Read the following materials and write as required: (60 points)
People who have the experience of crossing the river will always grab a stone and throw it into the water to measure the water depth before wading. The higher the splash, the louder the sound and the shallower the river. A river that doesn't splash much water and can't hear much underwater sound must be unfathomable.
The Yellow River didn't roar. There is a section of mud in the middle reaches of the Yellow River that looks like stagnation. However, even the Yellow River boatmen who have struggled with rapids dare not put their boats here, because the middle of the river is flowing and no one can tell how deep it is.
Static is appearance and posture; Flowing, showing inner strength; Deep means implicit and profound. The depth of still water shows the profundity of life. This is amazing and imaginative. ...
Please write an article based on the above materials, with your own ideas and title.
Requirements: (1) Style is not limited, except poetry. (2) Not less than 800 words.
A, material understanding:
This is a material composition. The given material has three sections. The first section starts with the experience of crossing the river and wading, and compares the shallow river with the deep river, which actually affirms the profound and broad attitude towards life. The second section compares the external calm of the Yellow River with the internal flow and depth, and thinks that we should not only look at the surface, but also see the internal flow and depth. The third part is a comment on the text, which implies the idea of the article.
Silence can be understood as silence, tranquility, calmness, calmness, silence, stillness, calmness and so on. ("Calm" and "Modesty" belong to the edge ball. Good language skills will be degraded. )
"Flow" can be an internal vitality, internal motivation and internal energy.
Depth means profundity, profundity, solid foundation and profound cultivation.
"Quiet, flowing and deep" advocates introversion, unobtrusiveness and richness, which is the traditional demeanor of China people.
"Quiet, flowing and deep" is the dialectical unity of exterior and interior, which is divided into two aspects: "Quiet" is an aspect that must be involved; On the other hand, "flow" and "depth" can involve both or only one of them.
Second, the composition topic selection:
Power erupts in silence/wise men are silent/still water flows deeply/things are moistened silently/life is deep/heart is like a mountain/peace is extraordinary/
Learn not to show your face/show your face/show the brilliance of life/unpredictable people/hidden love/silence/silence is the power of gold/stillness/depth/stillness, flow, depth/life needs to flow still water/introversion/stillness like water/stillness is quiet/modest, and the way to progress/extroversion/introversion/stillness is dynamic/quiet. Less publicity/quietness is also strength/making life profound/low-key/quiet and far-reaching/inner strength/containing but not revealing/the quiet beauty/depth/poetry of a silent dog is a kind of beauty/quiet life/quiet life/hiding its light/quiet explosion/quiet showing the true colors of heroes/increasing the depth of life/flowing life/beauty comes from. Profound/enriching life/frivolous introversion/broad life/stopping water/learning to hide/interpreting strength in introversion/flowing life/quiet and profound/keeping a low profile, blockbuster/quiet, the source of motion/deep is a kind of beauty/quiet and silent/quiet greatness/crouching tiger, hidden dragon/seeing the essence through phenomena/excavating deep strength in silence/reading me.
Third, Fan Wenxuan commented:
still waters run deep
Quiet is an outward gesture, showing a calm and steady attitude towards life; Flow shows the power of memory, which is amazing; Deep means implicit and profound. The deep still water shows the profoundness of life.
Let peace become our attitude towards life, enrich our hearts and strive to make us kind. Mr Ji Xianlin, 96, has been teaching in Peking University for many years and has made great achievements in many fields. And he is also such a benevolent person, and his heart is always in the East. Mr Ji Xianlin was hit by the Cultural Revolution, but he was not depressed. On the contrary, he faced all this with a calm mind.
During this period, he secretly translated the Indian epic "Moloana" and completed the work "Cowshed Miscellanies". This condensed his many thoughts on human nature and enriched his heart. He once said, "Don't forget your conscience even in the most difficult time", and you will know the depth and breadth of the old gentleman's heart.
People who know are happy, and people who are kind live long. Mr. Ji Xianlin's kind face makes people feel peaceful, while his heart makes people feel stronger. He is like a pool of still water, but he has a flowing heart, which moves Kyushu.
Let the inner flow become our positive and enterprising force and make unremitting efforts to achieve great things. "The road is long, and I will go up and down!" Perhaps this sentence is more appropriate to sum up Mr. Ye Duzheng. Mr. Ye Duzheng is a researcher of China Academy of Sciences and one of the few masters in the field of international meteorology. He is a peace-loving man. Although he has made great achievements, he never shows himself. What helped him achieve a lot was his inner determination and belief. Mr. Ye Duzheng has always cherished such a lofty ambition: Let foreigners join us!
This ambition made him always tireless, searching up and down, and became his continuous enterprising force, so he won the highest national science and technology award in 2005.
For him, winning a prize is not the most important thing, what is important is to contribute to the country. Mr. Ye Duzheng's inner strength touched the whole country and even the whole world, making people see the profundity of a life.
Let profundity become the highest realm of our life, take it as our goal in life, and strive to achieve it. Profound people often show touching charm. In them, we can see the strength and breadth of life. Please let our external peace promote the internal flow and realize the depth of life.
This paper briefly reviews the theme with strict deduction, clear hierarchy and wonderful examples. At the beginning, we get the full text by grasping the words "static", "flow" and "depth". Then we interpret "static" by taking Ji Xianlin as an example to explain "let static become our attitude towards life and enrich our hearts". Then we interpret "flow" by taking Mr. Ye Duzheng as an example to explain "let internal flow become our positive and enterprising force". Finally, we interpret "deep" and "let deep become us". This is a rare masterpiece and was awarded full marks.
