Everyone has his own hand. Actors' hands are delicate and white, and workers' hands are flexible. Every time I see these delicate white hands, I think of the hands of Miss Liu, who taught us math.

Teacher Liu has been engaged in mathematics teaching for more than ten years and has rich teaching experience. Every student she teaches will be deeply moved by her.

Teachers' occupations are different. People who are engaged in this profession write books on the blackboard with chalk all the year round. How many copies have you changed? Even the teacher doesn't know. Teachers' hands became rough and cracked because of the corrosiveness of chalk. You may not believe it, although Miss Liu has just turned 30, her hands are full of wrinkles. Especially in winter, the tear of her right index finger often bleeds, and the pain degree can be imagined. Ordinary people's hands are smooth and delicate at this age, but our teacher Liu has to endure several times the pain of ordinary people, just to teach every student well.

It is these hands, in order to let students understand each question, their own blood dyed the chalk head red; It is these hands that hold the red pen day and night and use up one refill after another in order to correct every assignment. Although these hands are cracked, her students understand every formula she writes; Although these hands were burned, every question she changed was memorized by her students.

There are many teachers like Mr. Liu, who have written one wonderful life movement after another with their own hands. When their students set foot on the journey of life, they were already full of white hair.

I want to thank Mr. Liu and all the teachers who have taught me. They planted eternal truth in our young hearts with their hands.

2. An essay expressing one's will should have a center.

Epiphyllum has been brewing for a lifetime, and it has devoted all its efforts. On a quiet night, or a stormy night, people are sleeping and spending their time in silence. That kind of beauty, that kind of brilliance, is no less than the grace of peony, no less than the enchanting of roses, which is a man-made shock. Epiphyllum is so narcissistic at night that it quietly disappears from people's dreams, leaving no trace and no room. This beautiful moment casts eternity.

At dawn, all you can see is a withered flower hanging coldly on the branch. So I began to feel sad. God let this amazing beauty stay for a while, but refused to let her open for a while. I didn't know until I grew up that it was not that God was cruel, but that I was naive. Imagine, if the epiphyllum always blooms during the day and night, no matter when, who will cherish those short hours, who will care about her beauty, and how can the unique charm of the epiphyllum be reflected? The reason why we are impressed by the beauty of epiphyllum in an instant and cherish those open hours is precisely because we have experienced a long wait during the day!

Similarly, it is precisely because we have suffered humiliation and failure that we cherish the joy of success even more; It is precisely because people feel reluctant to part when they are apart that they cherish the happiness and happiness when they are together; It is precisely because of the threat of death that we cherish a better life more.

We pursue truth and yearn for freedom, so we go to the place where the sun rises. However, light is often not in the brightest place, just as beauty is often not bred by beauty. Looking at the epiphyllum blooming faintly in the dark, it is not difficult for us to understand that only by rising from the sky can we appreciate the brilliance of light. Only through the baptism of darkness and pain can we cherish the peace and stability we have now and make life more precious.

Lu Xun is a soldier who dares to plunge into darkness. He accused the cannibal society with a sharp pen, but enthusiastically eulogized life. It is precisely because he witnessed the numbness and ignorance of China people's morbid life that he especially cherished the progressive young people, hoping that they could save the silent people in the dark and strip off the cloak of China's feudal society for more than two thousand years. Therefore, this is a hesitation, a cry, and the pride of "looking at a thousand fingers coldly"!

Cherish life, cherish life, is the biggest prerequisite for us to do anything well. Many things don't feel precious when you have them, but you will find them when you lose them. What you inadvertently leave behind is often very important and can't be separated in an instant!

So I said, no matter how much or how little we have now, we should all thank God for the gift and cherish it, whether it is a short epiphyllum or a long March rose.

2.

As soon as the spring breeze blows, the withered lotus leaves in winter grow out again, gradually growing like a disk, and gradually changing from light green to turquoise; The stem is getting thicker and thicker, and it is not easy to break. At the end of spring, some branchlets appeared on one side of the big disk, with small flowers on their heads.

