Another example is writing a class teacher. You may not be able to grasp the characteristics for a while. But if you compare the head teacher with other teachers in other disciplines, you will immediately find the characteristics of the head teacher, either strict, funny, lively or approachable ... If you want to write about your father, compare your father with your mother, and the characteristics will be easy to grasp.
There are ugly ones, handsome ones, tall ones, short ones, black ones and white ones, all of which are contrasted, and only by comparison can we see them. If there was only one person in the world, none of the above would exist. Therefore, comparison is the most important way to grasp the characteristics of things (including people).
When a classmate was writing about my group leader, he didn't know where to start at the moment, saying that the characteristics of the group leader were not outstanding. The teacher said, "There are four group leaders in our class. Compare and see what's the difference between your team leader and the other three? " He blinked and said, "There are four group leaders and three women. Only our group leader is a man, and our group leader is tall and thin ..." He said a lot in one breath. The teacher said, "This is mainly a matter of appearance. Then compare it from personality, hobbies, work and so on. " This classmate also said many characteristics. What "cheerful personality", "responsible work", and so on. The teacher asked, "Can you give me an example?" Let the facts speak for themselves. "This classmate gave several vivid examples. The teacher said happily, "look, didn't you catch the characteristics of your team leader?" "What's so hard about it? Write! Writing it down is a good article! "
Remember: comparison is a good way to grasp the characteristics of things.
Why do you want to describe the appearance of the characters? Describing the appearance of a character is to show the spirit, character and quality of the character. Therefore, when describing a character's appearance, we must first make clear which aspect of the article is about spirit, character and quality, which is the main basis for deciding what to write and how to write it. In "Grandpa's Lesson", the sixth volume of Five-year Primary School Chinese, in order to show his father's spirit of loving labor, diligence and thrift, the author firmly grasped the frugal clothes and healthy faces of the characters and wrote: "He is wrapped in a white towel on his head, wearing an old sheepskin jacket, with a tobacco pouch tied around his waist, and his black and red face is matched with a silver beard, just like an old fairy in a fairy tale." At first glance, I know that this is a simple and tough image of the old farmer. Some physical features that have little to do with this, such as the height of the figure, the height of the bridge of the nose, the size of the mouth and so on. , is omitted.
2. How to grasp the main points of writing? 1. refining the theme is to use various ways of thinking to dig deep into the internal meaning of the article materials, thus forming unique ideas or things. The theme of refining should be: 1, based on all materials, and extract the correct ideas from all the materials we have. 2. Explore the essence of things, abandon appearances, explore the inner meaning of things, and reflect the essence and regularity of things. The author should stand at the height of the times, gain insight into the essence of things and deepen the depth of excavation; The author should also consider the expressive functions of different articles such as narration, discussion, explanation and lyricism, and explore the essence of things from different sides. 3. Choose a novel and unique angle to explore the novelty of things. A new angle refers to a new observation angle (exploring the theme from different sides) and a new understanding angle (expressing the author's unique point of view).
Second, materials are the basis for refining and forming the theme. The theme is refined and determined in the process of analyzing the research materials. The material is primary and the theme is secondary. 2. Materials are the means to express the deep theme, and the theme is expressed or proved by certain materials. 3. The choice and organization of materials are restricted by the theme. When the theme is not formed, the material plays a decisive role in the theme refining; Once the theme is determined, it becomes the most important basis for selecting or arranging materials. The choice, details and transformation of materials should obey the needs of expressing the theme and prevent the material from being out of touch with the theme.
Third, we should meet the needs of expressing the theme. The selection of materials serves to express the theme and cannot be divorced from or contradicted with the theme. 2. Be true and conclusive. The truth of materials refers to the truth in the strict sense and the truth in the essence of things. The authenticity of materials means that they are both accurate and appropriate. 3. Be typical. Typical materials are materials with unity of individuality and generality and unity of concreteness and universality. It is concrete and individual, and can reflect the essential characteristics and universal significance of similar things. 4. Be novel and vivid. The material strives for concrete images and intimate suspense, which is a little-known new discovery and adapts to the stylistic characteristics (the narrative material is concrete and infectious; Argumentative materials are general and logical; The description material should reveal the characteristics of the object.
