Recently, the enthusiasm for writing has been inexplicably rekindled. Therefore, after analyzing the writing problems of China people, I mainly start with "myself". Finally, I wrote something in English and recorded it. Welcome to criticize and correct me.
"Listening and speaking, reading and writing", my writing is the worst.
In the past three years, except for two or three students, I have hardly written English. Oh, no. I also write compositions for others occasionally. Besides, I really never started writing.
Writing has always been my weakness.
As the saying goes, listen, speak, read and write. "Listen, speak and read", I think there is nothing wrong with it. Write ",I thought it was okay. Until the IELTS test, I can't remember whether the writing is 6 or 6.5.
Frankly speaking, I didn't believe this written score at first.
First of all, there must be no grammatical mistakes in my composition.
Second, I think the words are "beautiful"-fake and bright.
Third, write sentences and only recognize complex sentences. Almost every sentence is several lines. Elegant and very sharp.
However, until the IELTS test, Native was almost completely negative. After asking questions, they will find this composition flashy. Simple sentences must be dragged into three lines.
In addition to the farfetched writing, the main bugs are-insufficient logic and arguments.
Before that, my writing was confused with the domestic exam, and there was no big problem. Whether it's TEM-4 or TEM-8. This time, however, the problem was completely exposed to Native.
This is also the first time I realized that my writing was poor.
Why | Why is English writing poor?
Since then, I have been very concerned about my writing level in the second half of graduate school. When reading books and papers, I will make my own thesaurus. But the growth path of writing is basically ups and downs. Because I didn't write much after graduation.
When I took the IELTS test, I found that "writing" is almost the shortcoming of all China people. The reasons are summarized as follows.
First and foremost, we don't have a mind map.
The concept of mind mapping will not be elaborated.
Nowadays, the teaching concept has been greatly improved, especially the English education in Beijing, which is not much ahead of the local English education.
For example, in daily teaching, I teach our children to present the elements related to the topic on the blackboard in the form of mind-map according to the unit theme.
Children, usually at the end of the course 10- 15 minutes, can explain a topic in a group way according to the blackboard prompt. And I will climb over the wall to add a lot of information about English culture and expand children's thinking.
However, this important link did not exist at the critical period of my English learning.
Today's children can learn some new content, interesting original materials, or super fresh foreign videos. In children's minds, information can be retrieved anytime and anywhere, and a skilled and interesting discussion can be held on a certain topic.
Over time, children's rational thinking is there. When they grow up, how uncomfortable and uncomfortable are they in the process of rewriting?
I was not a person with no opinion since I was a child, and I lacked rational thinking and topic awareness. Needless to say, discuss a topic anytime and anywhere.
Therefore, if you have children, you must implement the progress of this education and pay attention to cultivating children's rational thinking and topic awareness. ?
Second, the lifestyle is single and lacks social experience.
I envy people in Europe. In a coffee shop, several strangers were reading a newspaper, and then had a heated discussion about social hotspots or government measures. At the family dinner table, the topics discussed by the family are not limited to daily necessities and neighborhood gossip.
Obviously, I only talk about teaching, chicken soup and entertainment gossip.
In my life experience, I am a person with little interest and obviously pay insufficient attention to social news. So it is difficult for me to give my opinion on a "social hotspot" in writing.
For example, this environmental protection composition is actually very difficult for me.
Nowadays, more and more people are aware of the importance of environmental protection. Quite a few people like low-carbon life. Write a composition on this topic.
I have hardly thought about environmental protection in my life.
Starting with the details of life, I can't remember how I do environmental protection at once. My garbage has never been sorted, and I have never used cloth bags to buy things. Thieves often use plastic bags and garbage bags for diligence. Sorry, I still drive to and from work. I have hardly made any contribution to environmental protection. Hey. I was wrong.
I have no "real opinion". Only "wrong opinions". It's really hard to think insincerely about the reasons.
However, although "all opinions are false, all are false", I did well in the TEM-8 exam. I am good at templates. I can drag a simple sentence that can be explained in five words into three lines.
With a little "knowledge", at the end of my study, I came into contact with more native students, and I began to "re-recognize" writing. I really feel that our education indulges my "nonsense".
? Third, there is little training in theme writing. It's not impossible. Because, without systematic professional training.
How to improve writing?
When I was writing a composition for CC today. Suddenly ignited the desire to write. Although, I don't know why I will consolidate and strengthen my writing.
Anyway, establish a correct writing concept and practice hard, and you will certainly catch up. How come?
1. reading-reading the original English book with appropriate difficulty.
2. Copy-use the computer to knock word for word.
3. Change-imitation and adaptation.
4. Writing-independent creation.
5. Reading-I found something strange when I was reading, and I corrected some mistakes by my sense of language.
6. Change-modify.
I will follow this step today. But at present, the book I copied is a linguistics book. Exploring second language reading? . Then I wrote an article, which is my attitude towards English learning. "Don't worry, I will keep learning English.".
I have studied English for about 20 years. During this period, there are some times of tension and some times of relaxation. I remember my English teacher in high school once told me, "The real commitment to study requires you to keep studying, not just for a short time."
That's true. Now, learning English is just a hobby for me. I am not the best, and I have never been close to perfection. However, I have always insisted on learning and made it a part of my daily life. So all my dear friends, you may not develop all your skills overnight. Adding a regular and steady study may be what you really need now?
Remember, learning English is a long-term commitment, not just a fashion. ?
In the coffee shop, sorry to re-record it loudly. That's it. I'll be fine next time. (Click on the link of mp3 content in the comment area)
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