In early summer, the lotus leaves turn dark green, the flowers and bones buried under the leaves are growing and growing, and the red and white petals are exposed a little. In midsummer, the flower bones hiding under the leaves have already raised their heads and stood on the lotus leaves under the scorching sun, opening rectangular, red and white petals, overlapping each other and competing to bloom. It's beautiful, refreshing and pleasing to the eye.

The autumn wind is rustling, the grass is withered, and the lotus branch can no longer hold the lotus, and it gradually hangs down. The flowers have withered, and the lotus leaf is still so green, but without the lotus, she is not so lively and eye-catching.

In winter, the cold wind blows, the leaves begin to turn yellow and wither, and then fall gently. Snowflakes covered the vitality of the previous pond, quietly gestating new life and containing new hope, waiting for the arrival of late spring.

I love the lotus flower, its beauty and fragrance, its spirit of not being afraid of the sun and not giving in to each other, and its elegant and clean quality.

3. Write mother's composition with a center and a novel theme.

My mother is of medium height, fair-skinned, not very beautiful but dignified and generous, and wears clothes just like people, which are not fashionable but elegant. Mother has a bad personality and often loses her temper. Every coin has its two sides. Do you want to know? Mother is an ingenious person who can make many exquisite handicrafts. The wind chimes she made are very beautiful, in all shapes and colors. They hung in front of my window, very beautiful. Especially some small decorations under the wind chimes are very beautiful. Whenever the wind blows, they will sound sweet bells, which sound like wings and can fly far away.

I like my mother's handwriting, neat and clear; She is good at typing with five strokes on the computer. Only urr saw ten fingers flying up and down on the keyboard, which dazzled you. With just a few clicks, a long line of words appears on the computer screen. Mother likes singing and sings very well. I can hum the songs she can sing, but I don't like listening to songs and I don't want to sing.

Mom is also good at conditioning in family life. Her steamed bread is round and white and has a special fragrance. They are delicious. I have a healthy body, and I can't do without those delicious steamed buns. Mom's cooking is more delicious. I like her snacks best, such as fried cabbage, mutton kebabs, steamed stuffed buns and mushrooms, which are much more delicious than those sold on the road. I don't have enough to eat. Mom is a very serious and careful person. When she takes something seriously, her eyes are so wide that she won't stop until there is no result. She is more careful when typing on the computer. No matter how wonderful any sound or program appears on TV, she seems to have never heard or seen it. Mom also has many shortcomings. Usually I dare not say that writing a composition today is a good opportunity. My mother has a bad temper and is always angry for no reason. When she speaks, she often raises her voice by an octave, which scares me. Then the air in the whole room seems to be cold, so I naturally have no good fruit to eat. I think it would be better if she didn't lose her temper. At least I won't be treated as a punching bag. What's more, sometimes my mother doesn't keep her word. For example, I once agreed to take me to Tianqi Temple on Sunday afternoon. I was very happy and prepared early, but she didn't take me because she didn't get enough sleep in the afternoon. I was really disappointed. Also, my mother always compares my shortcomings with the advantages of others, which is what I hate most. I really hope my mother can get rid of these bad habits and make our family full of joy forever. This is my mother, a respectable, lovely person with personality, but people can't understand her temper.

I love my mother, forever, forever.