When you get the topic, don't write it yet. You should look at the topic carefully first and understand the requirements of the topic accurately. Whether to write people or take notes; Is it a landscape or something; A diary or a letter? Whether it's reality or imagination ... if these are made clear, the composition will have a basic direction. Some topics are obvious, and you can see them at a glance by writing notes. Such as "My Mom" and "My Dear Teacher", you can tell at a glance that it was written by someone. Another example is "an unforgettable event" and "an event that happened during the summer vacation". You can tell it's a story at a glance. Another example is Beautiful River. You can tell at a glance that it's about the scenery. "Cute puppy", you can tell it's a thing at a glance. "A proposal" belongs to practical writing, and "I am in 22 1 1" belongs to imaginary writing. But some themes, such as "Winter Morning", can not only write scenery, but also record; On the way to school, you can not only write about what happened on the way to school, but also write about the ideological quality of the characters through what happened, that is, write about people.
3. When writing an essay about animals, we should grasp the characteristics. Squirrel is a beautiful little animal, which is very lovable. It has flexible limbs and quick movements. A pair of sparkling eyes are embedded in its delicate little face. Its taupe fur is as smooth as oil. A big furry tail is always upturned, which is especially beautiful. Squirrels like to jump around on branches. They are very clever. As long as someone touches the trunk, they hide under a few branches and even jump into other trees. On a sunny summer night, squirrels jump, scream and chase each other in the trees. They seem to be afraid of strong sunlight and often hide in their nests to enjoy the cool during the day. Only when the branches are blown by the wind will they fall to the ground, but they never go near people's houses. Squirrels like to live in tall old trees and often put their nests in the middle of tree forks. When they build a nest, they first move some twigs, stagger them together, then find some dry moss to spread on them, and then compact and flatten them. When the bird's nest is completed, they will add a cover to cover the whole bird's nest. In this way, they are not afraid of the wind and rain. They live in it with their children, which is warm and safe. Squirrels often eat pine nuts, hazelnuts and oak chestnuts, and sometimes they eat bird eggs. When they eat, they often sit upright on the branches, hold the branches with their front paws and send them to their mouths. In autumn, squirrels will store the winter food and stuff it into the gap of the old tree. The gap is full. In winter, they sometimes pry open the thick snow with their claws and look for food under the snow. Squirrels can eat meat, and the hair on their tails can be used to make brushes and clothes. Puppies and puppies are extremely vigilant. Their noses are so sensitive that they can smell things three miles away. When eating, they always bow their heads to smell.
It also has a pair of ears. Whenever it hears a special sound, its ears will always stand up and listen carefully to the sound outside! So people raise it to watch the gate. It is a loyal friend of human beings. This puppy has a big mouth and a row of white and sharp teeth in Zhang Kuan. It can kill a big mouse in one bite! This puppy has strong limbs. It runs fast. It can run two or three miles a minute! The puppy's eyesight is not very good, and he can only see a distance of about a mile.
So, why can it see clearly? Mainly look at its nose. The dog's claws are very sharp, and it won't be long before it can dig a big and round hole.
When the puppy was born, its hair was brown. When it grew up, it was no longer brown, but became dark yellow. This puppy has a very gentle personality.
If you treat it well, it will use your head and legs, as if it were coquetry to you; But if a stranger comes to his home, he will still bark and even jump on you and bite you. It's summer, and on a hot day, dogs can often be seen sticking out their tongues instead of sweating. The reason is simple, that's because the dog's sweat holes grow on the tongue.
Puppies are really worthy of love. It bought the rooster with real skill. I like my croaking cock very much. It has a crown like a torch on its head.
The feathers on his back are like wearing a crimson shiny coat. The belly feathers look like a golden shirt.
A pair of bright and flexible eyes and a sharp mouth, together with the most striking colored tail, look beautiful and powerful. The rooster stood on the platform in the morning and barked loudly, urging people to get up quickly.
Usually, roosters are experts at catching bugs! Although some bugs are alert, they can't escape the rooster's eyes as long as they move. Once, I saw a bug just crawling out of the grass under the tree for a walk, and the rooster found it.
