(1) Decompose the central argument into several sub-arguments, and the relationship between these sub-arguments is from shallow to deep, from simple to complex. Such as "not only ... but also" and "except" can be used for interlayer transition, and at the same time, it can reflect the progressive relationship between layers.

Example: dissect yourself strictly.

1, to make continuous progress, we must ruthlessly "dissect ourselves".

2. Discuss how to "dissect" yourself.

(1) to have self-knowledge. (This is the premise of "dissecting" yourself. If you don't know where the "disease" is, you can't go under the knife. )

It is not enough to be self-aware, but also to be brave in self-criticism. This is the way to dissect yourself. Without surgery, there is no way to "get sick". )

The courage of self-criticism comes from the pursuit of truth and lofty belief. (This is the key to dissecting yourself. If you don't master the operating rules, the knife will not open well, and it will be difficult to really "get sick". )

(2) Arrange the argument structure according to the idea of "asking questions, analyzing problems and solving problems", that is, answer three questions around the central argument: ① what, ② why and ③ how to do it.

Exodus: Only concentration can lead to success.

-thoughts on reading Qiu Yi.

Reading Mencius Qiu Yi is quite touching. Two people learn chess, and one person concentrates on it; Although one person thought it was a swan, he tried to shoot it with his bow. The result can be imagined. In fact, this story tells us a seemingly simple and profound truth: you should concentrate on everything, otherwise you will accomplish nothing.

Madame Curie is the only woman who won the Nobel Prize twice so far. When she was doing research on extracting radium, she didn't realize that her classmates had built more than a dozen chairs behind her. It's amazing to be so absorbed in doing things. It can be said that there may be many factors for Madame Curie's success, but her dedication is one of the most important factors for her success.

Ouyang Xiu, a great writer in the Northern Song Dynasty, wrote many poems and songs based on "three aspects": immediately, on the pillow and in the toilet. Zhu, a famous scholar in the Southern Song Dynasty, demanded that he should have "three things" in his study: heart, eyes and mouth. Zhu Guangqian, a famous modern aesthetician, demands his "three principles": this body, this time and this place. Here, "three highs", "three highs" and "three principles" all have a common feature, that is, singleness and concentration, that is, undivided attention. We can imagine, if they don't have such a dedicated personality, can they become university experts?

Maybe we all remember the story of "kitten fishing" that we heard when we were children: when the kitten was fishing, it caught crickets for a while, planted butterflies for a while, and finally didn't even catch a fish. In fact, this story illustrates the same truth as Mencius and Qiu Yi: If you don't concentrate on your work, you will accomplish nothing.

So, how can we concentrate? I think, first of all, we should love this cause. Otherwise, there is no motivation, let alone concentration. Athletes fall, roll and climb day after day and year after year in training, sweating like rain and getting hurt all over. Without passion for what you are doing, it is difficult to do it wholeheartedly, let alone stand on the podium of the world champion. Secondly, we should have the spirit of perseverance without fear of setbacks. After becoming a musician, Beethoven lost his hearing, but he "grabbed his destiny by the throat" and worked tirelessly with amazing perseverance, so he was praised as a generation of "musicians". Without this concentration on music and melody, I might have been lying in an easy chair enjoying myself.

Today, the world we live in is colorful and the environment we live in is full of temptations. We should love this cause in everything we do, and have the spirit of not being afraid of setbacks and perseverance. We can only succeed if we concentrate on it.

Comments:

In the form of hierarchical structure, the author first puts forward the argument that "you should concentrate on everything, otherwise you will accomplish nothing", then analyzes the necessity of "concentration" and gives a comprehensive solution with clear hierarchy.

(3), in view of some bad phenomena, analyze their harm, dig their roots, and point out the solutions to the problems. That is, the format of "releasing phenomenon-analyzing harm-digging root".

Example:

Give love some space.

Senior 2 (4) Wang Zhen

I have heard such a story. A girl about to enter the marriage hall asked her mother, "How can we make love last forever?" How to keep your lover's heart? "Mother was speechless. She bent down silently and picked up a handful of sand from the sand. Her hands spread evenly, and the sand stood firmly in her palm, without leaking a drop. Suddenly, my mother clenched her hands and held the sand in her palm. Many grains of sand slipped from her fingers. When she opened her palm to her daughter again, there was not much sand in her palm. She looked at her surprised daughter and said, "Give the person you love and the person who loves you a free space. Too much love and pressure will kill love. ".

After listening to this story, I pondered for a long time. There is nothing wrong with love, but the way of love is different. There is no denying that some ways of love can only bring imprisonment and harm to the people you love.

The newspaper has reported the story of "Giant Baby" many times. A couple was very excited about having a child in middle age. I spoil my child and always let him sleep in the cradle. No matter how old he is, I care for him like a baby. Unexpectedly, a sudden car accident took the lives of the couple. When the police walked into their house, they were stunned by a "giant baby" lying in a giant cradle, and they didn't know what to do with this "giant baby" that was already a young man. He can neither walk nor eat by himself, and his self-care ability is zero. He doesn't know how to spend the rest of his life. It is understandable that the couple love their child, but they spoil him so much that they ruin his brilliant and beautiful life. Children, like beautiful flowers, are cultivated in a greenhouse. Although I escaped the wind and rain, I became more delicate and was hurt by carelessness. Thank you. However, wild roses that have really experienced wind and rain can stand firm in harsh environment, often unbeaten and colorful. Then, parents who love their children deeply, why don't they give their children a space and an opportunity to fly freely through the storm for nine days?

It is said that eagles nest on cliffs. First, they spread some thorns in the nest, and then they spread a lot of soft hay to avoid hurting the young eagle. When the baby eagle grows up, it gradually eats hay. The baby eagle naturally can't stand the sting and retreats to the nest. That's why Kitty Hawk pushed her children off the cliff and forced them to fly by themselves. The desire to survive made the eagle flap its wings and take off, thus learning to fly. Can we say that mother eagle doesn't love baby eagle? Don't! She likes children. It is because of love that they have to stand on their own feet as soon as possible in a cruel living environment and fly far away.

Someone once said: "Freedom is the air of love, imprisonment will suffocate love, giving is the rain of love, and flooding will drown love." Don't burn a flower with a warm heart, because it will wither, and don't exert unbearable force on the strings, because it will break. Give love a little space, and let the person you love grow up healthily under the nourishment of love!