4. What if there is no center for composition?

To write a good composition, it is very important to examine the questions. The idea of examining the topic is clear, the content of the composition is closely related to the topic, and the composition and the topic are integrated; On the contrary, if the examination of the topic is not clear, and the requirements of the topic on the composition type, content and material range are not clear, the composition will be off topic, or even off topic. An off-topic composition, even if it is rich in content and beautiful in sentences, is not a good article. The center of the composition is the soul of the composition and the purpose of the author's composition. When writing prose, the author always has an intention. What to praise or oppose; You should know clearly how to express your thoughts and feelings. If the composition center is clear, the selection of composition materials will be based, and the choice of words and sentences and the arrangement of details will be beneficial to the expression center. On the contrary, if the center is not clear, you can write wherever you want, and the readers don't know what you are writing. Such a composition reflects the author's ignorance of the written materials, and of course it is impossible to write a good composition. 65438+ narrative composition. Some composition topics directly point out that it is narrative composition, such as a small matter, an unforgettable event, an interesting childhood, many new things in my hometown and so on. The word that determines the composition type in these topics is "thing". Some composition topics don't have a word "thing", but they imply that it is thing. For example, I have a secret. "Secret" can refer to what I do that no one knows. If I were. This topic hints at what I would do if I were. "How to do it" includes what to do, how to do it and what to remember. "Unforgettable first time" is something to fill in, such as washing clothes, cooking, traveling and so on. The topic requires writing about the process and feelings of visiting a place, that is, describing one thing and remembering people's compositions. Generally speaking, most of the essays that remember people are directly pointed out in the title, such as my deskmate, people I respect, new teachers, people who cherish time and so on. This kind of composition topic is easy to identify. However, some composition topics are not directly pointed out but recorded, so we should carefully examine the topics. It's not that the warmth of the climate makes people feel warm, but that when others are in trouble, someone gives sincere help and encouragement to make others feel "warm". Also, it is worth noting that it is sometimes difficult to distinguish between writing people and narrating, because the author must express it through concrete examples, and narrating cannot be separated from writing people's activities, because people do things. But this is human nature. Their goals and objectives are different. For example, Dad's Beard is a topic about writing people, because the things involved in this topic are closely related to the quality of the characters. Another example is "After School". Although "Who" is to be written, the focus is on what "Who" did. You can generally see the composition of the object from the title. Objects can be divided into still life and animals. Therefore, essays describing still life, the shape, color, structure and movement of animals are all essays about objects. Prose about scenery. Generally speaking, prose describing scenery, such as spring, morning, spring outing, autumn scenery, etc. , ask to describe the season, time or sightseeing. Generally speaking, it is difficult to distinguish the topic about scenery from the topic about objects. Write down the location, surrounding environment, display, etc. of the information booth. 2. Review the scope of material selection Every composition topic always has certain restrictions on the material selection of the composition. This restriction is reflected in the object, time, place and content of the composition. The object, time and place of the composition can generally be directly seen from the topic, but to review the content scope of the composition, we must be good at grasping the key words in the topic. We should also grasp the key points of the composition. How to examine the "eye" in the topic? We can analyze it from three aspects. If the topic is a sentence, the title is in the "How" section of "How". For example, "everyone praises her" is "eye-catching", and the focus of the composition is why everyone praises her and how to praise her. If the topic is a sentence, the focus of the "eye-catching" composition is why life in summer camp is "happy" and how to be "happy". If the topic is a word, such as "bridge" and "road", "eye" is the thing itself or its symbolic meaning. The focus of the composition is to write the characteristics of things, develop reasonable associations and write symbolic meanings or metaphors. Relate the characteristics of things with symbolic meaning or a certain quality of people. The peanut we studied is an example. There is also a composition topic that only indicates part of the meaning and the rest needs to be supplemented by the author himself. The topic of this composition is semi-propositional composition. The range of materials is very wide. It is up to the author to decide what to write on a large scale. 3. Look at the requirements outside the topic. There are some text descriptions below some composition questions. These are mostly additional requirements, such as "writing things concretely", "developing reasonable imagination", "the number of words is about 400 words" and "correct handwriting and correct format". This off-topic requirement can be summarized into two aspects. The second is to make some specific provisions on the length, line format and handwriting of the composition, which the author must abide by when writing. Therefore, it is an integral part of the pre-writing exam.

Writing a composition requires each paragraph to have a central sentence.

Spring is a season full of vitality, but also a beautiful, magical and hopeful season.

Spring has arrived, and all kinds of gorgeous flowers are blooming, all of which are so gorgeous and dazzling. The oilseed rape planted by the farmer's uncle in the field is also in bloom. Golden rape flowers have become the world of butterflies, and beautiful butterflies are dancing on the golden stage. They fly in the air for a while and stay quietly on the rape flowers for a while. Just like this, it also adds a lot of fun to spring. The beauty of rape flowers also attracts many "working people"-bees, who are always tirelessly pollinating rape flowers day and night. Occasionally, a breeze blows, and the golden rapeseed immediately surges up with undulating "golden waves". From a distance, it's really beautiful!

