One bogey: platitudes
Some articles always proceed from the situation and say "under the leadership of ××, with the support and care of ××, with the help of ××". Some articles always start with "the sun", "the moon" and "time flies, the sun flies". These songs are always sung, and these routines become boring cliches.
Two bogeys: mystifying.
Some articles deliberately play games at the beginning, beating around the bush, deliberately confusing people, entering the "maze" and unwilling to write the meaning directly. It seems that this is where the article is novel and ingenious, and the level and skill can be seen. In fact, this mysterious practice is precisely the disadvantage of writing.
Three bogeys: sudden start
Some articles lack proper explanations at the beginning, which makes them appear sudden, mindless and unintelligible. For example, some articles have no "feeling" at first. At the beginning of writing a composition, I said, "After reading this material, I have a profound experience ..." It was too sudden to write like this without mentioning the content of the material.
Four taboos: unnecessary explanation
At the beginning of the article, don't be sudden, don't explain, and don't make unnecessary explanations. For example, you don't need to spend a long time explaining the composition of the women's volleyball team, the time and place when the women's volleyball team won the championship five times and with whom. Of course, according to the need, it is also necessary to give an appropriate explanation to the written questions.
Five bogeys: lyricism out of nothing
Some articles, especially the beginning of argumentative essays, have no relationship with the center and theme. Before the discussion has started and the problems have not been clarified, they constantly sigh with emotion. This kind of lyricism out of nothing can only be called moaning without illness.
Six bogeys: around the big circle
At the beginning of some articles, whether the center needs it or not, it has nothing to do with the theme, and it is about the pre-Qin and Han dynasties, the former village and the later shop. Irrelevant, empty talk, write a thousand words, digress Wan Li, and go around a big circle before getting to the point.
Seven bogeys: piling up famous sayings
Some articles want to take the lead at the beginning and can't think of a good way, so they all move out at once, thinking that this is a good beginning. In fact, this practice is blind and the effect is often poor.
Eight taboos: repetition at the beginning
An article can only have one beginning, but some articles have two beginnings. For example, some articles originally wanted to start with a quote, but after they were finished, they thought it was better to talk about the topic, so they started again. Some articles introduce the background at the beginning, and then feel that the center of the article should be revealed first after writing, so they start again. So there will be two beginnings. In this case, according to the requirements of the topic or the center, start with one of them.
Nine bogeys: write about the scenery blindly
The main purpose of setting writing is either to highlight the theme, to portray the characters or to set off the atmosphere. Generally speaking, such landscape writing is meaningless if it has nothing to do with it. It is really unnecessary to write "flowers", "birds" and "grass" at the beginning of some articles.
Ten taboos: blind quotation
Citation should be based on the needs of the theme and the center, and try to avoid blind quotation. Especially for the composition, if the materials provided are very long, if they are quoted at the beginning or copied completely, the focus will be unclear, the theme will be unclear, the words will be inaccurate and blind, and they will be repeated later, so you should choose to quote.