"Qi": inclusive and profound.
"Qi" exists in our life all the time. Whether it is the function of tools or the symbol of talent and aesthetics, it is closely related to us. "If a worker wants to do a good job, he must first sharpen his tools", and "tools" are practical tools to achieve his career; "Jade is not cut, it is not a tool", and people have to be tempered to become beautiful tools; "container" is a measure, which is the atmosphere containing flood fibers; "Qi" is also the pillar of the country, and it is a great weapon for benefiting people's livelihood and defending the country. "Qi" carries profound cultural connotation and positive practical significance.
The topic of composition in Tianjin Volume focuses on discovering the excellent factors in China traditional culture, closely following the educational mission of "educating people with moral education", and inspiring candidates to understand and think about becoming useful people and a weapon of the country. The topic of the composition is plain and profound, which provides candidates with a multi-faceted thinking path and is conducive to examining their observation, imagination, aesthetics and logical thinking ability. A senior Chinese teacher believes that the composition topic has diverse perspectives and distinct levels, and candidates at different levels can find their own writing space. Candidates can write "Qi" in physics, or think about the relationship between form and content, or think about the difference between Qi and Tao; You can write about personal ability, talent and tolerance, and explore the significance of "qi" in talent and morality; You can use words as a tool to explore the role of sharp weapons in promoting scientific and technological development and social progress; You can also write about great powers and weapons, and understand the great significance of weapons to the development of the country and the nation ... The composition can be reasonable, discussed, described, lyrical, described and explained.
The official account of WeChat, the official WeChat of Tianjin Education News, specially invites senior Chinese teachers in this city to comment on this year's composition topic.
Du Chaofeng, special Chinese teacher in Tianjin and scientific research director of No.4 Middle School:
This year's Tianjin college entrance examination Chinese composition paper is moderately difficult and the proposition orientation is positive.
On the one hand, judging from the candidates' writing style, candidates at all levels can find room to play. Because "utensils" can be said to be everywhere in our lives. Seeing the topic of the composition, students can easily think of many words such as "heavy tools", "unfinished jade" and "if a worker wants to do a good job, he must sharpen his tools first", and then explore the rich connotation of "tools" from the aspects of form and matter, matter and spirit or function and symbol, and write his own thoughts and feelings.
On the other hand, from the perspective of proposition orientation, Tianjin's composition focuses on exploring the excellent factors of China's traditional culture, enlightening candidates' understanding and thinking of becoming a useful tool and a heavy weapon of the country, which is conducive to guiding students to enhance their cultural consciousness and self-confidence, cultivate and practice socialist core values, and then implement the fundamental task of moral education.
The composition of Tianjin volume adopts the form of new material composition. The materials give different "artifacts" in life and make appropriate guidance and restrictions. "Artifacts can hold everything, help others to accomplish things, show their talents and tolerance, shoulder their glory and realize their dreams ..." Not only is it rich in meaning, but it also builds a broad imagination and expression space, so that candidates can correctly understand and use the materials.
The topic requires candidates to "according to their own experiences and feelings", which is intended to require candidates to write their own ideas and make the article think for themselves. Composition can be reasoned, discussed, narrated, lyrical, described and explained. If you write a narrative, you can express people's ideological realm and character cultivation through the narrative, so as to get lessons, edification and encouragement; You can also write essays to express your feelings about talent and virtue; You can also write an argumentative paper to discuss the role of sharp weapons in promoting the development of science and technology and social progress, or you can write a big country and realize the great significance of "weapons" to the development of the country and the nation ... Any style can meet this proposition. Candidates should pay attention to several points when writing: first, fully understand the materials; The second is to activate the knowledge and experience of brain inventory; The third is to show sharp thinking and personality characteristics.
Yu Yu, a student of the Foundation Project for Future Educators in Tianjin Primary and Secondary Schools, and a senior three Chinese teacher in experimental middle schools;
This year's Tianjin college entrance examination composition, under the premise of popularization and life, greatly demonstrates its cultural taste, so that every student has something to say. It is simple and elegant and has a far-reaching influence in people's minds. It can be said that it is of extraordinary quality and far-reaching significance.
The article is rich in ideas, and students at all levels have room to play, but writing well requires more cultural accumulation and strong ideological content. Judging from its material, "implements" must be beautiful and practical. Only by constantly enhancing their abilities can they be useful, and only by constantly improving their self-cultivation can they be beautiful. Personally, I think it can be written as "a jade is not cut, it is not a tool", "If a worker wants to do a good job, he must sharpen his tools first", and abandoning gadgets and advocating the accumulation of tools can be contrary to his original intention. As far as the whole society and country are concerned, it can also be written as a heavy weapon of a big country and a sharp weapon of the country. Of course, it is best to pay attention to the relationship between the two.
Liu Qiang, Head of Senior Three Chinese Preparation Team of Tianjin No.41 Middle School:
This year's composition topic is led by different "devices" that contain everything. The topic is clear, the prompt is sufficient, and the examination of the topic is not difficult, which leaves a lot of room for candidates' thinking, thus activating candidates' thinking to a greater extent and giving candidates something to say. Whether talking about lifestyle or expressing feelings about home and country, writing is more beneficial for students.
If I were a candidate, I would consider writing from the following two angles.
One is to choose one of several "artifacts" mentioned in the materials to write, such as: China artifacts, craftsman's heart-on the material and cultural heritage of China traditional culture, such as ceramics, bronzes, carved furniture, etc. , reflecting the beauty of culture. Great achievements, great achievements-emphasize that as a new generation, we should be far-sighted and have great achievements, and one day we will become the heavy weapon of the country and the pride of the people. A weapon of the country, a new journey-in the past five years, on the one hand, we have actively reformed, on the other hand, we have created a more meaningful weapon of a big country.
The second is to explain it in simple terms, and write its symbolic meaning in combination with several "devices" in the prompt. For example, the instrument is a kind of talent and temperament, and the instrument of a person is that a person can cultivate his self-cultivation and go through hardships before he can become a pillar. Artifacts are an all-inclusive river, cherishing the bearing of the sun and the moon. Olympic athletes who win glory for their country and scientific research teams who study day and night all have such a spiritual temperament. Weapons are the heavy weapons of the country. Whether it is the spirit of the 19th National Congress guiding our direction, or the scientific and technological talents symbolizing the country's soft power, or the major scientific and technological achievements such as Tiangong, Jiaolong, Eye of Heaven, Wukong, Mozi and Big Aircraft have come out one after another in recent years. The heavy weapon of the country is an important element to promote the development of China.
However, from the Analects of Confucius, it is also a rare angle to talk about the national rejuvenation of the country by shaping the ideal personality and independent spirit.