The beginning and end of excellent composition
1, "Forward, forward, forward! 》
Beginning: Don't complain that you have suffered too much, don't try to escape the challenges you face, don't be afraid of the darkness in front of you, look farther, go forward, go forward! Success is not far away!
Outcome: Progress is a boat sailing to the other side of success. Facing the first light, can you smell the flowers on the other side? Throw away the burden of pain, raise the sail of faith, March forward, March forward!
2. The color in my eyes
The beginning: the sky is blue, dotted with white clouds; The sea is also blue, arousing the vastness and profundity of the spray. Mood is also colored, with fire-like anger, golden passion and half-moon melancholy. ...
Ending: "The most beautiful thing is sunset red, warm and calm." This is the color in the eyes of grandparents with white hair. Yes, no matter what kind of happiness you pursue, it will eventually become the color of the sunset. Because you have worked hard and struggled, you look so brilliant, so brilliant and so dazzling.
Step 3 "seek"
Start: find a piece of soil with your deep footprints printed on it; Find a ray of sunrise and shine on your picturesque face; Find a curved green water, with your endless blood flowing.
Ending: In my memory, I searched for you countless times, calling for you, fragrant soil, warm sunshine, clear streams, lush shrubs, rows of quaint huts, and your still bright smile. ...
4. "A landscape painting"
Beginning: My mother was laid off.
Conclusion: It is often said that there is a book in the world that can never be read, and that is maternal love. If there is the most beautiful scenery in the world, it is maternal love!
5. Warm moments
Start: warmth is the first ripple on the river in early spring; Warmth is the silver moonlight that fills the courtyard at night; Warmth is the glory of flying in the evening sky; Warmth is a touch of tenderness that makes your heart beat.
The end: I almost hid in my mother's arms and put on my clothes. I feel that my heart and my mother's heart are so close. I pushed the car with one hand and held my mother's arm with the other. A warm current came and stirred in my chest.
6. "A landscape painting"
Beginning: bright spring, walking late, wandering on the path of the small garden. The long path is full of the flowers of the past, bright and beautiful, like a shallow wave washed away the faint fragrance.
End: Spring, summer, autumn and winter, every season is a beautiful scenery that will stay in my heart for a long time.
Step 7
Beginning: Although the past has faded out of my youth, they always occupy my memory. In the long journey of life, every step I take is deeply imprinted in my heart.
End: Looking back suddenly, every footprint I stepped on has formed a beautiful scenic line. I am confident that I can take the fourth and fifth steps better. ...
8. Water the tree of literature
Beginning: Like a seed brought by spring breeze, it wants to be with the earth, so it lives in the center of the earth; Like xia yang's warm desire to be with the earth, it polished the cicada; Just like the expectation floating in the autumn night, it wants to be with the earth, so it is intoxicated with the tenderness of the earth; Like the whiteness of silent winter snow, it wants to be with the earth, so it dresses the earth as pure as ice.
Literature is synonymous with "wisdom" and has its tender side, which makes me determined to live and die with it.
End: I, like the seed of spring, want to be buried in literature; I like xia yang's enthusiasm and want to polish the singing skills of literature; I like the expectation of autumn leaves and want to indulge in literature; I like the whiteness of winter snow and want to dress up as a literary color.
9. "My season is my master"
Beginning: Looking up at the sky in the winter sunshine. When I flashed in front of my eyes, I felt that there were large pieces of flowers in the sunny sun, and then large pieces of flowers faded. Close your eyes, countless times I feel that I am watching my flowers bloom and fall in my dreams. ...
Conclusion: I am the master of this season. With the trust of my parents, my youth is better.
