Chan on a billboard on the roadside. The Taiwan Province Strait is also a door. A naughty child ran out of the door and didn't come back for a long time, but now he is wandering at the door and refuses to push the door in. Son, when will you come in and stop the door from crying?

Thinking about walking, I went home. I pushed open the door and my mother had prepared a delicious lunch. ...

Miao Jinde's comments

This article has a unique perspective. Through the dialogue between "I" and the door, the historical evolution of going out is outlined, which makes people realize a profound truth: in the modern society with rapid economic development, people have lost the most important thing: communication. Doors made of dead branches used to facilitate communication between people, but they could not stop the attacks of wild animals and robbers; Now, the iron gate is "a hand against animals and theft", but the communication between people has also been blocked.

The article is meaningful and intriguing. The change of door implies the change of human nature; The cry of the door is a yearning for human nature. The article is about the door, expressing the theme of human nature, which shows the author's intention.

The deficiency of the article is that the Taiwan Province Strait is described as a door at the end, and the connection between the upper and lower parts is not natural enough, which makes the theme appear stiff and labeled.