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Correct the shortcomings of an 800-word argumentative essay in a high school composition.
My bad habit is carelessness, which brings me a lot of trouble.

I am careless in many places!

The examination questions are not carefully examined, and the wrong questions are often copied when doing math homework, and they are not checked after finishing; Writing a composition often loses words, drops words and has typos. I often forget to bring things in my life, and I often forget to bring things when I pack my schoolbag ... For this reason, my academic performance is always low and I am often criticized by my parents and teachers. I am also very distressed. Mother often sighs for my carelessness.

I remember a math exam, and I finished it quickly. Because of my carelessness, I didn't notice the requirements of the topic, I didn't notice that I copied the wrong numbers, and I didn't notice that the topic I made was wrong. I didn't find these mistakes because I didn't check them properly at all. "Ding Du!

Tintin!

"Class is over, I handed the paper to the teacher. The next day, I walked into the classroom happily, expecting to get full marks, but I didn't expect to see the paper on the desk just after I sat down. There are many big "X's" on the test paper, as if the devil were laughing at me. Looking at the upper right corner of the paper, I saw two bright red and striking numbers. " I only got 88 points? "Face burning, the in the mind so anxious. What should I tell my mother? I handed the paper to my mother in fear and trembling, afraid to look her in the eye. Unexpectedly, after reading the paper, my mother was not angry, but said to me seriously: "There was once a surgeon who accidentally left a piece of gauze in the patient's abdominal cavity during surgery. Although the operation is over, the patient is still in pain. "As the days passed, the patient couldn't stand the pain. He had another operation and finally took out the harmful gauze. Due to the doctor's carelessness, the patient almost lost his life. If a soldier doesn't carry a gun on the battlefield because of carelessness, or even if he does, he can only die; If an architect is careless and puts the decimal point in the wrong position on the drawing, the building will collapse after completion, which will not only kill many people, but also cause great losses to the state property. If you don't get rid of this problem now, you will be a waste when you grow up. " After listening to my mother's words, I realized that carelessness was so harmful that I was determined to get rid of it. Be careful in your study; When doing math problems, I thought, I am a designer. Now we must calculate the drawings accurately, and we must not be careless, so we should carefully examine the questions. Be careful not to copy the wrong numbers when writing vertically; When writing a composition, I thought, I am a surgeon. I can't leave gauze in the patient's abdominal cavity. I must be careful, and then be careful ... carefully examine the questions, stick to the subject, and check after writing. Every day before school, I feel like a soldier going to war. I checked my schoolbag carefully to see if I had all the bullets and guns. After a period of hard work, my typos have been greatly reduced, and there are few mistakes in math problems. My academic performance improved and I was elected to the squadron Committee!

Life is no longer forgetful, and self-care ability has also improved.

I finally got rid of this carelessness and improved my overall quality. How happy I am!

Goodbye, don't be careful!