Excellent examples at the beginning of college entrance examination composition
1. Questions start without boundaries.
The past is like smoke, and most of it fades away with the passage of time, but how can those eyes make me forget? -"Friends"
2. Repetition of parallelism and creation of melody
A friend is someone to whom I can offer sincere feelings; A friend is someone I can trust completely. Friends, share with me when you are happy, and walk with me when you are in danger. Life without friends is like life without sunshine. I have such a good friend. -"Friends"
3. Famous sayings lead the way, opening the door.
Bacon said: "A person who has no real friends can be called a poor person who lives in a lonely life forever." His words showed the importance of friends. Yes, if a person loses friendship, it is difficult for him to live in this world. -"Friends"
If you want to promote it, first restrain it and develop your appetite.
Alas, how can the teacher let me sit at the same table with him? She is the fiercest girl in my class! Because of this, everyone called her "tigress". -"deskmate"
Straight to the point, straight to the point
A Min and I have a special friendship ―― my deskmate for three years in junior high school. I have a lot to say to her. -"deskmate"
6. Very vivid and vivid.
She is really ugly: yellow and thin face; Sharp chin; Under the almost invisible eyebrows, a pair of long and narrow eyes; The nose is flat and big; A serrated tooth, slightly yellow ... alas! Needless to say, her appearance really doesn't deserve such a beautiful name-Zhu Lili. -"deskmate"
7. Natural explanation, quoted as follows.
At the beginning of the new semester, I noticed a problem: there are 33 boys and 27 girls in our class, just one more boy at a table, and so are the girls. When a boy and a girl sit at the same table, there is bound to be a crisis. But I never imagined that this crisis would come to me. -"deskmate"
8. Set contradictions and be fascinating
"I can't believe this, you have lived in this class for more than two years, and you will have no feelings for this collective? ..... "This is what teacher Chen said to me this morning. I looked at teacher Chen's angry eyes, and tears of injustice swirled in my eyes. I said psychologically, "Mr. Chen, you misunderstood ... how can I not love our class?"
9. Contrast and highlight key points
As time goes on, many people are gradually forgotten by me. However, there are such a pair of eyes, a voice and a figure, which still haunt my mind for a long time. -"Friends"
10. Flashback to the beginning to attract readers.
When we left the national defense education school by bus, I don't know why, but tears actually swirled in our eyes. Is it nostalgia? Do you want to stay in that bitter but tired but energetic life, or do you want to stay in that harsh but sincere and kind soldier, our instructor? -"Friends"
Skills of dealing with the ending of college entrance examination composition
Tip 1: echo from beginning to end and highlight the main idea
(1) It is said that the ship of life can't live without an ideal sail. It is said that the ideal of life is for the ideal life, and the happiest time in the ideal life is the flower season of dreams.
At the end of the flower season, I hope I can always remember the good words of the sages: the ship of life cannot be separated from the ideal sail. The ideal of life is for the ideal life. (Selected from the full text of "Flower Season with Dreams" in Huzhou and Jingzhou senior high school entrance examinations)
Tips: Echo from beginning to end is one of the most practical methods in examination room writing. Generally, the author puts forward the center of the article at the beginning, and then emphasizes it again at the end, taking care of the beginning, so as to make the center of the article stand out clearly. You see, in the above example, the little author used the way of echoing from beginning to end, and highlighted the theme of the article with beautiful poetic language-the happiest time in an ideal life is the flower season of dreams.
(1) has a kind of brilliance that hangs over the spiritual home of the Chinese nation; There is a flame that dances on the Olympic Mountain of the national soul; There is a kind of flame that warms the distant feelings of civilization, and that is friendliness!
(End) We can't lose confidence in fighting ugliness because of repeated injuries, because we need to protect our spiritual fire-friendliness! (selected from the full text of "Fire of Guardian Spirit" in Henan senior high school entrance examination)
Tips: This is the beginning and end of an argumentative essay in the examination room. Compared with the previous example, this example is concise and vivid. Put forward an argument at the beginning and get to the point quickly. The ending is repeated, echoing the beginning and strengthening the argument.
Tip 2: Speak from the heart and appeal for the sake of appeal.
