Graduation thesis review teacher comments 1 1. The topic of this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the learned knowledge is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The obtained data is reasonable, the conclusion is correct and innovative. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent. In the future, we should further sum up experience and compare moral education models, so that moral education can be carried out better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
2. The paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Can be a good investigation of existing problems. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure. The viewpoint is expressed accurately. The research principles are appropriate. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
3. The full text is entitled-. In view of the existing problems, put forward effective suggestions. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is reasonable. The reference materials are closely combined with the theme.
4. The full text is entitled-. This paper focuses on the analysis of the existing problems and their causes, and puts forward some operable countermeasures for the problems. The full-text topic is novel and research-oriented. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the thinking is clear, the viewpoint is clear, and the arguments are convincing. The demonstration method is reasonable, and a large number of data are used to demonstrate, which increases the reliability of the demonstration. Can comprehensively use the professional knowledge of administrative management for analysis, but the main deficiency is that the language is not very refined.
5. In the ten-minute presentation, the student introduced the main idea, content and structure of the paper, as well as the writing process of the paper. It was clear and organized, and there were no big mistakes in language. He gave a basically correct answer to the teacher's questions, which reflected a certain professional quality. However, there are some minor problems in the design process and the flow chart is not perfect. I hope to correct it in time.
6. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. Each part is closely related, the viewpoint is expressed accurately, and the argumentation content is convincing, but the article lacks its own original content.
7. Focus on the theme. The topic selection is in line with the training objectives and professional characteristics of administrative management specialty, and has strong pertinence and practical significance. The structure of the article is reasonable, the level is clear, and the relevant documents and materials cited in the writing are closely related to the theme, and the reference materials are relatively new. In the process of writing, the author can better use the basic knowledge of administrative management to analyze administrative management, and in the process of argumentation, he mainly uses theoretical argumentation and factual argumentation. However, the shortcomings of the article are unclear expression of some sentences, insufficient argumentation and insufficient innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
8. The title of this paper is novel and practical. The full text has scientific and reasonable structure, strong logic and clear thinking, and the references consulted meet the requirements of the paper. The demonstration method is reasonable. The content of the argument is more convincing. The analysis of the problem is more thorough. In the process of demonstration, students can also combine the principles of administrative professional knowledge with social reality. Whether it is from the topic selection or viewpoint demonstration, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty. But innovation is not enough.
9. In order to solve the problem, we first discuss-,then analyze the reasons-,and put forward effective countermeasures to solve the problem. Therefore, this article is closely related to the professional requirements, with scientific and reasonable structure, accurate expression of views, correct words, fluent sentences and clear thinking. The relationship between the parts is very close, and the argumentation method adopts case argumentation and case argumentation. The information consulted is sufficient and reasonable. The countermeasures to solve the problem still lack maneuverability.
10, this article is the theme, which fully embodies the social value of the times and reality. The full text is divided into three parts. This paper first discusses-,and then focuses on analyzing-. The full text is basically discussed around the theme. In the process of discussion, students make good use of the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze and solve problems. The language is fluent, but the point of view is not refined enough. In the process of argumentation, we can properly use theoretical argumentation methods and practical argumentation methods. Accurate expression of views, clear thinking and strong integrity of the article. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty.
1 1, taking-as the theme, the topic selection has strong reality and application, which meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty. The structure of this paper is basically reasonable, and the full text is divided into * * * points-most of them. The first part, on this basis, focuses on the discussion. In the process of demonstration, students' reference materials are closely combined with the viewpoints and contents to be demonstrated, and the research methods adopted are mainly theoretical research and case study. Words are basically accurate. However, the main problem is that the arguments are not sufficient and convincing, and individual quotations do not indicate the source.
