1, you are very good at observing life and can keenly capture meaningful moments; You are a student with great potential.
2. The language of the article is fluent, which also shows the teacher's feelings. You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and collect a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
Sorry, the teacher didn't understand this paragraph. Would you like to explain it to the teacher again? Thank you.
Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. Teachers should learn from you. If the material selection of the article is novel, it will definitely complement the writing style. what do you reckon ?
5. Great! Your article reproduces the simplicity and frankness of the northeast people, which makes readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synaesthesia is particularly clever. Your writing style is conquering and attractive. Work hard and create more glory!
6. Your article is like a slowly flowing stream, delicate and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, very personal style. May you continue to pick the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect!
7. The style of writing is sharp, with extensive quotations and deep roots. Although the analysis of social problems is still absolute, the article is still moving with a kind of enthusiasm and frankness. Further research and thinking on history books and social commentary. I believe your article will become more mature and lasting!
8. It is wise for a teenager who is not deeply involved in the world to approach a complex society. The language of the article is plain and soft, and the description is very casual, as if leading readers to stroll on the Yuan Ye of the mind. The disadvantage is that the discussion is slightly angular. You know, incisive arguments can make the finishing point and make your article more profound. Keep practicing and you will be better!
9. The writing of this article is beautiful and fresh, full of certain philosophy. It is written that "I" walked by the sea, and the sea not only gave me the enjoyment of beauty, but also caused my meditation and association. It can be said that the sea has given me a space to swim, and I am immersed in life for the sea, making the sea a "person" with noble personality strength. After reading this article, it gives people a sense of beauty and is thought-provoking.
10 except for classes, school life seems dull, but this paper is good at finding out from the ordinary.
Ordinary, but also with relish: nervous morning, fighting noon, tired night, every time I chose a very interesting lens to move. The fresh and lively language vividly shows the positive mental outlook of contemporary middle school students.
1 1. This article is highly ideological and artistic, which makes people think for a long time after reading it. Clever in conception,
In contrast, the theme has deepened; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.
12, the introduction of father in the article is comprehensive: from appearance to heart, from work to life; The introduction to the father is also focused: focusing on the feelings of the father. The characters are plump, real and full of life. Be proud of such a father, work harder and live up to his expectations!
13, snow can be associated with the pursuit of life. Starting from the details of life, the spirit of innovation is commendable. This article reflects your plain writing style. Who says "boiled water" is not the best drink?
14, the quotation of several common sayings in the full text is just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.
15, your article is very creative-use geometric proof to complete the idea. The full text is very literary!
16, the author has a strong ability to control, and the whole article is written in one go, giving people a comfortable feeling that shines at the moment!
17, as a casual feeling, your article is smart and full of wishes. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form a landscape of your own!
18, you are an independent student, and you don't lack real knowledge. I quite agree with you, but it would be even more icing on the cake if the writing arrangement was more compact.
19, this article has chosen a brand-new angle, and let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
20. Such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling. This teacher really should learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?