● Youth is the blood drop of will and the nectar of hard work-Mika; Youth is a rainbow woven with eternal hope and eternal yearning-gorgeous and brilliant; Youth is an iron wall built with eternal persistence and tenacious toughness.

Faith is the pillar of towering buildings. Without it, it's just a pile of scattered bricks. Faith is the bed of a surging river. Without it, there is only a tidal wave. Faith is the beacon of blazing fire. Without it, there is only a cold firewood. Faith is the main engine of ocean-going ships. Without it, there is only a paralyzed giant frame.

Standing on the coast of history, tracing back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu meditated on both sides of the Zehe River and died without regret; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming carefree Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... they chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles.

● Only when you set out will you reach your ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow will you reap. Only by pursuing can we taste honest people.

● If friendship is an evergreen tree, it must be watered by a clear spring from the heart; If friendship is an unbeaten flower, then it must be the rising sun in my heart.

How much laughter friendship has aroused and how many tears friendship has dried. The harbor of friendship is warm and affectionate, and the breeze of friendship sails. Friendship is not an emotional investment, and there is no need for dividends and dividends. (Friendship can be changed into other words)

Yingying moonlight, I scooped up the clearest glass; After sunset, I hold a wisp of the warmest; Burning red leaves, I picked up the hottest one; I picked a bunch of the most colorful herbs; Long life, I want to pick the most important thing in the world-perseverance.

If life is a solemn castle, if life is a lush tree, if life is a flying seabird.

Then, faith is the pillar of the dome, the deeply rooted root and the fluttering wings. Without faith, there is no motivation for life; Without faith, the beauty of life will disappear. (You can change other words where they are underlined.)

Perseverance is the condensation of a sand and a stone on a thousand-mile levee. Only by accumulating bit by bit can there be a grandeur that has never been seen before; Perseverance is that spring silkworms spin silk one by one, and only by persisting one by one can they break out of the cocoon and see the brilliance again; Perseverance is the sail of a long-distance ship. With sails, the ship can reach the other side of success.

Love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, which makes poor and sick people feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which gives spiritual comfort to lonely and helpless people.

The true nature of the heart should be like this. Success, like the moonlight shining on the flowers, the deep pool is slightly blue, no matter good or bad, no matter the detachment of success or failure, it is a post station with a whip and a horse, climbing high and looking far; Defeated, still dripping water wears away the stone and merges into the sea. There is a kind of pride that is poor and strong and does not fall into the blue sky. There is a kind of stubbornness of "being a self-taught person and constantly striving for self-improvement". Rong, Jiangshan is still the same, the painting style is still the same, just like the sea and mountains, familiar with the years, flashy and arrogant; Bear the burden of humiliation, Han Xin, snow pine, like a fairy with feathers, know how to take a step back and broaden the horizon, and refuse to give up eating because of choking.

● Happiness = material/desire. This is the happiness equation put forward by American economist Samuelson. From an economic point of view, the greater the material consumption, the smaller the desire and the greater the happiness, which is exactly in line with the old saying of China people that "contentment is always a pleasure". On the contrary, what happens if a person's material consumption is limited and his desire is infinite? Mrs. Loizai has so many "dreams" and so many "intoxicating people", how can she not be sad from them?

Russian writer Chekhov said: "there are big dogs and puppies, and puppies should not be disturbed because of the existence of big dogs." All dogs should bark and let him use the voice God gave him.

● Maturity is a bright but not dazzling brilliance, a mellow but not greasy voice, a calmness that does not need to look at others, an atmosphere that eventually no longer appeals to the surrounding, a smile that ignores the hustle and bustle, and an extreme indifference that washes away. A thickness that does not need to be revealed,

Not steep height.

Low love, sometimes don't need a vow of eternal love, but she must need meticulous care and greetings; Love, sometimes does not need Liang Zhu to become a butterfly's tragic, but she must need tacit understanding and congenial; Love sometimes doesn't need to be followed by a man and a woman, but she must need mutual care, support and understanding.

● Smile and sing the song of life. Don't complain that life has given too much hardship, and don't complain that life has too many twists and turns. The sea has lost its grandeur without the rolling of huge waves; The desert has lost its splendor without the wild dance of flying sand. If life only wants two points and one line of smooth sailing, life will lose its meaning of existence.

● Even if youth is a delicate and charming flower, I understand that a solitary flower is never spring, and spring should be a colorful world.

