As a senior three student, I deeply feel that it is not easy for senior three students to endure-not only to review what you have learned, but also to get good grades in the college entrance examination.

Evaluation: There is a grammatical error at the beginning, which should be wrong? Deduct points! Good content, straight to the point.

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Under the pressure from society, parents and students themselves, the psychological state of senior three students has become a problem.

Evaluation: Are you talking about mental state? I looked it up for you.

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In fact, I think keeping a positive attitude is the key to their success.

Comment: Spelling error! Deduct points!

Modify: keep it directly as a gerund.

A positive spirit can help them overcome quite a few difficulties.

Evaluation: with the above sentence, transition, logic, great!

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Adjusting mentality is a job that all senior three students should do.

Evaluation: I don't understand it at all.

Revision: So I think all senior three students should learn to adjust their psychology.

I think it's a good way to relax at other times and learn more knowledge, such as going out for a walk.

Evaluation: chaos

I think the breeze that slips through your fingers and the kiss of golden sunshine are the best ways for your salespeople to relax after announcing heavy tasks.

More importantly, don't care too much about your grades.

Comment: I wonder if there is such usage. . .

Revision: Speaking of grades, I hope you can take the trouble to say, "This is my best work, and I don't care about the result."

As long as we work hard, we should not feel sorry.

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The best and happiest thing in senior three comes from struggle and keeping busy, so don't put too much pressure on yourself.

Evaluation: quite satisfactory.

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As far as schools are concerned, I don't think they should attach great importance to enrollment.

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High school students still need free space and environment.

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It should put students' mental health before the enrollment rate.

Evaluation: basically correct

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Encourage them to take part in enough activities to enrich their study life in senior three.

Evaluation: Forget it.

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The correct guidance of the school is very important for the development of students.

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Correction: It is recommended that schools guide correctly. After all, it emphasizes guidance.

I hope the school can promote the all-round development of students with a relaxed smile.

Evaluation: basically correct

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These are my suggestions.

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They are for reference only.

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I sincerely hope that the students will live a happy life and succeed in the college entrance examination!

Evaluation: The ending is simple and simple. Proposed extension

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