Spring is the season people yearn for, and people always make their own plans in this season. As the saying goes: "A year's plan lies in spring, and a day's plan lies in the morning." It tells us that one year's wishes should be planned in spring, and the heaviest time of the day is in the morning. In spring, people start farming, transplanting rice seedlings and planting trees. Migratory birds also migrated from the south to the north, cheering for the farmers working in the fields. Some birds stand on tall trees, some simply stand on the ridge, and some stand on the staff. It is this that makes the farmers in the field happy and everything is very lively.

In spring, animals also wake up from a deep sleep. The grass began to sprout, and the land was full of thriving scenes. At first glance, there is a green scene everywhere, just like a watercolor painting. Spring is like this.

6. How to highlight the center in writing?

The so-called "central prominence" means that the central idea or argument of the article should be concentrated and distinct.

The expression of the center can be dominant or recessive; It can be a rational summary or a strong emotional color, but it must be vivid. As Tolstoy said: "It is not enough that the ideas in the article are correct. We should also be good at expressing these ideas so that everyone can understand them. "

So how can we make the center stand out? First of all, the viewpoint is single and the center is clear. First of all, we should do a good job in examining questions, clarify our thinking and finally determine a center from multiple angles.

The center of some topics in the examination composition is relatively clear; Some topics are deliberately off topic, metaphorical, profound and implicit, showing several different centers. This requires candidates to carefully analyze the topic and grasp the deep meaning of the topic. Even if the article has a variety of angles and ideas, once it is implemented on specific topics, it must form its own writing center.

Otherwise, "the meaning is too messy." Remember, you can't have your cake and eat it.

The main idea of narrative should not be too broad; Arguments in argumentative essays should always remain the same. The whole article should stick to a central point to prevent deviation from the meaning of the topic.

However, some students do have multiple centers in an article. This paragraph is about this principle, but the next paragraph is the next paragraph. For example, in 2005, a candidate in Henan wrote an essay entitled "Let Go". The first paragraph says to be calm in the face of reality, the second paragraph says not to pretend, the third paragraph says that Madame Curie has made achievements to share with others, the fourth paragraph says that a foreign child learned to use chopsticks with perseverance, the fifth paragraph says to be modest and enterprising, and the last paragraph concludes that he should relax himself.

Anxiety and depression, East and West. Another example is the composition "The answer is colorful" in the 2000 college entrance examination. An Anhui examinee put forward the argument that "the answers are colorful" at the beginning, but the examples listed later showed that "there is always only one true correct answer". It says here that "everyone has everyone's ideas". What the author thinks is elusive.

Therefore, when establishing an opinion, you must be single. After the establishment of the center, the composition outline must be listed. Having an outline is like building a house with a sketch, which helps the author to grasp the overall situation and avoid putting the cart before the horse.

This can improve the writing quality and speed up the writing. Secondly, carefully select materials and stick to the center.

All the materials closely related to the central idea and outstanding and powerful in expressing the central idea are selected in the exercise, otherwise they are discarded. After selecting materials, choose the most innovative materials.

For example, in 2006, Zhejiang wrote a perfect composition "Drunk Hometown", which was very atmospheric. The author first points out the truth that everything in the world is empty with a four-line poem, and then points out the word drunk hometown with a set of neat sentence patterns, which leads to the full text.

In the body part, the author takes Li Bai, Zhang and others as examples. As an example, we should not get lost in ups and downs. At the end of the two paragraphs, with poetic language and beautiful artistic conception, the author once again emphasizes the need to exile his own soul and find the happiest and most natural hometown where he can lead a drunken life.

Starting with Vanity Fair, the author leads to the topic of "getting drunk", which is closely related to life, interest and other topics. The listed characters Li Bai and Zhang and the ethereal situation they created all highlight the theme of "drunkenness".

Carefully select materials, stick to the main idea, and make the article center stand out. However, if the selected materials can't be closely related to the topic, even if they are fresh and vivid, they should "reluctantly give up what one favours".