Even if youth is a tree with a mighty land, I understand that unique trees are never tall and straight, and rows of trees are the green Great Wall that blocks the wind and sand. Even though youth is a lonely sail in the sea, I also understand that it is difficult to sail with lonely sails, and the competition in Qian Fan is spectacular.

● Life is not a "digest", it does not accept dullness, but only collects wonderful things. She is a complete process, a serial. Whether she succeeds or fails, she won't leave a blank behind you. Life is not a rehearsal. If you don't walk well, you can start all over again. She will never give you a second chance. If you walk past it, you can't turn back.

Give it a try-instead of standing quietly by the sea like a penguin, waiting for an opportunity, you are constantly hovering like a goshawk, looking for it persistently.

Give it a try-in the face of twists and turns and overgrown future, don't sigh in vain, cut through difficulties and be brave in exploration.

Give it a try-instead of being bound by fate and at its mercy, try to knock on its mysterious door and open up a new world. Smile and sing the song of life.

● What can be broken must be really alive. Lin Daiyu broke up because of her unforgettable love; San Mao's breaking stems from her understanding and detachment at that moment of vicissitudes; Van Gogh's "Break" is the sharp pain of the sun in the light with a golden knife, while Beethoven's "Break" is a tragic movement in which black and white keys hits life with great spirituality. If the breaking of ordinary people reveals the purest and most beautiful light of human nature, then the breaking of these excellent souls, like a silver pear flower, permeates the sky above us.

● Spring silkworms died, but they left behind luxurious silk; The butterfly died, but left beautiful clothes; Thrushcross flew away, but left a wonderful song; Flowers withered, but left a wisp of fragrance; The candle burned out, but it left a bright light; The thunderstorm passed, but colorful neon lights were left behind.

● "The sun rises tirelessly every day" Balzac said that "misfortune is the ladder of genius, the baptism of believers, and the bottomless abyss of the weak". After the storm, it will be the color of Tianshui where seagulls swim; Out of the thorns, the road ahead is covered with flowers; When you climb to the top of the mountain, there is a misty sky under your feet.

In this world, a star falls, the starry sky cannot be dimmed, a flower withers, and the whole spring cannot be deserted.

Try your best to get through every level of life, and don't give up easily no matter what difficulties you encounter.

Tolerance is a kind of magnanimity, which can be selfless, fearless, unrestrained, dust-free and uncontaminated.

Tolerance is an open mind, a broader mind than the ocean and the sky, and a superposition, continuation and sublimation of broadness and generosity. Tolerance is measured, priceless and the basic law of life.

Composition ending method

Bai Letian's poem "On the Golden Lily" says that "every sentence falls like a stone and never comes back", and Xie Zhen's "Poem Four Bodies" says that "every sentence is like a silver bell, and the sound is more than enough", so we should pay attention to leaving a aftertaste at the end of the article. Here are some methods of "throwing stones" and "ringing bells" based on some excellent compositions of the 2005 college entrance examination.

First, enlightenment

Is to explain your feelings in simple words. For example, in the college entrance examination in 2005, Hunan candidates wrote in their masterpiece "Running of the Mind" that they expected to "realize Zen" one day. After a period of mental operation, he finally understood:

The operation of the mind is actually very simple:

Look at the world with a normal heart, live a normal life with a normal heart, and like to have a soft heart.

This ending is the most "simple and clear" answer to the beginning "I" looking forward to one day "enlightenment", which makes people clear at a glance and goes straight to the heart.

Second, implicit.

This is a technique contrary to the "enlightenment" thinking, that is, the meaning is not clearly stated, and it is included in the image described in the text. For example, the 2005 Jilin college entrance examination masterpiece "Two Dandelion Seeds" is:

The new seed cultivated by the second seed is mature. It looked at one child after another, and suddenly thought of the seed boss:' where is my brother?' "Is it like me that it landed on the grassland so soon and gave birth to so many children?"

Here, "I left my own children" and "it fell on the grassland like me and gave birth to so many children so soon", one is the implied topic "position and value"; The second is the implicit theme: a person's life destiny and life value will be different in different positions.

Implication is not ambiguous, and its main feature is implication.

Third, embedded green.

