How to write after reading 1. Briefly describe the relevant contents of the original text.
Such as the title of the book, the author, the writing year of the book and article, the abstract of the original book or text, etc. This part is written to explain where feelings come from and pave the way for the following discussion. In this part, the word "Jane" must be highlighted, and the specific contents of books and articles must not be described in large paragraphs, but the parts directly related to feelings should be simply described, leaving out things unrelated to feelings.
Second, clarify the basic point of view.
Choose the point that you feel most deeply and express it clearly in concise sentences. Such a sentence can be called "viewpoint sentence". This viewpoint sentence expresses the central point of this article. The position of "viewpoint sentence" in the text can be flexible, which can be at the beginning, at the end or in the text. Beginners of writing had better come straight to the point and write their own opinions at the beginning of the article.
Third, put facts and reason around basic viewpoints.
This part is the main part of the argumentative paper, which expounds the basic point (that is, the central point), proves the correctness of the point of view by putting facts and reasoning, and makes the point more prominent and convincing. In this process, it should be noted that facts and reasoning must closely focus on and serve the basic point of view.
Four, around the basic point of view with practice
A good feeling after reading should have the flavor of the times and a true feeling. To do this, we must be good at connecting with reality. This "reality" can be personal thoughts, words and deeds, experiences, or a social phenomenon. When connecting with practice, we should also pay attention to closely focusing on and serving the basic viewpoints, rather than blindly connecting and disconnecting. The above four points are the basic ideas of writing the post-reading feeling, but this idea is not static, so we should be good at mastering it flexibly. For example, "brief the original text" usually comes before "clarify the point of view", but the order of the two can also be interchanged. Furthermore, if the facts in the third step are social phenomena or personal experiences, then the fourth part need not be written.
After reading the model essay (1), everyone has experienced childhood. There is happiness and happiness in childhood, and childhood is beautiful. Childhood is full of sunshine, which is worth remembering a lot ... but Alisa's childhood is very tragic.
Grandfather is very selfish and stingy. He used to beat his grandmother and others. When he was separated, he even gave all the broken pots and pans, bottles and jars to his grandmother, but he took away her old clothes, objects and fox fur coats. He also lent money to his godson to earn interest. In order to make money, he completely lost his sense of shame, visited old knowledge, complained constantly, gained sympathy from others and used it.
Contrary to people like grandpa, the author expressed his love and reverence for the working people represented by grandma through memories of grandma and others. Grandma is kind, loving her relatives, neighbors and everyone. She is willing to bear all the pressures in life without complaint. The hardships of life, the beating of her husband and the disobedience of her son ... can't put out the light of love in her heart. She is a dynamic and poetic professional woman. She can sing and dance, and tell all kinds of legends, fairy tales and folk stories. She is also a brave person. When the workshop caught fire, everyone panicked. Only she rushed into the fire and grabbed buckets of sulfuric acid. Therefore, although she has the shortcomings of obedience and patience to evil forces and blind belief in God, this does not affect her overall brilliance in human nature. Aletha Jr. maintained his courage and confidence in life in a dark and dirty environment, and gradually grew into a strong, brave, upright and caring person.
Compared with alessa, our childhood is brilliant and colorful; Different from Gorky's miserable childhood, one is full of sunshine and the other is dark everywhere. A wonderful childhood is hard to come by!
I silently opened the book Childhood and saw the cruel and dark life of an "ignorant nation". Too many terrible phenomena make people feel gloomy. I feel Gorky's "this depressing and sultry environment, and these are the times when many ordinary Russians live together." The dark ages will eventually become a thing of the past under the wheel of historical progress. We can't forget these fireflies of love in the dark, but we should also be grandma-like figures, lighting ourselves with love and trying to light up every inch of space around us.
Model essay after reading (2) The Education of Love was written by Amicus, a famous Italian children's literature writer. First published in 1886, it is a successful work and has a wide and far-reaching influence in the world.
Every time I read it, there is always a feeling of moving in it, and I am moved by the author's description of everything that happened in Amway's life with words as plain as home. Moved by the sincere love between the little people mentioned in the article; Moved by the unpretentious feelings of the characters in the article; Moved by the gripping monthly story in the article; I was moved by the enlightenment and education of Amway's parents to their children's body and mind in the article ... The language of love education is plain, but its connotation is profound and heavy. From its simple description of life, from its relationship and emotion between characters, we feel that people should understand each other, help each other, care for each other, and be United and friendly. This is inseparable from the most fundamental thing, that is love!
The students are very friendly and sincere. Whether there are new students in the class or misfortune at home, Amrico expresses sincere concern, or visits, or comforts, or expresses his friendliness and sincerity to them during play. Polly is often scolded by his alcoholic father. Amway expressed deep sympathy and invited Polly to his house to play and do everything possible to make him happy. Anthony, the "little stonemason", was ill, so Amrico and some good friends went to visit the "little stonemason". The emaciated Nelly was often bullied, and Caron took the initiative to assume the obligation of protector without the gratitude of Nelly and her parents ... The innocent friendship between the children deeply touched me, and I seemed to see a vivid image and their golden hearts.
Teachers and students have deep feelings. From the beginning to the end of a school year, teachers who taught Amway before and now, and teachers who treat students and students treat teachers with respect, love and care. Students have entered senior one and can't continue teaching. Teachers are full of nostalgia and yearning for students and love for the students they are teaching now. They care about students as much as their own children, exchange feelings with students sincerely, and take good care of each student's young mind. Students also hold fast to the teacher's teaching and health. No matter whether the students are sick or the teachers are sick, teachers and students visit each other, especially the teachers' home visits, which always touch the students and parents. The students were deeply touched by the death of a female teacher who insisted on attending class despite illness. Their professionalism, their respect and love for students inspire me to constantly reflect on my teaching behavior in the future and strive to be a good teacher that children love.
