The vast number of young people have shown great enthusiasm for reform. (Put "incomparable" before "enthusiasm")
We should give full play to the role of young people. (Before moving "full" to "play", delete a "de").
4. Shrimp area is a platform to solve daily work, life and study problems through the Internet. It is the knowledge, wisdom, skills and experience of supermarket trading. & ltBR & gt Shrimp Zone is a humanized online working platform established according to the operating mode of Witkey (institutional website), and relevant knowledge service contracts are formulated. Many individual witkey are welcome to enter. * * * Create a franchise operation mode similar to traditional business, and individual Witkey can work as an employee or knowledge worker in the shrimp area * * * to create wealth.
Revision: The word "transaction" in "supermarket for trading knowledge, wisdom, skills and experience" is changed to "exchange".
The sentence "Welcome to many individual Witchcraft" should be "Welcome to all individual Witchcraft" and the period should be changed to comma.
"Personal Witkey can be employees or knowledge workers in shrimp area to create wealth" should be changed to "Personal Witkey can be employees or knowledge workers in shrimp area to create wealth".
When we rode over the mountains and headed for Argentina, we encountered obstacles under the green vault formed by towering trees. That is the root of a big tree. It stands in our way, higher than our mountain. We had a lot of trouble and finally got through with an axe.
Revision: 1) Revise the first sentence: change "when we are" to "we are", or add "we" before "towering" and "fire meeting".
(2) Amend the third sentence: add "higher than our mount" before "blocking our way".
6. ① The torch of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games "Xiangyun" is 72 cm long and weighs 985 grams. ② The contrasting colors of red and silver contain striking visual effects, which are beneficial to various forms of media communication. ③ Xiangyun's cultural concept has a history of thousands of years in China, and it is a representative symbolic culture in China.
Revision: (1) The second sentence is a sick sentence, revision: change "implication" to "production"; (2) The third sentence is a sick sentence, which is amended as: the symbol culture of China is changed to the symbol culture of China.