It is to embed wonderful words describing beautiful scenery in the lyrics, giving people a poetic association and aesthetic feeling. For example, A Green Confession, the representative work of Heilongjiang candidates in the national college entrance examination in 2005:

In fact, I can be green, I can be beautiful, I can shelter from the wind and rain ... because I am green, I have the responsibility to wear green. I don't have red, orange, blue and purple enchanting, I don't have indomitable spirit, but I can bring you fresh coolness. April has me, full of hope; May has me, looking forward to the future; June is with me, dreams and joy are together. I am a piece of green, and I am willing to make oxygen for your photosynthesis.

Here, green grass, flowers, shelter from the wind and rain, the responsibility of wearing green, the freshness and coolness of red, orange, blue and purple and enchanting words make this lyric inlaid with green and red, which makes people poetic, picturesque and memorable.

Fourth, draw immortals.

It is to skillfully intercept the instantaneous expressions of the characters, make the finishing point, and let readers see the rich, complex and subtle inner world of the characters. For example, the representative work of Anhui candidates in the national college entrance examination in 2005, "What? -"That's right!" 》:

"Rinrin Bell ..." "What? Is the exam over? " I'm surprised. Then I thought, "Yes, it should be like this!"

The sentences such as "I'm surprised" and "Let me think about it" here not only conceal the topic, but also vividly depict the attitude of strict candidates when they suddenly hear the bell at the end of the exam, which makes people feel as if they were there.

Verb (abbreviation for verb) discovery

Here are some suggestions to break the suspense. Suspense is a kind of "doubt" or conflict designed in the plot development of works, and it is a method that constantly makes readers have a psychological state of eager expectation and enthusiastic attention. Find out whether it was to answer questions or to solve contradictions. This is often used in short stories, such as the representative work of Hebei candidates in the national college entrance examination in 2005, Summer Night Chat:

Lao Zhang pushed the door in and found that the table was empty and there was no wife. Lao Zhang shouted several times and didn't respond. Lao Zhang panicked and hurried across the hall to ask what had happened. The neighbor said, "Your wife was robbed this afternoon and has gone to the hospital. Please go and have a look! " "Lao Zhang immediately blindsided. ...

Lao Zhang is also a warm-hearted person? He is a typical figure who keeps a clear head. When he came back from work, he saw the bag snatcher running past him. He didn't ask or listen, but also made a long speech: "Look at the fierce look of the bag snatcher, I dare not ask." If I catch up with him, he turns around and gives me a knife, and I'm finished ... "It was Lao Zhang's wife who was robbed at last. The "neighbor said" in the article is "disturbing".

Sixth, symbol

It means to rely on things, that is, to express a special meaning with concrete things. For example, in 2005, Zhejiang college entrance examination candidates' excellent work "Hong Xiuxie Baibuli":

Hong Xiuxie is a thing of the past. Great-grandmother will always bear all the hardships of beauty in my heart.

Hong Xiuxie, White Bree. A woman's most insipid legendary life is told in silence.

The topic is "one leaf and one world". Hong Xiuxie's "one branch and one leaf" embodies his great-grandmother's "all youth, all tears and laughter", symbolizes traditional etiquette and inspires us to think about the fate of women in China.

Seven, light beam

It is to summarize the whole article in indirect language. For example, in 2005, the representative work of Hubei candidates in the national college entrance examination "If you enter it, then you leave it":

After browsing several "wonderful" lives, I had an epiphany: the political autonomous prefecture should be "external, internal" in doing things, being a man and doing things. Only by knowing what to go out and what to go in can we grasp things from a macro perspective, analyze the overall situation, analyze the essence from a micro perspective, and integrate spirit, emotion, thought and quality. This will make your life more perfect and wonderful.

The "wonderful life" mentioned in the quotation is the three characters discussed in this paper, namely, Zhuangzi with beautiful feelings, Zhuge Liang with intelligence and beauty, and Ren Changxia with beautiful mind. The content of "epiphany" is a summary of what was discussed.

Eight, blank space

It means a lot, say five or six, get through one or two points, and leave one or two points for readers to think, imagine and ponder. For example, Milu and Kongming, the representative work of Gansu candidates in the national college entrance examination in 2005:

Why do thousands of years of cultural accumulation make us more utilitarian and short-sighted? "Why do we bathe in civilization in modern society, but grow narrowness in our hearts?" Milu and Kongming, why are we treated so unfairly? Should we re-examine and treat forgetting and memory in this way?