12, the topic is contemporary and realistic, the structure of the full text is reasonable, the viewpoint is basically accurate, and the thinking is basically clear. The content of the full text is basically written according to the training requirements of the administrative management major, and I have consulted a lot of relevant materials, but it does not fully reflect the characteristics of the administrative management major, and there are not many things that belong to my own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
13. Studying the official accountability system can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the basic principle of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the problems existing in the official accountability system in China are deeply analyzed, and finally, effective suggestions are put forward for the previous problems. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
14, the topic of this paper meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty, and it can comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the practical problems of enterprise administration. The writing attitude of the paper is serious and responsible, the content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials meet the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main points are clearly expressed, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. However, the depth of argument is not enough and innovation is insufficient.
15, the topic is reasonable and meets the requirements of administrative management specialty. The full text takes … as the theme to analyze and demonstrate, which has reference significance for perfecting …. The content demonstration is also more scientific and reasonable, and the format is more standardized. The reference materials are closely related to the theme of the article, but the innovation and arguments are insufficient, especially the last part of the article is too weak and unconvincing. Generally speaking, it basically meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
16. Around ... The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, the argumentation method is reasonable, but there are innovations. Generally speaking, it is basically qualified.
17. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. The parts are closely related, the opinions are basically accurate, and the argumentation content is more convincing. In the process of argumentation, the basic knowledge principle of administrative specialty is basically used to analyze the main problems in the article, but the reference materials are insufficient, the article lacks its own original content, and a few viewpoints are not profound and comprehensive.
18, the research on the topic of official accountability system can provide reference for solving the problems existing in China's official accountability system. In the structure of the full text, the practical significance of the official accountability system is analyzed first, and then the official accountability system in China is analyzed.
19, makes an in-depth analysis of the dilemma, and finally puts forward effective suggestions to solve the dilemma. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty, and the references meet the needs of the paper's viewpoints and themes, and the practical demonstration is not enough. But there is not much real innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
20. The idea of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are clear, and the opinions are expressed accurately. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management with the practical problems of inner-party supervision, and puts forward some better solutions to the practical problems of inner-party supervision. The literature consulted is closely combined with the theme, but the arguments in some places are not very clear and convincing, which generally meets the requirements of graduation thesis, some contents are not well combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
Teacher's comments on graduation thesis 2 1. The topic of this paper has certain theoretical value and practical significance. Based on the basic process of G billing, this paper adopts centralized processing mode to build a comprehensive billing and accounting system platform integrating data acquisition, preprocessing, billing and data mining technology for comprehensive settlement analysis. The platform aims at the integration of customers, that is, the integration of customer brands and payment methods; Business integration, that is, product bundling and cross-discount across services, products and customers, and complete connection between business operation and billing strategy; The integration of charging methods, namely the integration of online charging and offline charging; The integration of payment methods, that is, the integration of prepaid and post-paid. It fully embodies the goal of meeting all the needs of existing users and giving full play to the services of operators under G network, which has certain practical significance for the current telecom convergence model.
2. The author made some serious revisions on the basis of the first draft. This paper has been greatly improved in content and form. Two flowcharts downloaded from the Internet that have little to do with the content of the article have been deleted. Part of the preface has been moved to the text as required. The conclusion part has been added, although the content needs to be enriched. Some references have been rearranged, but there are still some irregularities.
3. The topic of the paper is basically the same as the content of the paper, with complete structure and fluent language. Even the first draft, except that the paragraphs are too thin, there are not many serious grammar or spelling mistakes. The author tries to find the connection between the author and a character in Jack London's life. From the content point of view, the author has a better understanding of the original work and collected relevant materials, but only limited to the list of materials. How to draw your own conclusion by analyzing the materials is the purpose of this paper, and it is at this point that the author's efforts are not enough.
4. The graduation thesis design summary structure is complete, and each part basically conforms to the English thesis writing norms. The author tries to analyze the cultural conflicts in multinational companies from the perspective of cultural comparison between East and West, and find ways to solve these conflicts. In order to write this paper well, the author obviously consulted a lot of information, which was fully discussed and clearly organized. Unfortunately, because the author herself has no working experience in multinational companies and has not made corresponding investigations in multinational companies, her discussion can only be based on second-hand materials obtained from reading, and the so-called oriental culture is mostly represented by Japanese materials. To solve the cultural conflicts of multinational companies in China, readers need more cultural contrast between China and the West. Although the author added some in the later draft, there are still some shortcomings.
