What is the whole sentence? The whole sentence is relative to any sentence, that is, a group of sentences with the same structure and roughly equal words. It is embodied in sentences that use rhetorical devices such as parallelism, duality, repetition, truthfulness and circulation.
Its advantages are the harmonious beauty of phonology, the neat beauty of rhythm form, richer content and deeper meaning. When using this form, we should be careful not to pursue the form deliberately, but to focus on the profound meaning of the content.
For example: 2 bees pick flowers to make honey; Silkworms eat mulberry and spin silk; Cows eat grass and milk. As the spirit of all things, people who have learned scientific knowledge should not just repeat the wisdom of their predecessors, but should create something.
If an article only uses parallelism rhetoric, it will inevitably appear dull and not profound enough. Because this paragraph lists two unquestionable common sense in real life first, it makes the latter view more acceptable.
In the examination composition, the beginning or end of this method often has unexpected results. How can you not like the beginning? Unfortunately, I have never seen a towering mountain; I still regret not seeing the majestic mountains and the vastness of the sea; I still regret not seeing the vastness of the sea and the vastness of the desert; It's a pity to see only the vastness of the desert and not the mystery of the forest. There are endless scenery in the world, and I have a feeling of youth.
I always lead out the full text by asking questions, and then answer the reasons why I like to start with parallelism and real rhetoric. The language situation is smooth and advanced layer by layer, thus laying a solid foundation for the ending of the sentence "I am in a young state of mind" ) In the examination room composition, if you can concentrate on pen and ink and write a beginning or end in the form of a whole sentence, it will definitely light up the "literary talent" of the whole article. Then, it is not the highest score of development level. 2. Embedding famous sentences and appropriately quoting famous aphorisms can enrich the language of the article and enhance the expression effect of the article. The article can't be full of words, but if you can quote some famous aphorisms that shine with wisdom and contain rich ideological connotations, it will often add a lot of color to the article.
For example: ① I will choose to give up and find a more suitable goal. Since I can't find a "prosperous land of flowers and willows, a gentle and rich country", why not find a pure land where there is moonlight in the pine forest and crystal stone in the stream? Since we can't appreciate the beautiful scenery of "the bright moon is born in the tide", why not cook a pot of chrysanthemum wine and invite the sparse stars to drink together? I like Li Qingzhao, who is full of heroic spirit in grace. Although "people are thinner than yellow flowers", she also sang Xiang Yu who rejected Jiangdong. I am Shi, with extraordinary talent, but calm in the face of shock. Although he yearns for the great cause of "heroic spirit and heroic hair", he is permeated with the natural harmony of "light makeup and heavy makeup"; I like Lu Xun, who hates evil and is soft-hearted. Although it is "pointing fingers", there is also deep affection of "bowing your head and being a willing ox". (3) Choosing fraternity means choosing to cherish feelings.
All the way through life, I care about everything. Affection, friendship and love make life full of emotion and beauty.
"The thread in the hands of a loving mother makes clothes for her wayward son" is the love of the family; "However, although China holds our friendship, heaven is still our neighbor" is the concern of friendship; "When * * * is cutting candles at the west window, but talking about the rain in the evening" is the yearning of love. Every life can't go out of the range of emotions. It is those emotions that make people live well, work hard and cherish every minute.
Cherish emotions and make life more touching and unforgettable. The above three fragments selected from the excellent compositions of the college entrance examination all took the famous ancient poems and sentences, which achieved twice the result with half the effort in expression, and also showed their own cultural heritage to the marking teacher.
If the language from the author's pen is compared to a crown, then the appropriate epigram is like a pearl embedded in the crown. Candidates who have accumulated rich ancient poems and famous sentences in their chests above the examination room should not show their talents with this! Third, turn virtual into real.
The purpose of turning emptiness into reality is to make abstract and implicit concept words concrete, visual, knowable and influential. What is happiness? Happiness is the breeze blowing in the early summer morning when you open the window.
It is your peace of mind when you sit alone listening to music, and your gratitude when you take over the work from your mother. Happiness is always by your side.
(2) Friendship is a life-long savings that benefits a lot. This savings is to give all help in a difficult situation, to give severe advice on the wrong road, to help you sincerely when you fall, and to wipe away your tears when you are in pain.