The four rhetorical questions are thought-provoking and memorable, which are two points for readers to think about: Milu and Kongming were once brilliant, failed in the same great cause and left the same place. Why do you have different views? "Thousands of years of cultural accumulation" and "civilization of modern society" are getting narrower and narrower in their hearts? "

Nine. mind

It refers to the echo with the content of the text. For example, in 2005, Fujian candidates' masterpiece "Eight? Eighteen? Twenty-eight: One day, I went to the kindergarten to pick up my daughter, and her daughter came crying. "The teacher said that the sun is red and the grass is green. But the sun and grass I saw with my father's yellow glasses were yellow. The teacher said no and hit me. "My daughter cried and talked. These words suddenly hit my heart, and the door of the long-sealed memory suddenly opened. I think of the yellow grass and the yellow sun. My mother is a bookboy and my father is a coachman. I think of the irregular polygon that has not been polished by the world.

My tears slipped quietly. For irregular polygons, we no longer have ...

Here, "I think of yellow grass and yellow sun" echoes the story in the first paragraph, "My mother is a bookboy and my father is a coachman" echoes the story in the second paragraph, and "I think of irregular polygons that have not been polished by the world" echoes the title material.

X. viewpoint

Outlook is an affectionate call and an emotional exchange, which can boost morale and inspire people. For example, in the national college entrance examination in Jiangxi province in 2005, the examinee's masterpiece "Face is born from heart":

Friends who love beauty, if you want to have a beautiful face that everyone loves, please throw away the plastic surgery knife. The only thing we have to do is to make our hearts pure and beautiful.

Please remember and believe that the face is born of the heart.

What is used here is the method of calling, talking directly with "friends who love beauty" and sincerely "calling deeply".

XI。 cite

At the end of the article, quote poems, lyrics, famous sayings, etc. , can metaphor personal feelings, reveal the central idea, enhance persuasiveness, and receive concise, intriguing and finishing touch effects. For example, in the national college entrance examination in 2005, Jiangsu examinee's masterpiece The Voice of the Night:

Reasoning, let's end with this little poem by Han Han:

You put your bloody head

On the scales of life.

Keep everyone alive.

All have lost weight.

This poem touches the reader's heartstrings and sublimates the main idea of the article: Ji Kang wrote the last journey of his glorious life with "blood gushing from his unyielding neck" and wrote down the reader's self-esteem, which not only expressed his admiration and admiration for the sages, but also permeated his feelings and thoughts on the tragedy of the times.

XII. Deduction

Stick to the topic or the topic, or both. For example, FACE/OFF, the representative work of Jiangxi candidates in the national college entrance examination in 2005:

Lao Zhang came to his senses and scratched the word in a slap. The "sight" came back and said, "hey, director, look at you. Oh, really, my smelly mouth! Bah ... Xiao Wang, pour the tea quickly. " After that, I almost helped the director to a chair, and the two pieces of meat on my face were crowded together, much like traitors in war movies.

Xiao Wang heard the shouts and ran helplessly to make tea. At this time, there was a Sichuan opera changing face on the TV in the office. Xiao Wang thought at that time: Did Lao Zhang learn to change his face, too? Why did he change his face so quickly?

The topic is "face" and the topic is "changing face". I have followed FACE/OFF three times, seeing the big from the small, and implicitly flogging the "chameleon" in my life with humor.

Deduction is not a simple repetition, it is the refinement and sublimation of a theme, which is often manifested in the expansion of scope and deepening of degree.

Deduction is a kind of writing accomplishment. From a certain point of view, no matter how an argumentative or narrative article ends, it is necessary to "deduct the topic".

Thirteen, all of them.

Is to use all kinds of methods in the end. In actual writing, the ending technique is often not used alone, but in many ways. For example, the ending technique of Two Dandelion Seeds, the representative work of Jilin candidates in the national college entrance examination in 2005, is "implicit" in terms of the hidden and obvious meaning; As far as the topic is concerned, it is "deduction"; As far as rhetorical methods are concerned, it is symbolic and personification. Another example is the ending technique of the masterpiece "Summer Night Chat" of Hebei candidates in the national college entrance examination in 2005, which is said to be "disturbing" from the plot; Judging from the article clip, "Lao Zhang suddenly blindsided ..." The article came to an abrupt end, and Lao Zhang's thoughts at this time were all in the ellipsis above, which made readers imagine that it was "blank space" again; The words "unexpected" and "reasonable" do not appear in the whole article. But the image described is written around this topic everywhere, and it is "implicit".

The above methods sometimes overlap each other, so when understanding, we must not fix our thinking and do not know how to be flexible; When you use it, you should look at the content and never copy it mechanically.