5. The new revision includes: the replacement of the first sentence and keywords in the abstract should further explain the "Superman" who influenced JackLondon's life and was embodied in his work TheCalloftheWild. Some confusion in tense usage needs to be corrected. There are too many quotations and too few comments, and some references are not mentioned at all in the article, which is a difficult problem to solve. It is pointed out that London is a so-called superman and Buck is a super dog to illustrate the relationship between them and the influence of the author's life on his works.
6. In the research work of this thesis, the student consulted and analyzed the latest academic literature in the field of phased array antenna testing and diagnosis at home and abroad, and put forward his own views on this basis. The materials cited in the thesis writing are true and reliable, the research methods are correct, the obtained data are detailed, the writing norms meet the requirements, the article structure is logical and meets the requirements of the dissertation.
7. In the postgraduate study stage, the student actively demands ideological progress, always strictly demands himself and actively studies the policy line of the CPC Central Committee. In learning, according to my own research direction, I carefully studied relevant books inside and outside the class, consulted professional literature, mastered basic theoretical knowledge and professional knowledge, and successfully completed my master's thesis. Full of enthusiasm for life, harmonious relationship with classmates and helpful. I hope that in my future work and study, I will continue to maintain and carry forward my fine style and make greater achievements.
8. In the study of specialized courses, according to the requirements of research direction, he carefully studied the relevant core courses and laid a solid scientific research foundation; During her study, she also studied many other courses, broadened her horizons and got a deeper understanding of the structure of the whole research field. In English learning, I have strong English listening, speaking, reading and writing skills.
9. Students have a good foreign language level, can read foreign language documents of related majors skillfully, and have good English writing and conversation skills.
10. During my master's thesis, I actively participated in various teaching and scientific research activities. In the process of teaching practice, he carefully read textbooks and consulted academic materials, which greatly improved his teaching level. At the same time, she also has strong practical ability, participated in many topics of her tutor, and greatly improved her theoretical and practical level. I have participated in academic exchanges of papers at or above the provincial level for many times, and my eloquence and speaking ability have been comprehensively improved.
1 1. The graduate student successfully passed CET-4 and achieved excellent results in GRE. Have high English listening, speaking, reading and writing skills, and perform well in foreign academic exchanges of the Institute of Development and Educational Psychology.
12. During the internship, the student worked very hard, very hard, very hard. When he meets something he doesn't understand in his work, he can humbly ask his experienced predecessors for advice. Be able to listen to other people's work suggestions with an open mind. Be able to flexibly apply what you have learned in school to specific work, and complete the work assigned by the leaders with good quality and quantity. At the same time, the student can strictly abide by the rules and regulations of the center, live in harmony with colleagues, and show good teamwork spirit and professionalism.
13, in the study of specialized courses, she carefully studied relevant core courses according to the requirements of research direction, laying a solid foundation for scientific research; During her study, she also studied many other courses, broadened her horizons and got a deeper understanding of the structure of the whole research field. In English learning, I have strong English listening, speaking, reading and writing skills.
14. During the internship, the student is extremely serious, active, careful and practical, and can accept guidance with an open mind; At the same time, I am good at thinking, can draw inferences from others, have strong foreign language communication skills and communication skills, and can complete the tasks assigned by the leaders with good quality and quantity; It also shows a strong professionalism and team spirit, with a deep professional foundation and a good level of professional knowledge. It is a rare talent.
15, "Analysis and research on data model of undergraduate specialty setting prediction system based on data mining" is selected from the project of undergraduate specialty setting prediction system entrusted by the Ministry of Education of Sun Yat-sen University. The research results of this paper have certain guiding significance for the construction of undergraduate specialty setting prediction system in colleges and universities.