For example, there was a 37-point article in Hunan College Entrance Examination in 2006. In the second paragraph of the article, I quoted a famous sentence about the deeds of Zhou Wenwang and others. Although the materials are vivid, they are far from "spirit". The deeds of Zhou Wenwang and others mainly show people's will to fight tenaciously in adversity. "Will" and "spirit" are not the same thing.

After the selection, not only record the material, but also analyze how the material represents the center. Only in this way can the selected materials truly serve the center. In addition, skillfully use techniques to highlight the center.

Be good at pointing out the center, which is more important in the composition of the examination room. There are various ways to ask questions: in terms of expression, there are lyric questions, argumentative questions, narrative questions and descriptive questions.

Ru Zhijuan's "Lily" concluded: "In the moonlight, I saw her eyes glittering and translucent, and I also saw white lilies on the quilt, sprinkled on the purplish red background, symbolizing purity and emotion, covering the face of this ordinary young man dragging bamboo." This poetic description pushes the work to a higher artistic level: Lily, a pure and emotional flower, reflects the noble soul of the protagonist with his body and will remain in the reader's heart forever.

In 2005, at the end of the essay "Smoke flies with the wind, fame flows with history", "It is our blessing to dissolve the moon, touch the wind, forget what should be forgotten, and leave what should be left. Let the past go with the wind, watch the clouds roll and relax, smell the fragrance of plum blossoms floating in Wan Li, and remember the elegance of flowers. "

The description is fluent and natural, such as flowing water, and the theme of "forget what should be forgotten and leave what should be left" is pointed out from the rhetorical point of view, including repeated questions, setting questions, arranging questions, quoting questions and figurative questions.

Wei Wei's "Who is the cutest person" begins: "Who is our cutest person? Our soldiers, I think they are the cutest people. " Ask questions directly and lead to the description of typical cases.

In 2006, there was a sentence "Please save the symbol of Beijing" in the perfect composition "Symbol of Beijing" written by the examinee of Beijing Volume One. These three sentences are placed at the beginning, one at the end and one at the end. These three sentences are repeatedly pointed out and reflected, which not only highlights the main idea of the article, but also sorts out the structure and renders the feelings.

From the position of the topic, you can put the topic in the topic, at the beginning and at the end. We know that the marking speed of college entrance examination composition is very fast.

If you bury the main idea of the article in the text, the marking teacher will not probe it carefully with tools like an engineer sweeping the floor, and will not help you summarize it. Therefore, the center of the composition in the examination room should be prominent.

For example, in 2006, the perfect composition "Let Life Walk with Health" in Zhejiang College Entrance Examination began: "Life is an irreversible journey. In this journey, only constant pursuit, unremitting efforts and unremitting struggle can create the value of life. Kong Ziyun:' I have no interest in life.

It clarifies life.

7. How to write a composition around the center

Composition should learn to accumulate.

The ancient summaries of "Reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "A clever woman can't cook without rice" illustrate the importance of "accumulation" in writing from both positive and negative aspects. "Usually rely on accumulation, the examination room depends on play", which is the same experience of the students in the examination room.

Language should establish "vocabulary". Vocabulary is the cell of an article. Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups. There are two ways to establish "vocabulary": the first is reading. Usually, you should read books, newspapers and periodicals extensively, take reading notes, extract some beautiful words, sentences and paragraphs from a specific notebook, or make reading cards. The second is life. At ordinary times, we should capture the fresh language in the popular spoken language and write it down in a small notebook or card that we carry with us. Over time, we can say it chapter by chapter and write it beautifully. We should strengthen the accumulation of materials. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article. Because many students usually don't pay attention to accumulating materials, they are worried every time they write a composition, or edit or copy it. The solution to this problem is to accumulate materials. Usually, you can take a video camera and tape recorder with you, observe life deeply, actively participate in life, and record your experiences in family life, campus life and social life in time in the form of sketching, keeping a diary and writing observation notes. When recording, we should grasp the details and the characteristics of people, things, things and scenery. The article written in this way is flesh and blood.