3 chic is a beautiful scenery that persists in everyone's heart. The connotation of chic is all-encompassing. "Picking chrysanthemums under the hedge" is a pure chic, "It is better to walk" is a joyful chic, and "pointing out the mountains and inspiring words" is a heroic chic.
Jewelry and heavy makeup are not chic; Blind conformity, chasing fashion is not chic; Nonsense, glib, not chic; Boasting and comparing with each other is not chic at all. "Happiness", "friendship" and "chic" in the above paragraphs are abstract nouns. If you simply explain the concept, it is difficult for readers to resonate. By interpreting specific events in life, the author can easily arouse readers' perceptual experience and make people have rich associations.
Writing time, ideals, beliefs, self-esteem and self-improvement in this way ... can't they all be vivid and vivid, and the image is touching? Fourth, be skillful in application. China has a long history and left many famous sayings.
Poems and songs, movies, songs and advertisements, many sentences are familiar. The transformation and application of famous sentences and new wine in old bottles will often achieve the ideal effect of turning decay into magic if they can be easily used in composition and embedded in their own articles.
(1) Some students satirized some abnormal phenomena today and changed the first sentence of My Humble Room Inscription to "If your score is not high, you have the right to have sex; Not much, money is spiritual. " (2) A student preparing for the college entrance examination has to do 1 1.35kg paper in one semester, so he can only think about surfing with a floppy disk in class.
(3) "Cloned sheep, no father, no mother. Famous people publish books, which is a mess.
Tell everyone a secret: so-and-so actually cloned his parents' signatures! "Little radio" announced loudly. "(4) Really brave, dare to face sad scores and dare to face severe criticism.
⑤ Blood can flow and head can be broken. Never mess up your hair.
The above sentences are witty and quiet.
2. How to make the composition literary? 1. Image is the key to literary talent.
The accumulation of image alone can also be brilliant. For example, Ma Zhiyuan's "Tianjingsha", if you decide to write an essay, it is a good way, and it is often refreshing to use it at the beginning. 2. If you decide to write an argumentative essay, parallelism is the most direct way to make the essay powerful. For example, how many gifted scholars in the Tang Dynasty had their brows wrinkled by the wind? How many beautiful women's eyes were wet by rain in Song Dynasty? How many literati's cheeks were pale in the heavy snow of the Ming Dynasty? China culture with ten thousand customs is so worrying ... (Ha ha, I wrote this example myself, don't take it amiss) 3. Argumentative essay in prose language.
Perhaps you will wonder why the above example is classified as argumentative, even though it was written in prose. In fact, writing argumentative essays in prose language is the easiest way to get high marks, because it has prose language, beautiful style of writing and rigorous argumentative structure, so that teachers can see it at a glance. 4. Accumulate some typical but not rampant examples. Don't write a composition just because Tao Yuanming didn't bend over for Wudou Rice, Li Bai didn't satisfy his talent, Su Shi was relegated to a broad mind, and Edison failed to invent the light bulb n times. This kind of rubbish will deduct points from your article when the teacher is tired of aesthetics.
3. How to make the composition literary? 1. Image is the key to literary talent. The accumulation of image alone can also be brilliant.
For example, Ma Zhiyuan's "Tianjingsha" withered vine, old tree, faint crow, small bridge and flowing water.
If you decide to write prose, it is a good idea to start with it, which is often refreshing.
2. If you decide to write an argumentative essay, parallelism is the most direct way to make the essay powerful.
For example:
How many gifted scholars in the Tang Dynasty had their brows wrinkled by the wind?
How many beautiful women's eyes were wet by rain in Song Dynasty?
How many literati's cheeks were pale in the heavy snow of the Ming Dynasty?
Ten thousand kinds of China culture, how worrying. ...
Ha ha, I wrote this example myself. Don't take it to heart. )
3. Argumentative essay in prose language. Perhaps you will wonder why the above example is classified as argumentative, even though it was written in prose.
In fact, writing argumentative essays in prose language is the easiest way to get high marks, because it has prose language, beautiful style of writing and rigorous argumentative structure, so that teachers can see it at a glance.
4. Accumulate some typical but not rampant examples. Don't write a composition just because Tao Yuanming didn't bend over for Wudou Rice, Li Bai didn't satisfy his talent, Su Shi was relegated to a broad mind, and Edison failed to invent the light bulb n times. This kind of rubbish will deduct points from your article when the teacher is tired of aesthetics.