I saw the little cock running under the tree quickly, and with its sharp and slender mouth, it caught the bugs at once, so all the bugs became a good meal for the little cock. Once when I came home from school, I saw the rooster scratching under the big tree in the yard. I quickly put down my schoolbag and grabbed a handful of rice for it to eat.
The rooster had a good time. I don't know whose rooster is coming to compete with the rooster for food. This angered the little cock, and he rushed up to fight with the big cock.
The rooster pounced on him, and the little rooster calmly fought and shrank from the rooster's tricks. Then, it immediately turned to the back of the rooster, suddenly jumped up, jumped on the back of the rooster, pecked its head, and made it bleed.
The cock ran away in pain. The cockerel won, holding his head high and sticking out his chest.
Look, you look very proud. I'm flattered. I especially like this beautiful and lovely little cock.
Little white pigs There are two little white pigs in my family. They are all white, and their big ears are like two powerful fans, flapping up and down; Long nose, a pair of round nostrils, like two small caves; There is a big mouth hidden under the nose. If you don't look carefully, you won't find a mouth under your nose. There are a pair of unpredictable little eyes and wrinkles on the nose, which really doesn't look good.
When the farm is busy, my mother works in the field and asks me to feed at home. I opened the door of the pigsty and put the prepared food in front of the pigsty. The greedy pigs have a keen nose. They smelled the smell a long time ago. Before I could pour the pig food into the bowl, they swarmed and spilled a pot full of pig food.
Pig food splashed on my face, trouser legs and coat, and I was so angry that I picked up a stick and wanted to hit them. But as soon as they raised the stick, they cried "wow", as if begging for mercy from me.
Looking at their poor appearance, I can't bear to let the stick fall again. The little white pig grew up and showed his true nature-gluttony and lethargy.
Whenever their mother feeds them, they gobble up, swallow the dates and keep humming. When I was full, I stood with a chubby belly, scraped the soil under my body with my feet and fell asleep.
Piggy always makes people angry when he comes to my house for the first time. Perhaps because of the unfamiliar environment, they bravely crossed the pigsty and ran out again and again, but the door was blocked so tightly that they could not get out of the second line of defense.
After a day or two, they will be honest, find a water nest, arch it with their mouths, and then lie in it, still splashing mud. Of course, the little white pig will also become a little mud pig.
4. Writers should grasp the characteristics of teachers who write about me.
My head teacher is also my Chinese teacher. Her name is Miss Huang. Miss Huang has a Zhang Yuanyuan face and big eyes. Love to laugh A pair of talking eyes shows that she is so approachable. But sometimes it is also very strict.
Miss Huang has been with us for a year, and what impressed me most is her rich classroom knowledge and her dedication to her job.
Miss Huang teaches us Chinese. I didn't answer until the fourth grade. At the beginning of the new semester, my mother met her when she took me to pay my tuition. She is our new teacher? I looked at her carefully and the teacher gave me a good impression. She said kindly, "Students, I will be in charge of Chinese teaching in your class from this semester. I hope we can support each other and cooperate with each other in the future. "
I used to be timid and never dared to raise my hand to speak. I was afraid to stand up when the teacher asked me to answer questions. I'm nervous when I talk. Later, Miss Huang found my problem, took the initiative to talk to me, explained and analyzed the reasons for my timidity, gave me encouragement, gave me opportunities, let me answer questions in every class, and looked at me with a smile. Mr. Huang cultivated my courage and ability. Then what I like better is that Mr. Huang gives me the greatest encouragement after answering the teacher's questions every time.
I like listening to Mr. Huang's lectures very much. Every time she speaks the text vividly, she can associate stories with each other, which is closely related to our life and study. From time to time, she will say some famous sayings, ancient poems and songs. Gradually, my oral English has improved.
I remember once at noon, Miss Huang had a terrible stomachache and took care of us in the canteen. The students asked the teacher to rest, and the teacher said to watch us eat well before leaving.
Miss Huang is a good teacher. Because of such a good teacher, our Chinese scores can rise rapidly, and our class has also been upgraded to an excellent class. Miss Huang, we love you forever!