8. Write a composition around the central idea

Write a composition around the central idea

Scene description, so what is a scene? Scenes generally refer to scenes presented to people in group activities within a certain period of time. Just like a scene or scene we saw in a play.

What scenes have we participated in or seen in our life? Here are some examples for your reference.

The labor site. We often participate in school-run factories, farms or service labor at school. There are many people's enthusiasm and enthusiasm in labor, and there are good people and good deeds in labor. We also often visit factories, villages and shops and ask questions to see how uncles and aunts work. These are the scenes of childbirth.

Game scene. Students often play games together at home or on campus, and teachers also organize various activities during sports activities. These game scenes are often very lively and interesting, and students are familiar with them.

Entertainment circle In our colorful after-school life, entertainment is a very important content. There are many vivid scenes in literary performances, party activities, watching movies and TV plays that are worth remembering.

Ceremony site. At the beginning of each semester, we will hold the opening ceremony. Ceremonies are usually held in your city, village or town, and also when new buildings are completed. The scenes of these ceremonies are meaningful and instructive, and we should carefully observe and record this memorable moment.

Sports scenes. At the sports meeting, athletes chase after each other, struggle hard and strive to create excellent results; The audience applauded and cheered for the athletes. These exciting scenes are unforgettable.

Life scenes. There are many scenes in daily life that are also very distinctive. For example, buying goods, family reunion, traveling by car and boat, seeking medical treatment, building houses and repairing walls; , decorate the bedroom, etc. , have a strong flavor of life.

Meeting site. Class meeting, team meeting, school meeting; Meeting heroes and model figures and attending various celebrations and commemorative meetings often leave a deep impression on us.

In a word, practicing scene description can improve our observation cognitive ability and narrative description ability.

9. The composition about persistence should also have a central idea.

emphasize

Persistence is perseverance, like the blazing sun; Persistence is the soul, like a group of standing mountains.

Persistence is magnificent, because persistence is honed by all aspects; Persistence is sweet, because fearless and indomitable perseverance has sown the seeds of victory in my heart.

"Yellow sand wears golden armor in hundreds of battles, and it will not be returned without breaking Loulan." It is the insistence of border guards to defend the motherland; "Although the heart is bitter, it is difficult for gold to blow from the crazy sand. Is an honest official's unremitting persistence in justice. The long river of history is endless, and persistence is like the last flag on the battlefield. It is rare to get blood red floating away, which has taken root and sprouted in people's hearts.

Those who want to persist are full of hope. If Liu Xiang has no hope of hitting the Olympic champion, how can he have the honor of persistence? If Edison has no hope of illuminating the world, how can there be eternal electric lights to persist? Persistence is not a epiphyllum in a county, but an evergreen tree unbeaten in four seasons and a sunflower rising in the sun-constantly striving for future happiness.

People who persist hard forge beliefs including perseverance. People who have tried to be strong have experienced countless hardships, facing the fear that people can bear, and the inevitable colic is inserted in their hearts. It is precisely because of this strong persistence that the overwhelming momentum directly hits people's hearts, and perseverance is getting stronger and stronger with continuous persistence, which makes faith coated with an invincible armor of perseverance.

Those who master persistence are successful and never give up. British Prime Minister Winston Churchill told the world with his life's successful experience that there is no secret to success. If there is, there are two: the first is to stick to the end and never give up; The second is when you want to give up, look back at the first secret, stick to it and never give up.

Persistence is very important on the road to success. In the face of setbacks, tell yourself: stick to it and try again. Because the first failure has passed, I fell down and got up again. It's just that a successful person falls less often than he gets up, while a mediocre person falls more often than he gets up. We call the person who gets up for the last time a winner. If he can't get up for the last time, doesn't want to get up and loses the person who insists on giving up, it's called failure.

Persistence is perseverance, persistence is the soul, and persistence is like the nectar of tea that you have experienced hardships, which makes people intoxicate after excitement; Persistence is like a rainbow after rain, which makes people feel the sweetness after countless storms.

Haven't the seeds of victory buried in your heart blossomed yet? Don't worry, please irrigate with persistent sweat. I believe success is not far from now. ...