4. How to make the composition vivid? 1. Observe. Observe the world around you carefully. Pay attention to every detail. 2. read. The more you read, the better. Read famous books, read all kinds of words. Read not only what you like, but also what you disagree with. If you want to criticize a person's work, you must finish it first. Only when you know, can you have the right to speak. 3. Excerpts. You must have the habit of excerpting when reading. When you see the sentences and paragraphs that you think are good and can arouse your excitement or inspire you, copy them in a fixed place. 4. recite. Good poems, sentences and articles should be memorized. Reciting is a process of accumulation. 5. The article should be prepared. In other words, writing articles should have momentum and write like water. There must be ups and downs, especially the best twists and turns of some stories, which give people an unexpected feeling. Only in this way can readers be attracted to continue reading. 6. Think carefully about the words used in the article to see which one is the most appropriate. Some well-written articles seem dull at first glance, and you seem to think that you can write them. But if you study them carefully, you will find that there is the author's deliberation behind the insipid. Just like the highest state of women's makeup is to be natural, as if there is no makeup. Writing articles is not by piling up flowery words. Is to choose words carefully, without missing a spark. 7. You must have feelings when writing an article. Writing an article shows your heart to a great extent. If an article can't even touch the author himself, how can you touch others? Readers can communicate with the author through his words, so I write my heart by hand. When you write something with your heart, you will find that it is completely different from what you usually write about coping or other things. 8. Write more articles. No matter how much you say, it's better to write by hand.
5. How to write a literary composition? First of all, when writing a composition, you should have a clear point of view and clear thinking. Don't think that literary talent means changing sentence patterns. Use several rhetorical devices to realize that language and thinking are inseparable. There is no thought divorced from language, and there is no language that does not express any thought. With clear views and clear thinking, language expression will be smooth; Grasping the characteristics of things, language expression will be more vivid. Therefore, in order to make an article literary, we must first have clear views and clear ideas. Secondly, temper language and pay attention to the literariness of language. Confucius said: without words, it is not far away. He believes that speaking and writing articles should be not only ideological, but also literary, so that articles will not be handed down from generation to generation. It can be seen that a good article should not only be ideological, but also be rich in literature. For middle school students who are not proficient in language skills, it is particularly important to temper their language and pay attention to its literariness. Here are several ways to make the article rich in literary talent: method one: temper the language and pursue the vivid image of the language. To make your composition reflect the vivid characteristics of vocabulary, you must have a direction and purpose in the process of accumulating vocabulary, that is, what vocabulary we should accumulate in the composition. So what words should be used in the composition? In a word, it is fresh, lively, not rigid, not rigid, full of vitality, expressive and infectious words, that is, vivid words. Write a person's narrative and ask it to be vivid; Express a person's feelings and wishes, and seek the smoothness of his feelings. ① Use vivid words. Vividness of language is often closely linked with vividness, just like shapes and shadows. In other words, vivid language is often the language of images, and its main feature is architectural beauty, that is, three-dimensional sense. It can arouse readers' vivid thinking and stimulate readers' rich imagination and association. It can give people a feeling of being there, seeing things and hearing sounds. For example, a monk knocks at the door under the moon, and the spring breeze is green. Green in Jiang Nanan (adjectives are used flexibly as verbs). Because of the vivid and appropriate use of these two words, this work has become a masterpiece that has been handed down through the ages. When portraying characters, action description is an important means to portray characters. The key to describe their behavior is verbs. It can accurately reflect the subtle differences between characters' actions, express the characters' personality characteristics, convey the author's love and hate, make the characters vivid and give people a sense of relief. Therefore, the verbs used in writing should be accurate, vivid and emotional, reflect the personality characteristics of the characters, and include the author's love and hate. ② Use musical words. The so-called musical beauty refers to the author's use of the tonal characteristics such as the smooth change of Chinese characters and the harmony of phonology to form a kind of melodic beauty, which makes the article sound and affectionate, with good sound and meaning. In the process of writing, we should pay attention to tone collocation, rhyme coordination, clever use of overlapping words and emphasis on rhythm. For example, moonlight is like running water, quietly pouring on this leaf and flower. A thin green mist floats in the lotus pond, and leaves and flowers seem to be there. Lived up