5. How to grasp the characteristics of things and write a good composition (1) What are the characteristics of things? Everything is different from other things.
People's appearance, personality, thinking and quality are different, so are the appearance, color, structure and use of things. The differences mentioned above are all characteristics. When describing things, we must learn to grasp the characteristic description.
1, write a composition: you can observe a person's appearance, personality, quality and other characteristics.
People are different in appearance, clothes, figure, etc., as well as in personality and quality. When observing, we must find the most distinctive place of the characters, which is called grasping the characteristics.
For example, an essay begins like this: "As soon as I heard the deafening voices and laughter coming from the yard, I knew that my neighbor, Uncle Tian, had gone home from work." Look, what does this sentence say about Tian Shu? As can be seen from this sentence, Tian Shu is characterized by his loud voice, cheerful, optimistic and enthusiastic personality, and can take the initiative to say hello to others.
The author grasps the personality characteristics of the characters to observe and describe, and the characters are lifelike. When describing a character's appearance, we should grasp the most impressive and prominent features.
"Round face, watery eyes and black hair" are the same for men, women and children. If students carefully "capture" the appearance of the characters they write, they will find that there are no people with the same appearance in the world.
My classmate Cai Yu, my classmate, has black hair, two faint eyebrows and a pair of bright eyes. She is quiet and lovely. She has been my classmate since kindergarten and has become my close playmate.
There are many interesting stories between us. Let me tell you one. That was in the first grade. One day, I invited Cai Yu to my house to play. When we were playing, we accidentally dug out a beautiful picture album from a pile of old books. We are attracted by the beautiful pictures in the book, and every picture is vivid.
Cai Yu and I said in unison, "Let's draw, too." So we picked up a pen and paper and devoted ourselves to painting.
It was finished in a short time, and I felt that the painting was good, so I couldn't help feeling smug. I turned to look at Cai Yu's painting, which startled me. Is this painted by Cai Yu? I saw the "Lotus" jumping out of the paper. Compared with her, my painting is really a hundred thousand miles worse. Look at those lotus flowers, some are in bud; some are in full bloom, almost exactly the same as the real ones.
At this moment, Fang Wei is carefully tracing the lotus leaf, and a small drop of water on the lotus leaf seems to be rolling. "It's so well painted!" I can't help shouting and clapping.
Cai Yu was startled by my shouts. When her hands trembled, she drew a stroke on the picture. Shit! Due to my negligence, the painting that Cai Yu worked so hard to draw was ruined. Now that I am a "sinner", Cai Yu will definitely scold me like a dog.
What should I do? What should I do? I quickly apologized: "Sorry, sorry! I didn't mean to. " "I know, it doesn't matter. I just need to draw another one. "
To my surprise, Fang Wei spoke such a sentence with tolerance. Instead of blaming me, she comforted me. I quickly took another piece of paper and repainted Cai Yu happily.
After that, our relationship got better and better. I really want us to take the exam together: junior high school, high school, college, my mother, my mother has big eyes, red face, high nose and long hair, which is very beautiful.
My mother is very strict with my study. After finishing my homework every day, let me check it first, and then my mother will check it again.
From grade one to grade four, as long as my mother checked her homework, she never made any mistakes. There was something wrong with my homework once, and I couldn't do it.
My mother patiently explained it to me for more than two hours until I got it. My mother is strict with me not only in my study, but also in my life.
When I was sick, my mother brought me water and medicine, stayed by the bed and never complained. Rain or shine, always send me to and from school.
This is my mother, an ordinary and serious good mother. I am proud of having such a good mother! My father is a very honest man, with a height of 1.68 meters, a little dark skin and a little white hair on his head, but not much; Dad always watches TV with a pair of 205-degree glasses when he comes home from work every day, because dad is nearsighted. Because my father was more playful when he was a child and didn't pay attention to his eyes, he was nearsighted.
