First of all, you should pay attention to address the teacher politely, such as "Hello, Miss Wang, this is the first draft of my thesis, please have a look", and it is best to use "you" to show respect for the tutor; The content should be concise, because there are many students in the tutor, so let the tutor understand your intentions and personal information in short words; Finally, remember to thank the teacher and confirm the next review plan. When writing a paper, we should send the first draft to the tutor, who will give us some guidance.
Pay attention to the sending time, try not to rest at noon, and choose recess, because teachers usually read mobile phone messages at this time. Secondly, thank the teacher again after replying to our message. If the teacher knows when we will hand in the paper again, we must finish the paper on time.
Example: Hello, Teacher XXX. In recent years, with your help and guidance, my graduation thesis on xxxx has been preliminarily completed. Now I send my graduation thesis to you. I hope you can put forward some suggestions and guidance to see what needs to be improved. I wish you success in your work and good health. Write some honorifics; Your student XXX；; X year x month x day.