the moonlight with a dynamic verb, and wrote the scene of Yue Hui shining like a torrent. It depicts the moonlight rising slowly from bottom to top, spreading slowly and infiltrating into the lotus pond. Washing the Cage turned a static scene into a dynamic one, vividly depicting the hazy beauty of moonlight. Method 2: Choose sentence patterns to strive for the richness and diversity of the language. Different sentence patterns can be used to express the same meaning. It can also be expressed in several different sentence patterns. Mood and mood change accordingly, so the language style and expression effect are different. For example, the whole sentence (such as four-character grid, etc. ) make the sentences neat, the scattered sentences make the text smooth, and the article is lively and interesting through clever use of oral English. The article skillfully uses classical Chinese, which has its own quaint style. The so-called flexible sentence pattern refers to the author's proper choice and flexible transformation of sentence patterns according to the characteristics of the language environment and the needs of expression without changing his own meaning, so that the writing will be vivid, free, not stiff and not rigid. Common sentence patterns are: affirmative and negative sentences, active and passive sentences, long sentences. Oral and written sentences, whole sentences and scattered sentences, etc. Sentences can be divided into declarative sentences, interrogative sentences, imperative sentences and exclamatory sentences according to mood. In order to make the sentence patterns of the article flexible, we should pay attention to expressing a meaning in different ways, understand the characteristics of various sentence patterns, the expression effect and the characteristics of the language environment, and master the general methods of changing sentence patterns and choosing sentence patterns. For example, method 3: use rhetoric to improve the beauty and charm of language, and use rhetoric to beautify language. It is an important means to make the article literary. Liu Xie pointed out in Wen Xin Diao Long Cai Qing: The speaker is Wen Yuan. The general idea is that an article can be passed down through the ages because it has literary talent. Li Ao, an essayist in the Tang Dynasty, also pointed out in "Answering Wang Zai Yan Shu": Although the meaning is deep, the words are correct, and the words are not written. It means that an article can't be written even if it is established. This shows the importance of rhetoric in writing. The same meaning is expressed in different rhetorical devices, and the effect is completely different. Master the function and effect metaphor of commonly used rhetoric: when used in narration, explanation and description, things can be vivid, vivid and concrete, giving people a vivid impression; When it is used in argumentative writing, it can concretize abstract truth and make abstruse truth easy to understand. Analogy: it can make readers have a vivid impression on the things expressed, produce strong feelings and cause * * *. Metonymy: it can highlight the image and make it concrete and vivid. Exaggeration: it can arouse rich imagination, better highlight the characteristics of things and arouse readers' strong * * *. The content is concise and concentrated, and the generalization ability is strong. Parallelism: it can enhance the momentum of language. When used for reasoning, it can explain the truth more strictly and thoroughly. When used to express emotions, feelings can be expressed incisively and vividly. Question: The overall function is to make readers think. Used in the title, it can attract readers, inspire readers to think and better reflect the center of the article; Used in paragraphs.
6. How to write a literary composition First of all, when writing a composition, you should have a clear point of view and clear thinking.
Don't think that literary talent means changing sentence patterns. Use several rhetorical devices to realize that language and thinking are inseparable. There is no thought divorced from language, and there is no language that does not express any thought.
With clear views and clear thinking, language expression will be smooth; Grasping the characteristics of things, language expression will be more vivid. Therefore, in order to make the article literary, we must first have a clear point of view and clear thinking.
Secondly, temper language and pay attention to the literariness of language. Confucius has a saying: without words, it is not far away.
He believes that speaking and writing articles should be not only thoughtful, but also literary. Without literary talent, the article will not be circulated. It can be seen that a good article should be not only thoughtful, but also rich in literary talent.
To make the article rich in literary talent, it is particularly important for middle school students who are not skilled in language ability to temper their language and pay attention to the literariness of the language. Here are several ways to make the article rich in literary talent: method one: temper the language and pursue the vivid image of the language. In order to make your composition reflect the vivid characteristics of words, you must have a direction and purpose in the process of accumulating words, that is, what words are needed in your composition.
So what kind of words do you need to use in your composition? Generally speaking, it is fresh, lively, not rigid, not rigid, full of vitality, expressive and infectious words, that is, vivid words. Write about landscapes and ask about their poverty; Write a person's narrative and ask it to be vivid; Speak with ambition and seek truth.
