Excellent paper review 1 excellent:
The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has high academic research (reference) value (great practical guiding significance).
The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, and can comprehensively collect information about the examination system. In the process of writing, I can comprehensively apply the knowledge of the examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems existing in the examination system, and I have a strong ability to comprehensively apply knowledge.
The length of the article fully conforms to the requirements of the college, with complete content, scientific hierarchical structure, prominent points, clear logical relationship and certain personal opinions.
The topics are completely consistent, the arguments are prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Rich references and strong timeliness; There is no plagiarism.
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The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has academic research (reference) value (practical guiding significance).
The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, and can comprehensively collect information about the examination system. He can comprehensively apply the knowledge of the examination system, comprehensively analyze the problems existing in the examination system, and has a strong ability to comprehensively apply knowledge.
The length of the article fully meets the requirements of the college, the content is relatively complete, the hierarchical structure is scientific, the main points are prominent, and the logical relationship is clear, but it lacks personal opinions.
The topic is consistent, the argument is prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Rich references and strong timeliness; No plagiarism was found.
Medium:
The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is average. The topic selection has academic research (reference) value (practical guiding significance).
The student's ability to consult documents is average, and he can collect information about the examination system. In the process of writing, he can basically use the knowledge of the examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems of the examination system, and his ability to comprehensively use knowledge is average.
The length of the article fully meets the requirements of the college, the content is basically complete, the hierarchical structure is general, and the main points are focused on certain logic, but there is a lack of personal opinions.
The topics are basically the same, and the arguments are more prominent. Discussion can better serve the argument.
The language expression is general, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Referring to some documents, its timeliness is general; No obvious plagiarism was found.
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The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal, and can basically achieve the comprehensive training goal, with less difficulty and less workload. The theme of the paper is general. Students' ability to consult documents is poor, and they can't collect information about the examination system comprehensively. In the process of writing, his ability to comprehensively apply the knowledge of examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems of examination system is poor.
The length of the article meets the requirements of the college, the content is not complete enough, the hierarchical structure is problematic, the main points are not prominent enough, the logic is poor, and there is no personal opinion.
The title of the article is biased, the argument is not prominent enough, and the discussion can't stick to the theme.
The language expression is poor and the format meets the requirements of the specification; Less possession data and poor timeliness; Some contents are similar to others' achievements.
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This topic is novel in angle, clear in context, fluent in writing and clear in basic viewpoints. The main problems still exist in the article: students have not thoroughly digested the information they are looking for and the arguments are not strong enough.
First of all, it is worthy of recognition that the title of this article is well conceived. It is also a subject with a relatively large research space. In the limited space, the paper can basically be described clearly. This topic belongs to the field of industry research level and first-hand data accumulation. Pay attention to fully absorb the existing research results to support your own analysis and research.
In the whole graduation thesis design, students can successfully complete the thesis writing under the strict requirements of teachers. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to the writing standard of the paper. The author compares ADS-B and RNP with traditional navigation methods, and we can clearly see the advantages of ADS-B and RNP. In order to write this paper well, the author obviously consulted a lot of information, which was fully discussed and clearly organized. Of course, there are also some shortcomings and areas that need improvement. For example, the knowledge is not wide enough to actively communicate with teachers about the work process. I hope this student will pay attention to these problems in his future work or study and strive for greater improvement and progress.
Comments on excellent papers 2 1. In the five-minute presentation, the student introduced the main content and structure of the paper, as well as the research conducted for it, which showed that he had a certain understanding of the research issues. The video design is beautiful, but it doesn't meet the professional requirements. It will be better to design the implementation process from the perspective of computer science.
The student fluently stated the purpose, theoretical and practical significance of writing this paper. The design process of antique websites is standardized, but there is little connection between entities and concepts. The whole design should meet the requirements of the computer as much as possible.
The student speaks clearly and answers questions fluently. Although the paper has a good idea and certain research value, the framework and content are huge, which requires strong independent research ability, and the title of the paper and the client login server module need to be slightly modified. The students are well prepared, the link sentences are complete, the thesis is clearly conceived, which embodies a good professional foundation and a good grasp of time. That is, there is demand in the paper but there is a lack of demand analysis, and the answers to some defense questions are not clear, and the graphic representation is not standardized.
4. Students use dreamweave and access database technology to design Ganzi tourism website. The design is fresh and beautiful, the main questions are answered accurately, and the basic concepts are clear. I want to correct the database storage problem in the file.
5. Students have good professional quality, can answer questions fluently and have a high correct rate. He has a good understanding of the problems encountered in the implementation process and a good grasp of time. It would be better if he could implement it in a relatively new operating environment.
6. The student explained the design details of the database in detail, did in-depth research, and independently completed the design part of the forum. He has certain scientific research ability, clear thinking in his defense and concise and smooth answers. After careful discussion, the defense team agreed that the student's performance was good, but asked the student to correct some mistakes in the paper.
7. In the ten-minute presentation, the student introduced the main points, content and structure of the paper, as well as the writing process of the paper. The organization is clear, the language is correct, and the teacher's questions are basically answered correctly, which reflects a certain professional quality. However, there are some minor problems in the design process and the flow chart is not perfect. I hope to correct it in time.
8. As can be seen from the defense, this student has a solid professional foundation, is well prepared, is very familiar with the contents of the paper, can concisely and clearly state the design ideas and processes, has a smooth system display, has well-founded answers to questions, has clear basic concepts, and has certain innovations in the paper. I hope to continue to improve some words and symbols in the paper and strive for standardized use.
9. The student explained the main contents of the paper fluently and clearly within the specified time, and was able to answer the questions related to the paper properly, with a modest attitude and a solid computer foundation. It is suggested to use appropriate words to express the image opening function and standardize the paper format.
10. Combining with mathematical knowledge, using computer technology to deal with geological problems, and mastering methods and principles comprehensively, this paper is innovative. The results of fast Fourier transform and wavelet transform are analyzed in place, and the processing effect is good, and the computer basic literacy is good. The answers to the main questions in the defense are accurate and thorough. It would be better if there is a contrast between the converted indicators in this paper.
1 1. The paper is clearly stated and the explanation is simple and clear. The disadvantage is that they lack their own new ideas and methods, and most of them apply other people's research results. The format of papers should be standardized.
12. The defense is well prepared. I can answer the teacher's questions in detail, discuss the difficulties encountered in the research and design process repeatedly, find a better solution, and have good professional skills. It would be better if the static web page can be made dynamic by combining professional improvement, but the deficiency is that the description of the table in the database is not quite right, and I hope it can be improved.
13. The paper is clearly stated and straight to the point. I can answer the teacher's questions fluently and think clearly, but I can't correctly explain some codes in the paper and there are a few language errors. I hope there will be more innovations in future research.
14. The student can state the main contents of the paper within the specified time, but the answers to questions in the defense are not very smooth, and he is not familiar with the details and techniques of the design, and the answers to questions are not relevant enough.
15. Elaborate the paper from five parts, with prominent points, fluent and skilled defense, basic knowledge in place and time meeting the requirements. The disadvantage is that there are some conceptual mistakes in the article.
16. During the defense, students can skillfully and concisely state the main contents of the paper within the specified time, with clear organization and obvious innovation, quick response and accurate expression when answering questions, skilled system demonstration and high professional quality. After deliberation by the defense Committee, it was unanimously agreed that his grades were excellent.