My father is very kind to people. He likes me very much. He is also very strict with me. Anger is like a volcanic eruption. I couldn't write any words well, so he asked me to write one. When I do my homework, if my posture is not correct, my father will say to me, "If my posture is not correct, I will hunch over when I grow up." Although my father is strict with me, I can still understand his strict meaning. My father was strict with me and gave me good grades. Here, I want to say to my father: "Dad, I can understand your wishes. I will definitely get better grades next semester and won't let you down. "
My dearest father. The person I am most grateful to is my mother.
My mother is fat, fair-skinned, with a round face and big eyes. She is not very beautiful but dignified and generous, and often has a smile on her face. She wears simple and elegant clothes, and no one will notice her when she walks in the street.
I am very grateful to my good mother. She gets up early every day to make breakfast for me and then send me to school.
In order to let me learn more knowledge, my mother sent me to Guzheng Music School to learn Guzheng knowledge from my second grade, and insisted on sending teachers to learn Guzheng every week for several years. Once, it was the day of guzheng class, and suddenly there was a strong wind and heavy rain.
I don't think my mother will come back to pick me up for the guzheng class today, so I walked home with my classmates, and suddenly a familiar figure appeared in front of me. Ah! That's mom.
I saw her hair stuck to her face by the rain. When my mother saw me, she forgot to wipe the rain off her face, so she put on my raincoat and accompanied me to class.
Motherly love is like an umbrella, sheltering me from the wind and rain.
6. Composition life is colorful, and so are the people in life. In daily life, students will meet many people, especially those they are familiar with. Some of them are hardworking and some are lazy; Some are everywhere for others, and some are always for themselves; Some people are extravagant, others are thrifty ... writing down different types of people around them in words is writing people's compositions. To write a person's composition, it is necessary to express his thoughts, feelings and personality characteristics through the character's language behavior, so as to make it vivid on paper.
First, grasp the typical examples of characters.
The ideological quality and personality characteristics of characters are reflected by concrete examples, so writers must grasp the typical examples that can best express the quality of characters to write, so as to make people convincing and vivid. What can best explain the ideological quality of characters and show the truth of the world belongs to the category of typical cases. The "vigorous" events are typical examples, and so are the trivial things that seem ordinary but actually contain the unusual qualities of the characters.
As the saying goes, "a drop of water can reflect the brilliance of the sun." Writing people through typical examples is one of the basic elements of writing people. Without typical examples, the article is unremarkable, and "writing people" has no practical significance. The purpose of applying typical cases is to illustrate something. Therefore, when students apply typical cases, they must be combined with the actual life, and they can't make things out of nothing.
Second, show the personality of the characters.
1. "Words come from the heart." A person's language expression is a mirror to show his personality characteristics. As Mr. Lu Xun said, a person's language "enables readers to see people with words." Therefore, a writer must attach importance to language description, choose representative sentences to describe his inner world and express his personality and thoughts. Language should conform to the identity of the characters. The real language of the characters in the composition is particularly important, and you must never "speak it out" by imagination.
2. Action description shows the role. In addition to language, human behavior is also dominated by people's thoughts and feelings. Action description plays a very important role in portraying characters and expressing their qualities. To describe the behavior of a character, we must carefully observe the movements of the character and carefully choose the most accurate and appropriate words. A description of behavior and action may make the characters have personality. In the article "Dad's Flowers Fall", when I was bedridden, my father stood in front of the bed and stared at me. A word "stare" shows the severity of his father, and the following story can be imagined.
Third, be good at association.
People who want to write true feelings are first of all "true". To make people * * *, it is necessary to observe and analyze the characters written. How to observe and analyze? In addition to judging the language, behavior and appearance of the object, sometimes it is necessary to scrutinize his inner activities. Only in this way can we consistently portray the character.
In the articles we have read, we often see such words: "I think ..." "He is thinking in his head ..." "The teacher's words remind me again" "My heart is like knocking over a five-flavor bottle, so let's come together ...". These are descriptions of the inner world of the characters. With psychological description, the characters live and the articles live.
Fourth, vivid image, write the characteristics of the characters.
Appearance description, also called portrait description, refers to the description of the figure's posture, appearance, clothes and expression. Only by grasping the characteristics of the characters and writing their appearance well can the characters be vividly displayed to readers. Generally, we should grasp: highlight the mental outlook of the characters; Focus on writing the personality characteristics of the characters; Grasping the characteristics to describe can dynamically express the characteristics of the characters; Pay attention to the description order.