① Use figurative words. The vividness of language is often closely connected with images, just like form and shadow.
In other words, vivid language is often visual language, and its main feature is its architectural beauty, that is, its three-dimensional sense. It can arouse readers' thinking in images, stimulate readers' rich imagination and associative power, and give people a feeling of being there and hearing their voices.
Like a monk knocking at the door under the moon, the spring breeze is green. Green in Jiang Nanan (adjectives are used flexibly as verbs). Because of the vivid and appropriate use of these two words, it has a three-dimensional sense, making the work a masterpiece that has been passed down through the ages.
When portraying characters, action description is an important means to portray characters' personalities. The key to describing characters' behavior is the use of verbs.
If verbs are used skillfully and appropriately, they can accurately reflect the subtle differences of characters' actions, express their personality characteristics, convey the author's love and hate, make the characters vivid and give people a sense of relief. Therefore, the verbs used in writing should be accurate, vivid and emotional, reflecting the personality characteristics of the characters, including the author's love and hate.
② Use musical words. The so-called musical beauty refers to the author's use of the tonal characteristics such as the change of Chinese characters and the harmony of phonology to form the melodic beauty of cadence, which makes the article sound affectionate and sound and meaning good.
In the process of writing, pay attention to tone collocation, coordinate rhyme, skillfully use overlapping words, pay attention to rhythm and so on. Moonlight, like running water, pours quietly on this leaf and flower.
The thin blue mist floats in the lotus pond, and the leaves and flowers seem to have been washed by milk, and they are like veiled dreams. Describe the moonlight with running water, and point it out with dynamic verbs, so that the moonlight is vivid and colorful.
Describe the moonlight rising slowly from bottom to top, and then spreading slowly, permeating the lotus pond. Washing the Cage turned a static scene into a dynamic one, vividly depicting the hazy beauty of moonlight.
Method 2: Choose sentence patterns to make the language colorful. Different ideological contents can be expressed in different sentence patterns, and the same meaning can also be expressed in several different sentence patterns. Mood and mood change accordingly, so language style and expression effect are different.
For example, the whole sentence (such as four-character grid, etc. ) make sentences neat, and scattered sentences make the meaning flow. Skillful use of spoken English will make the article lively and interesting; The article skillfully uses classical Chinese, which has its own quaint style.
The so-called sentence flexibility refers to the author's appropriate choice of sentence patterns and flexible transformation of sentence patterns according to the characteristics of the language environment and the needs of expression, so that the writing will be vivid, free, not stiff and not rigid. Common sentence patterns include: affirmative and negative sentences, active and passive sentences, long and short sentences, regular and variant sentences, simple and complex sentences, oral and written sentences, whole sentences and scattered sentences.
Sentences are divided into declarative sentences, interrogative sentences, imperative sentences and exclamatory sentences according to mood. In order to make sentence patterns flexible, we should pay attention to expressing a meaning in different ways, understand the characteristics of various sentence patterns, the expression effect and the characteristics of language environment, and master the general methods of changing sentence patterns and choosing sentence patterns.
For example, the third method: using rhetoric to improve the beauty and charm of language, using rhetoric to beautify language is an important means to make the article literary. Liu Xie pointed out in Wen Xin Diao Long Cai Qing: The speaker is Wen Yuan.
The main idea is that the article can be passed down through the ages because of its literary talent. Li Ao, an essayist in the Tang Dynasty, also pointed out in "Answering Wang Zaiyan's Letter": Although the meaning is profound, the words are correct, and the words are not written.
It means that an article, even if profound and reasonable, cannot be an excellent work if the language is inaccurate, unclear and not vivid. All these show the importance of rhetoric to writing.
With different rhetorical devices, the expression effect of the same meaning is completely different. Master the function and effect metaphor of commonly used rhetoric: when used in narration, explanation and description, things can be vivid, vivid and concrete, giving people a vivid impression; When it is used in argumentative writing, it can concretize abstract truth and make abstruse truth easy to understand.
Analogy: it can make readers have a vivid impression on the things expressed, produce strong feelings and cause * * *. Metonymy: it can highlight the image and make it concrete and vivid.