After reading the book Education of Love, I benefited a lot. It inspires us not only to learn to love, but also to learn how to love, and how to make our love shine with the wisdom and brilliance of education everywhere. This is an educational consciousness and thought that we need to reflect and improve at all times in educational practice.
I have read many books recently, and the most impressive one is Uncle Cao Wenxuan's The Grass House.
This book mainly describes the unforgettable six-year primary school life of the boy Sang Sang. In the past six years, he witnessed or directly participated in a series of seemingly ordinary but tearful and shocking stories. Innocent boys and girls, the brave struggle of unfortunate teenagers against bad luck, the persistent insistence of disabled teenagers on dignity, and the dazzling brilliance of dying old people at the last moment of their lives ... The book describes many vivid characters, among which Du Xiaokang is the one I admire most.
Du Xiaokang's home is the richest man in Yau Ma Tei, and its symbol is the enviable Dahongmen. Dahongmen is the only grocery store in Yau Ma Tei, and people come to his house to buy things every day, so Du Xiaokang's family has been living a rich life that Yau Ma Tei people can't catch up with. But one day, disaster struck. ...
Du Xiaokang's father borrowed money to buy a big boat and went to town to buy a batch of good goods. But on the way back, the ship collided and all the goods became waste. This incident has dealt a great blow to Du Xiaokang's father. He is ill, a very strange disease, and he can't stand up. Du Xiaokang became the pillar of the family and took his father out to see a doctor every day. Because he owes a lot of debts, Du Xiaokang can no longer go to school and open a shop at home. In the end, Du Xiaokang's family really became an empty shell and had no money to treat Du Xiaokang's father. He can only rest in bed every day. It was not until the following spring that Du Xiaokang's father was able to stand and walk.
Du Xiaokang and his son are not reconciled to the hardships of fate. Dad borrowed money again, bought 500 ducklings and took Du Xiaokang to put ducks in barley fields. But it didn't last long. When these ducks were about to lay eggs, they got into someone else's big fish pond and ate all the fry. The duck was detained. The next spring, Du Xiaokang and his father only brought back five double yellow eggs, and my father relapsed. In order to pay back the money, dad had to give the Dahongmen made of fine wood to a creditor. The red door, which once brought infinite glory to Du family, disappeared in the sunset ... Du Xiaokang once again propped up this family. He borrowed twenty dollars from Sang Sang, bought some goods and started a business at the school gate. Business is very good.
Du Xiaokang, who has come through all the hardships, has a thin face, but his eyes are surprisingly bright, revealing a precocity that children in Yau Ma Tei can't have. He chewed a beautiful and cruel problem that no child in Yau Ma Tei would chew. In the face of life's setbacks, he did not have great panic and sadness, but made various plans and plans for his future life in his mind. When he did business calmly at the school gate, the teachers all sighed and said, "In the future, Du Xiaokang may be the most promising child in Yau Ma Tei!"
In the fourteen-year-old Du Xiaokang, I understand the "commitment". In the unfortunate hardships again and again, in the most difficult time at home, he learned to take responsibility and take the initiative to provoke the burden of the family. Compared with children of the same age, he grew up very early as the pillar of his family. Who can say that suffering is not another kind of wealth in life?
After reading the essay (4), I came across the book Little Peas by the Window.
Many stories in the novel begin with such sentences. It's a pity that I have to tell Xiao Doudou in such a tacky way and express my strongest feelings in the simplest way. This book is the work of Tetsuko Kuroyanagi, a famous Japanese writer and TV presenter. There are no flowery rhetoric and ups and downs in the works, but there are thought-provoking contents.
This is a documentary recording the author's childhood campus life. The story took place in Tokyo before the end of World War II. Xiao Doudou was her childhood nickname. The reason why she used the word "window" as an attribute, the author explained in the postscript of the book that the word "window" gave people a feeling of being excluded from the periphery, rather than being in the main position.
The main content of the story is that Xiao Doudou came to the "Ba Xue Yuan" after being expelled from the original school for being naughty. Under the care and guidance of principal Kobayashi, she is "weird" in the eyes of ordinary people and gradually becomes an acceptable child for everyone. The easy-going and friendly teaching method of Ba Xueyuan made her spend the best time in her life.
In the book, what I feel most is the good intentions of teacher Kobayashi, the unique teaching environment and the ingenuity of educational methods in Ba Xueyuan. Teachers teach students in accordance with their interests and ways of thinking. With "the taste of the mountain" and "the taste of the sea", Mr. Kobayashi used his own special method to keep the children from being partial to food. He is also good at listening, and he has realized respect for childhood secrets in his own teaching garden, which is very remarkable. Therefore, "Ba Xue Yuan" bears Xiao Doudou's beautiful expectation for the future.
Accidental discovery, pleasant reading, so there is an inevitable love. Small peas by the window, childhood by the window, that is a kind of lemon grass flavor. In my eyes, it is beautiful and sour, which makes me aftertaste and want to go. Sometimes, the bitter taste of lemongrass is remembered as fragrant grass. Along the way, stop and go, after success and failure, I found that I still have a better vision, and that is my future. It's just the smell of lemon. Maybe I already know.