Let's all take action to bring love to others, to those children who are out of school, to those lonely old people … to everyone around us. When you give your love to others, you also get great happiness. I believe that as long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a beautiful world. (From the full text of "Bringing Love to Others" in Jingzhou, Hubei Province)
2 1 century, we are the spring of the motherland. We are not our parents, but our enthusiasm is our character. We don't need to abide by those rules and regulations, break the old rules and regulations, let the fire of passion in our hearts burn more fiercely, string our laughter and love together, and let the whole world be shrouded in love. Laugh as much as you want, cry hysterically if you want, don't suppress yourself, don't let that old concept bind you, don't change yourself casually, please remember my famous saying: "I am me, give me a little sunshine, and it will be so brilliant." (Selected from the full text of "Give a little sunshine so brilliant" in the senior high school entrance examination in Fujian Province)
Tips: The composition in the examination room pays attention to sincere feelings, and it is necessary to write your own call for truth, goodness and beauty, and lash out at the false and ugly. This kind of emotion is not limited to oneself, but also can be a sincere call at the end of the article, calling on everyone to pursue truth, goodness and beauty together and lash out at the false, evil and ugly together. The above little author sincerely calls, and every word is heartfelt, which shows his yearning for a better future. In the second paragraph, the little author spoke enthusiastically, with full personality and undisguised expression. He issued a sincere call to all his peers, effectively highlighting the theme and giving readers a strong spiritual shock.
Tip 3: Ask questions skillfully and introduce deep thinking.
Natural color, natural fragrance, natural taste and natural beauty all come from nature. Nature is great. It's amazing. It is so close to life, so tight. Tasting nature is not the same as tasting life.
Tips: A good article, carefully chosen, has endless implications, should be philosophical and enlightening. Just like enjoying a beautiful piece of music, although the music is over, the lingering sound leaves endless charm. You see, in the above paragraph, the author skillfully asks questions at the end, which makes readers think and deepens the meaning of the article. It embodies the profundity and uniqueness of the author's thinking.
Different words have different influences, different angles have different horizons, different ha ha mirrors have different images, different moods have different actions, different flowers have different scents and shapes, and different evaluations make children have different fates. Why do you want to let your narrow perspective unfairly evaluate and hurt a person, why do you want to put out the candlelight in the wind, and why do you want all children to become a model without personality carved in a mold? (selected from the full text of the senior high school entrance examination in Hubei Province, "I in the Haha Mirror")
Tips: At the end of this paragraph, I would like to express my views on the teacher's comments. First of all, I use the form of parallelism to explain that every student has his own personality, and teachers don't have to erase students' personality. Finally, it ends with a question to inspire people to think and deepen the connotation of the article.
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1. Snowflakes dancing in the strong wind and dead leaves slowly dance together, so there are crisp snowflakes falling, and the empty streets are full of tender feelings dormant in the cold winter. Don't complain that winter is so ruthless, and lonely flying gulls are scattered all over the sky. There is still a silent warmth in my heart, but when everything disappears instantly, I can only close my eyes and watch silently in the snow season. When I reached out my cold hand and scooped up the slightly cold snowflake, I suddenly found the footsteps of my dreams turning back in the scattered fine snow. And when I put my hand over my eyes and let go, I saw scattered snowflakes falling in front of my eyes. I think this may be a memory left by winter. Snow is the beauty given by winter, and scattered snowflakes are the loneliness to escape in the cold wind, but I miss you and let the snowflakes take me away to tell you.
2. It snowed all night in other places. The long-lost gong rang again, and the willow tree turned from snow to stone and looked out from the railing. Is it the sorrow that comes through hard work? Is Liu Mei locked up? Or do you miss the crossing on a snowy night? Looking out of the window, staring at the desolation of the years, the meteor crossed the sky, leaving a lonely arc, and the smoke in the world of mortals drifted by, leaving a touch of shade. Butterflies across the flying flowers, butterflies around the sea, clear sky in Wan Li, wiping away tears and accumulating feelings for a long time, just like this snowflake. I can't sleep when I look at the sleepless snow, knowing that endless love is boundless, passers-by are in a hurry, always shallow, and there is no way. The curtain of dreams, how can snow confuse people? Miss, rolling in, snow, falling down, far away, you, this snow, I still miss you.