Exaggeration: it can arouse rich imagination, better highlight the characteristics of things, and cause a strong buzz among readers. Duality: formally, syllables are neat and symmetrical, with strong sense of rhythm and beautiful rhythm; The content is concise and concentrated, with strong generality.
Parallelism: it can enhance the momentum of language. Accustomed to reasoning, can explain the truth more closely and thoroughly; Used to express feelings, can express feelings to the fullest.
Question: The general function is introduction.
7. How can I write a literary article? On the contrary, if the article is both good-looking and quality, it will make people drink after reading it, and it will last for a long time! So how can we make the article literary? What is literary talent? Literary talent is the beauty of words, and readers feel beautiful. To put it mildly, the text of the article is lively, which can vividly describe the things and things and explain the truth to the fullest. How to achieve literary talent? The first trick: substitute flowers for trees-increase the intensity of the article. Substituting flowers for trees-commonly known as "quotations", quotations should be accurate and clever. If you want to express a kind of "worry" emotion in the article, what famous sayings can you quote? Why do you admire these sentences so much? "Sadness" is an abstract emotion in people's minds, which can't be seen or touched. How to express it? Many outstanding literati and poets, with their unique feelings and talents, have blossomed beautiful flowers and left a dazzling array of vivid sentences: "How much leisure?" Yichuan tobacco, the wind blows all over the city, and the plum rains when it is yellow. "With white hair and three thousands of feet, sorrow is like a beard", "How much sorrow can there be, just like a river flowing eastward" and "One boat and two streams, I'm afraid it can't hold much sorrow". Taking a spring river as an image not only gives a lot of "troubles", but also expresses. There is a concrete, textured, people feel very strong. Li Qingzhao got on the boat with "sadness". There is a sentence in the West Chamber written by Dong Jieyuan in the Jin Dynasty: "Mo Wen is very sad, please take a horse." The West Chamber written by Wang Shifu in the Yuan Dynasty also said, "How can you afford these cars when the worries of the world are on your mind? "Highlight its heavy. These tangible and powerful "troubles" are more real and vivid than our pale saying, "Trouble, trouble has turned a teenager's head white". Look at this passage: "Hope, hope. Autumn wind is coming, just after the Mid-Autumn Festival; ..... ",the" flower "in front moved, and the" wood "in the back was not properly connected. Some dogs had mink tails. Proper quotation of famous sayings in the article will produce concise, literary and profound effects. After reading it, people can get aesthetic effects and produce ideas. The second measure: the eighteen palms of the dragon-strive to achieve: plain words are strange, common words are dangerous, old words are new, plain words are colorful, and write their own highlights; It is also necessary to make the sentence patterns uneven and hierarchical: according to the characteristics of the language environment and the needs of expression, under the condition of not changing the meaning, choose the sentence patterns appropriately, flexibly change the sentence patterns, and use various sentence patterns alternately, so as to make the writing vivid, free and not stiff. Not rigid. For example, affirmative and negative sentences, active and passive sentences, long and short sentences, regular and variant sentences, simple and complex sentences, oral and written sentences, whole sentences and scattered sentences. Look at this passage: the father generation, to put it bluntly, is the "father" generation. Seriously, Dad's generation is really "poor": born in the fire, it began to grow. Analysis: This passage is worth mentioning in the use of sentence patterns. It uses scattered sentences, but it can combine vulgarity with elegance and length. The first two sentences of "Dad" are, to put it bluntly, the generation of "Dad". Seriously, Dad's generation is really "poor", which means "vulgar" thoroughly in spoken English. Later, there were some classical Chinese texts such as "temples cream" and "old age", which were elegant enough. Therefore, the combination of length and width and the combination of elegance and vulgarity make the sentences uneven and full of literary talent. The third measure: nine swords of solitude-modify the form of the article. The Nine Swords of Dugu, which adds literary grace to the article, means to make good use of rhetoric, and it is only for everyone present. Turn abstruse into obvious; Turn abstract into concrete; Turn verbosity into conciseness. Personification: Depicting images, expressing rich meanings and having a sense of intimacy. Exaggeration: reveal the essence and give people inspiration; Set off the atmosphere and enhance the appeal; Induce association and create artistic conception. Parallelism: concentrate the content and enhance the momentum; Narrative breakthrough.