Comments of graduation thesis review teacher 3 1. Studying the subject of official accountability system can provide reference for solving the problems existing in official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the practical significance of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the dilemma of the official accountability system in China is deeply analyzed, and finally effective suggestions are put forward to solve the dilemma. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty, and the references meet the needs of the paper's viewpoints and themes, and the practical demonstration is not enough. But there is not much real innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
2. The idea of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are clear, and the opinions are expressed accurately. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management with the practical problems of inner-party supervision, and puts forward some better solutions to the practical problems of inner-party supervision. The literature consulted is closely combined with the theme, but the arguments in some places are not very clear and convincing, which generally meets the requirements of graduation thesis, some contents are not well combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
3. The theme of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are basically clear, and the views are basically accurate. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management specialty with Deng Xiaoping's administrative reform thought. The format is basically standardized, and the topic selection meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty. However, there are too few documents available for reference, some argumentation contents are not closely combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
4. Meet professional requirements and reflect social hot issues. Therefore, the research of this topic is conducive to promoting the further development of our country. The full text first-the problem, and then analyze the reasons. On this basis, the related-. The full text has proper structure, clear thinking and basically correct views.
5. The paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Can be a good investigation of existing problems. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure. The viewpoint is expressed accurately. The research principles are appropriate. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
6. The full text is entitled-. In view of the existing problems, put forward effective suggestions. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is reasonable. The reference materials are closely combined with the theme.
7. The full text is entitled-. This paper focuses on the analysis of the existing problems and their causes, and puts forward some operable countermeasures for the problems. The full-text topic is novel and research-oriented. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the thinking is clear, the viewpoint is clear, and the arguments are convincing. The demonstration method is reasonable, and a large number of data are used to demonstrate, which increases the reliability of the demonstration. Can comprehensively use the professional knowledge of administrative management for analysis, but the main deficiency is that the language is not very refined.
8. The references in this paper are sufficient and meet the needs of the topic. This article gives an example and focuses on it. The topic of the paper meets the requirements of administrative management, with complete structure, clear thinking, accurate expression of views and standardized format, which can better use administrative professional knowledge to analyze practical administrative problems in reality. But the argument of personal views is not sufficient. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
9. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. Each part is closely related, the viewpoint is expressed accurately, and the argumentation content is convincing, but the article lacks its own original content.
10, such as topic, focus on discussion. The topic selection is in line with the training objectives and professional characteristics of administrative management specialty, and has strong pertinence and practical significance. The structure of the article is reasonable, the level is clear, and the relevant documents and materials cited in the writing are closely related to the theme, and the reference materials are relatively new. In the process of writing, the author can better use the basic knowledge of administrative management to analyze administrative management, and in the process of argumentation, he mainly uses theoretical argumentation and factual argumentation. However, the shortcomings of the article are unclear expression of some sentences, insufficient argumentation and insufficient innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
1 1. The title of this paper is-novel and practical. The full text has scientific and reasonable structure, strong logic and clear thinking, and the references consulted meet the requirements of the paper. The demonstration method is reasonable. The content of the argument is more convincing. The analysis of the problem is more thorough. In the process of demonstration, students can also combine the principles of administrative professional knowledge with social reality. Whether it is from the topic selection or viewpoint demonstration, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty. But innovation is not enough.
12 as a topic, this paper first discusses-,then analyzes the reasons emphatically, and puts forward effective countermeasures to solve the problem. Therefore, this article is closely related to the professional requirements, with scientific and reasonable structure, accurate expression of views, correct words, fluent sentences and clear thinking. The relationship between the parts is very close, and the argumentation method adopts case argumentation and case argumentation. The information consulted is sufficient and reasonable. The countermeasures to solve the problem still lack maneuverability.
13, this article is the theme, which fully embodies the social value of the times and reality. The full text is divided into three parts. This paper first discusses-,and then focuses on analyzing-. The full text is basically discussed around the theme. In the process of discussion, students make good use of the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze and solve problems. The language is fluent, but the point of view is not refined enough. In the process of argumentation, we can properly use theoretical argumentation methods and practical argumentation methods. Accurate expression of views, clear thinking and strong integrity of the article. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty. Thesis review