I like snow. I like these white and shy elves and this pure and pollution-free world, so I rushed to the window, pushed it open, took a deep breath and let my heart feel the smell of snow first. It snows again. It has been a whole spring and autumn since the last snowy day. I want to return to the jade world, but I have to wait patiently for a year. I hope that the longer I wait, the more I will gain, and I will not waste my heart.
4, catkin-like snow, reed-like snow, light smoke-like snow, circulation, chasing, spotless when coming, not surprised when falling. One hexagonal flower after another, beautifully carved, without any repetition. Carve jade with powder, but which artist can design such delicate lines? Who can carve such exquisite handicrafts? I'd rather believe that this is the tears of the fairy in the heavenly palace than the masterpiece of nature!
5. The snowflake falls gently again and falls on the shoulder. How did nature create them? It's so touching. I couldn't help but reach out and want to see what kind of posture these six-petal crystal flowers are, but unexpectedly they disappeared in my palm and slipped through my fingers. No matter how gorgeous it was, it could not escape the clutches of death.
6. Snow is sprinkled on the earth, in dark corners, and in all places where white is needed. Snowflakes fall like flowers, not like fairies. They danced with noble bodies and flew out of the sky screen with deep chill. Every landing is a warm hug and kiss to the earth. Maybe she doesn't want to disturb the people who are sleeping, and always falls to the ground gently and comes to the world silently.
Recommended at the beginning and end of excellent composition for senior high school entrance examination.
1, every time I go back to my hometown, a smiling face blooms at you. Rhubarb dog, in front of my neighbor's house, always walks on the path not far from my hometown with his tail up. She looked up, and my grandparents were already standing on the stone steps and smiling. At this time, I can't help but have an impulse to go home and spread out warmly ... playing marbles with my brothers, who always let me.
A mountain behind that village, a stream in front of it, bamboo forests on that mountain and fish swimming in the stream are all the aura of this beautiful hometown. What can be more luxurious than being a fellow villager all your life? If a wanderer comes home and steps on the soft soil, it seems to be hiding in the arms of his hometown, which is very gentle. The familiar barking of dogs and birds can also make a strong man cry three feet. Those who have been depressed for too long, my hometown can finally share our worries.
The cold wind that cleans the soul sweeps away the noise of the city, and what follows is no longer endless rhythm, but a silence that can only be found in memories. I am running in this quiet and harmonious "dream" with the expectation in my heart, and the "fiery" in my heart has not broken this unique silence. Take a deep breath of this fresh air, and a kind of tranquility will be washed away from your heart. Looking at me running, I want to see if I have reached my heart. But I can't see anything, as if I were shrouded in something ... I suddenly realized that "the authorities are fascinated." Being in the beautiful scenery of this hometown, but suddenly I don't know, it must be this beautiful scenery. This scene has been exciting and intoxicating!
The river in front of and behind the house always flows quietly. The water plants on both sides of the house swayed gently with the breeze, and the afternoon before night became lively. Laughter and laughter are also rippling along the river. The small dirt road in front of the door is always mixed and can't be done for a long time. When I opened the door in the morning, the fog suddenly poured into the house, and the whole hometown became a faint ink painting, so hazy that I could even melt my heart together. When the sun slowly clears the fog, a layer of water drops falls on the leaves, which is another hometown like water.
When I was a child, every time I went back to my hometown, I always saw the dense tree-lined path from a distance. On a foggy morning, my father rode a car and drove me back and forth on the path. I reached out my little hand and brushed the treetops. The cold fog wetted my fingertips and I took a deep breath. The faint earthy smell of my hometown mixed with wet water vapor got into my throat and cooled my heart. The osmanthus tree behind the house is always faint and fragrant. After August, it will bloom with a golden smile and quietly send intoxicating fragrance to thousands of families, so the whole hometown is infatuated and dreamy. ...