The causes of sick sentences are logical errors of "seriously overcoming" and "being good at discovering". "Seriously overcome" and "be good at discovering" have a sequential order. Only by finding problems first can we overcome them, not after finding them first. Obviously, the original sentence does not conform to the basic law.

The modification here only needs to reverse "seriously overcome" and "be good at discovering", confirm the development order of things, and make the sentence meaning correctly expressed.

Extended data:

Modifying methods of sick sentences:

1, complement grammar: it is often used to modify ill sentences with incomplete components.

For example, "I won the first place in this competition" (lack of subject) was changed to "I won the first place in this competition." (Supplementary subjects)

After listening to the teacher, I got a great education. (Supplementary subjects)

Everyone should set up lofty ideals. (complement predicate)

We should educate teenagers in patriotism. (Complement object)

2. The deletion method is generally used to modify redundant sentences, redundant components, improper collocation and improper classification.

For example, "I conclude that it may rain tomorrow." I'm sure it will rain tomorrow.

3. Variations are mostly used to modify ill sentences such as improper collocation, improper words and unclear references.

For example, "his grades have improved significantly." Change: "His grades have improved obviously."

Whoever breaks the discipline will be criticized.

His writing level has improved significantly.

He seems to have infinite power.

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