Excellent works: abandon complexity, precipitate yourself and move towards success. After a period of fermentation and precipitation in the jar, Youkang Jie Mi is no longer ordinary rice, but has become a mellow wine. This is because rice is isolated from the outside world-isolated from the noise and prosperity of the outside world, and fermented and precipitated. So do people. Only by abandoning complexity and precipitating yourself can we succeed. (The material cited is concise, and the central argument of the full text is clearly displayed through causal analysis. Architect Wang Shu, after graduating from college, kept in mind his tutor's words, cut off the noise and prosperity of the outside world, gave up many easy-to-get opportunities to make money, settled himself for XX years, did not participate in the construction of any house, and has been rooted in the absorption and exploration of culture, which finally cast his success-won Pritzker, who is known as the "Nobel Prize in Architecture". Therefore, success needs to be brewed and precipitated. (This case revolves around the central argument, which is profound and powerful. If Wang Shu, like most students, plunges into architectural design after graduation, the designed works will lose XX years of thinking and precipitation, and will inevitably be branded as "ordinary and mediocre" without showing rich cultural heritage. Not to mention those amazing works. (Use the hypothesis analysis method to further closely follow the analysis of the central argument, so that the argument and the argument are in perfect harmony. ) The nuclear physicist Yu Min was also successfully bred in this precipitation. He is one of the earliest pioneers of atomic physics in China without studying abroad, but this does not prevent him from standing at the peak of world science and technology. He resolutely remained anonymous in the "wine jar" for more than 30 years, isolated from the noise and prosperity of the outside world, realized and thought through exploration, independently developed and solved a series of basic problems in the development of hydrogen bombs, and became a key figure in the development of hydrogen bombs in China. No one has known the name "Yu Min" for 30 years. His spirit of being willing to ferment and precipitate touched the people of China, and eventually became one of the top ten people who moved China by XX. (The above example is expounded from the architect's point of view, and this example is expounded from the scientist's point of view, which strengthens the power of argument. ) It is precisely because of Yu Min's indifferent and quiet mentality that ordinary people can't reach-abandoning complexity and isolating noise, that he can settle down in his academic field for more than 30 years and achieve outstanding achievements that ordinary people can't reach-winning the highest science and technology award in XX country. (In-depth analysis is made by using causal analysis, pointing out the direction for Yu Min to succeed.) "Life is for perception." Shi Tiesheng said. Indeed, what we have to do all our lives is to experience the wonderful life. However, what can we say when the flashy noise blinds our eyes? Throughout the ages, many people with lofty ideals and lofty temperament have made a perfect interpretation of giving up prosperity and understanding life. Kant got rid of the obsession of aristocratic society and devoted himself to philosophy, realizing the origin of everything; Mr. Tang Yijie avoided the media, concentrated on writing Confucianism and Tibetan, and realized the brilliance of sages; Yang li Ping got rid of the dilemma of dance commercialization and compiled Tibetan Fan, which realized the truth and nature of the original ecology ... In the process of their understanding of life, their life value was reflected, and at this time they also achieved themselves and achieved great things. And everything stems from their abandonment of the hustle and bustle. (The single case of "park geun-hye" was changed to multiple cases of "Kant, Tang and Yu"-a short case, which formed a "point-to-face combination" argument pattern with the previous case of "Wang Shu and Yu Min" to demonstrate the central argument more clearly and forcefully) Rice got rid of glitz, precipitated itself and eventually became a good wine; The mountain spring is not flashy, unassuming and always clear; Lily got rid of glitz and took root in the mountains, which is a story of the fragrance of the empty valley. Only by abandoning complexity and precipitating yourself can we succeed. (At the end, Zhang Xianzhi once again pointed to the theme and strengthened the central argument.) Comments on excellent works: the center is outstanding, which is the most vivid and profound impression this article gives. The title of this article is the central argument of the article. Show the central argument clearly after quoting the materials at the beginning, which is the premise of getting high marks in the composition of the examination room. In addition, the two detailed examples of "Wang Shu and Yu Min" can fasten the directional narrative of the central argument, pay attention to analysis and exposition, well reveal the internal causal relationship of things, and make the viewpoints and arguments blend well. The third argument in the original text, that is, the argument of "park geun-hye", seems to be divorced from the argument and fails to effectively prove the central argument. The upgraded composition has been revised and presented in the form of simple examples, which makes the main part "point-to-face" and "detailed and appropriate", and well expounds the central argument; Use parallelism at the end, click the topic again, and further confirm the central argument. It can be said that the theme of this article is like a flag flying in front of readers, coupled with the concise directional narrative and strong in-depth argument of the argument, thus jumping into a volume.