Test analysis:

First of all, ideas

According to the materials, the topic of "distance" should refer to the category of interpersonal relationship. If you are not careful, you will say "America is on the other side of the earth, which is the end of the world", but satellite TV suddenly pulls it in front of us and becomes "close at hand", which is the great power of modern technology, and so on, it will digress. Topic composition is a basket, not everything can be loaded; If you are asked to play table tennis, you shouldn't play football.

"Far" and "near" are originally a spatial concept, which may be very different from the spatial facts used in psychological feelings. Between people, sometimes it is "far" on the surface, but it is actually "near"; Sometimes, it is "near" on the surface, but it is actually "far". What causes the great contrast between reality and psychology? Finding the right reason actually determines the direction and theme of the article. We might as well turn the process of conception into the process of solution, but the ways of solution are diversified. Or reveal your thoughts on the relationship between people through stories, or discuss the pros and cons directly, explore the reasons, or explain philosophy by implicit symbolic means. All roads lead to the same goal. I just want to tell you that sincere treatment between people will lead to spiritual harmony, mutual suspicion and selfishness, and will only build barriers and increase many regrets! The following examples can provide material for thinking:

1. In social life, there are many enthusiastic people who care about lonely old people. Among them, they are strangers, even thousands of miles apart. They are not related by blood or appointed by the organization, so they are far away! However, for many years, they were regarded as relatives, scrimping and saving, mending seams, serving tea and pouring water, and even selling iron to treat the elderly. They are closer than their children, and more "close" than their children. How on earth did they do it? Why are you doing this? What is the social effect of this?

2.( 1) Under the same blue sky and under the same roof, we should be brothers and sisters. However, are we a little "far" or even separated from our relatives, friends, teachers and classmates? Our relationship with our classmates is a little stiff. Are the questions mutual? Do we show off our beauty, wealth and excellent grades too much? Aren't we a little indifferent and should lend a helping hand instead of helping it? Is it because we don't pay attention to the art of communication and can't sweeten the medicine and benefit the disease? What should we do? (2) There are many sad phenomena in social life. Or for the sake of inheritance, brothers turn against each other; Or children are unfilial, and parents beg along the street; Between the neighbors, the space distance is very "close", but it doesn't matter, hanging high, just sweeping the snow in front of the door, regardless of the frost of others: the neighbor's child is crying in front of the door, maybe his father is on a business trip, and his mother is playing mahjong outside, but he wants to whistle proudly and accompany the crying child ... how far away the neighborhood is!

Second, the writing method

When writing prose, I have the following suggestions: ① Choose touching cases carefully; You can describe one thing or several things and focus on one thing; It can be fictional, or it can be integrated into imagination and association based on facts. (2) Words look like mountains, not like flat ground, so they should be raised first and then suppressed to prevent the words from being linear and dull.

To write an argumentative essay, my suggestions are as follows: ① Start with the relationship between relatives, neighbors, officials and people, teachers and students, and so on. In ancient and modern times, choose whether the description of typical cases is "near" or "far" but "near"; Then analyze the reasons and results; Finally, criticism or praise comes down to the full text. However, this kind of article covers a wide range, which is difficult to control and vague to write. Starting with one or two small things of the same type, it is easy to analyze the cause and effect. ② Pay attention to typical arguments; This part can be based on comparative argument.

Arguments and lyricism in prose and viewpoints in argumentative essays should be firmly anchored in raw materials. The lyricism in prose should be sincere, not "melodramatic", "sensational" or "pseudo-sanctified", such as "How can you be a qualified middle school student if you are so indifferent", "Let people all over the world plant flowers of love, because the Datong society is already waving to us" and "We should use our lives to call back the warmth of the world"; The arguments in prose and argumentative essays should be profound. "Distance is the length, trust is the way", "Closer the distance between people", "It's not terrible to have conflicts between relatives, it's terrible to fight, and what's more terrible is to kill each other with one heart" are all insightful views.

From ancient times to foreign countries, it is of course good to win freely; However, if we don't focus on China and today, this is meaningless.

Third, the reference topic

(1) The horizon is near at hand.

(2) The distance between two hearts

(3) Why is it too urgent to fire the other party?

(4) Such a big frame is like that.

Material warehouse

1. Taohuatan is deeper than thousands of feet, but less than Wang Lun.

We are born from the same root, so we can't speculate with each other.

No one asks if you are poor in the city. Rich people have distant relatives in the mountains.

4. The sound of chickens and dogs is endless, and the old and the dead are not in contact.

5. I remember when I was a child/you loved talking and I loved laughing/once I sat side by side under a peach tree/the wind was blowing in the treetops/we didn't know how to sleep/how many flowers fell in our dreams (life and death depend on each other).

6. The distance between people is both tangible and intangible. Can be circular. After a circle, it is back to the starting point, zero distance. It can be two intersecting lines, approaching from a distance, touching a dazzling spark at the moment of meeting, but fleeting, and then going further and further, never meeting again; It can also be two parallel lines, no matter how long time passes, it will always maintain a distance that is not far or near. What is the most suitable distance? How to keep the most suitable distance? I always can't explain clearly. (the distance between people's hearts)

7. My favorite means of transportation is the train. Every time I travel, I will always meet all kinds of people, with different ages and occupations, which will always give me different gains. Gained knowledge and also gained happiness. I like the child who asked me to do all kinds of things for him, such as opening a coke bottle. He always says thank you to my brother politely and dances happily for us. I like to meet the professor of Wu Da University, and exchange opinions with him from students and teachers, including agreement and disagreement. I prefer neighbors who borrow CDs from me. From the beginning, his fluent Wuhan dialect misunderstood his native place to the change that I spoke in Wenzhou dialect after receiving a phone call. (The Distance of Happiness)

8. Love is like a flower and friendship is like a flower. Delicate and charming flowers need careful care to bloom for a long time, but they often die instantly because they can't stand being hurt only once. Empty eyes looking at colorful flowers everywhere, nowhere to be found. (the distance between people's hearts)

9. Jiang Xunsheng, a senior engineer of China International Engineering Consulting Company, has been donating blood for more than 30 years since 1975, with a total amount of 30000ml. In 2003, he participated in the establishment of "Hope Earth Learning Studio". So far, the studio has sponsored more than 300 children. He personally donated more than 40 thousand yuan. "It is not difficult for a person to do a good deed, but it is difficult to do good deeds all his life. However, you will feel the greatest happiness when others encounter difficulties. " Jiang Xunsheng is using his life to interpret this sentence. (China People's Political Consultative Conference, June 65438+10/October 65438+April 2006)

10. Recently, the junior middle school of Shenzhen Middle School held a donation activity of "Helping Poor Students in Guizhou Mountainous Areas". More than 800 students from the whole school/KLOC-0 responded positively and donated more than 20,000 yuan in just over an hour. (Shenzhen Special Zone Daily, February 2, 2006)