7. How to grasp the characteristics of things in an expository article Whether an expository article is well written mainly depends on whether it grasps the characteristics of things and makes readers get a concrete and clear understanding. For example, when you visit the zoo, you should introduce giraffes to young readers. What are the main characteristics of giraffes? Fast running speed and beautiful stripes are not unique characteristics of giraffes. The main feature of giraffes is their long necks. They are the tallest animals in the world. The female deer is more than four meters high and the male deer is about five meters high. The highest record is 5.78 meters. They have four long thin legs and a very long neck. Only by writing these clearly can we grasp the main characteristics of giraffes and be called a good exposition. First of all, observe carefully. Articles are the reflection of objective things. Only through in-depth and meticulous observation can we see things clearly. For example, in the article "Pink Butterfly", the species, shape and living habits of pink butterflies, why pink butterflies can't fly in the morning and what harm they do to crops are clearly written and well-founded. "Secondly, we should consult the information. You can't experience everything personally, you should explain the article clearly. " This requires consulting relevant information and verifying it with the experience summarized by predecessors. For example, a middle school student traveled to Beijing, visited the Forbidden City, and wanted to introduce it to his classmates. So he not only wrote down the impression of his visit, but also bought a tourist map of the Forbidden City and the top ten places of interest in Beijing to understand the history, geographical location and architectural characteristics of the Forbidden City. In this way, he knew: "The Forbidden City is also called. It has a history of more than 500 years. The whole Miyagi is rectangular, with an area of 720,000 square meters, more than 70 palaces and more than 9,000 houses. Finally, learn to compare. Things in the world are very different, and different things have different characteristics. Even a thing has its own characteristics. There are no two identical leaves in the world. Twin brothers, no matter how much they look alike, can tell them apart. Grasping the characteristics of things means grasping the different characteristics that distinguish this thing from other things, finding individuality from * * *, and finding particularity from the general. The characteristics of things are often shown in comparison with other things. In short, we should grasp the characteristics of the explained object, on the one hand, by personal practice and careful observation, on the other hand, we should be good at learning from books and experienced people, and at the same time, we should think carefully. Learn to compare and try to be familiar with what we want to explain.
8. How to grasp the writing points of 1 Clear concepts and proper definitions are the first step in writing a composition. Then analyze the practical significance of the topic and find the right starting point; Then, choose the materials and expressions that you think are the most valuable. For this material, it is important to know what is "forgetting" and "remembering". It is obviously inappropriate to talk about "forgetting the past means betrayal" without the topic requirements.
Don't deviate from the theme of the article, always grasp the theme to conceive and write, so as to make the theme (central idea) clear.
2. Look at the picture composition, because all the pictures that can be tested are cartoons, and cartoons are fables. The most important thing is to better understand the meaning of this cartoon.
Propositional composition is necessary in the exam, because the exam must have a certain limited style, otherwise it is not a composition exam. There are many forms of propositional composition. Material composition used to be limited, but now the topic composition is more open. As far as the topic composition proposition is concerned, students can practice in various forms in their usual composition practice. But in the exam, we should choose the style we are good at, write the materials we are good at, and focus on writing the language.
3. Grasping the center to write a composition is to grasp a feature or argument to write. For example, the center of the article is to write about his father's noble behavior, so you should write about how his father shows his nobility by doing those noble things. However, there are still some differences between writing people and writing things. You should write more and understand more. Generally speaking, as mentioned above, everything will remain the same. Good luck.
The main point of writing a composition is: what is your central idea? In other words, you should know what you want to say. Once you have determined the central idea, you can start writing around it. This is true no matter what kind of composition you write.
It's easy to write about scenery, people, animals, etc. Or something you ask for. First, decide what you want to write about, for example, travel, and then write down your previous travel experiences or what you heard from others. The key point is to determine a central idea, that is, to write about the good scenery of tourism? Or did you write a touching event during the trip? You can write when you think about it, and you should highlight the key points you want to express.