Still water depth (53+5=58 for the first category)
Still water is deep, still and far, long and endless, deep and wide. The great realm of life is nothing more than this.
Which philosopher said that the sea is the widest loneliness. Although the waves are thrilling, the calm before the waves is unparalleled. The stream is easy to exhaust, but it is too lively; The quiet place of the sea just shapes its back into eternal blue.
As the wind and cloud changed, job seekers came out of the dust. However, a straw hat, regardless of the pole, Zhuangzi's silent back left the world with infinite thinking.
There is a pool of water, a tree and a person. That man, quiet in the wind, turned into a tree, waiting for a clear water alone, leaving the struggle for fame and fortune behind him. The breeze is bright and the moon is quiet at night, and Zhuangzi deduces the quiet realm to the extreme.
Not disturbed by the secular, in silence to achieve inner purity and cleanliness. This is the wisdom of silence.
Xiangjiang River is far away, simple and peaceful. The sound of diligence breeds the tranquility of the mountain. A Saxifraga sang in a dream, and the song drifted farther and farther with the running water. ...
Growing up on this long-flowing river, and you, from the text! Walking in the Xiangjiang River, is the ever-changing voice of the clear moon also integrated into your soul?
In that era of biased aesthetic views, people held your fresh and simple words above the sky and threw them on the ground, so capricious and casual. You are gloomy but unwilling to be lonely.
Apply talent to the study of ancient Chinese costumes. Here you have opened up a new field that no one can match. As a result, those comments finally disappeared.
You are like Xiangjiang River. You have chosen the road and the flow, and there is no end. Why worry about your gentle and elegant talent?
The inner strength is infinite and can flow calmly. This is the wisdom of water flow.
It is also a crescent moon and a pool of clear water. At the foot of Huishan, the blind man is playing the huqin attentively.
A man is thinner than a string and his eyes are deeper than the water.
When the water in the pool is deep and silent, the deep music of erhu bypasses the empty valley and sinks to the bottom of the pool-just like your lamenting life experience.
A Bing, how many snowy nights, you and your wife walked through the deserted street, and Hu Qin groaned behind you; How many lonely days, you sit alone by the spring, thinking deeply about the past and the unknown future ... At this time, a cavity of sadness condenses in the music, the deep spring is with you, and the music is with you, so your deep eyes are shining with firmness and hope. ...
Without considering life experience and fate, we can deeply understand the value of life. This is "deep" wisdom.
Spring in Pushui, Xiangjiang and Huishan ... The still water is deep, showing great wisdom in life!
This paper briefly reviews the theme and gives accurate examples. What is particularly commendable is the beautiful and concise language, which is full of poetry and philosophy, with touching charm and touching power.
Pursue profundity (57 in the first category)
There is always a feeling of pain in my heart when I read the life course of a match with my heart. I have always stubbornly believed that there is a fearless and happy burning heart in the depths of the flame burning quietly on the matchstick. So I try to understand why I am afraid of matches: is it its obscure dedication? Is it quiet?
It turned out that none of them were. It's just what it looks like to say it's unknown and quiet, but what I understand is the flame spirit dancing like silk on the matchstick-from the moment of birth to the moment of extinction, that wisp of smoke danced silently all its life, but it wrote its profound life significance with the whole life course! Knowing that the outcome is pain or destruction, but so fearless in faith; Knowing that a breeze is enough to kill it instantly, it still dances quietly, showing a kind of inner happiness ... so fearless and happy, it seems that its life is quietly burning just to pursue a profound meaning of life.
Perhaps compared with the long history and the vast universe, human life is as small and short as a flame. Burning, there will be wind and rain, there will be an end, so some people are afraid of wind and rain and stagnate, and some people look at the end passively, but the Dance Academy has abandoned its profound pursuit of life in a corner, but this is a beacon to guide the direction of life! When those souls who have lost their strength and depth are silent in the wind and rain one day or extinguished in their hearts, they will disappear into the air like a wisp of smoke, leaving no trace of existence in time and space.
I finally understand why I am so fascinated by the quietly burning flame and so pious.
Flame is destined to be an invisible but profound soul. We don't know what it announced when it was born, but we know how it struggled to bear the weight and depth of life. Without this persistent pursuit of deep life, how can we burn happily and fearlessly? Where is the lofty realm of life? The appearance and posture of life can always be static, but the pursuit of profundity can make it eternal in a specific time and space. Just like the spirit of dancing, it burns itself in silence and all the chaos.
Standing on the coast of history, the sages showed the profound connotation of the philosophy of "still water flows deep" with actions: Sima Qian wrote books with forbearance, Hemingway insisted on writing alone, and Qian Zhongshu devoted himself to research ... and saw profundity in peace!
The game is just an illusion, but we are facing real life. In the burning, there will be wind and rain, and there will be an end, but as long as we pursue the depth of life peacefully, even if we sink in the wind and rain and go out at the end, our hearts can burn fearlessly and happily.
A brief comment on a flower, a world, a leaf and a bodhi. Thinking about the true meaning of life and pursuing the value of life in the burning of a match, I dare not say that the author has the wisdom of Buddhism, but the ideological depth of "standing on the coast of history and tracing the ditch of history" really stands out among the candidates, so the article can stand out.